Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6) - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: preet09


hi priya 😛 😛 😛 <FONT color=#006600>Hiii Preet...👏 👏 👏 <FONT color=#006600>Thanqqqq😳 😳 😳 <FONT color=#006600>thanqqq⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ <FONT color=#006600>thanqqqq🤗🤗🤗

Thanqqqqqqqqqq Preet...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

I have always loved Rajveer - Vikram face-offs....!!!!! And will continue to do so but only till its Vikram who is at the receiving end...!!!😉😉

So I liked it this time also...Vikram khud toh mota hai hi but uska dimaag usse double mota hai....Kyun Rajveer se pange leta hai....??? 😕😕

Naina is getting well....good...looks like Mana has done her job very well....!!!! 😛

The sort of confession and manaoing session was absolutely cute....!!!! 😳 And you described soooo wellll.....!!!! 👏

Pls pls pls put up the next part soon...!!!! 😃😃😃

Oh and congo shongo for TN 2....!!!! You are doing a brilliant job....!!!!! ⭐️

main phir se tumhare comments ko rply kar rahi hun😊, pata nahi iase kyoun aa raha hai rply...???😭

arre villians toh hote hi hain peetne k liye vikram sirf mota hi nahi us ka dimag bhi mota hai...tabhi aise kaam karta hai...😆
dekha...Mana ne kitna achha kaam kiya hai...is ladki ki future baht bright hai...😃
ab naina raj se naraj hai toh raj ki galati toh hai na...glad u liked it...😃
arre next part bhi jaldi post karti, par tum toh janti hi ho ki pichle dino mere sath kya hua...
Thanqqqqqqqqq Dhara....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: preet09


hi priya 😛 😛 😛 Hiiii preet😃
the update was superb 👏 👏 👏 Thanqqqq😃
vikram ke saath raj ne bilkul sahi kiya.........he is so bad
raj-naina ka scene to bahut hi acha tha 😳 😳 😳 thanqqq😃
thanks naina ko jaldi se theek kar diya is k piche Mana ka hath hai😆
their scene was just awesome⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
the whole part was gr8 Thanqqq...thanqqq Preet😃
plz continue soon
luv preet🤗🤗🤗
love u too dear...😃 n thanxxx a lot😃🤗🤗

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Priya... Hiiii Suhana...

How r u? me fine dear..what abt u...
Update was terrific,mindblowing,fantastic etc etc...👏👏👏thanqqq...thanqqq...thanqqq😃
Sach mein tum itna accha likhti ho ki bas muaah👍🏼🤗 thanqqqq so much yaar...😳
Naina ko sach mein goli lagi thi.But woh goli uske liye nahin raj ke liye thi.😕😕
Rajveer ne to Vikram ki jam kar dhunai kar di..Aise aise dialogues bole ki mera hans hans ke bura haal ho raha tha😆😆😆lo yeh toh hadh hi ho gayi...maine serious ud post kiya par tum sabb ko hassi aa rahi thi...😆
These were some funny moments
"Rajveer:- "mujhe tujhe maarne k liye kisi kutte ki izazat lene ki jarurat nahi hai...!!!"
Dog to bol nahin sakta but Vikram ko marne ki permission koi bhi de sakta hai😆😆..Rajveer ke andar us waqt dhrmendra ki aatma aa gayi thi ... yupe...raj me Dharm jee ki aatma ghush aayi thi...😆 tabhi toh garam dail bol raha tha...😆
"agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere hi talwar ki pyaas teri hi khun se bujhayunga...!!!"
talwar khoon bhi piti hai🤣🤣kabhi kabhi peeti hai...dekha nahi serials me aur bollywood movies me...😆 😆
"Rajveer ne us ki collor pakdi aur kah:- "Naina chahe rajkumari ho ya kanyakumari...mujhe is baat se koi faraq nahi padta...kyoun ki duniya jaanti hai aur tu bhi apne dimag me bitha le ki Naina sirf aur sirf meri hai...!!! aur dubara use kharoch bhi aayi toh...
.👏 😆😆😆agar yeh scene hall mein aata to log bahut siti maarte.. thanqqqq...😃mujhe siti bajani aati hi nahi hai...😕
"Rajveer ne Vikram ko chod kar aage diwar ki taraf gaya...jahan Vikram ki ek badi si tashveer lagi hui thi...!!!Rajveer ne use utha kar zameen par phenka...glasses tut kar bikhar gaye...Rajveer ne un glasses k ander me se Vikram ki tashveer khinch kar nikali...aur apne lighter se us me aag laga diya...
Rajveer:- "tere zinda rahte teri tashveer ko aag laga raha hun...aur agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere body ka koi bhi part nahi milega...tere gharwalon ko.... jinhe voh aag laga sakenge...!!!"
👏👏👏 mast hai boss..hero se aise hi umeed hoti hai..Kya scene tha👍🏼thanqqqq😃
Phir Vishal ne bhi kuch mast dialogues maare
"1...Rajveer...2...Naina....3...Aditi...4....Gayatri devi...in logon ko agar ek bhi kharoch aayi...aur mujhe laga ki is me tera hath hai..toh ter rajagiri ki aisi ki taisi...teri dono ankhen fode dunga...taki zindagi bhar 'sholey' k imaam chacha ki tarah 'kya hai...kyoun hai...' karta rahega...!!! aayi baat samajh me.."
Sach mein Vikram vaisa lagega ki nahin???coz woh sholey wale chacha to kaafi patle the but Vikram ki sehat to hathi jaisi hai😆😆😆haan...par raj, vishal aur aslam se peetne k baad toh sari charbi nikal jayegi na...😆 😆 😆
"Vishal:- "yeh bass trailor tha...puri film kabhi furshat me dikhayunga...!!! abe is umar me Ramayan paath kar...agar Naina ka khayal karega...toh majburan humain Mahabharat dikhaana padega...!!!"
Vikram iss umar mein bhi swamyvar karna chahta hai😆😆Iss umar mein usko kuch Bhagwaanji ka dhyaan karna chahiye coz usne itne paap kiye hain ji narak mein uski jagah reserved hai.. yes...pahle rakhi ka swaymvaar kiya us k baad abhi rahul ka aur mere fic me khud ka...😆
Finally Naina was fine...
Raj was so worried over her..Der se hi sahi but akal to aayi..😆😉hero jo hai...aqal toh aayegi hi na...😆
Yeh dono to hospital mein hi romance karne lage..Naina ti abhi bhi jaane ki zidd kar rahi thi but Raj ne usko pyaar se mana hi liya..But usne woh 3 magical words nahin kahe..Naina is still waiting ...par itezaar ka faal mitha hota hai balike...😆
"When you fall in love
It's not just a whim.
You spend every moment
Just thinking of him:
Where is he now?
Where was he then?
And he doesn't know
The unrest within!

When you fall in love
It's not just a whim.
For one glamorous night
When the music is dim,
You will utter the words
Which he will repeat
As he kneels down beside
Two prettiest of feet."
tumhe pata hai tum jabb bhi koi song likhti ho toh main use store kar deti hun...kyoun...nahi batayungi😆
Flashback se to lagta hai ki Aslam ko Vikram ne hi kidnap karwaya hoga..😕😡aslam kidnap nahi hua hai...
Continue soon
Bye
Joke was too funny..😆😆😆thanqqqq
When will u update Ehsaas n Ztmk???
jaldi karungi inhe bhi ud...

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Priya !!! 😃 Manaaaaaaaaaaa................😃

samajh nahi aa raha ki tujhe hamesha ki tarah Hi-hello kahu ki seedha ek jhappi dedu !! Chal second option hi perfect hai !🤗 is ka matlab Jhappi na...toh mujhe do chahiye...kya hai na...aaj kal bina mange hi baht sare tentions mil rahe hain...😃
Kya dhasoo start tha ! thanqqqqq😃
first line padhaa...and believe me, I could hear that thappad ka gunj....
Aur phir kya, main bass ek pillow ko pakad ke apni ungli chabate huye, curiosity aage padhne lagi..ki kya hoga?? kya hoga...judwaa bachhe honge...aur kya...of course RN k...😆
Yeh saala Raj ko maarna chahta hai... haan...yahi saala raj ko marna chahta tha...😆
LEKIN.....
tabhi zabardast entry hui....Raj ki .....!!! arre hero hai akhir...😉
Rajveer:- "mujhe tujhe maarne k liye kisi kutte ki izazat lene ki jarurat nahi hai...!!!"
What dial baap !!! Maine toh ek zor ki seeti maari !!! aur mujhe yahan tak sunai diya...😛
What grip man ! Vikram ki toh aaj khair nahi...
aur uske log kuch kar bhi nahi sakte...coz..... arre main writer hun...aur support Raj ko karti hun...toh yeh toh obvious hai na...😉
Vishal:-"kahne ki jarurat nahi hai...par koi bhi agar aage ek bhi kadam badhaya toh jaan jayegi...Vikram ki...!!!"
Waise Raj was the STAR and HERO of the Update ...but Vishal bhi yaad rahega! His dial were just superb ! arre vaah sari tarifain Raj aur Vishal ko...ab mera kya hoga...???😆
Aur kya style se ussiki sword nikaal usse hi dhamkaya!! aur kise dhamkata...sword bhi toh us ki hi hai na...😉 😆
Raj chup chap jaa raha tha, par yeh Vikram!!! Kych jyaada hi khumkhumi hai ussmein...jo nahi bolna chahiye wahi bol diya aur phir aisa punch pada ki ki Khud uchal pada ! 😆haan...kyoun ki us ka dil kafi uchal raha tha na naina k liye isiliye use medicine toh chahiye hi thi na...😆
And this dial....
"Naina chahe rajkumari ho ya kanyakumari...mujhe is baat se koi faraq nahi padta...kyoun ki duniya jaanti hai aur tu bhi apne dimag me bitha le ki Naina sirf aur sirf meri hai...!!! "
Waah ! I just sent 2-3 muaah muaah muaah in air at this ! 😆mujhe ya kisi aur ko...!!! dekh... tujhe final warning de rahi hun...😡 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Haai !!! Kya lag raha hoga woh pure scene mein...!😍hero lagg raha hoga aur kya...😉
Haila Priya woh tasveer waala scene....***sigh*** main kab aisa dhasoo likh paungi !!! Yaar teri script toh mind blowing hai !! Sach sach bata tu sachmein wahi hai na jo mujhe kehti hai, ya koi badi script writer???? par...phir tu IF pe kya karti ??? 😕kar le kar le...tu ab meri khinchai kar le...main toh aaj kal muft me mil rahi hun...koi bhi aata hai baja jata hai...phir tu toh meri itni achhi dost hai...toh tujhe toh haq banta hai...😛
And then Vishal's dialogues were just mindblowing !!!
Specially woh 1...Rajveer, 2....NAina waala.... Thanqqqq😃
And Vishal bilkul sahi hai! Umar toh Ramayan paath karne ki hai par Naina ke sapne dekh raha hai gadha 😡 use gadha mat bol yaar...gadha kitna innocent...par Vikram kisi bhi angle se tujhe innocent lagta hai kya...😆
Waise maine apna kaam bahot sahi tareeke se kiya !! Naina safe hai !! 😛mujhe tujh par pura bharosha hai...tabhi toh tere paas le kar jane ka idea aaya tha...😆
Priya this RN scene makes you to receive 3-4 whistles, 4-5 jhappies, and a muaah ! phir meri toh nikal padi...yepppieeeeeeeeeee😃 😃 😃 😃
I wanted Naina to behave this way only ! dekha...main ter dil ki baat kis tarah se samajh gayi....😛
Bada shaana bann raha tha na? Naina ko dur bhej raha tha!
Ab mere kaleje thandak pohochi...jab woh usse rukne keliye mana raha tha! 😛chal tujhe achha laga na...me happyyyyyyyyyyyyyy😛
Par shai bhi hai, Naina usse chodkar kabhi bhi kahin bhi nahi jaa sakti !😉hai na...😉
That scene was quite sweet and romantic ! thanqqqqqq😃
Aur tu kya keh rahi thi mujhse???
Itna romantic kaafi tha madam, hospital mein isse zyaada kya karegi??? 😆 😆 😆
Main allow nahi karti !! Raj ki entry hi bandh hojati jabtak Naina ka discharge na ho ! 😆 😆 😆 Abey serious patient hai yaaar....koi sardi,khaasi bukhaar ka case nahi !😆 tu aisa kuch nahi kar pati...kyoun ki RN tere bhi fav hain...toh tu un k liye kuch na kuch arrenge toh kar hi leti...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
But Yeh Raj na....abhi bhi tashan dikha raha hai! Aakhir woh three words bole bagair hi chala gaya ! haan...par may b us ne sahi kiya ho...😉
Parr kabtak bhaagega! jab tak main chahungi...😉
Flashback was quite intriguing....Aslam kaha gaya??
And nice LRL joke ! 😆Thanqqqqqqqq 😃
Update soon please !

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

👏 Congratulations Priya! 👏

👏 continue d great work!👏
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Thanqqqqqqqqq Sur....😃😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

although i know i shouldnt be because situation garam hain but still i'm laughing my ass of, not literally because thats not possible lol😆 haan haan you probably think im crazy laughing at such a tensed update 😕 but i'm sure even you know that your supposedly tensed updates was kind of hilarious 😆 and that is not at all a bad thing let me tell you,😃 i actually love how you can make the most serious of situations so light-hearted by just mere dialougues 😃 seriosly you should be a script writer, your film will definetly be a Mega Hit 😃 le...mere achhe khaashe serious ud ko funny bana diya...maine kitni mehnat se ise serious ud banaya tha....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆...aur agar sach me main script writer hoti toh mere har ek fiction me sirf Raj aur Raj hi hota...😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

anyways the best dilaoge of the update i guess it had to be vishals, sholay and mahabbarat one ROFLING huge time here 🤣🤣 and now my back hurts after all the rolling round on the marble floor, let me tell you the floor was ice cold aswell it's all your fault 😆 he he he...😆 😆 😆
Well although Vishal took the best dialouge award, rajveer was again the update stealer, yaar he should sometime let the others get the limelight 😆 he outshines everyone, even Naina 😳ab charming person k bare me kya kaha jaye...bass 'HAIIII'...jahan bhi jata hai jadu chala deta hai...😉
His anger was woah !!! like a tiger 😳😳😳 very fierce and i can just imagine how hot he must have looked with those gorgeous eyes blazing in fire ☺️☺️ i think i'm melting over here lol, all of a sudden my room feels to hot to bear 😳😳koi chilld water le kar aayo...jaldi ...he he he...😆
but you know what was the best, his funny dialouges even when he seemed ready to kill that good for nothing moron, jerk and *beep* vikram 😡😡😡 like that kutta dialouge 😆😆 and that rajkumari kanya kumari one lmao 😆😆 but the BEST od the best was Naina sirf meri hain, sirf meri *sigh* 😳😳 i could just imagine that scene infront of my eyes ... definetly that was a standing ovation moment 👏 he's a complete star ⭐️koi shaq....😉
Now steering away from Rajveer, although that's not really possible ... 😳😳😳 i am glad that Naina is okay, otherwise you wouldn't have been okay, i would have sent you where Naina is right now lol 😡😆 lol just kiddin, if anything happens to you what will happen to our updates 😕 tabhi toh tujh se daar k Naina ko jaldi se thik kar diya... tu bhi na...baa ki tarah baht darati hai...😆
Anyways i'm glad that she's okay and that short but very cute romantic moment was needed after that very Intense but somehow hilarious scene 😆 but yeh kya that idiot (do i really need to go into details on who that idiot is) why the hell did he not say those three magical words 😡😕 he is asking for a slap from me make that two right across his too cute for his own good face 😡😆ab yeh ek surprise hai...jo baht jald khulnewala hai...😉
But i'm glad to see him all mischevious again, he was really worried for her ... atleast in all this we found out the intensity of his love for Naina 😳
Now i'm just waiting for him to confess .. and that stupid but so gorgeous veer better do that before i decide to pick up my shotgun 😡😆ok ok...tera MSG us tak pahunch bhi gaya hai...aur Raj bhi meri tarah tujh se darne laga hai...😆
Anyways a brill update and congrats for the second thread 👏 your rolling hommie lmao, i was really dying to use this phrase 😆Thanqqqqqqqqqq Yasmin...😆
Take Care
Yasmin
p.s Suri jee lmao 😆

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Thanxxxxxxxxx a lott ...sur...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_shona

Hi Priya, How r u dear? Hiiii Neelu...m f9...wat abt u dear...

First of all COngratulation on the 2nd thread of Tere Naina...!!! 👍🏼 thanqqqq

Update is awesome.... yes naina is in the hospita but still update is just mindblowing..!! thanxxxx dear...
Raj threatened Vikram... ofcourse..he deserves it..actually he deserves more than that.. 😡
So finally Raj ne apna haq jataaya... he asked naina to forgive him... its a lovely scene... small yet romantic... liked this side of Raj's... 😳 mujhe laga ki RN me kuch aise moments toh hone hi chahiye...kyoun...
but the spoiler..the doc... came to spoile the very moment.. 😡 ...kuchh der baad nahi aa sakta tha kya?? yehi toh un ka fav job hota hai na...sahi waqt par bekaar entry lete hain...
hmm..flashbackk..Aslam is gaayab...ofcpurse Vikram's hand behind it... 😡 hmmmm
waiting for the next update...😊
n yeah..LRL joke....just awesome... 🤣Thanqqqqq

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was awesome
and congo for second thread
plz continue soon

thanqqqqqqqqq Prerna...😃

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