Love can never die(Mayur FF)-part 2- page 28 - Page 19

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Sorry for criticism Di

But ur dis update was fab

Mayur made me Cry😭

I really Thank God this didnt happened in serial warna toh pata nahi wat i wuld do😆

U wrote the feelings fablously Di👏

Jus loved it😊

Originally posted by: Tapoor

Faru
tomake r thanks ki bolbo
amar ff likha start i to hoise tomar jonno
tumi jodi encourage na korta
ami kokhoni likhte partam na
tarupor eng problem to asei
shekhane o to tumi amake onek help koro
thanks a lot faria
I love u so much

Originally posted by: NidzCole_ArTi

Interesting!! PM mmezz

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Tumpa rani.
tomar ki matha kharap hoye geso.
eishob kin likhso.
dhore mair lagabo kintu?
tumi talented write. r ai ff n all the response are the result of ur talent.
ami kisu kori nai.
abar jodi eishob kotha bolo tahole tomake kintu dholai dibo- bujheso?
r frship a eishob thanx -sorry kisher?
eto formal hole tou mushkil.
jai hok next update taratari koro.

Originally posted by: Tapoor

Faru
ami r talented writer???????? 😲
what a jock
tumi comedy circus e participate korona keno?
Talented er t r kase o nai ami
matha chatha ja mone ase tai likhi
i m so glad je tomra shobai amar true frnd
je amr eishob bakwas lekha guli ke o appreciate koro
love u all
and specially u
Thanks to IF
jar karone ami tomar moto frnd paisi

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

awesome part yaar!!can't stop crying!!!please continue soon.plz pm me!!😳

Originally posted by: fariaa70

r tel dio na
deshe emnitei teler onek akal
tarpor tumi jodi opatre eto tel dau tahole to ei desh gese.
r tumi jodi sata-matha likho tahole amr desert love pore shobai bomi korbe. lol
vabsilam oita update korbo.
kintu tomar , nidzy, adir update dekhe matha theke oi chinta fele diyesi.

Originally posted by: Tapoor

pebo tum hamesha res
karke rakhti ho
per baad me comment karna
bhool jati ho 😆