Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6)

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#121

I must say....past me kya chal chali thi unn logo ne.....Raj k father pe attack in the name of Aslam....aur wo bhi Aditi k liye....😡....😡😡.....hadh hoti hai...besharmi ki....😡😡....lekin inhe kya pata.....uff...main hi bewkufo ki tarah baat kar rahi hu....hai na?

Anyways....I'm very very much interested in the past happenings....😉😉....and in the present.....Aditi ki spl wali baat bahut mast thi....😆😆....wo bhi ek nautanki hai....😆😆

And Raj-Naina scene was definitely cute....😳😳😳.....with him saying....ar baat ka ek waqt hota hai....aur sahi waqt tab hoga jab Naina puri tarah se uski hogi....😳😳😳......how cute yaar!!!

And I really liked the statement......Vishal Aditi ki fule hue muh ka size kamm karne ki koshish kar raha hai....😆😆😆.....dono Bhai Behen kitne funny aur cute hai.....😳😳😳.....aur phir usne doc (Mana😉) k samne jo bed book karne wali baat kahi.....even that was soooooooo cute!!!😳😳😳

And yes end me Raj ko aisa kya sujha??? usse kya idea aya??? Itna khush ho gaya?? Though I am happy that he is happy.....lekin batana chahiye tha na.....😕....ab mujhe issi k bare me sochna hai....huh!!!

Anyways.....Madam apki har gustakhi maaf kiya.....u knw na I'm a very achhi bacchi.....lekin lekin lekin.....hamein jald se jald parts chahiye......next month se to xams bhi hai (meri bhi hai.....achha hua yaad dila diya...😆).....so jaldi se iss mahine me long long cute cute sweet sweet awesum awesum parts post karna thik hai?

Now bye.....and take care....

Luv,
Sumi.😛

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 15 years ago

#122

the up is very nice plz cont soon

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#123

wonderful update.loved it.

just too good,

wow, raj and naina scene are too good, so cute and sweet,loved their sweet conversation, raj ne naina ko tease bhi bahut kia....

continue soon dear.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#124

Yaar Priya...

Maine comment tak nahi kiya aur tumne like button bhi click kar diya???😲😲😲 Yaani ki mera kuch na likhna hi tujhe jyada pasand hai???😲😲😲

Fir mai comment karun ya nahin???

Chalo kar deti hun. Waise Mana ne itna lamba chauda comment kiya hai ki mere paas kehne ko kuch bhi nahi bacha. Fir Sumi ne bhi keh diya. Ab Yogitha ke post se pehle mai comment kar deti hun... warna bacha khuch kuch bhi hoga toh wo keh degi, aur mere paas kuch bhi nahi bachega kehne ke liye.😆😆😆

Well flashback was definitely interesting. Raj ke papa par hamla hua hai aur FIR pe sign karne se pehle Raj ne apradhi ko dekhne ki icha jahir ki. Aur apradhi ko dekhkar Raj aur Vishaal ko pakka 1000 volt ka jhatka laga. Mujhe pata tha Jigyasa ko dekhkar hi laga tha ki kuch na kuch gadbad hai. Poor Aslam... usse apne muh se kuch aisa kubool karna pada jo usne kiya hi nahi hai.😭😭😭 Raj ki halat par taras aata hai. Aur Aslam ne kitni chalaki se Vishaal se kaha ki Adi ko bacha lo.👏👏👏 Adi ke saath kya hone wala hai? Kahin kuch aisa toh nahi jiski mai kalpana bhi nahi karna chahti.😕🤢

Coming back to present:

Mana ne cameo kiya hai...congratulations Mana.😆 Par Priya ne itni jaldi Naina ko discharge karwa diya ki Raj ka aana jaana shuru hone se pehle hi band ho gaya.😆😆😆 Adi ne sahi kaha... spl care waali chiz bhai ka dept hai.😆😆😆 So very true. Raj ko sharm aayi kya ye baat sunkar jo usne Adi ko maara???😆😆😆

Beautiful RN scene in the hospital room. Raj ne bina sune hi Naina se wada kar liya. Wo kitna pyaar karta hai aur kitna trust karta hai uss par ye baat bahut saaf pata chal jaati hai.Raj ne abhi tak wo 3 shabd nahi kahe. Adi ke fule hue muh ka size kam karne ki koshish kar raha tha Vishaal. Hilarious...😆😆😆

Raj Aslam ke saath jaa raha hai. Par usse kya yaad aaya jo wo uchal pada??? Ab ye toh tum hi bata sakti ho.

So jaldi batao aur batane ke liye agla part post karo. Waiting for the next part...

Love
Guglu.

Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#125

Too good!!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Main jaanti thi ke yeh Jigyasa zaroor kuch buri khabar lekar aayegi!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj ke dad par hamla huya hai aur unke secretary ne bhi yeh baat confirm kar di!!!!!

FIR paper pe sign karne se pehle Raj ush insaan ko dekhna chahta tha jisne hamla karwaya!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Both Raj and Vishal are shocked and could not believe Aslam could do this!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Like them even I am sure ke Aslam ko fasaya jaa raha hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

It is good to see that Raj did not believe Jigyasa for a minute and is feeling angry and frustrated!!!!! 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

He can understand that Aslam is saying all this under someone's pressure!!!!

I am sure Aslam ko Vikram hi blackmail kar raha hai!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Yehi uska plan hai taaki Aslam ki shaadi Nandini se na ho sake!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Poor Aslam!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Usse itni badi baat Raj ke saamne khni padhi woh bhi uski behen ke baare mein!!!!!

Aslam very cleverly told Vishal that Aditi is in danger!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Aditi does not leave any chance to tease Raj and said ke Naina ka special care toh sirf Raj kar sakta hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aur phir woh Raj ne rooth jaati hai aur Raj ne sahi kaha nautanki!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj telling the doctor ke woh jaldi hi hospital pahuch jayega was too funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Naina ne Raj se vaada karne ko kaha aur Raj ne bina sune hi kar diya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina is worried about Raj and does not want him to go anywhere without protection!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

It was so romantic when Raj said uske saamne uski jaan baithi huyi hai aur uske rehte usse koi khatra nahi ho sakta!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj is always teasing Naina and his joke about the washroom was very funny!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina told Raj usne ush aadmi ki shakal puri tarah se nahi dekhi thi!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina told Raj about her dream and how she has changed her destiny by coming between him and the bullet!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina ne sahi kaha agar usse goli nahi lagti toh Raj usse Shimla bhej deta!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

So thanks to Vikram aaj Raj aur Naina saath hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj and Naina are soo cute and romantic together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I liked Raj's dialogue ke Vishal Adi ke fule huye muh ka size kam karne ki koshish kar raha hai jokes bol kar!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Naina Raj se woh three magical words sunna chahti hai magar Raj ke paas hamesha koi excuse hota hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Pata nahi woh kis muhurat ka intezzar kar raha hai!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Yeh Raj ko ab kya sujha ke woh itna khush ho gaya??😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

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Posted: 15 years ago

#126

Fabulous update...!!!!

Yaar today I hurt my finger so not typing much...But my comments ditto Mana and Sumi...!!!

Update soon...!!!

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#127

Hi Priya

dekho is baar tumhare ud ki tarah mera comment bhi kafi late hai, but Im sorry ha! I keep forgetting mene kaha reserve kia hai aur kaha comment! Ghajini effect u see!

anyways ud was really great!

Ab thoda thoda suspense samajh me a raha hai...

I dont believe Vikram cud stoop so low...I mean Aslam pe aisa ilzam! Achcha kia jo usne jate jate Vishal ko warn to kar dia...Vikram aditi k piche pada hai! gira hua insaan kahi ka...ab ise jaldi se Rajveer k hath se ek do aur muh pe padwao aur bilkul niche(zameen k andar) pahucha do!

chalo ab Rajveer to Naina k pass rahega...sahi kaha tha Naina ne, vo sach me bewakuf hi hai....

Aur usey Naina ko I love you bolne me itne nakhre kyu a rahe hai? I think isme bhi uska apna hi koi apna funda hoga...

Naina ne achcha kia jo rajveer se promise le lia k vo kahi bhi akele nahi jayega- except one place ofcourse!

Rajveer aur Naina wala scene kafi romantic tha...aur Naina ka explanation bhi. I just hope Vikram has the sense not to try anything now

Ab bas jaldi se nxt ud kardo

aur is Vikram ki band bajwao, jo mujhe lag raha hai kafi jaldi bajne wali hai since Rajveer k dimag me idea a gaya hai! yippeeee

love

Sur

Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#128

Hi Priya

How r u???

Chalo tumne update karne ki soch hi li😊😊

Update was brilliant👏👏👏

I hate Jigyasa so much..😡😡

Mujhe to lagta hai Aslam ko Vikram hi blackmail kar raha tha...Koi to usse phansa raha hai ,tabhi to usne itni badi baat Raj ke samne bol di woh bhi uski behan ke liye..

Raj ho bhi yakeen nahin ho raha hai ki Aslam uske sath aisa karega..But atleast Aslam ne Vishal ko warn to kar hi diya..

Aditi Raj ko tease karne ka ek mauka bhi nahin chodti😉😆😆 Doc(I mean Manali) ne Naina ko discharge to kar diya but ab woh Raj se milegi kaise??😉😆 But Raj bhi hospital mein ek bed reserve kara rah hai chalo Manali ki to nikal padi😉😆😆

RN scene was too cute n romantic😛

Raj is always teasing Naina ...But this scene was just too funny

"Rajveer:- "har jagah kisi na kisi ko sath rakhuga...yeh baat toh thik hai...lekin ek jagah hai vahan par main kisi ko bhi sath me nahi le ja sakta...!!! vahan par ya toh mujhe akele jana padega ya phir tumhe mere sath chalna padega...!!!"

Naina:- "kahan...???"

Rajveer:- "wash room me...!!!" rajveer hassa zor se"

Raj ko bachane ke liye Naina ne apni jaan ki parwah bhi nahin ki....

Naina bhi Raj se woh 3 magical words sunne ke liye bekaraar hai but janaab ke paas har time koi na koi excuse hota hai...

" I use to be this girl

Hoping for a fairytale

With so much love to give

But my heart soon grew frail

Heartbreak was inevitable

Fury had been released

But still the pain was unbearable

The grief could only increase

But you came as my hero

When I no longer could breathe

You promised me security

And that you'd never leave

You saved me from treachery

I trust u completely

How can I tell how much I love

u r in my dreams n in my heart

This isn't a game

I'm certainly no prize

I'm far from perfection

I hope you realize

Tears come so easily

I'm nothing but a mess

You're a knight in shining armour

Saving a damsel in distress

When you hold me in your arms

All the tears just melt away

You're my air; I need you

Your smile can make my day

I'll slowly rebuild myself

To be stronger, to be better

As long as you promise this

Promise you'll love me forever"

Ab Raj ke dimaag mein kaun sa idea aaya hai????

Continue soon

Bye

Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago

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liquidfantasy

@liquidfantasy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#129

arrey priya main 1 baar reply karna bhool gayi to tum naraaz ho gayi 😉 😉 aur itna ki fics na continue karne ka soch liya.. 😃 😃 (patting my back n saying..waah mehendi bete itna effect priya par 😆 ) aaj mehendi khush huyi 😛 😛

Ok on a serious note:-
Bas itna hi pyaar aur dosti dekhi tumne hamari...😲 tumhe to proper punishment milni chahiye aisa stupid sochne par...u write really well n i actually fight wid u fr ur loooong updates n u think we dont like ur fics...thts nt fair!! 😭 when u decided not to continue ur fics..u didnt think of ur loyal readers..so bad!!just coz one reader is jealous of u...u decided to stop writing... 😲 😲

priya sweetie we really really like reading ur updates..n ur not allowed to assume otherwise 😊

ok enough daantna...abt the update now..

raj very well know aslam is under some pressure...i hope nthing happens to our very bubbly adi 😕 😕 bt tht is really cheap making aslam say like tht...n i know jigyasa and company are after this...they should be locked in room full of smelly trash..na jee payenge na mar payenge 😆 😆 😆
loved raj-naina convo 😊 😊 they are sweet together 😳 😳 😳

thnx fr the lovely update 😊
update soon
mehendi 😊

P.S : ohh i forgot abt the punishment...i can forget tht permanently if u promise long updates 😛

Edited by liquidfantasy - 15 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#130

Great Part.

Jigyasa ne kitne bure khel khele hai. 😡

I think Aslam se yeh sab Vikram hi karva rah hoga.

It is good to see that Raj did not believe Jigyasa for a minute. Aslam realises that Raj would not believe unless he confessed his crime.Raj feels very angry and frustrated because he can understand that aslam is saying all of this under some ones pressure. Alam very cleverly tells vishal that Aditi is in danger.

aditi does not leave any chance to tease Raj😉. Aur phir who Raj se roonth jati hai. Raj dar ke doc se keh deta hai ki who bhi jaldhi hospital mein pahonch jayega.It was too funny. And later when he tells naina that Vishal Aditi ke fule huai mooh ko kaam karne ki koshish kar raha hai...Raj's sence of humour is suberb.😆😆

Naina is worried about Raj's safety and does not want him to go anywhere without protection. Raj on the other hand is worries about naina and wants to know ki who beech mein kyon aa gayi jab raj par goli chali,😒

naina ka reasoning bhi perfect that. who apni niyati ko badal na chahati....usne dekhe hua sapne ko nakamiyab banan chahti thi.😊

Chalo Raj ne yeh to maan liya ki who naina ko kahi bhi akele nahi jane dega...he will always be with her.😛

Naina also wants to hear Raj's I love you. 😳

Ab yeh raj ke dimag mein achanak se kya baat ayi hai.

please continue soon.