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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Nice Part...!! Their dialouges were actually funny...!!!! Update soon...!!!

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sanjana25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

it was really good

loved iot

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iqra11

@iqra11

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#43

wow my dazzling di

a fabulous update

it was well written

loved the characters raj and naina

great update

love shona

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#44

The part was really nice....the moment Raj said....mera ghar kyun saja hua hai....I was like...wow!! And then....the statements of Raj after entering his room....RN convo....it was very nice n funny!! Pls continue soon.

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Rocking part...sab ko hila diya...

Naina does not want to marry Raj. He wants Navin to convince her parents but all of Naveen efforts fail. Raj is very angry and shocked to know that his wedding has been fixed with naina.

Both of them get married. On their first night..Raj is surprised to see naina speaking so much...but little does he know that she is acting like this because Naveen had asked her too. Untill both of them act normally with each other....more misunderstandings will crop up.

please continue soon. waiting to know what happens next.

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Esha

@esha143

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

wow yaar wonderful mujhe lagaa na jaane Naina ki shaadi kis gadhe se ho rahi hai?par uski shaadi toh apne Raj se hi hui.i'm very happy.haa yeh alag baat hai ki dono ne apni marzi ke khilaaf shaadi ki hai par hum jaanthe hai na they r made for each other.😉

and the game scene was really nice.accha hua Naina jeet gayi warnaa Raj roph jhaadtha usske saamne😆😆

and the first night scene,no,lets say first night fiasco.....😆😆aisi first night toh kaash hi kabhi hui hogi.ek taraf Raj ko Naina ANGEL lagthi hai aur phir bhi vo usse daraane ki koshish kar rahaa hai...very good😆😆😆ab hum isska kya kare?

now waiting to see what Naina did to Raj that he is raising such hell in the early morning.............continue soon.............

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Hi Rakhi...

Nice concept and definitely different. Yaar Raj and Naina dont like each other. *unbelievable look*😲 😆 😆

And raj said "mar gayi kya?" 😲Arey Naina mar jayegi toh sabse jyada Raj hi royega... 😭huh!!! 😆And he is also surprised ki Naina se kaun shaadi kar raha hai? Kahin wo khud to nahi???😕 I mean its just a guess...

And Rakhi... we can never be tired of RN fics. So u can write as many as you can. We don't have any problem. 😉 We are a greedy lot where RN are concerned.😉

Cont soon...

Love
Guglu

Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Great part Rakhi...

Dekha maine sahi guess kiya tha... 😛RN ki shaadi hone wali thi. Bechari Naina...😭 wo Raj se shaadi nahi karna chahti aur naveen bhi apne parents ko mana nahi paya. Yaar ye parents itne force kyun karte hain? Khair unke force karne ki wajah se RN ki shaadi ho gayi... ye achi baat hai.👏 Aur Naina udas hokar kehti hai ki uski fikr nahi hai kisi ko.😭 Uska udaas hona bhi sahi hai.

Raj ne pura ghar tod diya... 😲Well... bechara ab kar hi kya sakta hai.😆

Finally Shaadi ho gayi but as u said ki saari rasme tum flashback me dikhaogi to I'm adjusting with the cutting short of the rasms. And Naina won the game. Well... usne to dikha bhi diya ki wo dominate karegi...😆 😆 😆 she refused to be cowed down by Raj.👏 Good beginning.

I'm waiting to know ki Naina ne kya shararat ki hai Raj ke saath. 😉Ab kya hoga???😕

Cont soon Rakhi...

Love
Guglu

Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago