SAJAN FF-TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA-chp11 updt pg 83,84 - Page 14

👏 👏 👏 superb updates meena sweetheart trully loved it
in first part A dedicated to first hint of love called jealousy , possesiveness of sam his unknown feelings for gun come out with his rudeness and behaving fragile loved that part bcz gun 's calmness and innocence won my heart and their first match fantastic

in part B: dedicated to sam's love for gun and his caring nature towards his friends and now for his special one , like coconut he switch off his whole role in his life blunt to kind

in part C: i think best part as this part dedicated to true friendship of dia and sam and true love of benia, and u described it superbly yar

in part D: my god first realization of love , sajan's hug and may be both 's first realization but more to gun ,and chary on the cake is gina 's vm loved it

GINA YOU DID BEST JOB IN THIS VM YAR i must say meena and gina u both r best partner in this FF i really appreciate your work you both rock , love u both keep it up guys

meena thanks for pm and do continue soon and sorry for late reply

plz add me to ur PM list i want to be a part of it it is gud FF n cont soon!!

Originally posted by: gina87

OH MY GOD!!...wow!!..👏👏..I don't know where to start'.

Okay first of all, girl thank you so much for being a wonderful and a dear friend🤗🤗'I cant even tell you how much your sweet words moved me'so all I am gonna say is that you are an absolute sweetheart and I just wanna give you a big hug!!

Like I said before I don't even know where to start writing about your update'.you know every time I read a chapter of yours I always think that you cant top this one but every single time you do'.and I am left speechless all over again'.what I loved about this entire chapter was the beauty with which you showed the depth of samrat and gunjan's feelings for each other but also (let me see if I can explain this in the right way') the way you showed someone internal fight with themselves when it comes to love.. 'what I am trying to say is that you not only showed their feelings but also the essence of each character'.to the extent that I can imaging exactly what both sam and gunjan would be feeling at that point'..( dont know if I made any sense😆')'and gosh I totally loved the jealous samrat!!.😉...hayeee!!*daydreaming about mohit*

Another thing I loved is the value you have given to friendship and looking beyond what you see in a person at the first glance' what benji, dia and everyone else feels for samrat is so beautifully explained from the start that I cant even hate samrat even when I read some of the things he says to his friend'the way you have presented this complex character is amazing'👏.

And also gosh girl I know I have said this before but seriously how do you write these lines??...I swear I have never met anyone before who can write such beautiful words in such a manner that it touches your heart'..and not be aware of their talent''.I cant even tell you which line I loved the most cuz the truth is I loved the entire poem!!....

Gosh I cant wait for the next chapter!!...but now I am gonna run back and read this chapter again.😃.

p.s. girl my vm is absolutely nothing compared this this awesome chapter and especially that beautiful poem that you wrote'i know this comment is really long but its all your fault for being such an awesome writer....love ya sweety!!!.....muah!

Mind Blowing Update!!!
dat was really amazing
YES!! I cant wait for Samrat to realise now!!
aw Poor Dia i hope she gets better soon
Samrat is such a great friend to have
plzzz continue soon
THANKS ALOT for the PM!!!

Beautiful parts loved it very much please cont. soon

hey Meens

i was catching up wid all the pms in my box, i hadnt come online yesterday due to an exam today, when i saw ur ff, i turned to the link n hello, such a huge chapter, i needed to sleep, havent slept since yesterday, so i bookmarked ur page,

@ aashi – aww thanx sweety..i am so glad you liked the vm but trust me its only cuz of meena's awesome ff that this vm is looking good….our meenakshi is one kickass writer!!

@aarthi – thanx hon!...great song choice girl….I will definitely make a vm on it but I wanna wait till this track ends cuz I know we are going to get to some amazing scenes and I want to include them in this vm…

Originally posted by: gina87

@ aashi ' aww thanx sweety..i am so glad you liked the vm but trust me its only cuz of meena's awesome ff that this vm is looking good'.our meenakshi is one kickass writer!!

@aarthi ' thanx hon!...great song choice girl'.I will definitely make a vm on it but I wanna wait till this track ends cuz I know we are going to get to some amazing scenes and I want to include them in this vm'

Awsome dear!! believe me you've got talent and I'm learning from you

Originally posted by: gina87

<font size="3" face="Calibri">@ aashi – aww thanx sweety..i am so glad you liked the vm but trust me its only cuz of meena's awesome ff that this vm is looking good….our meenakshi is one kickass writer!!</font>

<font size="3" face="Calibri">@aarthi – thanx hon!...great song choice girl….I will definitely make a vm on it but I wanna wait till this track ends cuz I know we are going to get to some amazing scenes and I want to include them in this vm…</font>

ya dear meena is superb and kickass writer as you r kickass vm maker keep it up 😃