mayur ff:love unlimited(part 19:pg 41)

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neetu

@mayurg2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

aww.............mayank ko tho ab clear cut patha chal gaya ki nupur us se kitna pyaar karthi hai..............
loved the part..................but i thought confession wil also be there in this part only....................
its ok but do update next part.........jaldi.....................

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Mariyam Ghaffar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

it was lovely...

update it sooon.....

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Hi sariska

Beautiful part.

So now nups try to ignore Mayank becoz she thought that she could not control her emotion.

loved the shooting. u remind me the fana song.

it was really very Nice

Now waiting for mayur confession.

update soon

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

very nice part Sariska.... looking fwd for the confession update!!

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Part 11:
After getting ready for the next scene i.e. Confession scene in mjht
mayank went to nupur's van to talk to her.nupur was ready and was
sitting in front of the mirror.just then mayank entered the room.he
saw tht nupur was having difficulty in tying her back Dori(the
confession dress).
M-main tumhari madad kar deta hoon
N suddenly turned behind and saw mayank standing.
N-tum yahan knock karke nahin aa sakte she said in a rude tone
M-nupur tum aise kyun baat kar rahi ho mayank was confused
N-meri marzi aur jahaan tak meri madad karne ki hai to thanks main
khud kar sakti hoon and she started tying her Dori.mayank was just
looking at her.nupur finished tying the Dori and was going to leave
M-nupur mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
N-mujhe kuch nahin sunna and was going to leave when mayank caught her
hand pulled towards him forcefully and made her back lean on the wall
M-nupur main kabse tumse baat karna chahta hoon aur tum ho ki meri
baat sunne ko taiyar hi nahin ho.tum aise kyun behave kar rahi ho baat
Kya hai nupur?
N-main tumhe batana zaruri nahin samajhti
M-bolna padega tumhe
N-kyun bolun main tumhe kya haq hai tumhara mere baare mein janne ka
M-kyunki main tumse pyar kart hoon suna tumne I LOVE YOU....he said it
loudly leaving nupur dumbstruck
Haan nupur main tumse Bahut pyaar kart hoon nupur Yahi baat main kab
se bolna chahta tha nupur lekin tum ho ki sunne ke Liye taiyar hi
nahin thi.I really love u nupur aur aaj agar tum meri nahin hui to
main shayad......before he could complete his sentence nupur kept her
finger in his mouth.
N-agar agli baar aisi baat ki na to dekhna main tumhara Kya haal
karungi.idiot I LOVE YOU too.
Both were teary and hugged each other.mayank broke the hug and wiped
nupur's tears and nupur did the same to mayank.mayank kissed nupur's
forehead and hugged her again.
M-main tumhe kabhi apne se door nahin jaane doongi kabhi nahin.
Just then mayur were called by D to perform the confession between
Arjun and arti.they did well and everyone congratulated them for
acting well.after that mayank and nupur changed and mayank went to
nupur.
M-vo nupur main Soch raha tha ki kyun na hum ghar ek saath jayen.so
what say?
N-(blushing)haan theek hai chalo.
Both were walking and suddenly it started raining.nupur started
dancing in the rain and mayank just kept staring at her.
N-mayank aise ullu ki tarha mujhe kyun ghoor Rahe ho?
M-kuch nahin bas aise hi
And then the rain stopped.
N-uffo is baatish ko bhi abhi hi rukna tha.by god isliye mujhe kabhi
kabhi baarish achchi nahin lagti.kyun mayank tumhara Kya khayaal hai?
Mayank who was just adoring her cuteness came back to his senses
M-mujhe Kya lagna hai baarish hoti hai to hoti hai
N-by god mayank tum aur tumhare sadu thoughts.
M-matlab?
N-kuch nahin chalo.
And then they start walking and finally nupur's house came
N-achcha bye goodnight mera ghar aa Gaya hai
M-nupur this is not fair
N-what???
M-mera matlab hai ki ghar aaye mehman ko andar nahin bulaoge.
N(blushing)-oh....sorry andar aao
And then they go to nupur's flat.nupur opens the door.
N- andar aao
M came in and sat on the couch
N-tum yahaan baitho main coffee laati hoon but before she could go
mayank pulled her Hand and by this nupur lost her balance and fell on
mayank's lap.
M-mujhe akele chod ke ja rahi ho
N-mayank chodo mujhe plzzz......she was badly blushing
M-nahin chodunga Kya karogi?
N-to...to main tumhe chod ke chali jaungi
M heard this and left her and said-haan haan tum bhi chali jao na
pehle Sheena ne choda aur ab tum jao making a sad face
N felt bad and sat beside him
N-M main mazak kar rahi thi aur tum ho ki....koi bhala apni zindagi ko
chhod ke jaata hai aur vo bhi itna cute.
M-Promise ki tum mujhe chhod ke nahin jaogi na?
N-nahin mayank kabhi nahin kabhi bhi nahin and then they hug each other.
N-ab tum baitho main kuch laati hoon khane aur peene ke liye.she was
going to leave when suddenly she tripped and fell on mayank.now she
was on top of him and a few strands of her hair fell on mayank's
face.mayank put the strands behind nupur's ear and made nupur
sit.nupur was completely embarassed.
N-vo....sorry
M thought of teasing her
M-galti ki hai to saza to milegi
And he started coming near her.nupur understood his intentions but did
not stop him.mayank came extremely close to her and now their nose
were touching and they could feel each other's heartbeat.mayank kissed
her cheek making nupur turn completely pink.nupur opened her eyes and
looked at mayank.
M-aise Kya dekh rahi ho yeh mera haq hai.
N just blushed
M came near to her and said-you look beautiful without make up.N was
just blushing badly now
M-I guess abhi mujhe chalna chahiye Kya pata agr main yahaan thodi der
aur rahoon to shayad tum itni laal ho jaaogi ki ek tamatar ke barabar
lagogi
N understanding his intentions hit him on his chest.
N-tum bhi na Mayank
M-n e ways nupur bahut der ho rahi hai I got to go bye
N-bye n he leaves
N is now extremely happy tht finally she has got the love of her
life.....forever and with this thought she slept thinking about her
future with mayank

Aur ab mere haaton mein dard ho raha hai so thts it for today
Hope u all liked it
Sariska