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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
It was really romantic n sweet one
Nups is trying evry possible way to hide her feelings while Mayu is trying evry possible way to make her confess her feelings towards him
Liked it
Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
that was really nice!!!!!!!! waiting for the future events..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
Hi dear
wonderful part.
loved mayur closeness.
Great job
now waiting for mayur confession
try to update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
Thnx a lot guys but I will be able to update the next part only during the weekend as now I'm in 9th and school has just started so plzz bare with me
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
i liked ur ff can u please pm me when u update ur next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
awesome update
v nice
do update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
Heyyyyy
Really nice update
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 10:
Next morning: Nupur got ready and reached the studio on time but before getting out of the car
N-aaj se main mayank ko apne aap se door kar doongi aur sirf apne proffesion ke hisab se usse baat karungi.main use kabhi apne feelings nahin dikhaungi kabhi nahin.
And with this thought she goes in.now they were going to shoot for the drama.it was the first day of shoot of this sequence.director calls everyone to tell them about the shoot today.everyone were present except mayank.
D-yeh mayank kahan reh Gaya hai???aaj ke din hi usse late hona tha
Just then mayank reaches
D-mayank tum kahan reh gaye the???Maine kaha tha na aaj ka din hamare liye kitna important hai.
M-sorry sir vo traffic mein phas Gaya tha
D-achcha koi baat nahin.mayank goes and stands with mohit.
The D starts telling them about today's schedule.everyone were listening carefully except for mayank and nupur who were looking at each other
M POV:
Nupur aaj agar tum meri na hui to shayad tum meri kabhi nahin ho sakti.I promise nupur aaj main tumhe apne dil ki baat batakar hi rahunga.uske baad tumhari marzi ki tum mujhe accept karogi ya nahin.
N POV:
mayank aaj ke baad main tumhare kabhi kareeb aane ki koshish nahin karungi aaj ke baad shayad hamari dosti proffession ke hisaab se rahegi usse na kuch kam na kuch zyada.
Then after they get to know their schedule everyone goes to get ready for the shoot They were going to shoot for aahista aahista sequence The dance was going well.mayur had to perform the second last para of the song.everyone finished their part and when the choreographer gave mayur the steps,mayank performed one step wrong and nupur saw that and told him about it
N-mayank yeh step aise nahin aise hai,and showed him the right step
M-nahin yeh aise hai
N-nahin aise and they start fighting(remember the sbs segment)
D-stop jaise choreographer ne kaha hai vaisa karo Mayur were very angry at each other.after the dance sequence got over nupur went to the make up room
N-apne aap ko samajhta Kya hai?pehle sahi cheez batao to us par gussa karta hai.ajeeb ladka hai......nahin nupur Aisa mat Soch ab Tera rishta uske saath proffession se hai.jyada mat soch nupur mat soch Just then she is called to shoot for d next scene.she completes that scene and again is back to the make up room to change her dress for the fanaa sequence
N-hey Bhagwan ab main Kya karoon is gaane mein hum dono ek dusre ke Bahut kareeb hain kahin mayank ko pata na chal jaaye ki main usse.....nahin nupur aisa kuch nahin hogs just relax Just then mayank comes
M-nupur mujhe tumse baat karna hai
N-dekho mayank agar tum uss jhagde ke baare mein baat karna chahte ho to it's ok Maine tumhe maaf kar diya hai
M-Lekin mujhe kuch aur kehna hai
Just then they are called by the D for the shoot of tht scene Mayank starts cursing tht person.both of them go and are giving their shot.both are feeling a tingling sensation in themselves and are feeling that this song is not being performed by Arjun and arti but are being performed by mayank and nupur itself.the last part of the song when arti had to hug Arjun,she hugged but it wasn't arti it was nupur who was hugging.mayank got to know tht it was nupur who was hugging took no time to respond back to the hug.according to the people who were present there thought that it was Arjun and arti hugging but only mayur knew wht was ACTUALLY going on.when nupur saw that she was hugging mayank she just broke the hug and ran away.she had forgotten tht she had been shooting the sequence.but it was going perfectly well.
D-perfect shot
Mayank felt guilty tht he had again hurted nupur's feelings.
On the other side nupur came to the vanity van and started crying badly.
N-nupur tune mayank ko hug kyun kiya???tune to khud se promise kiya tha ki tu uski zondagi se dur rahegi phiroze kyun tu uske kareeb ja rahi hai??agar use pata chal Gaya ki Maine use hug kiya tha na ki arti ne to use kaisa lagega???bas nupur bahut ho Gaya ab tujhe strong banna padega.and she wiped her tears and started preparing for the next scenes.she did not realize tht she had not closed the door and mayank has heard nupur.he was now happy that nupur had hugged him and he did not interpret anything wrong.
M-ab bas nupur thoda aur intezar uske baad tum sirf meri ho sirf meri.... And he went to his vanity van to get ready.
Precap:mayur confession
Thts it for today guys
Hope u liked it
Sariska
Edited by sariska_mjht - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
*YAY* nice part :)
I was imagining all these scenes, very interesting :)
now looking fwd to the confession 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice part
waiting for confession

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