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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
guys.........i am so sorry i wrote the whole part to post it now, but due to power cut the whole part got earased and i could not update...........
faria...iam so sorry i promised u that i will update today but now u have to wait for some more days because day after tomorrow my exam is there so i cannot update soon.........but i will try my level best to update.........................


love,
neetu.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Hey guys I am so glad that u liked the previous part so I am updating this now. This part is especially for faria as she specially requested me…….so faria here's your sweet revenge……..enjoy………and guys this is for all of you also……….


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Mayur reached Bangalore and when they were out of station it started pouring heavily. Actually first they decided to go to mm's house but because it's raining they decided to stay in a nearby hotel tonight. So they made their way to hotel and hired a taxi. Soon they reached the hotel. Even though they came in taxi because of the heavy rain they got wet. They moved inside the hotel and enquired about the rooms in the receptionist and took a room and made their way towards room and as soon as they entered mayank thrown the bag which was there in his hand and laid down on the bed nicely relaxing……….

N: mayank kya kar rahe ho……

M: in a teasing tone….kya hua…...kyu tumhe bhi sone hain kya mere saath?.........tho aajao na tumhe mana kaun kar raha hai…..saying this he caught her wrist and pulled her and she landed on his strong body, soon mayank tightened his grip around her waist and rolled her. Now he is on the top of nupur………

N: Mr. Patidev……..mere kehne ka matlab ye nahi tha……….mein ye keh rahi thi ki agar tum aise hi bina baal sukhaye aur kapde badle so gaye tho tandh lag jayegi……..

M: ohhh……..koi problem nahi hai tum ho na meri tandh ko door karne keliye………

N: achaa……vo kaise………mein aapki tandh kaise door karsakthi hun????

M: tum ho hi itni HOT ki kisi ka bhi tandh door kar sakthi ho………saying this he kissed her shoulder……dekho na tum is white mein pehle hi bohut hot lagrahi thi aur ab bighi huyi…………hayeee……….mein marjawaa……….

N: tumhe mar jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai ………..bas ab mujhe chod do nahi tho sach much tumhe maar daalungi………….

M: acha….nahi chodunga…….saying this he tightened his grip around her waist and pulled her even closer and whispers in her ears…………kya karlogi tum agar mein nahi chodunga tho………

N: mayank please…………

M: just nods his head in a no and kisses her on her cheek making her cheeks red, and her eyes, nose and he was jus few mm away from her lips…….he loosened the grip on her waist and he cupped her face with his hands and caressing her cheeks while moving closer to her………and taking this as an opportunity nupur pushed him and jumped from the bed and took the bag and ran towards the wash room…………mayank was shocked to see her taking such a brilliant move….he smiled at his wife's escape.

Mayank removed his shirt as it became wet and again laid down on the bed as he was tired due to long journey all the way from Mumbai to bengaluru.

After sometime she came out wearing a cream color and black pant trying to dry her hair………mayank listened the sound of door opening and opened his eyes only to see his wife wearing his dress, he was shocked to see her in his dress he asked

M: yeh kya hai……..why did u wore my dress, don't you have ur dress?....

N: replied sarcastically……….wah shaadi se pehle bolte ho ki 'nupur mein sirf tumhara hu aur mere upar sare copy rights sirf aur sirf tumhaara hai' aur ab tho maine sirf tumhara dress pehna aur tum aise chilla rahe ho ki maine kisi…….kisi chori ki hai…..by god isiliye ladko ki batho ko vishwass nahi karna chahiye…….saying this she moved towards balcony to dry her hair.

Mayank saw that she was a bit upset with his statement and he too went towards balcony and hugged her from back and kissed her cheek from back and said……

M: haan tum chori hi ki hai………he said shocking nupur……….

N: kya????............meine kya chori ki hai mr.sharma……….

M: smiling at her confusion face says…..mera dil………..tumne pehle mera dil chori kiya hai aur ab mere kapde……….to tum huyi na chor…………

Nupur was now blushing and her cheeks turned into pink……….he twirled her so as to face him and pulled her closer to him and said………

M: vaise bhi issss kapde yaani isss cream shirt aur isss black pant ke upar sirf ek hi ladki ka haq hai………

Nupur asked "kis ka" thinking that answer will come out as her name, but to her shock or bad luck or whatever you may say mayank told… "meri ex-girl friend ka"………..

Listening to this nupur fumed with anger and pushed him and walked towards the room and started shouting……….

N: mayank maine kabhi bhi nahi socha tha ki tumhare zindagi me koi aur ladki hai………she started crying……….aur ha… mein isliye nahi ro rahi hu ki mujhse pehle tumhare zindagi mein koi aur ladki thi……mein isliye rorahi hu kyunki tumne mujhe abhi tak nahi bataya……hamaari shaadi huye 2 saal ho gaye aur tum mujhse abhi tak chupaye??.........aur haan mein tumhari ex-girlfriend ka dress abhi isi waqt lauta dethi hu…….she turned around facing him……….5min rukhna mein change karke tumhe de dethi hu……….while going mayank caught her wrist………

N: ab kya huva ……….she turned towards him………

M: meri ex-girl friend ka naam nupur hai…..aur vo abhi meri present biwi hai………

He went closer to her and waiting for her reply……

N: kya???..........tum mujhe pehle nahi bata sakthe kya……..returning to her usual dramatic style………bekhar mein hi itni deir se ro rahi thi aur tum chup chap sunthe rahe……

M: pulled her closer, kissing her cheek……kya karu mujhe laga tumhe yaad hoga…isiliye meine nahi bataya……..seeing her confused expression he could understand that she did not understood even a single bit…….haan……vo tumhe yaad hai jab hum ahemdabad tour gaye the tab hame ek raath ke liye chanki mishra ka ghar mein rehna pada vo bhi……… (whispers in her ears) valentine vaali raath ko……..us din tumne mere dress pehni thi ………agar appko tikh tarah se yaad hai tho vo dress yahi tha……

N: getting something……..haa……..n yaad aaya us waqt mein apni bag bus mein bhool gayi thi……..aur iss baar…….making a puppy face…….mein apne liye extra dress pack karna bhool gayi isliye meine tumhare kapde pehni hu……

M: aur tumhe apni galthi ki sazaa milni hi chahiye………saying this he started moving closer towards her lips……….

N: mayank please……..ab mujhe chodo…please……..seeing that her husband is not in a mood to leave her….she again spoke……..

Tikhe……agar subha ka sentence complete kiya tho chod doge kya??........

M: hmmm…….tikhe

N: I…..love…….u………

After saying this he even more tightened his grip around her waist and he buried his head in her wet hair and said "I love u too"……. He kisses her wet neck.

N: ye kya kar rahe ho tumne bola tha ki tum mujhe chod doge………..

M: lifting her in his arms…….isko bolthe hai tit for tat…….subha ke dokha ke liye…..(guys if u don't remember please refer first part of sweet revenge) he made his way towards his way towards bed and laid her down and he too laid besides her……..

This time he did not waste time nor he gave chance to her to escape from his embrace he just attacked directly on her lips….first she struggled to break the kiss……but then after she too gave up and responded to the kiss and moved her fingures through his hair while his hands were playing around her waist……when they broke out for the air…….

M: us din tho tumne mere dantne se mere kapde vaapas kardiye hai….magar aaj mein khud apne kapde le lunga…….saying this he unbuttoned her shirt buttons…………

Lights off……….

With this he was succeded in taking sweet revenge on his wife………

Guys if this part does not reach your expectations then its not my fault because yesterday I wrote the part which is full of three pages in word but due to some stupid problem in my ups when power gone the whole part got erased and I forgot to save it before itself……

So guys please ignore if there are any mistakes and yes this time I wont ask u for comments because I know this part is not up to the mark so its ur wish to comment or not to………..ok ab bohut bakwaas boldiya…….bye……….

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey m d 1st 1 2 see ur update..lemme read..wil comment soon...

edited...
nice part dear...kya rommnce hai mayur ka....wud luv 2 watch something like dis in mjht...gud job..keep it up...👏
Edited by amritaluvarti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
lovely update!!!
is se romantic update maine aaj tak nahi padha!!!! 😉 😉 😉 ....totally blushing.....
it was too gud......loved mayur......
continue soon n thanks a lot 4 the pm.....u truly rock......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
it was really nice dear....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
this was indeed a sweet revenge...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
do write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
its the best part.you have done a great job. hope to see such scenes in mjht too.pllsss send some of your ideas to cv's i am sure they will try to incorporate your ideas in the show.plsss do try once.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
hayeee.....so romantic....loved it....do write more....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
OMG i m blushing yaar
its soooooo romantic

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