~NEW FF AR~ Why Fall In Love??? updated (pg 2)

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Armaan- ridz stop...please dont go. I LOVE U. dont leave me, i need you. i m madly, head over heels in love with u. i love u with every breath i take. i wish i could say you were the best thing happened to me but u know what would be growing old with u n u yelling n correcting me for all the stpid mistakes, which i hate but i love u truly madly deeply...
Ridz- R u done with ur nonsense armaan...i dont want to listen to this, i am getting late for my flight
Armaan- hold her tightly...u have u listen to me ...breaking down...WHY RDZ WHY?? i know u love me. dont deny it n try to run away from it..
Ridz- Loudly u DONT KNOW ANYTHING...trying to hold her tears back...i dont love u armaan..let me go..
Armaan- then tell me ridz... i want to share ur pain
Ridz- laughing and what makes u think i m in pain...
Armaan- then why are u running away from love, which is standing in front of u
Ridz- Snorthing ur not my love armaan...now plzz dont create a scene..let me go
ridz leaves for her flight back to america...IN PLANE

Ridz- Crying...i m sorry armaan...i cant...love gives only pain..n i seen enough, i wont be able to bare it...i m sorry...i hope u will move on

on the other side...armaan is walking in the middle of the streets aimlessly in the middle of the night, thinking about how sharp ridz words were...it boke his heart but he still wants to tell her that he will love her from that shattered pecies of his heart to.
when all of a sudden a truck comes.....CRASHHH
while onthe other side...ridz has gone through all the customs, procedures, n security. n was just boarding her flight when she recieved a call from rahul..
Ridz- hello
Rahul- ridhima..u need u come to the hospital qiuckly...
Ridz- Rahul wat happen...is everything ok...
Rahul- Armaan ka...
Ridz- hello..hello wat happen to armaan..hello..r u there rahul..

CALL LOST....SIGNAL LOST
Airport Crew- maam r u boarding this flight... if so then plzz hurry...maam
.....................................................Ridz- no...
sorry if there are any mistakes..plz comment if liked n if not plzz critisize..😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Character Sketch


Ridhima gupta- born in India rose in America. Very stylish and smart believes in love but is very practical at the same time. Very much American but still has Indian culture within her. She respects her elders and befriends with everybody. She is a psychiatrist n very today's girl

Padma gupta- rihdima's mom- very cool and relaxed. Trusts her daughter very much. Ridhima is her only daughter. Wife of shashank gupta

Shashank gupta- ridhimas dad- very tempered but loving will try to do everything for his daughter's wishes.

Muskaan chadha- ridhimas best friend. Her parents died in a car crash. They both share an appt. she is a pediatrician (children's doctor).

Armaan malik- born in India razed in Dubai (Middle East) very charming, smart, architect, loving, Mr. Flirt in short a Casanova. He is an architect.

Rahul malik- armaans brother but they are more like buddies and share every secret. very much like armaan, but a little more sensible. Younger brother to armaan by a year. He is a doctor too n very good looking with a much chiseled body

Mansi malik- most commonly known as min. the youngest of all siblings and is 6 yrs old. She is pampered by everyone. Very sweet and adorable, but also very mischievous and naughty

Juhi malik- very loving caring mom of armaan and rahul. Wife of rahul.

Raj malik- business tycoon but a very loving father and an adviser to his children. They are one big happy family.

if any mistakes do tell me...will try harder..plzz comment..😛
Edited by nishath_afroze - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I love it
yay i'm first to comment
plzz continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy plzz continue it n loved the intro
n plzz add me to ur pm list too
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hey
nice intro and the charecters...
loved it very much
cont soon
pm me if you can
nruti
Edited by arluver15 - 15 years ago
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its gr8
plz pm me when u upadate
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi..thanks alot i guys for i comments i will surely continue soon...but cant pm because i m knida new to it (pm-ing) so if any help i will try it next time..thanks 😉

~~nisha~~ 😛
Edited by nishath_afroze - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank you so much guys for liking the earlier part...here goes another one
PART 2
Ridz runs out of the airport..taxi...taxi..also calls mini...
Mini- hello
Ridz- heloo mini...armaan ko kya howa...how is he..is he alright...where is he...say in a breath
Mini- ap tho jane wali thi na..y do u even bother..this is all cuz of u that bhai is in this condition...n how do u know that bhai had an accident
Ridz- what..an accident...how, when, where, why...i mean rahul called but phone got cut...which hospital??
Mini- Sanjivani hospital...but y do u care..u already left rite...
Ridz- no....never...n hung up..
got a taxi to sanjivani...n ran to the reception..
Ridz- excuse me...armaan malik..ka accident...crying hystarically
Juhi M- beta
Ridz turn and finds his mom and everybody else sitting and crying badly..
Ridz- aunty..hows armaan...dont worry nothing will happen to him...i will go talk to him..its just one of his pranks again...dont worry..i will teach him a lesson...crying..abhi dhek thi hoon ose
runs to the OT, where they are operating on Armaan, when Ridhima sees him all covered in blood through the transparent glass windows...n faints..saying ...ARMAAAAAAN...
After an hour when she opens her eyes she finds her self in an unknown room with machines that were attached to her body...doctor comes in..
Doctor- dont worry u r fine...ur BP just got high...we just have to keep u in 24 hour observation..u can go after that..just rest for now..
Ridz- how can i doc, when a part of u is fighting for life..
Doc- mein kuch samjha nahi
Ridz- mein bhi nahin...
Doc- acha the nurse will here in couple mins.. if needed anything just press the button beside your bed.....with that doc leaves
Ridz- Armaan.. mujhe armaan ke paas jana hai
ridz was determined to see armaan at this moment, so she detacted the glucose dripping off her arm..n the monitering machine for the under observation..nothing mattered more for her than Armaan rite now...
As she was rushing toward his room she overheard a docter discuss armaan case to a senior doctor.
Doc- sir he is not responding at all
dean- well try shock theraphy maybe that will be helpful
Doc- no sir i think because of the some traumatic incident he is in shock
Dean- ok then keep him under observation and report to me after 24 hrs.
thats all ridhima need to hear for her to go weak in her knees...her Armaan in coma...because of a traumatic incident..only she knew that a thrauma in armaans life and reason for all of this was her..only her...
Nurse- mam app yahan kya karahi hai apko tho bed pe hona chahiye..chaliye
nure took ridhima to her bed...
ridhima was completely numb now...she was in utter shock that the person she cared about most was in a hospital bed sleeping lifelessly... n thats all because of ridhima..she closed her n a lone tear escaped her eyes.
farewell party?

Ridz: hey guys what's with the commotion here? what's all this...

Everyone: NOOOOOOOOO u weren't supposed to see this. This was your congratulation and farewell party.

Ridz: ok I understand the congratulation party for finally getting my psychiatrist license but what's with the farewell party??

Muskaan: acha hum india nahin jaa rahe kya? ..sarcastically

Nancy: hey guys we don't understand your language so please if you don't mind guys

Muskaan: we mind

Ridz: ANYWHO what's with the farewell party?

Nancy: we think that since you're going to India, we thought you would get married and then just leave us over here and live nicely with your husband and five kids

Ridz: ok first its three kids and second you idiot I am going for my uncles wedding not my own

Muskaan: yea if it was her, she would probably run away from the alter like last time

Ridz: you b*tch, I did not run from the alter I said no the first time I saw that creature, disgusting, any ways I ran away two days later

Cody: but why did you run away, you should have just said I can't take this and said that you were leaving

Ridz- they didn't leave me with any other option (sadly, remembering what happened that day) anyhow lets enjoy'PUMP UP THE MUSIC & P.A.R.T.Y

I will be happy even in my saddest moments'they don't why I don't want to get married, only 1 person knows why n that would by my favorite cousin, Anjali. I believe in love but not that forever kind,i think there is only the kind that u fall for then get up with a headache next moring with tangled hair n life...people can give it many name..infactuation, lust, hunger..but doesnt it all come down to one thing...PAIN....

PLZZ CORRECT ME IF THERE WERE ANY MISTAKES...HOPE U LIKE IT N PLZZ COMMENT...THANK YOU😊
Edited by nishath_afroze - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it dear
con soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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LOVE IT HEY I AM MARYAM
I LOVE UR FF CAN UPLZ PM ME WHEN U UPLOAD😛

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