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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

Hey Rakhi ....

Lovely update 👏👏👏👏👏👏

Raj tu ne kitna rulaya naina ko ab bhugtho...jannab cares for naina...but attitude jyada hain bande ko

poor naina she is crying thinking what happened with her life

finally raj ne naina ko dhundliya ..naina ko bhukh lag rahi thi ..ab bechari itni royi tho bhook to lagegi na....ab naina kya karnewli hain raj ke saath..me eager to know

plz continue soon ....loved the whole update yaar

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
Hi Dear

Nice part..😃

Naina is planning something definetely..poor Raj!!!😆

Pls continue soon

Bye

hi dear.
Thanks for loving the update.
yes naina planning something.yes poor raj but don't worry raj will give back something.....
I'll update soon.

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness
Hey...Rakhi...tumhe pata hai ki mujhe yeh fic kitna achha lagta hai...phir bhi tum ne mujhe PM kyoun nahi kiya...???

very nice ud...

ab raj ne hi toh naina ko rulaya hai na...toh manayega bhi vohi...!!! yeh achha hua ki us ne naina ko dhudh liya...!!!

par us ne jo promise kiya hai ki voh ab naina ko pareshan nahi karega voh baht bhari padne wali hai us ko...ha ha ha...

chalo ab dekhte hain aage naina k kya plans hain...

cont soon.

hi priya
First ,I'm really sorry,It's my mistake as m really hurry mode that time and miss ur pm. so sorry dear.

thanks for loving the ud.
yes raj ne jab rulya hain tab ohi manayega naina ko aur akhir dhoond lya raj ne naina ko.
ha ha raj ne promise toh kya hain naina ko but pab tak khud iss promise ko manega dekhna hoga.
yes, aage dekhte hain naina ke pass kya plan hain raj ke liye.....
I'll update soon dear.

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: princessyogitha
Hey Rakhi ....
Lovely update 👏

Raj tu ne kitna rulaya naina ko ab bhugtho...jannab cares for naina...but attitude jyada hain bande ko

poor naina she is crying thinking what happened with her life

finally raj ne naina ko dhundliya ..naina ko bhukh lag rahi thi ..ab bechari itni royi tho bhook to lagegi na....ab naina kya karnewli hain raj ke saath..me eager to know

plz continue soon ....loved the whole update yaar

Hi yogi
thanks for loving the update.
ha raj ne jitna rulaya hain aab toh usse bhugatna hi hoga.
na re abhi pata nehi iye sach mein care karta hain iya drama kar reha hain.
yes sach mein naina is crying......
yes finally raj ne dhoond lya naina ko.
ha ha itna royi naina ne bhook toh lagi hogi na.
he he naina will take some sweet revenge wait for it.
I'll update soon.
thanks for loving the update.

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: danish1
very nice part

thanks for loving the update.

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maanmishti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

awesome update.....waiting for naina sweet revenge................plzzzzzzzzz update soon

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362035

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Posted: 14 years ago

#197

awesoooooooooooooome............

superb........

loved it........

thanx for the pm..........

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Nisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Nice part

Ab Raj ne naina ko naraz kiya tha toh usse apni wife ko mana hi tha.

Raj ne promise toh kar diya hai ki who naina ko pareshan nahi karega...par ab dekh na hai ki who nibha pata hai ki nahi.

Naina surely has soemthin planned

please continue soon

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

#199

Prologue and i read the start of the fic quite interesting.
So this time Raj is too smart n Naina is too shy.
Jhatka in first part that Ms. Naina is going to marry, with whom? 😕 😕 😕

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

#200

Read the first part of ur fic.
Nice one, to aisa jhatka laga hai hum sab ko Raj se shaadi ho rahi hai mam Naina ki aur ab Naina ki mom kuch sun na hi nahi chahti.
Bus unhone ek baar kuch final kar liya to kar liya abhi kuch nahi hoga.
I think aage ki story cut kar di hai na tum ne.
Raj to apni kismat pe yakeen nahi kar paa raha hai aur yahan Naina bhi shaadi karne k liye ready nahi thi us se but majboori me karni padi. Sab us ne bina man k kiya hai.
Are Naina to kaafi smart ho gayi hai aur us ko pata hai ki Raj ko handle kaise karte hain. First Wedding night me jab Raj ne Naina ko dekha to dekhta hi reh gaya aur tab Naina ko pochna pada ki kyoun dekh raha hai aise?
Us ko pata nahi tha kya ki room kyoun decorate kiya gaya hai? Itna stupid to nahi hai Raj. Par Naina bhi kam nahi hai accha kiya bed pe sone k liye jhagda kar liya ab dono soyenge.
Vo Raj ka us ko dhamki dene ka scene kaafi accha tha. Naina kitne naughty hai Raj ko bhi tung karti hai

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago