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PART 3

Departure

Muskaan- ridz uth uth na. ridz uth tere mom ka phone hai.

Ridz- nooo go away

Muski- dude wake up it's your mom

Ridz- urgh..

On the phone with her mom

Ridz- hi mumma

Padma- good morning beta, isn't it noon over there

Ridz- so

Padma- acha baba sorry sleep for as long as you want

Ridz- did you call me to tell me sleep, what happen? (Rudely)

Padma- why I can't just call my daughter? (Sadly)

Ridz- yes but I know you didn't call me for any reason so spill what happen?

Padma- ok baba, I called to ask what time will your flight reach India.

Ridz- at 9, can I hang up now (rudely)

Padma- kya huwa beta, why are so irritated.

Ridz- I don't want to talk about it.

Padma- plz beta...wat has happened has already happened'so just forget it..

Ridz- yea but you could have stopped it but u didn't'whatever just forget it'

Padma- it's been 5 years since I have seen you and we all want to see you

Ridz- yea but I don't'.

Padma- I don't wanna hear anything u r coming and that's final (almost crying)

Ridz- ok fine I will come for a month or so but u will let me go back and promise me that no one will stop me or emotional blackmail me about staying back and also NO ONE will persuade me to get married.

Padma- ok meri ma... so when will u be leaving?

Ridz- in 3 days.

Padma- call me when you depart

Ridz- yes mom...ok I have to go now '.have to go back to sleep

Padma- bye...take care love u

Ridz- bye

~-----call end-----~

Padma- it's all over. She is not my ridzy. I lost my daughter'crying

3 DAYS LATER

At New York airport ----on the phone with her mom

Ridz- yes mom I packed everything and remind me again why do have to make a stopover to Dubai

Padma- because your cousins live over there it would be good if u meet them. Anjili (4 yrs old) was asking about you just go and meet them

Ridz- ok fine, do u remember Muskaan she was with me in medical school. She is coming with me to India (very blandly)

Padma- that's very good... Interrupted by Ridhima

Ridz- ok have to leave bye...

Hangs up the phone

Muskaan who is sitting next to her- oey hello tu itna rudely kyon batkarti hai aunty se'

Ridhima elbowed her to stop annoying her...

Muskaan- but she is you mom...ridz gives her the eyes that say not again and change the topic...

Muskaan- so tell me about your cousin Anji

Ridz- anji, she is amazing I love her to death I sometimes feel like she is my own daughter. I pamper her to death I nicknamed her princess cuz I spoiled her. She acts exactly like me, copies everything I do since her childhood, it sometimes annoys me but she shocks me as how well she can imitate me. I love her. She also has a brother his name is Zeeshan but I call him Z. Hi is very nosey so never tell him anything he will go ahead and tell everything to anybody even strangers. He is adorable though

Muskaan- how old are they?

Ridz- Anjii is 14 and Zeeshan is 10 yrs old

Muskaan- nice, so who else r u gonna meet over there?

Ridz- my uncle, my...

Ridz get interrupted by the air host, would u like something to eat or drink

Ridz- um... I will have 1 coke without ice please...um Muskaan you???

Muskaan- mouth open wide

Ridz- Muskaan do you need anything...Muskaan...helloooo

Muskaan- he sooo hot!!!!!!!

Host- excuse me????

Ridz- she means to say a hot chocolate. Haina Muskaan

Muskaan comes out of her trance. haan haan bilkul

Host- yea sure and as soon as he leaves

Muskaan- and a piece of that hot delicious pie

Ridz- yuck tere taste ko kya hogaya hai

Muskaan- kya yaar ridzi tujhe ro koi bhi pasand nahin ata...dekhna tera mr. right tere paas hoga aur tu use ignore kardegi

Ridz- yea yea whatever

Muskaan- dekh lena...and with these kinda talk they reached Dubai in 12 hours

Dubai

Dubai airport and are getting their luggage '

Ridz- wo dekho mere uncle'. hi shubbi uncle

Muskaan- "SHUBBI" yeh kaisa naam hai

Ridz- giggles..are yaar shubhankar is his full name n we 'interrupted

Uncle- omg tum kitni badi hogayi ho '.tum itni sit hi jab maine tumhe dekha tha '..aur yeh kaun hai

Ridz- oh this is my friend Muskaan'.. We live together and we also went to the same medical school

Shubbi- ohhh ok '.aau beta 'chalo chalet hain'.. tumhari aunty kabse tumhara wait kar rahi hai ' aur late ho gaye to mujhe khana nahin milega'

Ridhima and Shubbi laugh'

Uncles' place

Ridz- hi aunty kaise ho aap'.

Ridz- yeah meri auty hai Keerti'aur yeh unke do pyare but chote se shaitan bache ' Anji and zeeshaan '.

Muskaan- hi bachon'Namaste aunty

Keerti- hello beta ' how was your flight' bohut tired hoge Na'interrupted by Anji

Anji- yeh kaun hai '.hamare liye chocolate layi ho '.and she keeps on bantering' interrupted by Z

Zeeshan- chup. Your sooo preeeeety'. Staring at her' I don't want chocolates I want her'

Ridz- and that's my weird cousin'and my princess

Keerti- ach yeh sab chodo 'chalo khana khate hai warna thanda ho jayega'

'.to her husband...Faking anger...ab ap ko alag se invitation do ya khud ake kha lenge'

Ridz- kya hua itna gussa kyun'.

Keerti- dekh na mein ne in se lemon lane ke liye kaha tha subha

Muskaan- tho'

Keerti- tho inhone watermelon le aye' aur kahte hain jab pucha tho '"they sound similar"

Ridz and Muskaan laugh'

Shubbi- it's an honest mistake they sound the same'.

Keerti- haan haan kyun nahi agar cricket matches the dhyaan hatey to kuch samaj mein aye na'huffs in anger' acha yeh sab chodo tum log kitne din ke liye ho yahan '

Ridz- ummm 2 days.

And with these chit chat they finished their food '

Keerti- acha tum jake aram karlo 'safar se bohot thak gaye honge'

Muskaan- ji'

Zeshaan- aao mein app ko apka room bata hoon '.muskaan...ji...Says in a funny way'

Muskaan smiles at his childish crush'and Ridz rolls her eyes at her cousin antiques' could he be anymore childish

Ridz- Z don't worry I will take her'since we both are stayin in the same room'

Zeshaan- theek hai di (sad and gloomy)

Muskaan- ridz what's wrong with you he just wants to us to our room

Ridz- oh come on '.fine...Groans

Z is all smiles and leads them but always peeking back at Muskaan and blushing.

Bedroom

Muskaan ' nice place' thank you Zeeshan

Z ' You can call me Z

Ridhima is rolling her eyes at them' to both ' seriously guys I m drop dead tired can we please cont. this later'

Muskaan ' yea I m tired too 'so I will se u later Z

Z ' sad 'ok good night' n with that he leaves

Muskaan ' what's the matter why r u yelling at a kid'

Ridz slumps down and groans in discomfort ' I don't know maybe cuz i never wanted to come here

Muskaan ' why it's nice here

Ridz ' it's not this place it's the place after this

Muskaan ' what??

Ridz ' never mind just forget it '. I m gonna hit the shower first then a deep slumber

Next morning

Ridz woke up early because of the jet lag and saw that everyone is already up' well early for her

Ridz- you guys are up early

Keerti ' yea, your uncle and I have to go to work so

Ridz ' what about the Anji n Z

Keerti ' oh already left she has dance classes today n z is coming with me.

Shubbi ' so any plans for today or r u just gonna sleep in' ruffling her hair

Ridz ' haha very funny'we r gonna do some shopping n maybe hit some beaches

Z ' oh oh can I come

Ridz ' um' I guess

Keerti interpreted ' no beta let them go have fun we can go later '

Z ' No I want to go with them

While the mother son were arguing Muskaan woke up

Muskaan ' good morning

Z ' Very good morning 'blushes...Thinking she is even prettier half awake

Z ' I want to go with them

Muskaan ' go where?

Ridz ' aunty it's no problem he can come with us to the mall and maybe we can get Anji on our way too

Muskaan ' oh the mall of course they can 'it's just a mall

Padma ' no it's not fine I shouldn't even let u to go alone ' you r a girl what if something happens to you

Both look at each other and laugh

Ridz- don't worry this Muskaan is black belt in karate from Amritsar paunjab'saying it with heavy tone

Shubbi- jane do na bache hai..but no later than 9..understand..

Z- yes Sir.. (inhis head) "don't worry I will protect you Muskaan..hehe"

Shubbi ' anyway which mall r u guys going?

Muskaan ' I have heard a lot about the Dubai mall'and how big n beautiful it is'

Shubbi- Anji's dance classes are over there too'maybe you can all go shopping.

Z- woooohooo great wait a sec I will go get ready'

Ridz ' slow down there superman'there is still time.

Padma- I still don't want you to go roaming around town, it's not safe.

Shubbi- its fine they are old enough to take care of themselves

Padma- par Anji aur zeeshan nahin ja rahe (she leaves)

Z- par dad

Shubbi- (whispering to them so Padma won't hear them) it's ok beta I will drop you all don't worry.

Dubai mall

They plan to go to the Dubai mall and when they reach there, they are mesmerized by its beauty and the number of shops and stores

http://www.dubai-city-guide.net/wp-content/uploads/2008/11/dubai-mall-330x440.jpg

http://www.thedubaimall.com/en/media/get/20081027_the-dubai-mall-ice-rink.jpg

http://www.thedubaimall.com/en/media/get/20081027_the-dubai-mall-aquarium.jpg

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_N77tXVAG-dg/Rotl2nFz1DI/AAAAAAAAAGg/r6ZSPbYhQV0/s400/IMG_2725.jpg

http://www.realtyna.com/dubai_real_estate/images/dubai-future-projects/dubai-mall/dubaimall.jpg

Muskaan ' I have never seen a skating ring in a mall

Ridz ' I haven't seen a bigger shoe shop ' it has two floors of just shoes

Muskaan - not with you shoe obsession again'

Ridz ' there is nothing wrong with shoes and OMG they are soooo adorable'.plzzz lets go

Muskaan- urggghhhh!!!!!

Z ' No wait we have to get Anji first otherwise she will get mad.

Ridz ' yea your rite' do u know where it is'

Z ' Yea...Follow me'ha-ha

On the other side of the mall we see 4 hot guys walking in'

Armaan, rahul, Atul (rahuls's friend), Abhi (armaan's friend)

Abhi ' seriously dude y r we here

Armaan ' because I have get my sis from her dance classes and get some shopping done with her

Atul ' ok' but y r we here then

Rahul ' cuz we don't want to get bored alone

Abhi ' ha-ha very funny guys

Then armaan n rahul go the dance studio to get their sis'

All Armaan, his friends, Ridhima and Muskaan are also in the dance lobby waiting for their sisters. Their class was gonna end in about fifteen min.

Meanwhile'

Rahul ' dude look hot girl 12 o'clock (straight ahead)

Atul ' where where????

Abhi ' are you that desperate man'chill'even if u want to make your gf jealous that doesn't mean get any hot girl u see.

Rahul ' relax guys' I m gonna go talk to her

Abhi ' ja mere sher'u can do it

Armaan- pite ga sala'.everyone laughs

Muskaan ' ek bohut hi cute ladka hamari taraf a raha hai'eep

Ridz ' first stop eeping second he might be coming to get a magazine or something'third he isn't that cute 'he is ok'

Muskaan- whatever'tujhe to koi bhi pasand nahi ate'(dreamily) he has a cute smile' but then again he might want to get some magazine from the rack (which was right next to them)'.so she is went back to talking to Z

Rahul comes up to her n sees her talking to a kid n thought maybe she's married n that her son'

Rahul ' oh whatever'she looks young n pretty'maybe she is a divorcee'hehe (Thinking in his head)

Rahul ' hi I m Rahul'name tho suna hi honga

Ridz looks up and starts laughing'.Muskaan elbow her to shut up

Rahul ' I m sorry did I say something funny

Ridz ' no it's just a horrible pick up line'even Z could have done better

Rahul ' excuse me...

The guys heard that started laughing'but stopped when rahul looked at them

Muskaan ' plzz don't mind her'she not always like this'

Rahul 'I m sure

Muskaan ' excuse me '

Rahul ' I will be right back'

Rahul goes back to the boys '.

Atul ' what your charm didn't work 'in a sarcastic tone'

Everyone laughs and Rahul looks smug

Abhi- that girl soo totally told you.

Armaan- (thinking) interesting girl..hmm

Rahul - help karo na yaar' her friend is kinda wierd'idk'hellllllllpppppp

Armaan 'at least name tho puch le ' or first uske friend ko compliment kar bad us ladki ko..

Rahul- you sure'

Armaan- am I ever wrong'

Muskaan ' wo wapas aa raha hai'main kya kahun usko'hi my name is muskaan'nai nai it sound too boring'people call me Muskaan'no no too much attitude..

Ridhima- just shut up'sirf name hi tho bolna hai aur tu itna soch rahi hai' agar I love u bolna hoga tho .. tu tho sara duniya uthalegi..ang giggles

Muskaan- whatever'.

Rahul- sorry'I forgot something'

Ridhima- interrupted him'.what your dignity.

Abhi- (to his friends) I like that girl'spicy'ohh

Muskaan elbowed Ridz and gave a nervous smile to rahul

Muskaan- soooo' what were u saying...

Rahul- hey I didn't get your name'

z- You don't need to know her name'

Rahul- oh hey there little guy'

z- I m not a little guy'hummmpphhh

Ridz- what do u want??'just come to the point n stop running around the bushes

Rahul got nervous' oh those are lovely shoes' nice color..um they go with your eyes

Ridz ' what'I knew u were stupid but I guess you blind too'I didn't know I had beige eyes'

Rahul- me neither

Ridz 'what'excuse me' I m gonna go ask the receptionist how much longer' (Smiling within herself)' wow itna insult hone ke baad bhi yahaan hai...Interesting

Armaan and Abhi looked at him exasperatedly and sighed

Armaan- I m going in to help him'I can't watch my brother get murdered by that girl'

Abhi- good luck man'yeh bhi gaya

Armaan walks up to Ridhima

Armaan- hey I m armaan n I just wanted to put u on notice that I noticed u noticing me'

Ridz looked up with an annoyed face'

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