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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey ..this is interesting..

Isha was going to do something which Ruchika thought wasn't quite like her..i wonder what it was..n lol Ruchika's character is a superb one!..she can win over anyone..n anything.
Isha went to that coffee shop to meet that man..she didn't know wether to meet him or not?..but the aroma of the coffee intrigued her n she decided to go ( ah, coffee!)..i guess it had the right name..n then she saw that man..i wonder what was mysterious about him...
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-aish



Thank you for responding Aish, didn't know you liked the show too.😳 Yes, I agree Ruchika is a very interesting character and I love seeing Huzeifa and her scenes and their little arguments, so had to include that bit here too.

You will know more about the mysterious man in the next part. Yes, ahh cofffee I actually thought of this part while waiting for my coffee too😆, so if this feels like a coffee add, you know why!

thanks
A

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: spln

i think what clicked it most for me was the devil (can't be hard to guess now, can it be!)

and coffee - lets just say i know that feeling, far too well - sigh, so much to give up on ones love ...

nice read aria - i know the note and header says one shot - but are u continuing?



Surprised to see you here , I honestly thought you would give this a pass, wasnt sure if you watch this show or not. But welcome to the thread, SM! yes I will continue this...so much for the header that says OS😲 I thought of this part while waiting for my coffeee...so you know where that bit comes from now..sigh! I know this is a terrible addiction to have So its true about good girls and bad boys huh!😆

tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Edelweiss-

Reserved!!

Promise I will get back to it tonight, if not than you can urmm...well technically you can't do anything to me. Hehe..Bas aevaiye bol diya..(however it is spelt..) But unlike Pablo's, I'll definetly get back to this. Pablo's..will be there when I feel like. Abhi mood nahin hai.. I wrote so much c***, I might as well have written out a comment. Lost it officially, didn't have much to begin with. 😕 But need to get back to cricket!!

Edited..

I am here to fulfil my promise..a delayed response as usual, you must be so used to it by now. Hehe.. So I actually sort of skimmed through the one-two shot when I had logged on earlier in the day whilst I was watching cricket as you know, Yes yes I love cricket.😆 It keeps me calm and makes me hyper at the same time. Ok I am gonna need to stop with cricket, or else I'll never shut up. Read through it again and obviously loved it, the narrative style was fab. The Ruchika-Huzeifa interaction reminded me of Huzeifa's cost cutting plan episode. I absolutely love their interaction in the show. Ruchika and Isha, I like even more they remind me of me and my friend. Each of the character has various layers and the subtlety with which each interaction/ relationship is shown is absolutely beautiful. A decent show on Indian TV finally after eons...I can see that you are total cricket freak! Contrary to what you think, I have been possessed by that devil too..you have no idea😳. Coming back to the comment, it was that cost cutting episode that I had in mind when I wrote this particular interaction between them because I found it funny how he went about cost cutting.😆 Richika and Huzeifa's interactions have always been the best, right from the ipod fiasco to the short skirt which I think Huzeifa was the most affected by at R.com. This show has certainly been a welcome relief!

For some odd reason, this whole cafe situation is so typical Isha-ish..if you know what I mean; her adamancy, her unsurity, her outlook on things in life and in general. There was a lot of over analysing that I did when I read the cafe part, but I shall not indulge that here..😆 sorry Aru that is between me and my subconcious mind and it shall stay that way...lol. Hotel California..a very interesting choice indeed, the devil and the ever so alluring cafe.. is all I am going to say.😉 The 666 is my favourite bit; a potential well captured. And I see, that 666 and the devil is something that seems to have captured your attention as well; the AR experiments.. Isn't it such a devil?😆 I can actually picture Isha doing all those things too, I love how you over analyse but get it spot on, darn you are good! I was waiting for my coffee the other day and I became a spectator looking at people, thats when this part dawned on me...but the 666 part, well you know my obsession with the Devil now, so it was all but natural. Its always been there right from the AR experiments as you rightly pointed out. The lyrics..but you can never leave,..it was this devil's voice IMO in this ff, as he is giving a gentle warning to Isha...may be that was just obvious in my head.

Definetly loved it, may be some more to come for R.com *fingers crossed*; shots would suit them better than full fledged stories. *hint hint* Oh yes I am looking forward to the second installment of this oneshot..trust u and NJ to make a shot longer than just that. There will be a second installment, I should share, the next day when I went back for my coffee there was this cute guy at the counter- I think I've got my second part as well. I agree shots will go better with this show, aren't you going to treat us to something too after that little teaser in M2U?

Till later..need to read and also try and wake up a bit early to catch the cricket..😆 Couldn't help, but add cricket in here again. I understand the madness very well.

Oh btw, just saw your reserved post and my various fan clubs (not blowing my own trumpet😳) have told me they are very curious to know your message to them and have also told me to pass their thanks to you for remembering them.😳 I am by passing your fan clubs this time, I actually had to prove to IF that I wasn't just spamming with three consecutive posts
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To ER, E.A.R.S & EA and Edelbusters

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Edited by olive_green - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

I wanna say, i MISSED (strangle me!) Rohan here - don't even spell the question in your mind, 'cuz u KNOW why. Uh! I watched all the episodes (there weren't many sadly 😭 ) in one sitting and now i am amazingly crazed over Kavi Shastri (oohh...even his name sounds soooo kewl and unusual, no kidding - i shapath)...i am telling the whole world and whoever else remaining wants to listen about his brit accent N hindi-better than normal dialect...all in one....latest obsession, find me a mole on his face...there must be!

ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! this was just a bit i wanted to say, you get it eh! :D

cheers,

~nij
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: missypatel


I wanna say, i MISSED (strangle me!) Rohan here - don't even spell the question in your mind, 'cuz u KNOW why. Uh! I watched all the episodes (there weren't many sadly 😭 ) in one sitting and now i am amazingly crazed over Kavi Shastri (oohh...even his name sounds soooo kewl and unusual, no kidding - i shapath)...i am telling the whole world and whoever else remaining wants to listen about his brit accent N hindi-better than normal dialect...all in one....latest obsession, find me a mole on his face...there must be!

ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! this was just a bit i wanted to say, you get it eh! :D

cheers,

~nij



Hey i stopped myself from buzzing you to 'go to sleep' like 5 min ago! I am supposed to be sleeping but saw your post and could not resist replying..I love that dude too. You know I was randomly thinking today that all Rohans are cool :D. Now you can understand why! And Yay!! finally looks like I got someone hooked to the show..Can you see me grinning? 😃


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyyyyyyy Aria !!!!!
that was a beautiful one shot !!... liked the way u described all their thoughts... and the description of Cafe Aroma was really really awesomely penned....
hmmm, Rishta.com...watched few epis of it... they were really nice.,..
Fab piece of writing hun !! :D
thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Couldn't help but reply here as I saw u and Nijal discussing Kavi/ Rohan here. I love Rohan and more so the way Kavi plays the character, there is an irresistble charm to him. Since his Brit accent was mentioned, it reminded me of that scene where he wants to have that tulsi leaf from Ruchika's tulsi plant and he says something along the lines of ek patta hi tau mang reha hu...there is a hint of marwadi with the Brit accent and that portion I loved. *sigh* The marwadi bit my mum told me, or else would have never known.

The Brit accent is nothing new for me, it all sounds so over heard, but there is always something when u hear the accent amongst the sea of Indian and add to that the Hindi-Brit accent and you have a sure shot winner in your hand. After Iqbal's baritone, its Kavi's Hindi accent. lol. 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: hinanaziri


:) thanx for the pm
will be back
(not like I did on Pablos)

I'm back but u still may find the comment quite regular
you know how much I love R.com and now I'm re -watching the epis to find a mole on Rohan (courtsy a certain missy whos got me curious and says that all hot men ough to have one)
the last epi was low on Rohan and so was this piece of writing but I like simply eacuse it was sweet and new exactly like the show ....always have liked your writing ( though I never post comments) ,i enjoy reading your simple yet well described stories...cheers for the pm
and I'm hoping u write more on this show ,looking forward to wednesday,I'll link the epis to u😉


Hina



OmG! you actually unreserved! I have just been hyper today. Certain Missy seems to have got hooked to R.com or R./Kavi too. But she has KG, I think - I'm entitled to R/K what say missy? Now I need to go back and have a closer look myself, let us call it Mission Mole! Awww..Thank you Hina..its alright, I understand everyone has a life and is busy, just glad when people drop by once in a while. As per this piece, I just wanted to write on R.com, and I felt things seem to fall in place without Rohan- you know how it does in the show, where he hardly shows up for most meetings lol. Please do link the epis to me, thats so sweet of you - you're a lifesaver for sure.

tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Oh!
For now reserving :)
Edit:
Yeah!! I am here 😃.
For once, I have to agree this one(i meant the show) is really different and nice. I quite liked it and yes, watched all in a go😳. Thanks for getting me hooked to this. 😛
As far the as part goes, its enjoyable! Count me in here too for pestering (read teasing😉) you for more. Thanks for the pm and please get back soon on this.



Prasanthi, you are hooked to R.com too? and you have to agree - its different and fresh for a change. Thank you for commenting :P I shall update this soon.

A

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