Love can never die(Mayur FF)-part 2- page 28 - Page 21

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

phir toh accha hua maine yaad dila diya.........

Originally posted by: Tapoor

iss ka to pata nehi per hote hote pyaar hogaya ke update aaj ya kaal me miljaygi dear

part 1 ----- pg 18

hey guys this is the 2nd part of LCNBD. i know i m very late. keya karu u all know i m so lazy. sorry . I dedicated this part to my 2 sweetest, cutest and bestest frnd Faru(Faria70) and Adi (Adi_gupta). u 2 r an angel in my life. i love u both to my core

Love can never be die

Part ---------------- 2

1 year later:

So many things were happened in the last year. Uday and C.J got married and they had a baby last week named prithvi. Gunjaan samrat and diya or benji also got married. Suhaani didn't get marry. Bcoz still she loves adhiraaj. But now adhiraaj loves nupur a lot and she was happy to see adhiraaj happy with nupur. But what about Nupur .......no one saw her smiling after her marriage...though Adhiraj tried his level best to make her happy....but Nupur was just lifeless ...her smile was lost somewhere .... she was like a body without soul ......there was nothing in her life like it used to be earlier........though she was doing all her duties as a daughter in law & as a wife.....but the real Nupur who was bubbly ,chirpy outgoing fun loving...was lost somewhere...............

Now Mayank working in a multi national company and he started his own business. He lived in Bangalore with his mom. He didn't get married. Shilpa aunty force him a lot to get marry but he decided not to engaged with anyone.

At saxsena mansion

Nupur and gunjaan are setting on a sofa and talking.

G: Di tum aise kiyu hogayi ho? Kuch baat hi nehi karti ho. Kuch puchu to hi jawab deti ho bus. Tum bilkul pehli jaisi nehi rahi.

N: zindegi bhi to pehle jaisi nehi rahi.

G: Di keya tum abhi Mayank ko yaad karti ho?

Nupur ignored her word and said

N: wo mujhe kuch kaam yaad aagaya. Tu baith. Main abhi aati hu.

Gunjaan hold her hand and said

G: Di tumne jawab nehi diya?

N: Gunjaan tujhe yaad hai hamare morena me ekdin ek pagal ladki aayi thi? Wo pata nehi keya keya karrahi thi. Ek bar age jarahi thi or ek bar piche jarahi thi. Ek baar right to ek bar left. Ek bar khadi ho jati thi to baith jati thi. Ham sab kitne shocked hogaye the na ye soch kar ke wo aisa kiyu karrahi hai?

G: ha di kisi ko himmat nei huyi per tumne himmat karke uss ke pass jakar usse pucha ke aap aisa kiyu karrahi hai? to ussne jawab diya ke wo apne saye se picha chodana chati hai. kitni nadan thi na wo di? Koi apne saye se vala keise picha choda sakti hai?

Than she understood nupur what was trying to say. She stooped and looked at her disbelieve.

G: Di????????????????????

N: Mayank mera saya hai gunjaan. Main chahu bhi to usse kabhi durr nehi ja sakti.

G: di wo''''''.

N: chodna meri baat. Tu bata tu kaisi hai? samrat tera khayal to rakhta haina? Koi problem to nehi haina tujhe apne naye ghar me?

G: nei di koi problem nehi hai. samrat mera bohot khayal rakhta hai.

N: zindegi bhar pyaar ka sath naseeb walo ko hi milta hai gunjaan. Tu bohot kismat wali hai.

Said she left the place. Gunjaan understood her di was trying to hide her tears.

At Bangalore (Mayank's home)

Shilpa wake up from sleep and went out her room. She saw Mayank waiting for her at dining table. He worked on some file.

S: Good morning mayu.

M: Good morning maa. Tum phir se late hogayi

S: keya mayu kabhi to suraj ko pehle uthne ka mouka diya kar beta.

M: Maa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S: Ok. Ok main chup karti hu. Per aaj breakfast me keya bana hai? Wow paneer ke pakode. Ye to nupur ke favo''''''. Suddenly she stopped.

Mayank stood from the chair and said maa mujhe derr horaha hai. main office jaraha hu. Bye. And He left the place. Shilpa understood everything that he doesn't want to talk about nupur. Actually he scared that his felling went out of his heart.

S: Aur kitne din aapne zaazbat ko apne andar dabake rakhoge beta. Kabhi to inhe bahar ane diya karo.

At office (mayank's cabin)

Mayank entered his cabin and opened the drawer. There is a photo- he brings out this photo. It was nupur's photo. He is running his hand on the photo.

M: kaisi ho tum nupur? Thik to ho na? nei tum mere bina thik kaise ho sakti ho? Jaise main tumhare bina adhura hu waise tum bhi to mere bina adhuri ho na?

Suddenly his phn rang. He picked it up. Hear the opposite side talk he immediately stood up.

M: main abhi araha hu.

In a restaurant

Mayank was sitting on a table and waiting for someone. Suddenly he heard a noise from his back. He turned and saw a girl standing. He was shocked bcoz it's clearly visible that the girl was pregnant. The girl run and hugged him. She was crying.

M: sanju??????????? Ye sab keya hai? tum ???????????????

S: bhai ussne mujhe dhoka de diya bhai. (crying)

He broke the hug and said

M: Sanju huya keya hai batao mujhe?

S: Farhan mujhe chodke chala gaya bhai. Wo bhi uss waqt jab mujhe usske sabse jayada jaroorat thi. Dad ne bhi mujhe ghar se nikal diya.

M: keya??????? Uncle ne tujhe ghar se nikal diya?

S: ha bhai jab dad ko ye pata chala ke main maa bannewali hu tab unhone mujhe ghar se nikal diya.

M: or farhan wo kaha hai? usse aisi halat me teri sath hona chahiye. Ussne keya kaha?

S: bhai ussne mujhe baccha abort karne ke liye kaha hai. (She was crying badly)

M: keya????????? Usski to main!!!!!!!!!!! Main abhi usse baat karta hu.

S: wo US chala gaya hai bhai.

M: ?????????????

S: ha bhai ussne apne dad ki ek rich frnd ki beti se shaadi karli hai or US chala gaya. Ab main keya karu bhai? Kaha jau?

Mayank wiped her tears and said

M: jab tak tere bhai zinda hai tujhe pareshan hone ki koi jaroorat nehi hai. aajse tu mere sath mere ghar par rahegi.

At saxsena mansion

Everyone having their dinner then suddenly nupur became senseless. Adhiraaj picked her up and went to the bedroom. Dadi maa called the doc. Nupur laying down on her bed. Doctor was checking her nerves.

D: good news hai. She is pregnant.

A: keya???????? He was so happy. His happiness knew no bound. He hugged nupur and said

A: I m so happy nupur. You are giving me everything in my life. I love u

Nupur didn't hug him back but she was also very happy to hear it. Nupur just shut her eyes and thinking in herself

N: shayad ab mujhe mukti milnewali hai.

3 months later

At Bangalore (Mayank's home)

Mayank was working on his laptop. Suddenly he remembered something and went to sanjan's room.

M: sanju tune apni medicine li?

S: nehi bhai. Wo main bhool gayi.

M: ye galat baat hai sanju. Aisi halat me tumhe apna khayal rakhna chahiye.

S: sorry bhai (make a puppy face). Or bhai tum ho na mere khayal rakhne ke liye.

M: accha to ye baat hai. ye lo medicine. Khalo.

He gave her a glass of water and medicine. She drinks it and suddenly she was screamed.

S: ouchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

M: keya huya sanju??????? (Worried tone)

S: dekhona bahi aapka bhanjha mujhe lath marraha hai.

Maynk came closer to her and keep his hand on his stomach.

M: beta kiyu apne mom ko tang karrahe ho? Tum mere acche bete ho na.

Sanjana stared at him. Her eyes became teary.

S: Bhai aap bohot bohot acche hai. main chati hu mera beta bilkul aap per jaye. Uss ka sab kuch aap jaisa ho.

M: nehi sanju sabkuch mere jaisa nehi.

S: kiyu bhai?

M: mere jaisa kismaat to bhagwan dushmaan ko bhi na de.

Tears flow from his eyes and he left the room.

S: aap jo bhi kahe bhai mera beta to bilkul aap jaisa hi hoga. Usski chal, chalan, rehen sehen sab aap ki tarah hi hoga. Main usse bilkul aap jaisa hi banaoongi. Aapki nakshe kadam par hi chalega wo. Wo banega ek aur MAYANK

At the same time at saxsena mansion

Nupur and gunjaan were talking in nupur's room. Adhiraj was not there.

G: Di main bohot khush hu doctor ki report dekhkar. Mujhe bhi ek cute si niece hi chahiye thi. Bilkul gudiya jaisi.

Suddenly nupur started screaming.

G: keya huya di? (worried tone)

N: teri gudiya mujhe kick karrahi hai. dekh. She holds gunjaan's hand and keeps it on her stomach.

G: ha di gudiya to such me tumhe kick karrahi hai. ye galat baat hai beta. Mama ko tang nehi karte. Dekhna di gudiya bilkul aap jaisi hi banegi.

N: nehi gunjaan main nehi chahti meri beti ko mujh jaisi kismaat mile.

She left the room

G: nehi di aap dekhna aap ki beti to bilkul aap jaisi hi hogi. Wohi aapke jaisi acchi, sabse paayr karnewali, saabka khayal rakhnewali, aapki jaisi chulbuli or aapke jaisi hi shararati. Wo banegi ek aur NUPUR.

5 months later

At hospital (Mumbai)

Nupur was in delivery room and everyone wait for her in outside. Everyone was worried. Specially adhiraaj.

At the same time in Bangalore

Sanjana was also in hospital. Doctor took her in delivery room. Mayank and shilpa aunty was waiting outside of OT.

Doctor came and said

D: it's a boy.

M: or sanju keise hai?

D: usski halat kafi critical hai abhi kuch keh nehi sakte. Hum pura koishish karrahe hai.

M: doctor pls save my sister.

D: we will try our best mr. sharma

M: keya main baby se milsakta hu?

D: yeha. Sure. Nurse pls inhe baby ko dekhao.

Nurse came with baby. Maaynk take the baby in his arms.

M: maa dekho ye baby kitna payara hai.

S: ha mayu bohot hi cute hai.

M: maa dekho baby hasraha hai. omg maa isska to mere jaisi dimple bhi hai.

At hospital (Mumbai)

All r waiting on the corridor of the hospital. Then doctor came and said

D: congrats. Ladki huyi hai

A: or nupur ? nupur keisi hai doctor?

D: unki condition boohot serious hai. Internal bleeding kafi ho chuki hai. operation karna padega.

A: to ki jiye doctor. Jaldi operation ki jiye.

D: jab tak bleeding bandh nehi hojata hum operate nehi karsakte.

Adhiraaj holds doctor's hand and said

A: pls doctor saves my wife. I can't live without her.

D: hum puri koishsh karrahe hai. jaise hi bleeding bandh hojati hai hum operation shuru karenge.

2 hour's later

D: patient ki halat kharab hoti jarrahi hai. wo aap sab se milna chati hai.

At cabin

Nupur was laid down on bed. She looks so pale.

N: doctor keya main aapni beti ko dekhsakti hu?

D: why not.

Adhiraaj came with the baby. He gives the baby to nupur. Nupur takes the baby in her arms. Tears roll down in her eyes. She kissed baby's forehead.

N: apne mama ko maaf kardena beta. Mama tumhe chodkar jarahi hai.

A: aisa maat kaho nupur tumhe kuch nei hoga. He was crying badly.

N: nehi adhiraaj main to pehle se hi jaanti thi. Mujhe koi dukh nehi hai. dukh sirf iss baat ka hai ke apne bacchi ko chodkar jararahi hu.

She looked at suhaani and said

N: suhaani tum mere beti ka khayal rakhoge?

Suhaani came and hold her hand.

S: nupur tumhe kuch nehi hoga. Tum hum sab ke sath apne beti ke sath rahoge.

N: nehi suhaani. Main jararahi hu. Mere paas waqt bohot kaam hai. tum batao tum meri beti ka khayal rakhoge na? tum usski maa banogi na?

G: di tum aisi baate kiyu karrahi ho di? Tum kahi nei jarrahi ho. Mujhe chodkar keise jaa sakti ho tum. She was crying loudly

At hospital (Bangalore)

Mayank was playing with the kid. Shilpa saw it. She said

S: mayu mujhe kab mouka milega apne pote ke sath khelne ka? Tu ab shaadi karle beta.

M: nehi maa maine mera nupur se wada kiya tha ke jab tak main zinda hu meri saase srif ussi ke liye dhadkenge. Mujhe apna wada nivana hai.

At hospital (Mumbai)

Nupur was laid on bed. Gujaan was set beside her and crying badly.

N: nupur kabhi Mayank mile to usse kehna ke maine apna wada nivaya hai. aaj bhi mera dil srif ussi ke liye dhadak ta hai.

G: chup karo di. Tumhare bina mera keya hoga or hamare gudiya ka keya hoga?

N: gunjaan mar to main bohot pehle hi gayi thi. Srif saase cahlrahi thi meri. Zinda nehi thi main. Aaj to mujhe mukti milrahi hai. tujhe to khush hona chahiye.

G: Di''''''''''. (crying)

N: gunjaan maaynk ne mujhse kaha tha ke hamare kahani yehi khatam nehi huyi hai, hamari kahani to abhi shuru huyi hai. koi or ab hamare pyaar ko pura karega. Gunjaan main jaha bhi rahu, jaise bhi rahu mujhe dekhna hai ke bhaghwan hamare kahani ko keise pura karta hai. keya aanjaam deta hai hamari mohabbat ka.

She takes the baby girl in her arms. Same time Mayank take the baby boy in his arms. Scene was divided into 2 parts. One is nupur with the baby girl and other Mayank with the baby boy. Background music started

Hum hai iss paal yeha

Jaane ho kaal kaha

Ham mile naa mile

Ham rahe na rahe

Rahegi sada yeha

Pyaar ki ye daastaan

Sunege sada jise

Ye jameen assma

Nupur started breathing heavily. She can't talk. Gunjaan was crying loudly while screaming.

G: Doctor, doctor. Jaldi aaiye. Doctor. Di .di . di aakhe kholo di. Di pls apne aakhe kholo. Doctor.

At the same time in Bangalore

Mayank felt a strange felling inside him. He is getting restless. Sahilpa noticed it and said

S: keya huya mayu?

M: pata nehi. Zara baby ko hold karo.

Shilpa holds the baby and said again

S: huya keya hai mayu?

M: pata nehi maa. Kuch ajeeb sa lagraha hai. ek ajeeb si bachaini horahi hai. bahar dekho kitna tufaan hoaraha hai. aisa lagraha hai jaise ye tufaan bahar nehi meri andar horaha hai. asia lagraha hai jaise ye prakriti mujhe kuch kehraha hai.

S: matlab?

M: jaise ye tufaan ye kehraha hai ke kuch galat honewala hai. kuch chutraha hai mujhse. Kuch khoraha hu main. Zindegi se bhi jayada kimti kuch. Maa mujhe aisa kiyu lagraha hai?

Than Nurse came and said

N: pls aap log andar chaliye. Patient ki halat kafi kharab hai.

Mayank and shilpa were shocked and go to the cabin. They looked at Sanjana. She was looking very pale was too weak to talk.

S: bhai maine aapne bete ka naam rakha hai Mayank. Usse bilkul aap jaisa banana bhai. Wo aap jaisa accha insaan bane yehi meri akhri khowaish hai.

M: aisa nehi bolte sanju. Sanju. Sanju aakhe khol. Doctor. Doctor. He screamed

Both doctor came and checked nupur and sanjaana and said

D: I m sorry.

guys pls dont angry on me. i know its a sad part but main keya karu concept hi aisa haia. i promised main jaldi sad part ki end karke happy part start karoongi. pls read and comment . ur comment very precious to me.

with love

Tapoor

Tapoorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr janiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

At first thank u so much for adding the part that i told u over the phn.

u know what- u wrote it beautifully.

i know u can do it.

i just loved it

Yaar what an update.

Awesome-blossom

Mind -blowing.

Fantastic

It was so touchy and sad one.

U wrote everything wonderfully.

I felt really bad for my mayur.

How could u do this.

Kyun in dono ko alag kar diya.

I know ur story line and that's why couldn't say anything.

I know we r going to c another mayur.

Picture abhi baki ghai meri dost- hai na????

My favorite part was-

N: Gunjaan tujhe yaad hai hamare morena me ekdin ek pagal ladki aayi thi? Wo pata nehi keya keya karrahi thi. Ek bar age jarahi thi or ek bar piche jarahi thi. Ek baar right to ek bar left. Ek bar khadi ho jati thi to baith jati thi. Ham sab kitne shocked hogaye the na ye soch kar ke wo aisa kiyu karrahi hai?

G: ha di kisi ko himmat nei huyi per tumne himmat karke uss ke pass jakar usse pucha ke aap aisa kiyu karrahi hai? to ussne jawab diya ke wo apne saye se picha chodana chati hai. kitni nadan thi na wo di? Koi apne saye se vala keise picha choda sakti hai?

Than she understood nupur what was trying to say. She stooped and looked at her disbelieve.

G: Di????????????????????

N: Mayank mera saya hai gunjaan. Main chahu bhi to usse kabhi durr nehi ja sakti.

My eyes became teary after reading it.

It proved how deeply they love each other.

Mayur r rock

I love my mayur.

Tapoor it was really awesome update.

Loved it to the core.

Now looking forward for next part.

Plz this time try to update soon.

Loveeeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Tapoor janiiiiiiiiii
where is ur update.
plz update soon.
waiting 4 it.

i am so happy that you finally updated.....