Sweet talk:
Ok now iam starting with it.
It's the scene after mayank's surprise to nupur. He somehow convinced gunjan and made her to shift to dia and suhaani's room so that he can stay with his wife in one room
In the room
Nupur is trying to remove the dori of her dress but in vain, she is just unable to do that. Just then someone enters the room and closes the door behind them. Nupur is turning to other side of the door and she cannot see the person who has came and without seeing the face of the person she starts
n: aagayi tu main kitne deir se tumhara intezaar kar rahi thi . hogayi tumhari baath samrat se. kya bath kar rahi thi itne deir thak .mein bhi apni pati se itni bath nahi karthi by god!!!
and now mayank comes from behind hugs her and says "tho ab karo na kon mana kar raha hai tujhe apne pati se bath karne ka"
n: mayank!!!!! Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho
m: wahi jo sab log apne patni ke sath karthe hai'.. tumhe koi problem hai?..
agar hai tho bhi I don't care main wohi karunga jo main karne aaya tha
n: kya?...(in angry tone)
m: tumhari madad'..
n: hein''.. kya meri madad?... Mr. mayank sharma aap kis tharah se meri madad kar sakte hein kya aap mujhe bata sakte hai?
m: sure mrs. Sharma kyu nahi'..(twirling her around so that she can face him)
Main yaha (moving closer to her ears and whispers slowly in her ears) tumhari dori kholne ke liye aaya hu''.. I mean tum tab se us se struggle kar rahi ho na isliye '.karu?
Nupur just turns around without telling anything indicating him to continue. She was blushing very badly.
Mayank slowly moves all the hair which is there on her back and shifts it to her one shoulder. Now he is trying to loosen the dori. Suddenly he got an idea and and smiled to himself mischievously. He acted as if it was not getting loosening and moved closer to her and tried to loosen it by his teeth. Once when mayank's lips touched her bare back she felt some tingling sensation in her body due to which she startled.
Mayank observed her reaction through the mirror.
He slowly removed the dori and kissed her bare back and then her neck line and suddenly twirled her (remembered the pehli baar mohabbat sequence in which after that grass scene he twirls her suddenly) and she shut her eyes tightly and red crept over her cheeks
Mayank noticed the blush on her face and kissed her on her cheeks and lingered his lips on her face more than required. Now nupur opened her eyes and saw her husband gazing at her with love and mischievous grin in his eyes. Mayank saw her and started to move her hair which is there on her forehead with his left hand
With great difficulty nupur spoke
n: ma'..ya'.. mayank
m: ha nupur''..
n: mujhe change karna hai . mujhe chodo na please .(with pleading eyes)
m: ufff ye bhushan parivaar bhi na jab bhi me romantic mood me rehtha hu tab koi na koi aake mujhe disturb kar dete hai '.. pehle maharaj uday aur ab uski benen
kya karu mein in logo ka?...
n: while giggling "kuch mat karo ab mujhe chodo" and tries to get out of his tight embrace.
m: nahi chodunga kya kar logi'..tumhe jo karna hai karlo lo aaj tho mein chodne wala nahi hoon saying this he pulls her even closer to him and with one hand he draws a line on her face (remember pehli baar) and when he comes to her lips she bites his nail due to which he suddenly loosens the grip and taking his hand away from her face.
n: dekha main nupur hoon jo mujhe karna hai mujhe khoob pata hain aur vo bhi tumhare saath '' sirf mujhe pata hai
saying this she runs into the washroom and locks it from inside.
Here mayank is tthinking mrs. Sharma zara bahar tho aao dikhatha hoon main kon hoon aur mein kya kar saktha hu...
After some time she comes out wearing her usual night wear with her hair open.
Mayank is just mesmerized by her beuty that too without make up she is looking too good and he was lost in her.
n: aab batao mr. sharma kya bol rahe the bhushans ke bare mein ?...
mayank came out from his thoughts and "yahi ki I don't like them and ill def take revenge for what they r doing to me since I met u. esp ur bro ' kabab mein haddi kahi ka'. Tujhe pata hain kitne baar maine kiss karne ka mouka kho diya tha sirf thumhari bhai ki waji se ''..
nupur was giggling like anything and says
n: acha tho tumhe main bhi pasand nahi hoon kya ?... main bhi tho bhushan hoon? Jao main tumse bath nahi karthi
m:are ab tum bhushan kaha ho ab to tum sharma ho 'mrs. Sharma' he stresses on last two words
with that nupur starts smiling and mayank continues again
m: nupur tumhe abhi mere kuch baat manni padegi kyunki ab tum meri biwi ho'
n:wo kya hai'''..
m: yahi ki tumhe saari pehnin padegi jab tum ghar mein rehti ho saying this he starts moving closer to her
n: kya?... saari '''.. aur wo kyu ?...mein saari ko jhel nahi paoongi
m:moving more closer and caught hold of her waist and says " kyunki tum saari mein bohot hot lagthi ho ''. He sees that she is blushing and continues ''' saara se bhi
n: sachi?
m: muchi''.. saying this he kisses her on her lips and she too responds too it and soon it became a passionate one and to that night two soles became one
guys this is my very first shot and please do comment I don't know how It is but please do comment I want to how it is even if it is not good u can say It frankly'''.. criticisms are always welcome. I tried to make it as romantic as possible but I know its not upto.Ok guys Iam waiting for ur comments
page3: Cute kiss. pg36: passionate love.
page5: Sweet revenge. pg36: perfect family.
page7: Sweet revenge-2. pg38: Spending time with my
page9: Romantic treatment. love. (1st ArTi shot)
page11: Romantic treatment-2. pg39: Bending a little
page12: I want my gift. pg42: Just passion.
pg13: My sweet nupur.
pg19: I am yours.
pg23: Come back My Love.
pg26: I am sorry.
pg26: Our Wedding Day.
pg29: Every thing is fair in love.
pg34: Every thing is fair in love-2.
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