mayur ff:love unlimited(part 19:pg 41)

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afsha

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Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

Liked both the parts

Good u added Sbs segment n all

Mayu actually confessed in anger but loved it

Loved it

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#112

Part 12:
Next day:
Nupur reaches the studio and is waiting impatiently for mayank to come.
N-yeh mayank bhi na kab ayega hamesha late urghhh
Just then mayank arrives
N-uffo mayank Kahan reh Gaye the tum??pata hai main Kabse tumhara
intezaar kar Rahi thi??mujhe kitni chinta ho rahi thi tumhari Lekin
tumhe Kya tumhe agar meri parwa hoti tab na......
M-ek min Mumbai express saans to lelo.achcha baba sorry galti ho gayi
maaf kardo.....and he holds his ears and makes a puppy face
N-achcha koi baat nahin ab chalo

And then they go to the place where they hv to shoot their scene.both
enjoyed shooting with each other as they were in a relationship and
more over they were spending quality time with each other..tht day
their shoot got over and mayank had some work so he left early.even
nupur left for her home.night 8:00 pm
Nupur was reading breaking dawn(twilight saga) when she got a call
N-hello
M-hey Kya kar rahi thi?
M-kuch nahin padh rahi thi
M(in shock)-what????
N-Kya hua aise kyun what kaha?
M-tumhe Bukhar to nahin hai na?ya tumhari tabiyat kharab to nahin hai?
N-mayank mujhe kuch nahin hua hai
M-to phir nupur bhushan aur padai????lagta hai dal mein kuch Kala
hai.....
N-Aisi koi baat nahin hai vo Kya hai na I'm obsessed with the twilight
saga isliye I just love reading it aur ab main last part padh rahi
hoon.......
M-cheeeeeee twilight saga ????nupur tum paagal to nahin ho gayi ho???
it is one of the sickest love stories I've ever read and u are
obsessed with it?????mujhe lag ki tum kich useful padh rahi hogi to
isliye mujhe doubt ho raha tha lekin tum to.......
N-oue mr.sadu just shut up!!!!khabar daar Jo mere Edward ya jacob ko
bura bhala Kaha to varna tumhara Kya Hogarth tum nahin jaante.vaise
bhi aaj tv par koi srk ki movie nahin aa rahi thi to main padh rahi
thi.vaise tum Kya kar Rahe the???
M-kuch nahin bas aise hi laptop par baitha tha........oh shit.....damn
it!!!!
N-Kya hua mayank Sab theek to hai na?
M-nahin nupur kuch theek nahin hai.Maine ek program shuru kiya tha par
main tumse baat karne mein busy ho Gaya ki by that time ek Bahut hi
khatarnAk virus laptop mein aa Gaya!!ab main Kya karoon?
N-kuch mat karo main tumhare ghar pahunchti hoon mujhe ek program pata
hai jisse sabse khatarnak viruses bhi nikal sakte hain.main 10 min
mein pahunchti hoon
M-theek hai main tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon jaldi aana plzzzz
N-theek hai bye
M-bye and he starts smiling
Actually it was his plan of telling nupur about the virus stuff so
that she can come and solve it becs he knew tht nupsy is a big comp
addict and knows all kind of programs.but actually there was no virus
itself in d laptop.mayank made this plan so that nupur can come to his
home and they can share some quality time together.
On the other side nupur reached mayank's flat but as soon as she
stepped out of her car it started raining.nupur ran fast as much as
she could but when she reached mayank's house she was completely wet.
N-hey Bhagwan ab main Kya karoon???Kya main aise mayank ke ghar jaoon??
n e way bus thodi der ki baat hai and she ringed the bell.
Mayank knew that it was nupur because at 9:30 pm no one would dare to
come.he quickly opened the door and saw nupur who was completely
drenched.
M(thinking)-kitni sundar lag rahi hai......
N-mayank andar nahin bulaoge making mayank come out of his thoughts.
M-oh......haan sorry andar aao.
M saw that nupur was shivering as she was wet.
M-nupur Tum ek kaam kyun nahin karti kyun na tum change karlo???tum
poori Tarah se bheeg chuki ho.tum bimar ho jaogi tum ek min ruko main
kuch kapde lekar aata hoon
Before nupur could say anything mayank had already gone.he returned
with some clothes in his hands.
M-nupur yeh lo jaake change karlo I know ki yeh mere kapde Hain par
plzz manage it otherwise tum bimaar pad jaogi .
N-par mayank......
M-jaao he strictly ordered her.nupur went inside the room and came
wearing a white and a red striped T-shirt and black track pants. it was
really loose for her.mayank was completely stunned looking at her.she
just looked so adorable.nupur was blushing and had turned crimson red.
N-ai....aise Kya....ghoor rahe ho?making mayank come back to his senses.
Just then the doorbell rang.
M-vo Maine pizza order kiya tha vahi aaya hoga.
He goes to open the door.the pizza guy gives M the pizza and as the
door was completely opened tht man saw nupur.he actually felt bad
disturbing their privacy.
Pizza man=PM
PM-so sorry sir for disturbing u n e ways enjoy.and went from there
leaving both M &N blushing.mayank felt awkward by the silence.
M-vo tum to jaanti ho na India mein log kya Kya sochte hain u know na
N-main jaanti hoon ab chalo khate hain mere pet mein chuhe mood rahe
hain.
M-haan theek hai.
Then they both have their dinner. asnupur was about to leave there was
sudden thunder making nupur scared.aur aap log to jaante hi honge ki
uske baas thunder rukne ka naam hi nahin le raha tha aur baarish bhi
zor se hone lagi.
M-mujhe lagta hai ki aaj tumhe yahan reh jaana chahiye Bahut der ho
chuki hai aur bahut Tez baarish bhi ho rahi hai...
N-magar mayank main yahaan tumhare saath I mean...
M-kyun mujh par bharosa nahin hai?
N-nahin aisi koi baat nahin hai main to tumpar apne aap se bhi zyada
bharosa karti hoon.theek hai main aaj yahan ruk jaati hoon aur vaise
bhi kal chhuti hai to koi baat nahin.
M-to phir kyun na aaj raat hum ek movie dekhen vo bhi tumhare choice
vaali.only if u DONT mind.
N-mayank mujhe kabhi koi problem ho sakti hai movie dekhne mein chalo
dekhte hain
M showed her all his collections and she picked up an aamir khan movie
'raja Hindustani'.actually she knew tht mayank will get bored if she
will start ddlj and Raja hindustani was both of their favourite
N-yeh lo and she gave him the cd.
Mayank happily played the movie.both were watching comfortably with
one whole big bowl of popcorn.mayank placed his hand on her shoulder
and nupur gently placed her head on his chest.both were extremely
comfortable with eachother as their comfort level was good on screen
and off screen.suddenly there was a kiss scene and tht too a long
one.both were blushing badly and mayank just fast forwarded it.he too
felt awkward.then there was a song sequence.both o them together
M & N-I just love this song.both started laughing and mayank raised
his hand towards her-shall we?nupur gently gave her hand and as it was
a fast song both started dancing crazily on the song.now both were
jumping on the sofa and suddenly nupur lost her balance and was about
to fall when mayank caught her with one of his hand on her waist and
other hand with nupur's hand(just the way mayank caught her in the
fanaa sequence).both of their faces were extremely close to each
other.now both of them were kneeling on the sofa and their noses were
touching.mayank gently removed the wet strand of hair from her face
and tilted his head.nupur just closed her eyes allowing him to do wht
he wants to.mayank brushed his lips with hers.nupur responded back
turning the kiss into a passionate one.both of their tongues were
playing with each other.nupur circled her arms around his neck and
clutched his hair.mayank was just carresing her waist.after 5mins both
broke off as they were out of breath.nupur was completely blushing
looking here and there and at mayank too.when she saw mayank
completely embarssed she put her head on his chest.mayank just
responded by putting his arm around her shoulder.
M-nupur wo.... I'm sorry
N-kisliye???
M-pehle to tum mere saath itna uncomfortable feel kar rahi ho aur upar
se Maine tumhe I mean .....I and before he could complete his
sentence he felt something pressing his lip.he responded back to
her.yes it was none other than nupur who did not allow him complete
his sentence.after a minute or two they broke.N cupped mayank's face
and said
N-tumhe Aisa kyun laga ki main tumhare saath uncomfortable hoon?main
to humesha se hi tumhare saath sabse zyada comfortable hoon.aur baat
rahi kiss ki to yeh tumhara haq hai tumhe Iske liye sorry nahi feel
karna chahiye.
M-achcha to yeh mera haq hai I see vaise aur Kya Kya haq hai mera?he
was smiling mischieviously
N like an innocent girl answered-main to poori tarha se tumhari hoon
tumhara mujhpar pura haq hai.
M-sach?
N-much.
M-thnx jaanu mujhpar itna trust karne ke liye and I promise ki main
tumhara trust kabhi nahin todunga.
N had tears in her eyes.she simply placed her head on his chest
N-sab kuch kitna badal Gaya hai mayank Maine kabhi bhi socha nahin tha
ki hum dono ek doosre ke saath bhi kabhi honge.sab kuch kitna achcha
lag raha hai.
M-trust me nupur Maine bhi kabhi nahin socha but u know na Jo bhi hota
hai achche ke liye hota hai.meri naseeb mein tum thi aur jaanti ho
main kabhi Sheena ke itne kareeb nahin ja paya jitna main tumhare
kareeb aa sakta hoon.mujhe lagta hai ki Maine kabhi Sheena se pyaar hi
nahin kiya tha kyunki kahin na kahin tum hi mere liye special thi,ho
aur hamesha rahogi.I really love u nupur I really do.
N was completely touched by his words and said I love u too and I
promise u ki main tumhe chhod kar kabhi nahin jaaungi kabhi nahin.
And then both slept in each other's arms unaware tht the movie had
stopped due to scratches in the cd(lol)

Huh finally finished
Hope u all like it
Sariska

Note:guys as my IIT coaching classes will start from 25th April I
might not be able to update parts every week.I hope u all
understand.but I will try my best to give u small updates atleast or
promos. Is that fine?

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#113

Heyyyy sariska
Really nice part yaar
I loved their confession
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#114

nice part:)
he he nice idea to bring her home, par uske baare mein bhool hi gayee woh 😆
ha ha watching raja hindustani ? LOL I 'd prefer DDLJ 🤣
ok, kidding:) nice update though!1

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#115

Nice romantic part

Liked it

Lik their closeness n evn Mayu's paln to call her hom

He knws her too well

Loved it

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#116

Promo:
M-miss nupur comp addict bhushan tum itni pyari Jo lagti ho sote hue isliye.
N(suddenly remembering)-arre haan comp se mujhe yaad aaya ki tumhare comp mein virus tha na isliey to tumne mujhe bulaya tha.....uffo main bhi na dikhao problem Kya hai fatafat solve kar doongi.
M(mayank beta Teri kismat hi phooti hai.......yaad dilaane ki Kya zarurat thi ab bhukat iski saza)-vo nupur..........actually vo....
N-M yeh Kya yeh vo laga rakhe ho bolo Kya hua??
M-vo actually tumhare aane se pehle problem solve hogayi thi
N- to phir mujhe yahan kyun bulaaya tha?

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n:wow mayank its just so beautiful......

m:tumhare liye kuch bhi

so kya bahane dhundega mayank?????

guys ill update the part soon!!!!!!by today or tomorrow