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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

Hey, Superb romantic OS.

Dear, I loved it so much...

Thanks for PM...

I am blushing... Gosh... Naughty Mayank...

Do write next Mayur OS soon, dear... And PM me. I am waiting, ok?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
really very sweet yaar...juz loved it....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
i was awsome plsss do write more.waiting for ur next romantic update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
wow it was too good
and even it is first ff it is aazing
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏That was just awesome.... yaar thoda sa dimag inn CV's ko bhi dedo... srsly...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
it was amazing........
sweet n romantic
do write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys from morning onwards I was continously reading and I am tired and I wrote an os on mayur and here it goes......

sweet revenge

Mayur were married. Its been 2years since they married and they got an invitation from one of their old friend for his marriage and now they are going for bengaluru for friend's marriage.

M: nupur jaldi kar kitna deir lagathi hai tayaar hone ke liye......

N: aa rahi hu mayank bas do minute.

Mayank gets irritated and opens the door only to find his lovely wife struggling with the zip of her dress which was struck just below the end point. He wantedly went near her and blew air on her bare back, this made her startle and suddenly she turned around to see her husband smiling naughtily at her.

N: kya hai?..........ab tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?...jao yaha se, mein bas thode deir me aa jaongi......she said in a quite irritated tone because first of all she is not able to zip her dress and now if he stands there she cant even concentrate on what she is doing.

M: haye meri jaaneman tumhe aise dekh ke kaise jaa saktha hu.....tum tho iss white dress mein kafi hot lag rahi ho..........

N: mayank tum agar aise hi flirt karthe rahoge tho hum late ho jayenge aur hum time pe nahi pohunchenge......samjhe?

M: mein abhi kuch nahi samajhna chahtha hu. Saying this he lifted her in his arms and placed her slowly on bed. He also laid on bed besides her hugging her partly with one hand and caressing her soft pink lips with other hand and on the other side she was blushing very badly...........

M: nupur pehle hi tum is white pe bohut hot lag rahi ho aur upar se blush karogi tho mein kaise resist kar pauga?........when he said this she blushed even more.

M: ab tho tumhe koi nahi bacha saktha nupur..........saying this he gave a quick peck on her lips making her go week on her knees. Seeing her blush he again leaned and kissed on her neck and on her closed eyes which were closed long back and when he was moving down wards nupur spoke cutting him in between

N: ma....ya..nk mujhe jane do......dekho agar tum aise hi romance karthe rahoge tho humari bus miss ho jayegi aur...

M: I love u........

N: she couldn't help but she again blushed listening to his sudden confession. Each and every time she listens him saying him I love u she feels as if he is saying it for the first time.

M: jab log iluvu bolthe hai tho use bhi hume reply karna chahiye..........

N: agar tumhe reply chahiye tho mujhe chodna chahiye aur tumhe yaha se jaana hoga.........

M: tikhe pehle bolo tho sahi..........

N: I......... nahi pehle tum mujhe jaane do aur phir bolungi

And he loosens his grip lightly and nupur gets up from the bed and straightening her dress where as mayank is waiting for her to say

M: bolona.......

N: kya bolna hai?....mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi aa raha hai....... sayin this she turned another side facing her back to mayank, suddenly her dress's zip got loosened and made its way downwards. Nupur felt that and stood there without moving for a second. Seeing her like stand still and her uncomfortable mayank smiled. Soon she realised what happened and ran towards the wall and faced her back to wall.

M: dekh...... agar apne pathi ko dokha dene ka nathija......

N: t..um.....jao yaha se....

He got up from the bed and made his way to her while her heart was beating faster. He stood few inches away and watching her blushing face. After few moments he suddenly caught her waist and pulled her towards himself. He moved her face towards her and rested it on her shoulder and his hands were on her back and he zipped her dress, after that he whispered in her ears "aaj raat ko mein apna badla pura karoonga.... tayaar rehna" saying this he planted a sweet kiss on her cheek and made his way out of the room.

She saw him going out of the room and smiled to herself at her husband's warning of taking sweet revenge......

To be continued..........

Guys I was getting bored so I wrote this part and If u like it I will continue because I have two more parts of this and if u don't like it u may think it as an os and it ends here.. so guys waiting for ur comments and please do press like tab if u like it.....

Edited by mayurg2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
Hey continue soon Please
Loved it
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PHEW!!!!!!!!!!.. mere toh hosh udd gaye yeh padke...... agar yeh scene serial mein hota toh kitna achcha hota... Damn Romantic..😳😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
plzzzzzzzz do con't i don't want it to end as an os

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