||Just One Breath Away-AN FF~VM pg 122||

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Guys...so sorry for the delay, i was on vacation.

But now that I've managed to post it, read and enjoy! 😃 😳

(And don't forget to comment! 😉 😃)

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 15 years ago

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Khushboo (ughh.......I still cant stop giggling),
You are one heck of a writer! Seriously, you should go be a Lit. major or something! This is so cute! Both trying to define whats between them. Love cant be defined, you dumbos! And Nikki standing up for herself is so.......gosh. 👍🏼

I loved it!!!!!!

Sheena

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#43

yay! I commented first.....and before I got your pm!!!

*giggles, then whacks herself*

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver
Khushboo (ughh.......I still cant stop giggling),
You are one heck of a writer! Seriously, you should go be a Lit. major or something! This is so cute! Both trying to define whats between them. Love cant be defined, you dumbos! And Nikki standing up for herself is so.......gosh. 👍🏼

I loved it!!!!!!

Sheena

@bold....☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Thanks a truckload, sweetie...🤗🤗🤗

Yep, as I said in my character sketch, Nikki is stronger here...so she stood up for herself.

Define...well, love is never defined, as I strongly believe (and i see you do too)...it's different for every person...love is individual, and that's why it varies in expression and intensity form person to person.

But those two are nuts, na...😆 albeit very cute nuts 😳, but still...they'll want to define it! They're very confused...😆

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver
yay! I commented first.....and before I got your pm!!!

*giggles, then whacks herself*

You not only commented firts, but you actually read that thing so quick....😲

Still in giggly-mode, eh? Me too....after-effects of Honu's update still haven't gone...😳 *giggles again and whacks herself hard*

*EDIT*

Btw, it'll take a loooong time for me to be a Lit.Major dear...I just gave my class 10 boards...😳 😆

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 15 years ago

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ratika89

@ratika89

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#46

amazing.....🤗 khushbii...!!!

First and foremost...she fought with Armaan,awesome writing there...u are brilliant there..and I loved it coz she fought with him...yaar do char thapad bhi lagwa dene the..😆..armaan pit ta hua acha lagta... ok that was Joke...

"What changed between us, Nikki?"

The question he had placed before her was the one she had been running from.

The stark difference they both had noticed in their attitude ever since the boxing match surfaced, bringing them face to face with something they'd been avoiding with all their might'defining what existed between them. What it was, that caused their hearts to beat faster when they were together, that drove all sense out of them, that brought them closer and made them hungry for more'

Her answering silence seemed to echo in his ears.

you truly touched me with this...👏how can u be so good with emotions and I don't even feel bore while reading such calm things..as i usually do...you are a fantastic writer...plzz count me in your fans list now...or do I have to pay you something for this..?😆

you have captured the emotions that seemed so right for situations....now that is true art..hope to learn something from ur writings..Khushbii ji...tussi chaa gaye ...😳⭐️
⭐️

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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Great Update Khush!!!

You hvae written the depth of their feelings very well!! This FF is like reading the mind and feelings of the characters.

So finally Armaan n Nikki fought.....good....feel bad for Ammy coz he is trying to look after her but he is being pig-headed at the same time. Oooooooo Nikki told him that Abhi isn't using her!!

Glad to see it go this way.....thank god she didn't falter.

Now Dr. Modi is woooorrrieddd🥳 about the angel who somehow makes his heart do flip flops....ain't that cool!! I like the tadapta hua Modi you have shown!!

N now the question....What Changed?.....well put....I can bet he ain't getting any reply out of her....this is where she atkos...or maybe simply....she has no answer.!!

Find out u 2 n let us know!!

fab job!!🤗

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#48

hey khushboo great update as usual

dear u dont need to sms me , i know automatically evrytime a ff is updated 😉

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#49

@Rati...oh thankssss!!!!!!! 🤗 You're sooo sweet with your comments yaar...you got me blushing magenta! ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ 😆 I was a bit worried about the fight...it seemed so sudden...but thanks for appreciating it. And yes...for learning (😳) you'll have to pay me something! You know what? Lots of love and some awesome comments! 😉 I like calm, I like fast and furious as well...I hate slow, but I'd much rather stop to think over what each situation holds in it...I wrote what I felt would suit their state of mind...and am extremely glad it clicked! Thankyou sooo much! 🤗

@Honey...🤗 thanks! You're posting longer comments here than you normally do! 😆 I'll take that as a compliment in itself! 😛 😉 Yes, I try to show their feelings, mainly because I'm such a confused person myself...so I need the clarity...😳 Yes, I want Nikki to be strong, and I won't make her cry at the drop of a hat or get scared so easily...I like strong characters and that's how she's gonna be! 😃 And yup...Dr.Modi is very worried for his lil angel! 😃 Actually I like this concerned side of him...that's why I stuck to it. And you're right! He's getting no answer coz she doesn't have one! Thanks again for the lovely comments! 🤗