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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Its so damn cruel of Raj to tell such a thing !! 😡 😡 😡

anyways !! good that Naina told him to mind his business !
tune precap toh diya nahi hai dear...parrrrrrrr iska matlab yeh nahi ki tu late Update kar sakti hai ! 😳
you have to update soooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn !!!😛 😉


hi mana
yes raj was very cruel.
yes naina is determined and soon u'll know about it more.
sorry, precap jaan bhoojhke dia nehi now update kar dia.


thanks dear for loving the ud

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear

Nice part...
Why is Raj behaving like this????
Poor Naina!!! 😭😭😭
Pls continue soon
Bye


hi dear.
thanks for loving the part.
raj shaadi nehi karna chahatha and so he thought his freedom finished and cause of this he did it to naina.
update kar dia dear.

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

yeh raj ki khishak gayi hai kya...???

naina se aise kyoun behave karr raha hai...??? mujhe toh laga tha ki voh ab naina ko thoda thoda pasand karne laga hai...par...pata nahi...us k dimag me akhir hai kya...???
voh naina se aise kaise baat kar sakta hai...????
naina kitna dukhi ho gayi thi yaar...
cont soon.



hi dear
ha ha nehi re, raj ka kuch khishaka nehi , actually he thought his freedom finished and cause of this he did it to naina.
yes tujhe sahi laga raj pasand karne laga hain raj ko but his ego come first and adding he still didn't realize it.
ha naina bahut dhookhi hain but naina will teach him lesson soon.
update ho gaya jee

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was so good
plz continue soon


thanks for loving the update.
update ho gaya

Originally posted by: rituka7

great part
superb
update soon]


thnks for loving the update.
update hogaya dear.

Originally posted by: moonlight44

awesome job dii thnxx for the pm


thnks for loving the update.
update hogaya dear.
my pleasure dear


I'm waiting for ur comments dear.

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hiii Rakhi...

Awesome part 👏
Ye raj naina se is tarah kaise baat kar saktha hain yaar...akhir raj ke dimag main kya chal raha hain....bechari naina kitna dhukhi haina
please continue soon


hiii yogi
thanks dear for loving the part.
actually he thought his freedom finished and cause of this he did it to naina.
yes naina bahut dhookhi hain but naina will teach him lesson soon.
update hogaya dear.

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

hiiiiiiii rakhi how r u?
awesoooooooooooome
mindblowingggggggggg
superbbbbbbbbbb
fantasticcccccc
gr8 work
loved it
continue soon

love
deepa


hi deepa
thanks for loving the ud.
update hogaya dear.

I'm waiting for ur comments.

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

Hi Rakhi...

Shukar hai itne dino baad aapne update to kiya....😊 It was damn cruel of Raj to say this....wo aisa kaise bol sakta hai... hadh hai yaar...😡

Aur ye kya...Precap me no precap...😕aisa nahi hota....so update soon....😉

Love
Guglu



hi guglu
he he 😛 I'm very lazy.
u know na and now a days too busy😭

actually he thought his freedom finished and cause of this he did it to naina.
yes naina bahut dhookhi hain but naina will teach him lesson soon.
oh oh , sorry , jaan bhoojh ke precpa nehi dia dekh kitna jaldi update kar dia

update hogaya dear.

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hi Rakhi
How r u?

update was awesome dear
Raj Naina se aise behave kyu kar raha hai mujhe laga tha woh Naina ko pasand karne laga hai............akhir uske dimag main chal kya raha hai?????????
Naina is so sad
tumne precap bhi nahi diya plz is baar
JALDI
update karna

thnx for pm

Luv
Naina



hi naina
I'm fine dear.
how r u
actually he thought his freedom finished and cause of this he did it to naina.
yes naina bahut dhookhi hain but naina will teach him lesson soon.
yes raj pasand karne laga hain naina ko .

but his ego come first and adding he still didn't realize it.

oh oh sorry dear , dekho update kar dia.
my pleasure dear.
love
rakhi

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

updt was too good.....

bt raj made a mistake by saying dos dings........

hope raj n naina comes to terms soon.....

updt soon..


thanks for loving the ud
actually he thought his freedom finished and cause of this he did it to naina.

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Okay....do I seriously never see anything wrong wid Raj??? Hadh hai yaar.....partiality ki bhi hadh hai....gosh!!

Khair....I'll not comment on that.....I just hope sab jaldi se thik ho jaye.....ab naraz kiya hai to bhugatna to padega hi Raj ko....
BTW sorry for the late comment Rakhi...its just I had been a bit too busy.....itneee saare PMs the....sort out karne me bahut waqt laga....anyways....that was a nice part dear.....pls continue soon.....guess it has been quite long!!



hi
it's ok dear. no problem. actually ,I'm really sorry for updating late late.
actually he thought his freedom finished and cause of this he did it to naina.
yes naina bahut dhookhi hain but naina will teach him lesson soon.
yes raj pasand karne laga hain naina ko .

but his ego come first and adding he still didn't realize it.




thanks u all of u for lovely comments.ur comments inspired me lots.
and pls those who are not still unreserved their seat ,pls unreserved it soon.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks to all of them who likes the update
psruthi, Kool_Naina, hinal60, danish1, princessyogitha, vvdn, sweet_shona, golu_1677, PrincessFlavia, meghaparti, Sweet-Lioness, sumaiya wahid, pop77, .🤗
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
next part:-

Next Part:-

Raj sits in the couch and looking for naina ….

Raj:-iye lerki gayi kaha?abhi tak lauti kyuon nehi.uff

Raj:-sab tere wajay se ho raha hain.nehi sab naina ke wajay se. par… are kiska galati hain iye mein abhi nehi soch sakta , pehele iye lerki kaha gaya…iye toh dekhu…chal raj jake aapne patni ko dhoond ke le aa.

Then raj suddenly stop and said to him self wait a min raj, meine usse aapna patni nehi maana par abhi kaise kehe dia oh mere patni hain, what is this, iye lerki mere sath kya akr raha hain….I'll not go to search her.jaha gayi hain gayi hain khud aajyegi nehi toh jaye jaha jana.then pause for something then no, I cannot do it….

Then raj goes to search naina.

Here at the park, naina sit in the bench and think about her marriage, her parent's words and raj's words.

Naina:-kyuon ma, papa aapne ek baar bhi mere baat nehi suna aapne. Kyuon papa. Kyuon aapne aise kya mere sath.ho sakta hain raj accha lerka , par mere liye nehi,

Naina covers her face with hands and crying bitterly.

Here raj hire a car and searching her every where but no result.

Raj looks frustrated and tensed for the first time, Raj: - it's all my fault .just cause of me .if m not did that…..y, y m so …. Are who is this.

Suddenly raj's eyes fall on a lady who is sitting in the bench and crying bitterly.

Raj opens the car door and goes there. He placed his hand on her shoulder.

That lady look at raj and but first cannot understand who is that person cause her eyes was blurred due to long time of cry.

Raj saw naina's face. She is looking pale and her eyes were swell and red …..

Raj feels bad …..Slowly slowly naina understand that it's raj and son she pushed his hand from her shoulder and told go away from here.

Raj bends on his knees and told her to forgive him and from the nest time he will do anything like this.

Naina: - oh trust u. do u knw the meaning of trust, know m sure. U just knw one thing how to broke trust or humiliate any one or hurt any one. I'm not expecting anything from u but that doesn't mean ….

Raj just placed his finger on her lips and said shhhhhh, sorry. I'm really really sorry…it's just big mistake but promise, I'll do anything. Pls believe me one time, for the last time .pls…..pls come back.

Naina looks shocked and her eyes widen in shock and surprised.

Naina in her mind:-kya iye sach bol rehe hain iye inka koi naya plan hain mujhe pareshan karne ke liye. Par itne acche se sorry jo bol rehe hain .par….thik hain ek baar trust karke dekhti hoon agar kuch kare toh mein bhi inhe inke language mein samajhaunga …

Then naina indicate raj to remove his finger……Raj removes his finger and told kya …..

Naina:-kya ,kya hua,

Raj looks confused and told kya kya.

Naina looks irritated and said hum iha kya kya na khel ke wapas chale aur usse pehele mujhe bahut bhook lagi hain….

Raj took few moments to understand then said oh ok.

Naina:- aab chale ……par pehele koi restaurant mein jayenge…

Raj:-hmmmm then to his mind chalo raj bete order follow karo….office mein bhi order ghar mein bhi order kya life ho gaya tere……

Naina stops and said aap kya uha khare rehe gaye. Chalo….abhi mujhe bhaut bhook lagi hain.

Raj:-hmmmm, pata hain meine suna hain.

Naina stops and said agar ek baar apne aisa baat kya mere sath so,I'll not go with u.

Raj:-what? R u crazy…

Naina:-no, I'm not, u r crazy.

Raj:-naina…..

Naina:-ok, fine . I'm not going any where.aapne mujhse jhooth bola.

Raj:-jhooth kab jhooth bola meine.

Naina:- abhi thori der pehele.aapne mujhse maffi manga now and u forgot about it and starts shouting.

Raj:-shouting at u.when ?

Naina:-thori der pehele.

Raj:- oh hello I'm not shouting at u , I'm just telling u …aab chalo bhool nehi lagi kya.

Naina:-Lagi hain bahut lagi hain then naina made a baby face.

Unknowingly, raj smiles at her …

Then both goes at restaurant and raj told naina to order food for both of them.

Naina:-aapne khana nehi khaya.

Raj smiles and said nehi aapko dhoondne ke liye mere khana bhi skip ho gaya.

Naina:-aapne mere liye khana nehi khaya sacchi.

Raj:- order karo food,I'll come back soon.

Naina:-par aap ja kaha rehe ho.

Raj:-ghar mein call karne.

Naina:- toh iha se karo, aise kya baat hain jo mere saamne nehi ho sakta.

Raj shook his head and told try kar raha tha but line nehi mil raha hain so I thought …

Naina stops him hmm samajh gayi mein , jaiye.

Raj to his mind bari jaldi samajh gaye.

Naina:-Kuch kaha aapne.

Raj:-nehi.

Naina:-good.

Raj goes outside to call his home. Here naina order the food for both of them.

Raj come back and told mom asking about u and told u to call her back.

Naina :-hmmmm and then evilly smiles at him….

Raj:-now for what that smile.

Naina:-nothing.

Raj to his mind something is going on, .ok for get it. Now I'm too hungry.

Naina:-aapne aap se baat na karke khana kha lijiye….kya pata kab khana mile iya na mile.

Raj:-oh really…..

Naina with extra sweet smile told raj yes jaanu.

Raj drinking water and choked it.

Naina:-ufff kya karte ho aap patidev.. dheere dheere pani pejiye na. itna jaldi bhi kya hain.

Raj to himself iye itna acchi kyuon baan gayi …. Danger is coming. Raj bete alert

Naina:-kya hua kya soch rehe hain, jaldi khana kha lijiye

Raj:-ha, tum bhi kha lo.

After their dinner both of them going back to their hotel.

After changing both stand near the bed.

Raj: - u should take the bed.

Naina:-of course and u'll go to couch.pls take this pillow with u also.

After settling themselves in the bed and couch both of them…

Naina:-good night pati dev. Sweet dreams.

Raj: - hmmmm.

Naina: - raj pls learns some manner also. When u wife wish u something. U also wish her back na.

Raj in cold voice good night sweet dreams.both of lay on their respective place.

Naina in her mind:-so lijiye raj jee, aapke sath mein jo karungi … ha ha….

Raj:-iske dimag mein jarur kuch chal raha hain but don't worry , u have to face me mrs naina rajveer singh shekhawat.

Then,Both of them soon dose off to deep sleep

Precap:-Naina is taking sweet revenge.


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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome upd!

Raj cares for naina but dnt show to any1
their sweet nok jhok turning into a deep luv story n m loving it😳
Edited by khushi909 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part....gud that Raj went on to search for his 'wife'....and they had their dinner as well....but w8ing to knw wats Naina's sweet revenge?? Also eager to knw wat Rajveer Singh Shekhawat does....hehe. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update di!!
thnxx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was really sweet
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi😊

the up is really 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
so naina naraz hoke chale gaye aur raj ab naina ko dhundhne gaya haai😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
naina becchare park mein baith kar ro rahe haai 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
finally raj naina ko dhund he leeta haai aur usse sorry bhi kaheta haai😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
good
raj aur naina hotel mein jaate haai dinner karne aur waha naina jab raj ko jaanu kahete haai 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆raj ka gala he chocked ho jaata haai😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
ab dekhte haai naina raj ke khatte mitthe love story mein kya mor aata haai😊😉😉😉😉
plz cont soon and do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
good 😆 ab dekhe naina kya karti hai 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOw nice
i loved the story......................wooo its amazing

loves ayesha

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