One Shot: Rishta# 666 (03-11-10) - Page 2

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

:) thanx for the pm
will be back
(not like I did on Pablos)


Hina

Alrite, i shall be waiting for your commment, unlike in pablos, which i have given up😆

A

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

firstly congrats on writing a story on rishta.com, its was such an awesome part but it was way tooo short! please do continue soon!=)

Good to see you here, and to know you watch Rishta.com too. Thank you for commenting, and I agree it was wayy to short, I will try to make up for it in the next part.

tc
A

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Reserved. (True reserve. I shall comment later) :-)

~~Edit~~

I like it because -

1) Its Rishtaa.com
2) Aira wrote it, so definitely something to look forward to (stop grinning like a lunatic!!!)
3) Love the 666 thing!!!
4) Liked Isha tonnes.
5) The whole narrative was awesome.
6) Did I say I love it?

~S

(Will edit again 😆 I think!)

You scared me with your list quite frankly...but I need someone to discuss this show, so you are good target- you should watch it, its an awesome show!! I think you will like it. ok now coming to you comment, I am only responding to #3, 4, 5 and a bit of 6 - Thank you, I enjoyed the narrative too, something fresh for a change which something new can only give. This will be fun to write. Hope to see you around here. And hopefully with an editted comment.

A

Originally posted by: kajen

sounds gr8

Thank you. Good to see you here.

A

wow, liked it so much keep it up

hey ..this is interesting..

Reserved!!

Promise I will get back to it tonight, if not than you can urmm...well technically you can't do anything to me. Hehe..Bas aevaiye bol diya..(however it is spelt..) But unlike Pablo's, I'll definetly get back to this. Pablo's..will be there when I feel like. Abhi mood nahin hai.. I wrote so much c***, I might as well have written out a comment. Lost it officially, didn't have much to begin with. 😕 But need to get back to cricket!!

H

Edited..

I am here to fulfil my promise..a delayed response as usual, you must be so used to it by now. Hehe.. So I actually sort of skimmed through the one-two shot when I had logged on earlier in the day whilst I was watching cricket as you know, Yes yes I love cricket.😆 It keeps me calm and makes me hyper at the same time. Ok I am gonna need to stop with cricket, or else I'll never shut up. Read through it again and obviously loved it, the narrative style was fab. The Ruchika-Huzeifa interaction reminded me of Huzeifa's cost cutting plan episode. I absolutely love their interaction in the show. Ruchika and Isha, I like even more they remind me of me and my friend. Each of the character has various layers and the subtlety with which each interaction/ relationship is shown is absolutely beautiful. A decent show on Indian TV finally after eons...

For some odd reason, this whole cafe situation is so typical Isha-ish..if you know what I mean; her adamancy, her unsurity, her outlook on things in life and in general. There was a lot of over analysing that I did when I read the cafe part, but I shall not indulge that here..😆 sorry Aru that is between me and my subconcious mind and it shall stay that way...lol. Hotel California..a very interesting choice indeed, the devil and the ever so alluring cafe.. is all I am going to say.😉 The 666 is my favourite bit; a potential well captured. And I see, that 666 and the devil is something that seems to have captured your attention as well; the AR experiments.. Isn't it such a devil?😆

Definetly loved it, may be some more to come for R.com *fingers crossed*; shots would suit them better than full fledged stories. *hint hint* Oh yes I am looking forward to the second installment of this oneshot..trust u and NJ to make a shot longer than just that.

Till later..need to read and also try and wake up a bit early to catch the cricket..😆 Couldn't help, but add cricket in here again.

Oh btw, just saw your reserved post and my various fan clubs (not blowing my own trumpet😳) have told me they are very curious to know your message to them and have also told me to pass their thanks to you for remembering them.😳

i think what clicked it most for me was the devil (can't be hard to guess now, can it be!)

and coffee - lets just say i know that feeling, far too well - sigh, so much to give up on ones love ...

nice read aria - i know the note and header says one shot - but are u continuing?

-Reserved-

Originally posted by: esha_sidna

wow, liked it so much keep it up

Thank you for responding. Will continue soon..

Aria