Pyaar, zindegi aur duniya update in page 26

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi all,I'm here again with New Rn ff. u must be think kaise lerki hain, ek complte nehi hua aur ek baar agayi iha,phir ek baar aapna story leke, kya karu mein adat se majbur hoon,chalo bahut baaat kar liye, come to the main story.
A story of a girl and a boy who does not love each at first other but falls for each other.

Naina Singh Alhuwalia:-A girl who is shy belong a rich family .her family members loves her lots. She is only girl child of her parents and they love her lots. Her uncle and aunty also love her lots and she has one cousin bro who treated him like an angel. She wears mainly sari and salwar .She cannot read without her spectacles .she is shy and but very beautiful and her mind is very big. She is none other than Naina. Miss Naina Singh aluwahlia, daughter of Mr. Aditya Singh Aluwahlia and Mrs. Sunita Singh Aluwahlia. Her cousin brother's name is Naveen Singh aluwahlia?.He is Capt. of Army.

Capt.Rajveer Singh Shekhwat:-A boy who is smart, dashing, handsome belong to rich family, every girls dreams for him but he loves to live as free bird. He is only son of his parents. He loves his parents and his parents also. But he shares all the secrets to his dadi. He is none other than Rajveer Singh Sekhawat. He is Capt. of army.

Prologue:-

Rajveer and naveen both are best friends and they share very good relation with their respective family. Their family also knew each other well. Rajveer and naveen visit to their home in holidays. Their family member loves them both. In holidays, many time naveen stay in raj's home and raj also. But whenever,raj visit in the naveen's home he dislike one thing, no one person who is naina. Her shy nature, her spectacles.

Raj p.o.v.:-she is shy and behaves like, I'll eat her. What's this? Whenever I tried to talk to her she behaves like that I belong from some different world. Her cloths omg, she wears that sari, salwar.Tell her something and return ans only yes or no. she is completely different from naveen.

Naina P.o.v.:- He is too smart, why he always try to behave like he knows everything. Why naveen bhaiya talking with him? He is best friend of bhaiya but how, I didn't like him he is arrogant, and show too much attitude.

After some days naveen return from his office to his quarter and sat on the sofa.Raj came and said tere liye phone aaya tha,

Naveen:-kiska?

Raj:-I don't know.

Naveen raise his eye brows and said naina ka.

Raj look at him and said hummm.

Naveen:-tum dono ka problem mujhe aaj tak samajh mein nehi aaya?

Raj murmurs aur kabhi samajh mein nehi aayega, she is so dull.

After some time naveen come and said wow, raj and then hugged him with a force.

Raj :-what happen, kaya hua?

Naveen:-I'm veryyyyyyyyyyy happyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.

Raj:-yes, I saw it.but why?

Naveen:-U know naina.

Raj make a face and said yes.then said to his mind mar gayi kaya?

Naveen:-Kuch kaha tune?

Raj:-no, come to the point, what happen?

Naveen:-raj u know, naina ka shaadi honewali hain.

Raj is completely shocked and said what?

Naveen:-yes, raj,I'm so happy for her.

Raj:-yes, congratulation naveen. Then to himself,what, naina and marriage ?who is that man? May be unlucky man of this world.

Here naina is very happy and her family also. Raj's family also happy about her. Both naveen and raj return to their home for naina's marriage.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Rakhi ji, loved ur concept
something new
But RN should be together...ok na
Liked the character-sketch
Raj-Naina dont like each other........Interesting
Continue soon
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Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oye Rakhi,
we are never tired of RN fics...😛
Toh jitna mann kare likh....as long as you Promise to update them REGULARLY ! 😆
The concept was something Hatke !!! 😉
Raj's reaction was shocking when Naveen said about Naina...'mar agyi kya? '😲 😆
Now naina's getting married...
lets see Rakhiji aur kya karti hai?😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Rakhi....nice start...!!!!

Naina and Raj donot like each other....!!! But I like this concept....!!!!

Naina is getting married but I hope the unlucky man is Raj and only Raj...!!!!

Update soooooooon..................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Rakhi..so u hv started another RN ff..wow..
lovely concept... Raj n Naina dont like each other..hehehe..kab tak??? lets see....
i have a doubt..kahi aisa to nahi na ki Naina ki shaadi Raj se hi hone waali hai n Raj ko pata nahi... 🤔
lets see .....
pls continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Interesting prologue!!!!!

The character sketch is nice!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj and Naina don't like each other!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Dekhte hai kab tak!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne kaha usse pata nahi kiska phone hai aur Navin samajh gaya ke Naina ka phone hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

It was funny when Raj said in his mind mar gayi kya!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ki shaadi honewaali hai and everyone is happy about it!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is thinking that person is the unlucky man of the world!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Par Naina ki shaadi kisse tai huyi hai??😕 😕 😕 😕

I am sure shaadi jisse bhi tai huyi ho the unlucky man who she marries will be Raj!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yaar Raakhi tumne pehle update me hi itne saare jhatke dediye ek saath,kuch toh taras khathi humpe?Raj-Naina ki ek doosre keliye dislike, Raj ka reaction😲,aur ab Naina ki shaadi pata nahi kisse?ab mujhe in saare sawaalon ka jawaab jald se jald chaahiye,samjhi.soo,fauran updating ke kaam main lagjaa aur first part post kar de.

aur haa Mana ne sahi kaha,jitne jyaada RN fics utni hi jyaada khushiyaan aur rounak.😛.so,don't worry we don't mind u at all as long as u abide by our requests..........i mean in updating the fics in time.😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hmm..interesting concept babes!!
continue jaldi se
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Rakhi....
I am so happy to see another beautiful fic on RN....loved the concept ....aur hum bilkul bhi aise nahin sochthe ki u started another fic without completing the previous one...u know na we all love RN fics
so naina n raj dont like each other...interesting...nainas marriage is fixed n raj is thinking that the person who is getting married to her is unlucky man in the world
waiting agerly to know what happens next
plz continue soon with the first part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi dear mera naame rani main bhi rn ke fan hu mainne tumhare fic paare haai and just awesum
naina is a shy girl aur raj as usuall handsome they doesnt like each other
but yeh kya naina jee ke shaadi oh noooooooooooooo
aur raj usse laagta haai ke jo bhi n se shaadi kar raha haa woh world kaa sab se unlucky insan haa
ab dekhte haai aage kya hota haai rn ke zindagee main
so plz cont soon and give me a pm whenever u up

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