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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Superb, Brilliant, Fantastic. 👏👏👏 Thanqqqq Nisha...

Raj ki entry hila dene wali thi. Vikram ki toh ab khair nahi😡. Raj ke dialogues were awesome. ab raj hi AWESOME hai toh aur kya kahen
It was good that Vishal came there on time...nahi toh raj saach mein Vikram ko maar deta. And Vikrams dialogues were too good. nt Vikram...itz vishal yaar...
It is scenes and dialogues like this that show the brilliance in your writing.👏thanqqqq NIsha
The scene in the hospital was great. Raj and naina are so perfect for each other...even at times like this they can find something to laugh about😉. Naina is right...it is now Raj's turn to say i love you. par raj hai ki maanta nahi...😆
Aditi is shocked to hear that this attack was made on Raj. 😲
In thie flashback it seems that Vikram had only kidnapped Aslam....😲Aslam kidnapped nahi hua hai...
Please continue soon.....waiting for some more RN scenes.

Thanxxxxxxxx a lottttt Nisha...
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

gr8 updt....👏

firstly congo on ur new thread for dis fic.....👏👏👏

raj was really angry and dat part was amazingly written loved d aggression shown der and dialogues der wer awesome...👏👏

and den hospital part.....rn scene was very emotional and romantic as well...but beautiful......😳👏

flashback was awesome as well......👏👏

gr8 part indeed
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Apne comments dekho...Lipi...tum ne toh tarifon ki jhaadi hi laga di hai...mujhe kuch kahne k liye rakha hi nahi...!!! Thanxxxxxxxxxxx a lotttt Sweety...!!!!
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

aache u ha raj kiss on n 's face wow plz up soon

Thanxxxxxxx a lot Ria...!!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

baaaaaaaaaapreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Raj ka gussssssssaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa............... arre akhir Raj hai voh...😆

agar main Viram hothi tho main tho Raj ke aane se pehlehi bhaag jathi.par uss akalke andhe ko kaun samjhaaye?pad gaya na Raj ka hath uspe.agar insaan hotha tho kamse kam ab tho hosh main aajatha.par ye tho insaan kam aur haivaan jyaada hai na.abbhi nahi sudhra.well iska tho ab 'Bhagwaan hi maalikh hai'😆na na...iska main hi malik hun...kyoun ki as villian maine hi toh use sign karwaya hai...😆

Vishal ke dialouges bohuth acche the isbaar.kaafi emotions the unmein.it's nice to see his this 'avtar'. mujhe laga ki Vikash ko har koi villan dikhata hai...yahan tak ki main bhi...kyoun na main use ek achhe char me dalun...kisi aur ka toh pata nahi par vikash mujhe jarur duyain dega...😆

RN scenes were very good.yaar tum kehthi ho ki tumhe romantic scenes likhna nahi aata.par tune tho hospital main bhi romance shuru karvadi yaar😆but no complaints,😳yakeen mano...mujhe romantic scene likhne me baht prob hoti hai...par tum log toh mante hi nahi ho na...!!! aur rahi baat hospital me romance ki toh...yeh sab MANA ki meharbani hai....kyoun ki naina ka treatment toh usi ne kiya tha na...
it's really cute,vo kaan pakad ke sorry kehna,Naina ka zidd(pata nahi yaar ye Naina hameshase itni ziddi kyun hai)Raj ka manana(waise manane ka tareeka accha tha).par ye 'thappad' ka business kab shuru kiya Raj ne?dene main bhi 'thappad' aur lene main bhi 'thappad'😆 😆kaafi interesting aur khatarnaak business hai,nahi? he he he.....😆

aur yaar yeh flashback jaldi khatam karo na,kabhi kabhi mujhe samajh nahi aata ki pehle waala FB kaha roka tha tune aur ab ye kaha se shuru ho gaya. ok ok...ab jyada galiyaan mat do...main har part me thoda thoda FB de kar...is raam-kahani ko jaldi khatam kar dungi...ok...😃

waise i think now i can definetly expect more n more RN scenes from the comingUDs.😉 so,waiting to see them........i mean read them...............continue soon. tum ne toh baht kuch xpect kar liya yaar...par dekhte hain...


Thanxxxxxxxx a lot...Esha...!!!😃
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Priya
Main kuch din ke liye holiday pe kya gayi itna sab hungama bhi ho gaya..Tumne fictions na continue karne ki sochi bhi kaise????Tumhare readers yeh hone hi nahin denge.
Ek batao tum ek insaan ki baat pe likhna chod dogi n un baaki 30-40 readers ka kya...U r a brilliant writer n pls dont b affected by such meaningless things..Those who dont have the ability to write love to criticize other people..
Dhara ne tumhe GADHI ka title bhi de diya😆😆😆.Well done Dhara agar main hoti to like button zaroor press karti.
Congrats for winning the award in FC
Bye n update soon
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EPISODE:-22
Flashback cont...
Jigyasa apne jeep me se bahar aayi...aur Rajveer k samne khade ho kar kaha:- aap ko ek buri khabar deni hai...!!!"
Rajveer aur Vishal ne us ki tarah hairani se dekha...
Jigyasa:- "aap k father jabb Delhi se wapas aa rahe the, tab un par hamla hua...jaan se marne ki koshish ki gayi, par unhe bacha liya gaya hai...!!! unhe ambulance se laya ja raha hai aur jiss ne un par hamla kiya tha use pakda bhi ja chuka hai...!!!"
Vishal:- "koun hai voh...???"
Jigyasa:- "ek peshevaar apradhi hai...paise le kar kaam karta hai...!!! use kisi ne paise diye the mr Singh ko marne k liye...!!! aur jiss ne paise diye the hum ne use bhi pakad liya hai...aap ko abhi hamare sath police station chalna padega...!!!"
Jigyasa ne Rajveer ki taraf dekh kar kaha......
Rajveer aur Vishal pareshaan the...unhe kuch bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha...!!!
police station me Jigyasa ne ek paper diya Rajveer ko aur kaha:- "yeh aap k F.I.R ka paper hai sign kijiye...!!!"
Rajveer:- "ek min...main pahle aapne father se baat karna chahta hun...!!!"
Jigyasa:- "par voh toh sayad behosh honge...!!! aap chahe toh un k secretary se baat kar lijiye...!!!"
Rajveer ne us se phone par baat ki...aur baat karne k baad thoda aur pareshan dikha...
Vishal:- "kya hua...bhai...???"
Rajveer:- "meri toh kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha hai...!!! matlab baba k secretary bhi yahi kah rahe hai jo abhi abhi yeh officer kah rahi thi."
(aap sab ko sayad yaad hoga ki Rajveer k dad ek rich farmer k sath sath ek politician bhi the)
Rajveer aur Vishal Jigyasa k paas aaye aur Rajveer ne kaha:- "pahle hum us insaan ko dekhna chahte hain jiss ne baba ko marne k liye paise diye the...!!!"
Jigyasa...Rajveer aur Vishal ko ander le kar gayi...ek cell k pass ruki aur ander ishara kiya...!!! ek havaldaar ne aa kar us cell ka darwaja open kiya...teeno ander gaye...!!! ander ek insaan diwar ki taraf face kar k chup chap baitha hua tha...!!!
Jigyasa:- "yehhhh...sunnn...
voh insaan muda...Rajveer aur Vishal chaunke...!!! kyoun ki voh Aslam tha...
Rajveer:- "yeh jhuth hai...!!! Aslam yeh kaam nahi kar sakta....
Jigyasa:- "hamare paas sare subut hain aur gawah bhi...!!! aur inhone apne is gunah ko kabul bhi kiya hai...!!!"
Vishal:- "Aslam jhuth bol raha hai...use fashaya ja raha hai...voh kabhi bhi aisa nahi kar sakta...!!! aur vaise bhi koi wajah toh honi chahiye yeh sabb karne ki...!!!"
Jigyasa:- "wajah hai...aur unhone khud bataya hai...!!!"
Rajveer ne aslam ki ankhon me dekhte hue kaha:- "kya wajah hai...???"
Jigyasa:- "Aslam ki buri nazar thi aap k bahn Aditi par...!!! aur aap k father ko is baat ka pata tha...jab aap k father ne inhe warn kiya toh inhe gussa aaya...kyoun ki yeh kisi bhi keemat par ek raat k liye hi sahi Aditi ko hasil karna chahte the. par aap k father ne jabb rashta band kar diya...toh inhe laga ki sayad yeh baat bahar aa gayi toh in ki badnami ho jayegi...aur...
Rajveer chillaya:- "yeh sabb jhuth hai...!!!"
voh Aslam k kareeb gaya aur use pakad kar kaha:- "tujhe kisi se darne ki jarurat nahi hai Aslam...bol sachhai kya hai...???"
Aslam:- "yahi sachhai hai...main kab se Aditi ko pana chahta tha....kabb se meri nazar thi us par...hamesha tumhare father mere rashte me aa jate the...unhe pata chal gaya tha mere bare me. aur agar Aditi khubsurat hai aur main thoda sa tym us k sath bita deta toh kya farq pad jata...!!! yeh toh aaj kal aam baat hai...main Aditi ko bass ek baar...
us k face par sath me do punches pade...Vishal aur Rajveer ka...
Aslam aage aur kuch bol nahi paya...us k honth fat gaye the...khun nikal raha tha us k honthon se...!!! Rajveer tuta hua lagg raha tha...kyoun ki Aslam sirf us ka dost nahi tha...voh use apne bhai ki tarah pyar karta tha...!!!
Rajveer k kadam ladkhada rahe the...!!! Jigyasa cell se bahr aayi...aur us k piche Rajveer tha...!!! achank Aslam gira Vishal k upar...havaldaar bhaag kar aaya...Aslam k paas...!!!
Vishal k kanon k paas Aslam ne dhire se kaha:- "Aditi ko bacha lo....!!!"
present.......
kuch din k baad Naina ko dis-charge kar diya gaya...voh bhi Rajveer k kahne par...!!! use laga Naina hospital se jyada us k ghar me safe hogi...!!!
doc (Mana😆) ne permission bhi de di...par is hidayat k sath ki Naina ko spl caring ki jarurat hai...!!!
toh Aditi bich me hi bol padi:- " aap fiqar mat kijiye doc...'spl caring' k liye bhai hai na...!!! hum sabb toh sirf care hi kar sakte hain...par...baki k sare spl wale chiz toh sirf bhai ka department hai...!!!"
Raj ne halke se Aditi ko thappad maar diya aur kaha:- "chup...kabhi bhi kuch bhi bolti rahti hai...!!!"
Aditi:- "lo...maine kahan kuch galat kaha...jo tujhe mirchi lagg gayi...!!! aur tune sab k samne mara kyoun...ja main tujh se baat nahi karti...!!!"
Aditi apna muh fula kar Naina k room ki ore chali gayi...
Raj mushkuraya:- "nautanki...!!! doc...ek bed mere liye reserved rakhna...!!!! kyoun ki main baht jald admit honewala hun...aur mujhe mera future saaf dikhai dene laga hai...!!! ek taraf Naina aur dushri taraf adi...aur bich me bichara main...!!! hey bhagwan...kahan fasa diya mujhe...???"
Raj dukhi hone ki acting karte hue kaha...doc aur Vishaal mushkuraye...
cut to Naina......
Naina apne bed par baithi...ankhen band kar k kuch soch rahi thi...use ehsaas hua ki koi baht kareeb khada hai us k...
Naina ne apni ankhen kholi toh samne Rajveer ko khada paya...Rajveer us k kareeb baitha...aur dhire se Naina k cheek ko apne hathon se touch karte hue kaha:- "tum thik ho...???"
Naina:- "hmmm...thik hun...!!!" ek halki si smile k sath Naina ne jawab diya...
Rajveer:- "kya hua...thoda upset lagg rahi ho...???"
Naina:- "nahi aise hi...!!! ek vaada karoge...???"
Rajveer:- "kiya...
Naina:- "pahle sunn toh lo...
Rajveer:- "jarurat nahi hai...par agar tum kahna chahti ho toh kaho...!!!"
Naina:- "tum kabhi bhi akele nahi rahoge...!!!"
Rajveer mushkuraya aur kaha:- "tum kabhi akela rahne dogi...tabhi toh akela rahunga na...!!!"
Naina:- "aweeee...mazak mat karo na plzzz. mere kahne ka matlab hai ki...tum kahin bhi jayoge toh kisi na kisi ko apne sath rakhoge...!!! tumhari jaan ko khatra hai...!!!"
Rajveer:- "meri jaan toh mere samne baithi hui hai...aur mere rahte use koi khatra nahi ho sakta...!!!"
Naina:- "phir se mazak...???"
Rajveer:- "arre mazak kahan kiya, sach hi toh kaha na...maine...!!! achha thik hai...kiya vaada ki main akele kahin nahi jayunga...!!! par ek prob hai...!!!"
Naina:- "kya...???"
Rajveer:- "har jagah kisi na kisi ko sath rakhuga...yeh baat toh thik hai...lekin ek jagah hai vahan par main kisi ko bhi sath me nahi le ja sakta...!!! vahan par ya toh mujhe akele jana padega ya phir tumhe mere sath chalna padega...!!!"
Naina:- "kahan...???"
Rajveer:- "wash room me...!!!" rajveer hassa zor se...
Naina:- "ha ha ha...very funny...!!! wash room ki tention tum mat lo...use main sambhal lungi...!!!"
Raj thoda sa aage badha...Naina k fore head ko kiss kiya aur dhire se kaha:- "thanxxxx...!!!"
Naina:- "kis liye...???"
Rajveer:- "aise hi...!!! achha ek baat batyo...tum ne us aadmi ki shaqal dekhi hai...jiss ne station par goli chalayi thi...!!!"
Naina:- "haan...par puri tarah se nahi...!!! kyoun ki us ne ek kapde se apna face chupa rakha tha...!!! maine bass tumhe us k apne gun point par dekha toh bhaag kar tumhare paas aa gayi...!!!"
Rajveer ne dhire se Naina k balon ko us k face se hatate hue kaha:- "bewakuff ladki...vohin se chilla kar nahi kah sakti thi kya...??? phir bhagte hue...mere aur bullet k bich me kyoun aayi...??? vohin se bata deti toh hum dono bach jate na...aur sayad voh aadmi bhi pakda jata...!!! aur ek baat...jab tum meri bahon me behosh hui toh hassi kyoun...???"
Naina:- "kuch hi din pahle maine subah subah ek sapna dekha tha...ki vikram ne tum par goli chala di thi...aur aur...!!! (Naina thodi der ruki...phir kaha) aur kahte hain ki subah ka sapna sach hota hai...isiliye main tumhare aur us bullet k bich me aa gayi thi...taki main apni niyati (destiny) ko badal sakun...aur main isiliye mushkurayi thi ki maine apni niyati(destiny) ko badal diya tha...aur vaise bhi agar mujhe bullet nahi lagi hoti toh tum mujhe pakka Shimla bhej dete...!!!
Naina k ankhon me thode anshun the...
Raj aage badha Naina ko apne seene se laga ya...aur kaha:- "main baht bewakuff hun...nahi...???"
Naina:-"haan...baht baht baht bade bewakuff...
Raj:- "okkk...ab kaan pakadta hun...dubara aisi galati nahi karunga...!!! ab sab kuch thik ho jane k baad hi tumhe shimla bhejunga...!!!"
Naina ne Raj ki taraf dekha...use Raj ka yeh mazak pasand nahi aaya...
Raj ne dhire se Naina k kanon me kaha:-"aur is baar tumhare sath main hunga...taki main tumhara khayal rakh sakun aur tum mera...aur...
Rajveer ne dhire se Naina k honthon ko apne honthon se touch kiya...!!! Naina ne apni ankhen band ki...mehsus kiya Rajveer k honthon ko apne honthon par...apne cheeks par...apne neck par...!!! yeh ehsaas us k liye ek anokha ehsaas tha...ajeeb sa...par pyara sa...!!!
Rajveer:- "kal tumhe dis-charge kar denge...abhi mujhe chalna hoga...par yahan par aadti, vishal aur baki k log hai...!!! Adi bahar muh fula kar khadi hai...aur Vishal us k fule hue muh ka size kamm karne ki koshish kar raha hai jokes bol kar...!!! mujhe thoda kaam hai...main ja raha hun...aur fiqar mat karna...mere sath...Aslam hoga aur baki k log bhi...main free hote hi tumhe fone karunga...ok...???"
Naina ne Raj se kuch nahi kaha...Raj ne Naina k forehead ko kiss kiya aur "bye" kah kar chala gaya...!!!
par piche se achanak Naina ne kaha:-"tum kuch bhul rahe ho...!!!"
Raj ruka...Naina ki taraf turn kiya...fir mushkurate hue Naina k kareeb aa kar kaha:- "kya...???"
Raj thoda aur kareeb aaya...us k honthon k kareeb...Naina ki saanshen tez hui...Raj ki garam saanshen Naina k chehre ko touch kar rahi thi...Naina ki dhadknain badh rahi thi...
Rajveer k honth...Naina k honthon k baht kareeb the...Naina ne dhire se kaha:- "tum mujhe kuch kahna bhul rahe ho...!!!"
Rajveer ko yaad aaya ki us ne abhi tak Naina se apne pyar ka izhaar nahi kiya tha...
Raj mushkuraya aur phir Naina se kaha:- "kya kahna bhul raha hun...???"
Naina ne kuch nahi kaha...khidki se bahar jhaankne lagi...
Raj:- "kuch chizon ka sahi waqt hota hai...
Naina:- aur voh sahi waqt kabb aayega...!!!"
Raj:- jab tum hamesha hamesha k liye meri ho jayogi...!!!"
Naina mushkurayi...Rajveer ne us k cheek ko kiss kiya aur kaha:- "apna khayal rakhna...mere liye...!!!"
Rajveer aur Aslam ek jeep me rahe the...
Rajveer:- "tujhe late kaise ho gaya...!!! main kabb se hospital me tera intezaar kar raha tha...!!!"
Aslam:- "main voh chacha jee se milne chala gaya tha...isiliye late ho gaya...!!!"
Rajveer:- "hmmm...achha chacha jee kaise hain abhi...!!!"
Aslam:- "vaise hi jaise tum ne dekha tha...!!! koi changes nahi hai abhi tak...!!!"
Rajveer ankhen band kar k baitha hua tha...achanak us ne apni ankhen kholi:- "yesssssss...maine yeh pahle kyoun nahi socha...??? yeh baat meri dimag me pahle kyoun nahi aayi...???
Rajveer k chehre par ek khushi ki jhalak thi....
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sorry is baar koi LRL joke nahi hai...dimag kaam nahi kar raha hai...!!! next month xams hai mere...!!! 😭
aur maine aap sab ko pareshaan kiya isliye SORRY...main sach me baht upset thi.....kuch chizain achanak se normal lyf ko complicated bana dete hain. aur pahli baar main is tarah se baht hurt hui thi...isiliye voh bakwaas kar gayi...aur mera yakeen kijiye...aap sab k comments par mujhe baht rona aa raha tha...!!! par baad me maine yeh socha ki kuch logon k wajah se main apne baki k frnds toh dur nahi ja sakti na...!!!😭😭
sare ud isiliye delete kar diye the kyoun ki mujhe laga ki agar yeh sare ud rahenge...toh sayad main phir se likhne k bare me sochungi...isiliye yeh bewakuffi ki...!!! aap sab ne mera baht sath diya...!!! main janti hun ki "THANX' kahna baht asaan hota hai...aur aap sab k pyar aur support k liye main thanxx nahi kahungi...kyoun ki yeh baht chota word ho jayega...!!!😃😃
love u all
Priya😃
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Wow yaar !!!😃

OL aate hi TN ka Update !!! 😃 Now that's called luck ! 😉
Ahm.... So, hi Priya !!! Apne likhe huye parts delete karne keliye tumhari aarti main thappad se utaarne waali thi, Par yeh Update dekh kar mind change kardiya...and note padhke toh saara gussa gayab hogaya !
Waise I'm first one to comment !! 😉
Toh coming to Update....
SUPEEEERRRRRRRRRRRBBBBBB !!! 👏 👏 👏
Jaise hi uss Chudail ke darshan huye, main samajh gayi ki kuch na kuch buri khabar lekar aayi hogi manhoos. 😡
Raj ke dad par hamla hua hai, and unke secretary ne bhi ye baat confirm kardi....
But Raj has good presence of mind even in such situations....
Achcha hua usne F.I.R sign karne se pehle apradhi ko dekhne ki baat kahi !
Yeh kya??? ASLAM !!! 😲
Mujhe toh usse dekhte hi daal mein kuch kaala lag raha tha, and then uska aise karne ka reason sunke toh yakeen hogaya....
But usne jo Adi ke baaremein kaha woh sunkar Raj ka aise react karna is obvious... and Vishal ka bhi...shayad woh tab bhi Adi se pyaar karta tha...
Good that Aslam conveyed vishal that they need to save Adi.
Pata nahi woh kameena vikram kya karna chahta hai uske saath 😡 Ab yeh toh Priya madam hi hamein batayegi ! Tabtakk intezaar ke alawa hum kar kya sakte hai ???
Ab aate hai PRESENT par !!! 😃 😃 😃 😃
main itni excited issliye hoon kyunki maine bhi CAMEO kiya hai na iss part mein ! 😛
Haan toh main kya keh rahi thi.....ki yeh HO HI NAHI SAKTA !!! 😲
Ya toh main gehri neend mein hogi.....nahi main toh aisa sapne mein bhi nahi karsakti !😛
Zaroor mere khane mein kisine kuch milaya hoga! Warna main itniiiiiiiiii jaldi NAina ko discharge nahi karti ! 😛
Arey baba , jabtak Naina waha hogi, tabhi toh Raj waha hospital aayega na??? 😉 Tune kya mujhe pagal samajh rakha hai, jo main aisa GOLDEN chance chod dungi ??? 😛
Chalo ab discharge kar hi diya hai...toh kya karsakte hai... waise darr matt main Detaiiiiiiillllllllllllllllllllllllll mein RAJ ( Sirf usko ! 😆 ) ko saare instructions diye hai Naina ki dekh bhaal karne ke!
Haaiiii 😳 kitna cute lag raha tha jab mere saamne Nautanki kar raha tha ! 😍 Mujhe smile toh karna hi tha ! 😆 😆 😆
Ab RN scene ke baaremein kya kahu??? Very very sweet and Romantic !😊
Naina ka Raj se promise maangna and Raj ka bina pooche kardena...😊 And then Raj ka Naina ko tease karna...was soooooooooooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet !😊
Yeh Raj bhi na !!! Aise Romantic Scene mein bhi LOGIC iska peecha nahi chodta !
Arey yaar pata hai, Raj ne Naina ko jo chilla kar batane ke baaremein kaha woh justified hai, par baad mein bhi toh lecture desakta tha na???
Waise ek baat kahun??? Naina jab muskurayi thi na goli lagne ke baad, tab uski muskurahat ka reason maine bhi yahi socha tha....😊 Tujhe yaad hai maine sapne ke ' TIMING' ko lekar tujhe bahot jhaap lagayi thi???😛 It proves...main teri fic kitni dhyaan se, involve hokar padhti hoon...aur mujhe yeh KITNI ACHCHI LAGTI HAI....AUR ISILIYE MAIN COMMENT BHI KARTI HOON !
Waise yeh Raj toh hospital mein hi shuru hogaya ! 😛 God !! Achcha hua maine dicharge kardiya ! 😆 😆
Arey yaar yeh kyun itna bhaav kha raha hai??? 😡 Aaahhhhhh !!!! Samajh gayi !!! Valentines par bolega ! kyun??? 😉
Par dekho toh banda kya reasoning de raha hai....woh usse tab kahega jab Naina hamesha hamesha keliye uski hojayegi !
Parr....Rajveerji, jab aap unhe woh 3 magical words kahenge tabhi toh woh aapki hogi na? 😆 😆 😆
Parr...woh bhi sahi hai....bass ek formality hi toh hai...Naina toh unki hi hai ! 😃
Woh Vishal Adi ke phule huye muh ki size kam kar raha hai was so funny and cute.😃
Lo .... yeh Aslam se keh raha hai ki woh uska intezaar kar raha tha...jab ki inka time toh bade maze se kat raha tha !
Arey yeh Raj ko achanak se jhatka kyun aaya??? Aur woh itna khush kyun hai??? 😕
Kahi yeh CHACHAJI uske SASURJI toh nahi ???? 😆 😆 😆 😆
Dekh yaar....hamesha DHINDORA peet ti rehti hai ki mere UDs pe bahot BADA comment karti hai and all that....Ab mera comment dekh ! yeh tere UPDATE se GENUINELY bada hai !!! 😆 😆
Chal yaar....continue soon ! 😊
P.S. :- Mere Hospital mein ek bed PERMANENTLY RESERVED hai..... Raj ke liye.....😉 So....feel free to send him there if required.😆 Waise yeh baat aur hai ki , agar tune usse waha bheja toh uske pehle main tujhe ADMIT karungi !😛
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Priya dear......😊 😊 😊
First of all main apni comment a biggggg sorry se shuru karna chahthi hun.....i know u r upset with whatever happened with u in the previous days .... phir bhi u updated this fic for all of us ... ...lekin main jaldi comment nahin karpayi....n i am so sorry for this
Now coming to the update hamesha ki tarah its so beautiful 👏 👏 👏 👏....fantastic 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 n superb part dear
Mujhe pata hain ye chudail jig bhuri khabar hi degi.. ye vikram aur uska gang jitna ghatiya log hain unlogon ka plan bhi utna hi ghatiya hain ...Raj ki baba ka accident karwaya aur upar se aslam ko in sab ka jhimedhar kaha...aslam ko bhi majboor kiya to accept their false accusations..n pata nahin what they r doing with adi...chalo .aslam ne vishal ko adi k bare main bataya...warna raj ko ye baat kaisa pata chaltha ...n i really hope raj n vishal jaldi adi ko save kare
Now coming tothe present part naina ko hospital se discharge kiya gaya tha...raj ne socha naina will be safe at his home only .. naina ko discharge jaldi nahin kiya to raj ko every day hospital aana padtha hain...and raj ko hospitals se allergy haina isiliye Dr.Mana ne sochi hogi raj ko kyun pareshan kare
Raj n nainas scene in the hospital is so sweet. n cute ........when naina asked raj to promise her raj ne jhat promise kiya with out asking her kya promise chahiye....so sweet of him..wo bathroom wali baat to bahut funny tha.....i love it when raj said to naina.."apna khayal rakhna mere liye"
adi bilkul sahi kaha..special caring bahi ka depratment hain...loved that scene
Ab ye chachajee hain kaun?????...kahin ye hamare raj ki sasurjee to nahin????.....ab mujhe ye baat jaane ke liye i have to wait for your next update...chal ab jaldi se give us another beautiful part
Totally the whole ud was awesome & beautiful ...n for his beautiful update meri taraf se ye 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 .....n thank u so much dear for continuing the ff
Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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