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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#51

arey i ony post on an topics and the right side of this if shows my last ten posts ... so whichever post gets u[dated it shows up ....

samjhe ??

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Oye hoyye Chalooo.....LOL...

Me too posts only on AN topics...basically that's the only thing that kheenchofied me into joining IF!

And since you're here, why not talk on the AN FC? It's so lonely there...me bhatkoing like a dukhi aatma whose fav team just lost a match all alone in the FC....*sniff*sniff*sniff*

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

Oye hoyye Chalooo.....LOL...

Me too posts only on AN topics...basically that's the only thing that kheenchofied me into joining IF!

And since you're here, why not talk on the AN FC? It's so lonely there...me bhatkoing like a dukhi aatma whose fav team just lost a match all alone in the FC....*sniff*sniff*sniff*

chalo main aati hoon for like 5 min..... 😃

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Thankyou Sheena...you're such a sweetheart...*hugs*

But me has to go...me is too sleepy...me sacrificed my afternoon nap to write the update, so me will fall asleep on my keyboard in a few minutes!

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Annie

@ANfan_1810

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

hi Kushboo......

Loved your update .... it is like going to Abhi's and Nikki's mind and heart and actually seeing and feeling what they r going thru, when I read your updates .....

You r great with expressing their feelings ... and this is much better than watching a DMG episode, where we used to get a 3 minute of AN scene .... before we could make out what was going on between them ... the scene used to be over ... get about what they were actually feeling.

After reading your updates .... I can really see how they fell in love .... how confused they were about their feeling ..... how they could not interprete their love, since they used to be fighting all the time and they didnot like each other nor were they friends. But at the same time Abhi was so protective for Nikki, and Nikki used to feel so secure with him .... neither understoood where these feelings came from ......

And ofcourse the magnetic attraction they have for each other and the kiss they shared ......

And I am glad that Nikki spoke up .... against Armaan .... and that too in front of all her friends ....great thing .....

Really looking forward how this goes forward ....

And the last scene where both of them are so comfortable with their silence was great ..... without speaking Abhi was able to sooth her feeling .... loved it .....

Keep it coming .... waiting for lots more updates from you.......

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27dhanno

@27dhanno

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Heya Nimbooz!!!😊

Don't worry. M not gonna eat up your head like last night...but it was great chibaoing your head....I totally loved it.😈

Anyways, coming back to the main thing i.e. is your FF....do I need to say anything about it??? Well I have a lot to say...

Here it is....

It was simply superb,fabulous,fantabuluos,awesome,twosome,doosome,excellent, outstanding,brilliant,beautiful, too good and....fragile(the last part)....I guess....👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Really yaar, that last part was so delicate...as if already broken peice of a glass is again on the verge of shattering into peices!! I dont know what that means but i just felt so...You know that, afterall it's me!🤪🤪

You should consider my idea of becoming a writer. I don't give bad options afterall.....go and tell your parents....I think they will listen...

Really Nimbooz it's too good.....aur kya bolun??? Some writings...you know...words are even less to praise it....it can't be expressed... your FF comes in that category...words aren't enough to praise the talent you showcased in your writing....

I just enjoyed reading it and feeling for it....you are really brilliant....

*feeilng proud to get such a talented best friend*🤗🤗

Chal that's it....update the next part as soon as you can....I have to lose my head again with that logarithm....

*allah*

*sighs*

anyways have a blast writing the next part....Byeeeahs...!

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#57

@Annie...thankyou so much for the lovely comments! 🤗 Well, I like showing the feelings...makes it seem more real and it's easier to understand. AN are two very confused people, and despite the hard exterior they showed to everyone, I'd always felt that they just needed support and a simple human touch to tell them that they are loved. Their story was very fast paced, and despite highly enjoying whatever happened in the AN LS till the marriage drama 😉, I always felt that a little more explanation was required...thanks so much for appreciating! 😃

@Dhanno...I'll call you Dona here from now on...😉 😛 I wanted the last part to be a bit fragile yet I wanted it to hold something invisible in it...if you know what i mean...kinda like "sougat"...just like we never knew whether the kid understood the value of love, we can't understand what they felt at the time...I let it hang, and I like the effect...😳 Thanks a hell lot yaar...and you too are talented, na! I put up one of your poems in my FF...😳 As I always say, your appreciation means a lot to me, not because you're my best friend, but simply coz you read the FF as just another story, and not coz you are an AN fan...thankyou sooo much! 🤗

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Everyone...the character sketch on the first page has been updated...you'll want to check it out! ⭐️ 😉

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN
Dr. Shehnaz: [/STRONG]She is the confident, smart and sweet doctor who has entered Sanjeevani for a temporary exchange programme. The dusky beauty is Abhi's ex-girlfriend from his college days.
Dr. Akash: He is smart, charming and intelligent. A new entry in Sanjeevani for the same exchange programme, he is a very good friend of Shehnaz and gets close to Nikki.

OOOOOOOhhhhhhhhhh......... 😈 ...you little devil......LMT ki track pe chal raha hai yeh sab........ 🤪 we get to see a love triangle....or is it a rectangle.*scratches head* *giggles* *whacks herself with cricket bat*

Why not make Akash (that little jerk.....should have made Shehnaz Sonali...perfect match 🤢 🤢 ) Nikki's ex-bf???

Heheheheheheheehehehehheh we are such lil devils!! 😳 😎 😈
Well, update soooooooooooooon! 🤗

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Aisha

@Aisha202

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#60

Wonderful update Khush!! 😃

Niki defended Abhi in front of Armaan! 👏 Nice! Although I do understand Armaan's POV - he's trying to protect her and he can't help but be overprotective where Niki is concerned. I love how you have shown Abhi's concern for Niki when he saw her crying! The way you wrote Abhi and Niki's emotions regarding each other was brilliant! and I love how they are so comfortable in each others presence when they sit silently together! ⭐️ Now the question Abhi asked is really interesting, what HAS changed!? They're both beginning to fall in loooove.......Thanks for a beautiful update sweety! Can't wait till the next part! 🤗

Edited by Aisha202 - 15 years ago

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