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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 13:

Next day in the morning:
As it was a holiday for them mayank woke up due to Sun rays and saw
nupur peacefully sleeping her head on his chest and arms around his
waist.mayank thought of not disturbing her.he gently kissed her
forehead par usse kya pata tha ki nupur ki neend Kachi
hai.as soon a s
he kissed her forehead nupur smiled and opened her eyes to see mayank
staring at her lovingly.she slowly woke up and sat properly on the sofa.
M(kaash yeh subah hoti hi nahin :(.......)-good morning
N-good morning.......vaise tum mujhe aise kyun ghoor rahe the?????
M-miss nupur comp addict bhushan tum itni pyari Jo lagti ho sote hue
isliye.
N(suddenly remembering)-arre haan comp se mujhe yaad aaya ki tumhare
comp mein virus tha na isliey to tumne mujhe bulaya tha.....uffo main
bhi na dikhao problem Kya hai fatafat solve kar doongi.
M(mayank beta Teri kismat hi phooti hai.......yaad dilaane ki Kya
zarurat thi ab bhukat iski saza)-vo nupur..........actually vo....
N-M yeh Kya yeh vo laga rakhe ho bolo Kya hua??
M-vo actually tumhare aane se pehle problem solve hogayi thi
N- to phir mujhe yahan kyun bulaaya tha?
M-taaki tumhare saath time spend kar sakun
N-kyaaaaa?????tumne mujhe isliye bulaya tha......tumhe to main and she
starts chasing him.they both were chasing each other like Tom &jerry.
N(suddenly)-ouch!!!!!
M-Kya hua.....and then he sees tht nupur has twisted her leg.he goes
to her
M-nupur tumhekloplll)0 dhyan rakhna chahiye tha.
N-achcha sorry par ab theek to karo bahut dard ho raha
hai......aaaahhhhh
Then mayank tries to make her get up but she couldn't.then he picked
her up with his strong arms and made her sit on sofa.then he started
twisting and turning her leg
N was just looking at him lovingly
M-aise Kya ghoor rahi ho?jaanta hoon ki main bahut handsome hoon lekin
plzzzz stop staring like this at me
N just smiled and mayank came and sat near her.her sprain was now fine
and she cupped his face
N-u Noe wht,????main is duniya ki sabse khush naseeb insaan hoon.....I
hv got such a caring bf.I love u.
M-aise nahin chalega and he started cumin closer to her face
N ran but mayank caught her wrist.he stood up and pulled her closer to
him.their noses were touching and both could feel each other's body
heat.mayank went forward and sucked her lips.N responded turning it
passionate.her hands started going towards his neck and his towards
her waist.both broke after 10 mins.both were breathing heavily.nupur
was just blushing badly and she ran to the room to change her clothes.
M thought tht she will return wearing her own dress as it had already
dried but nupur came out wearing the same dress of mayank.
M-tumne change kyun nahin kiya???
N-kyun????main tumhare kapde nahin pehen sakti ye mera haq hai......
M-koi baat nahin no probs
N was about to leave when mayank called her
M-nupur
N-hmm Kya hua
M-I guess tum apne kapde bhool rahi ho
N-rakhlo apne paas meri yaad dilaegi(guys it was only the dress which
she told him to keep with him nothing else ok)
And she left leaving a surprised mayank behind

Precap-mayur go on a date

Sorry extremely sorry for a small update

Hope u guys like it
Sariska


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Posted: 15 years ago
it was too gud....
continue it s000n....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi sarishka
superb update
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
wonderfulllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
veryyyyyyyy good update.
keep updating
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely ff
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Posted: 15 years ago

thnx a lot for ur precious comments

updating the next part soon
Edited by sariska_mjht - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 14:

It was afternoon.nupur was havin her lunch.par man to kahin aur
tha.she was thinking about mayank and why he didn't have lunch with her.

Flashback:
N calls M
N:hello?
M:haan nupur bolo.....
N:vo main Soch rahi thi ki kyun na hum lunch saath karein mere ghar
par?what say?
M:uffo nupur tum bhi na........I just had my lunch Half n hour before
pehle bata Dena chahiye tha?
N(sad face):so sorry vo Maine abhi hi cooking khatam ki to isliye......
M:achcha I g2g talk 2 u later hv sme work bye and love u......
N:par mayank........... But the phone has already been cut.

Flashback ends
After nupur finishes her lunch she cleans the table and is sitting on
a couch when she hears a doorbell.
N-is vakt kaun ho sakta hai????

She goes and opens the door.she sees a man standing
N-ji kaun???
Man-vo aapke liye courier aaya hai aap Zaragoza yahaan sign kar
dijiye.......giving the papers to nupur
After signing nupur takes the packet and the man leaves.
She closes the door and sits back on the couch and opens the
packet.she finds a gift in which a letter is there.she opens the
letter and starts reading:

Dear sweetheart,
Jaanta hoon ki tum mujhse Naraz ho ki main tumhare saath lunch nahin
kar paaya I'm extremely sorry for it.dil se sorry.ab galti ki hai to
sudharni to padegi.tumhare liye ek surprise hai packet kholo to
Zara......

Tumhara
Mayank

She smiles and keeps the letter aside and opens the packet.she sees a
red churidaar with some glittery
stuff.it looks really beautiful.she
removes the dress from the packet and finds another letter in it.she
takes it and starts reading:

Dear jaan,
Ab to maaf kar Diya na?agar kiya hai to aaj raat yeh dress pehenkar
sharma farmhouse,andheri east,Gandhinagar road,mumbai ke address par
aa jana main tumhara intezaar karunga.aaj shaam 7:00 pm sharp.surprise
hai!!!!!!

Tumhara aur sirf tumhara,
Mayank

After this nupur starts thinking:
Aaj shaam ko???pehle naraz karta hai aur upar se intezaar bhi karvata
hai Sadu kahinka.

In the evening:
Nupur gets ready and reaches the address mayank had told her.she sees
a huge farmhouse infront of
her.it is dark and nupur os getting
scared.then suddenly her phone rings
N:hello?
M-ab aise hi Khadi rahogi ya andar bhi aaogi??
N-tum kahan ho mayank mujhe dikhai nahin de raha?
M-uffo agar bata doonga to surprise kaise rahega tumsirf vahi karo Jo
main keh raha hoon...
N-par...........
M-no par war ab bas do what I say ab gate kholo aur enter karo
N does wht he tells
M-ab darwaza kholo aur vahin khadi rehna
N-theek hai
She opens the door and as soon as she opens the door lights r switched
on and rose petals start falling on her.she starts enjoying it and
after tht she sees a path made of beautiful Red rose petals.she puts
the phone on speaker.
N(happily)-to yeh tha surprise?????
M-nahin baba picture abhi baki hai mere dost........ab tum un rose
petal ke path se chalkar to aao.
N does tht and she is really happy tht mayank has done this for
her.as
the path finishes she sees tht she has come across the pool side where
it is written I love u with red petals.she sees tht and is very
delighted.she cuts the phone as she knows tht mayank is somewhere near
her.mayank slowly comes from behind and huge her.
M-surprise kaisa laga?????
N-smiling it's just beautiful thanks mayank tum ne mere liye itna sab
kuch.....
M-nupur abhi thnx mat Kaho abhi to hamari date shuru hui hai:D
N-date???
M-haan date......hamara FIRST date
N was just so excited to speak
M went and switched on the music

Bg-Roshni Se Bhare Bhare(he took one of her hand and placed it on his
shoulder and with his hand)
Bhare Bhare Naina Tere(he placed his hand on her waist giving her
tingling sensation)
Chhooke Bole Na Chhoona Mujhe(both were lost in each other's eyes and
nupur runs but mayank pulls her back and now her back is resting on
his chest)

Sapnon Se Bhare Bhare(both were swirling with the music)
Bhare Bhare Naina Tere(he tightens his grip on her waist)
Chhooke Bole Na Chhoona Mujhe(she runs and comes near a pillar)

Dhoonda Hai Dhoonda Hai Tujhe(he is searching for her)
Aakaash Upar Tale
Shaayad Kisi Badri Mein
Lipti Hui Tu Mile(he finally finds her but she blushes and hides
behind the pillar)

Aah, Dhoonda Hai Dhoonda Hai Tujhe(she comes out behind the pillar but
does not find him)
Aakaash Upar Tale
Shaayad Kisi Nadiya Pe
Chalta Hua Tu Mile(she turns back and finds him)

Roshni Se Bhare Bhare(he comes near her and touches her face with a
rose)
Bhare Bhare Naina Tere

N-Chhooke Bole Na Chhoona Mujhe(she runs and stands next to another
pillar)

Chhooke Bole Na Chhoona Mujhe(he comes near her, her back is facing him)
Maine Samay Rok Ke(he touches her full hand with the rose)
Tera Pataa Poochha Hai
Mili Nadi Se Kehke(he catches her shoulder)
Saagar Tale Dhoonda Hai(he moves her hair aside and kisses her neck)

Haan, Lehron Pe Chalte Hue(she runs into a room and sits on the bed)
Paani Ke Phan Chhoote Hai(he comes and sits besides her)
Jaise Tere Haath Ho(he puts her hair behind her ears)
Mera Yeh Tan Chhoote Hai(she lies on the bed)

Roshni Se Bhare Bhare(he lies beside her and kisses her arms and puts
his hand on her waist)
Bhare Bhare Naina Tere(turns her face towards him)

Chhooke Bole Na Chhoona Mujhe(she closes her eyes)
Sapnon Se Bhare Bhare(he kisses her eyes)
Bhare Bhare Naina Tere(he kisses her nose)

Chhooke Bole Na Chhoona Mujhe(he comes towards her lips)

Chhooke Bole Na Chhoona Mujhe(he captures them passionately)

They broke after a few minutes.both were looking here and there.nupur
goes out of the room as she does not want to show the blush on her
face to him

M Pov:
Wht the hell did I do?damn I lost my control again!!!!!!vo mere baare
mein Kya Soch rahi hogi.hey Bhagwan mein Kya karoon?ab usse nazren
kaise milaun???

N Pov:
Omg I was so close to him I felt so secure in his arms.I can't believe
within a short time I became so close to him.but how would he be
feeling about it?????mujhe to itni sharm aa rahi hai usse baat karne
mein!!!!

Then after 10 mins M gathered courage and came out and saw nupur lost
in thoughts and smiling.he gathered all the courage and went towards
her.

M-nupur?
N turned around but she is unable to meet his eyes
M-vo...........sorry extremely sorry
N(confused)-sorry?
M-vo Maine apne limits cross kar diya isliye.......
N(still lookin down)-its ok isme tumhari koi galti nahin hai aur vese
bhi we r in a relationship it's fine aisa hota hai I really did not
mind.

M was relieved after hearing this so he thought of teasing her
M-achcha if u don't mind then y r u blushing????
On hearing this her cheeks became even more
red.to avoid this she
said:mujhe bhook lag rahi hai chalo kuch khatein hain
M-oh Han chalo

Then mayank took her to a room fully decorated with white and red
balloons and in between a table.

N-wow it's beautiful......
M-tumse zyada nahin.......ab yahin Khadi rahogi ya chalogi bhi?
Then they both went to the table
He removed a chair for her and gestured her to sit.

They had their dinner and mayank dropped nupur home.
Outside nupur's house:
N:main aaj ka din kabhi nahin bhooloongi it was the best day of my
life.(slightly blushing)
M-ab to mera har din best hai tum jo aa gayi ho meri zindagi mein.
N blushed and went in giving a flying kiss.

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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwww...........lovelyyyyyyy romantic update dear.....lovdddd it vry much......
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely updt
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwesum part dear
nyc date
loved it
cont sooooon
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Heyyyy sariska
Amazing update
Loved their date
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm

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