Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6) - Page 11

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

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Naina chahe rajkumari ho ya kanyakumari...mujhe is baat se koi faraq nahi padta...kyoun ki duniya jaanti hai aur tu bhi apne dimag me bitha le ki Naina sirf aur sirf meri hai...!!! aur dubara use kharoch bhi aayi toh....

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Naina:- "toh kya tum mere sath zabardast karoge...???"

Rajveer:- "jarurat padi toh voh bhi karunga...lekin tumhe khud se alag nahi kar sakta...kabhi nahi...!!!" us ne Naina ko cheek apne hathon se brush karte hue kaha...

😍 😍 😍😍😍 Thank God! kum se kum use samajh aaya ki naina ki jagah unke sath hai, and I have to admit yeh baat woh bade romantic tarikhe se maana hai. hai mere Sharukh, yeh hui na baat!!! 😳 maanta kaise nahi...akhir writer toh main hi hun na...

I don't believe this, yeh mein teesri baar post ko edit kar rahi hoon , lekin I had to say thanks for listening to our ahem! "request" 😉 and adding some romance. Mogambo khush hua!!! maine abhi ke liye apni gun se goliyaan nikaal rahi hoon lekin yaad rahe dono mere paas hi rahenge 😈 ......mwah ha ha ha ha!!! (that was my villainous laugh 😉) yaar...itna mat daraya karo...vaise bhi 'dil toh bachha hai jee...thoda kachha hai jee'...dekho main tum se darr kar ud kiya na...toh plzzz yeh gun mujh se dur rakho...agar mujhe kuch ho gaya toh RN ka kya hoga...

Originally posted by: nisha1984

Congratulations on your 2nd thread of "Tere Naina" 👏 Thanqqqqqq

Another awesome part........Thanxxxx Nisha...

Raj ne vikram ki haalat bigad di aur Vishal ne bhi dhamki de di.......... ab in sabb ki jarurat bhi toh thi na...vikram ko....

Naina and Raj convo was nice.......

Finally Naina and Raj will be together chalo Raj ko kuch akal to aayee...... Ab vikram ki khair nahi wo to gaya lekin ye Nandini kahan hai? Pichle kuch episode se dikhayee hi nahi di....... dikhai degi...nandini

keep up the good work....... Thanqqqq

Please PM me when you post the next part......... jo hukum sarkaar....

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Congratulations Priya for ur new thread'.!!!!!

keep rocking dear'!!!👏👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

ur fanfic is just too mind blowing,i really appreciate ur creativity which u have depicted through ur fanfic.hope to read more wonderful parts

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hey Priya wow!!!! kya baat hain yaar do do updates in this month aur wo bhi in a week gap utna hi nahin this time mujhe dhamkiyan dena ka mauka bhi nahi diya ....i am so happy 😃 😃 tujh se sikh kar dushre bhi dhamkiyaan dene lage hain...isiliye karna pada...😆

Now coming to the update,ab main kya kahun yaar is ud ke bare main..... mindblowing 👏 👏 👏 👏.fatastic 👏 👏 👏 👏awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏superb 👏 👏 👏 fabulous 👏 👏 👏 amazing 👏 👏 👏 wonderful n beautiful part dear 👏 👏 👏aur bhi kuch kehna chahthi hun but kya kare i am poor in vocab ...rahne de...rehne de... vaise bhi baht jhaad par chadhati hai tu...vaise yaad hai na...jhaad k niche sirf Raj ko hona chahiye😆

Is update main saare scenes mujhe bahut pasand aaye ' rajs dhamekadhar entry us ka gussa n raj ka ek haath main gun n dusre haath vikram ki neck par...n his powerful dialogues aur phir raj n naina ka wo cute n lovely scene'all r well written thanqqqqq Yogitha... 😃

Vikram ki kya halat ki raj ne ....maine bahut enjoy kiya us scene ko'. not to forget raj ka dialogues wo kutta wala...i laughed so much when I was reading that one'......whistle karneka bahut mann kiya ...but kya karun i dont know how to whistle......i tried so many times but i always fail... maine bhi baht baar try kiya hai par fuss ho jati hai...😆

the best thing about your writting skills is in serious situations also tum aisa kuch likthi ho ke we cant stop laughing ... mujhe hassna aur hassana pasand hai... isiliye main hamesha lyt hrted fics likhti hun...jin se logon ko prob hoti hai...par thank God mere doston ko prob nahi hoti😃...

Raj ne itna badha warning diya vikram ko n still that idiot vikram had the nerve to say raj.... naina ko bhuljayo n the bullet is actually for raj.....accha kiya raj ne bhi mast jawab diya wo bhi punch maarke n the dialogue kanyakumari n rajkumari'.oh awesome yaar hats off to your writing skills thanqqqqqqqqq😃

vishal bhi vikram ko badiya warning di... vishal ne tikhi kaha vikram ko is umar main ramayan paath karna chahiye par vikram maanta kahan hai... 😆

raj n nainas scene is so nice n so cute 'specially when raj ki do boondh aanson naina ki ankhon ki andar girna....n after that naina ki aankhon se aanso bahe rahe the..jo aanso naina aur rajveer donon ki he.... kya scene tha yaar ...tu itna acche se kaise likthi ho yaar ...roz achhe bachhe ki tarah main bhi ...mom k daant sun sun kar...horlicks jo peeti hun...😆

why raj is not saying what naina n we all want to hear from him'lagtha hain accha sa muhurat ka intezaar hain . haan achhe mahurat ka intezaar toh hai... 😆

flash back main ye aslam kaha chalagaya n wo chudail kaunsa bad news dene chali aayi ....tu aage padh na tujhe sabb pata chal jayega...

priya thank u so much dear for the lovely part par kya tujhe nahin laghta ki ye update ki length thoda short hain compared to your previous ones....gussa mat ho yaar ...agar tujhe nahin lagtha to tikh hain this time u updated fast mujhe bahut accha laga ...love u for this 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 gussa na hun...toh aur kya hun...??? tujhe pata hai ise likhne k liye mujhe kitni mehnat karni padi...upar se tujhe yeh chota ud lagta hai...!!! chal...kaan pakad...aur jhaad pe chadh ja...lekin is baat ki umeed mat rakhna ki raj vahaan khada hoga...kyoun ki Raj ko main sath me le kar ja rahi hun...😆 ...vaise 'love u' kaha hai...isiliye chod rahi hun...varna.....

ab jaldi se ek accha sa muhurat nikalo raj ke liye to tell naina wo teen magical words jo hukum sarkaar...😆

Lrl joke is too funny 😆 😆 😆chalo tujhe toh hassi aayi na...

waiting for the next part eagerly

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Priya!!! Hiiiii Guglu...

Superb update! Just fabulous. 👏 👏 👏Thanqqqqqqqq

And if your update has made Yasmin break Yasmin her clicking the like button spree, then it is in itself the greatest comment you can get.😆 😆 😆main bhi bilkul yahi soch rahi thi... par thank God ud k bahane us k darshan toh hue...😆 😆 😆

Anyways coming to the update, I completly agree with Dhara and Yasmin, they have said it all. Rajveer sure is the show stealer.👏 👏 👏 koi shaq...😉 😉 😉

Poor guy, he was so angry. And I had been thinking about this that the bullet was meant for Raj and Naina came in between. Vishal too had some very good dialogues to his credit. ab raj ne itni dhamkiyaan de hi di hain...toh Vishal kyoun rukta...

Bbut for me the best moment was the RN scene in the hospital. It was such a romantic one. Naina apna badla le rahi thi Raj se ye kehkar ki usse jana hai par Raj ne usse bahut pyar se mana liya. Wish you had made it longer. We are still waiting for Raj's confession and rather waiting eagerly for it. dont worry dear...main hun na...Raj confess nahi karega toh kahan jayega...😉 😆

I'm sure something has happened to Aslam and it is our villian who is behind it. I mean villians hote hi isliye hain.😡 Anyways, I expect you to continue soon. sahi hai boss...vilians hote hi isiliye hain...

The LRL was joke was very nice. Really hilarious!😆 😆 😆. But I guess you had a joke regarding Huda's visit to Kolkata. The "AMI JAANI NA" wala joke. That was really too much.😆 😆 😆 . I could understand his confusion, poor fellow.😆 😆 😆. he he he...actually mere bhai ne mujhe yeh joke kahi thi...chalo tumhe bhi achha laga...

Anyways, contiinue soon.And please forgive me if there are any spelling mistakes in this part, I'm sure there are some mistakes. I'm sitting in a net cafe and the stupid keyboard doesn't seem to be working properly.😡 😡 😡. mat bol yaar...cafe me baithna matlab irritation... ya toh keyboard k letters dikhai nahi denge...ya phir un k functions thik nahi honge...GODDDD...

Waiting for another rocking update.

Love
Guglu

Originally posted by: sania_58

wow

awsome update

mindblowing

too good

superb

u rocked

very well written

great going

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Helo 😃😃😃....waise main na har comment pe sabse pehle Raj ka naam leti hu.....aur kyunki maine abhi abhi le liya hai....to I want to say...u r awesum Priya!!!!!!! Matlab tum ne pahle hi part me Raj aur mera dono ka naam le liya...main toh dhanya ho gayi...😆

Sabse pehle bata du....maine koi rushing to the hospital nahi expect kiya tha....😆😆...I knw u too well to expect that....waise bhi common sense hai yaar....goli lagi hai to hospital hi le jayenge....😆😆😆....isme itni bhagam bhaag dikhane wali koi baat thodi hai....lolz!! bilkul...sahi kaha... vaise yeh jaan kar achha laga ki ab tum mujhe jann ne lagi ho..😆 😆 😆

And now Rajveer ki wo dhaasu entry....wah wah wah 👏 arre akhir hero hai voh entry thodi si alag se honi chahiye na...😃

Aur wo confrontation....I cud visualise it all......aur kya lag raha tha wo....main kya kahu...haiii....u make me fal for him all over again!!!😳 oye break maar...tere xams hain aage...aur yeh tu kya kar rahi hai...😆

And even Vishal was awesum in his dhamki...😆😆😆....Ramayan-Mahabharat wali baat....jhakas tha bilkul!!! thanqqqq...main bhi real lyf main aise dail marti hun...sayad isiliye mujhe koi seriouslly nahi leta...😆

Aur phir uss idiot ki himmat kaise hui Raj pe goli chalane ki??? Khud ko raja kehta hai???😆😆😆...Samne dekha nahi kaun khara tha...RAJVEER!!!😳😳😳 Aur wo soch bhi kaise sakta hai apni Rajkumari Kanyakumari Naina apne Raj k alawa kisi aur ka ho sakti hai....ab ye kaisa Raja hai yaar....jiske paas chiti k jitna bhi dimag nahi hai??? Ye to hum se bhi aage hai Priya....I mean in the sense of Having No Dimag!!!😆...sahi kaha Vikram k paas dimag hi nahi hai...hota toh voh meri fic sign hi nahi karta...kyoun ki main us ki dhulai jo karwati rahti hun...Raj se...

And now hospital scene btwn Raj-Naina......😳😳....wo aansoon wala scene....when u said....both Raj n Naina's tears....I was like wow!!! It was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful dear!!! thanqqqqqqq...yeh idea mujhe baht pahle se aaya tha...par mujhe pata hi nahi tha ki main ise kaise add karun...par finally ho gaya...n glad u like it...😃

Ab bahut hui taarifein....ye flashbak kyun end kiya???? Mujhe janna tha wo Aslma Raj ko pareshan karke kaha gaya??? Aur Raj ne kya kiya??? Kitne sawal hai yaar!!! bata dungi yaar...par thoda sa tym toh de...

Khair jaldi se continue karo.....mujhe aage padhna hai...😛😛...aur sirf mujhe hi nahi sabki padhna hai....we all r very eager...isiliye ek achhi bacchi ki tarah tum bhi likhna shuru karo....😃😃ab tumhari dost jo hun...tum 'achhi bachhi' ho...toh is ka thoda sa asar toh mujh par padega hi na...😛


Now LRL Joke:

Surijee ko laga unka koi photo le raha hai...😆😆😆...unhone to kabhi bataya nahi unhe photo khichwane ki itni tamanna thi...😆😆😆arre yeh tamanna toh thi unhe..dekha nahi LRL me kaise hamesha apne pant uthate rahte the...jaise abhi abhi koi un ki tasveer lega...

Originally posted by: nihatri

wow

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Superb part, Thanqqqqqqqq😃

Raj vo bhi gusse me, hieeeee kitna cute lagta hai na vo aise.

yupe...dil karta hai bass dekhte hi jayen...

Vikram ki halat kharab ho gayi ho gi, Raj ko apne yahan dekh kar. Us ne umeed nahi ki hogi ki jis baat pe vo abhi kisi ko thappad laga raha tha us par proper action lene k Raj vahan aa jaayega. tabhi toh voh bhadak gaya...😛

Raj ne bhi kya kamaal kiya us ne Vikram ko acche se samjhaya ki agar Naina ko kuch bhi ho gaya to kya haal honewaala hai us ka, Vikram bhi bahut mushkil se bacha hai Raj k gusse se. varna toh raj us ki sari kahani khatam kar hi deta...😃

Accha hua samay rehte Vishal ne Raj ko samhaala varna bachta nahi vo. Sab se jyada hassi mujhe Vikram k vo Princess waali baat pe aayi , ki Naina ki shaadi ek Raja se hi hogi.Par Raj ne bhi us ko kya solid answer diya na ki Naina bus us ki hai aur kisi ki nahi hai. ab vikarm ko kuch galat-fahaimi hai toh use Raj hi dur karega na...😉

Filhaal Naina ko jyada jaroorat thi na Raj ki. Par yahan bhi Vikram nahi maana aur Raj k jaate-2 sach us ne bol hi diya na Raj ko. Aur ek baar fir Raj ka gussa bhadak gaya us par. vikram ka koi kasur nahi hai...voh bichara kya karta...gusse me aisi bewakuffi kar raha hai...

Thank god Naina ab Safe hai varna Vikram aur baaki k log to unsafe ho jaate. Par ek baat acchi hue, isi bahane Naina ko pata chal gaya ki Raj bhi bahut pyaar karta hai us se. haan...ab yeh toh use pata chalni hi thi na...varna raj toh use kabhi nahi batanewala tha...😆

Abhi bhi Raj ko shaitaani soojh rahi hai aur us ne, abhi bhi nahi kaha Naina se i love u aur fir se Naina intezaar kar rahi hai. kahega...kahega...bass thoda sa wait kar el...😃

Adi n Vishal bhi milne aaye to Naina ne sach bata diya ki goli ka nishana Raj tha.
Par ye Aslam k saath kya hua tha? batati hun na thode se uds me sab kuch clear ho jayega...😃
Ab update kar de aur bhi fics ko like Ehsaas n ZTMK. bass thoda sa wait kar le yaar...😃

Originally posted by: vvdn

as always Gr888888888 update !!!