Love can never die(Mayur FF)-part 2- page 28

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Rabi

@rose.mn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#171

Tpuuuuuuuuuuuuu heart wrenching upate dete hove tumhe sharam nahi aayi.........arey ham bechare Mayurians ka thora khyal rakha hota.......
u know what mujhy pata bi tha k aage kya hoone wala hai phir bi i was helding my breath........
mayank nd nupur judha judha..............uff kaise ho ga yeh.....
khair jo bi ho but update was fantastic yaar........
i loved it.........n sau dard.........one of my fav song..........

u have written it very well yaar.........
do connt soon..........aur jaldi se yeh sad parts end karo........

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Angle.

@Angle.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: rose.mn
Tpuuuuuuuuuuuuu heart wrenching upate dete hove tumhe sharam nahi aayi.........arey ham bechare Mayurians ka thora khyal rakha hota.......
u know what mujhy pata bi tha k aage kya hoone wala hai phir bi i was helding my breath........
mayank nd nupur judha judha..............uff kaise ho ga yeh.....
khair jo bi ho but update was fantastic yaar........
i loved it.........n sau dard.........one of my fav song..........

u have written it very well yaar.........
do connt soon..........aur jaldi se yeh sad parts end karo........

Rabi
main bhi to mayurian hu na
main bhi mayank or nupur ko juda nei dekh sakti
per keya karu concept hi aisa hai
i m so glad that u loved my work
ha main jaldi iss sand pert ka end karoongi
or happy part start karoongi
ab khsuh?
love u

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lulu

@artiinluv

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#173

heyy tapoor

brilliant yaar

wht a beautiful concept ..par agar tumne mayur ko alag kiya toh mein yeh ff nai padoongi😭

plssssssssss

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Angle.

@Angle.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: artiinluv
heyy tapoor
brilliant yaar

wht a beautiful concept ..par agar tumne mayur ko alag kiya toh mein yeh ff nai padoongi😭

plssssssssss

Dear
keya tum abhi bhi concept me hi
aatke ho?
maine 1st part update karliya hai
or mayur alag hogaye........... 😭
per dont worry yaar
main hoo naa 😆
main phir se mayur ko ek kardoongi

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Fiza

@mayurian-artian

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#175

it waz wonderful and thnx 4 de p.m

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Angle.

@Angle.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: mjhtian
it waz wonderful and thnx 4 de p.m

Thanks a lot honey

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Angle.

@Angle.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: pebolovesmayur
tapu di

u always say u dont write well

well u dont write well

but u write brilliantly

i loved the way every scene is potrayed

waiting for more updates

love pebo

Thanks a lot my dear little sis
i will try my best to update asap
love u

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#178

Yaad teri jab bhi aayi wafa roti rahi

Ankh se barsa wo baadal ke inteha hoti rahi

Kal na-janey kya sitam toota teri yaad aaney ke baad

Raat bhar galiyon mein pagal hawa roti rahi

Tere milney ki dua ke liye jab bhi hath uthaye maine Mohsin

Meri iss masoom khawahish pe na-janey kyun dua roti rahi

Kabhee moum bun key pigal gaya
Kabhee girtey girtey sambhal gaya

Wo bun key lamhaa guzer gaye
Meyrey pass hi sey nikal gaye

Usey rokta bhee to kiss tarah
Key wo shakhs itna ajeeb thaa

Kabhee tadap utha meyree aah sey
Kabhee ashek sey na pigal sakaa

Sarey raah mila wo ager kabhee
To nazer chhura key guzer gaya

Wo utar gaya meyi ankh sey
Meyrey dil mai keu na utar saka

Wo challa ye sheher chhod key
Wo waha sey phir na palat saka

Wo sambhal gaya tha mager
Mein bikhar key phir na simat saka

mai ye padh kar yahi likh sakti
ye meri composition nahi hai
i thought these will suit as a compliment to ur update

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Angle.

@Angle.

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav
Yaad teri jab bhi aayi wafa roti rahi

Ankh se barsa wo baadal ke inteha hoti rahi

Kal na-janey kya sitam toota teri yaad aaney ke baad

Raat bhar galiyon mein pagal hawa roti rahi

Tere milney ki dua ke liye jab bhi hath uthaye maine Mohsin

Meri iss masoom khawahish pe na-janey kyun dua roti rahi

Kabhee moum bun key pigal gaya
Kabhee girtey girtey sambhal gaya

Wo bun key lamhaa guzer gaye
Meyrey pass hi sey nikal gaye

Usey rokta bhee to kiss tarah
Key wo shakhs itna ajeeb thaa

Kabhee tadap utha meyree aah sey
Kabhee ashek sey na pigal sakaa

Sarey raah mila wo ager kabhee
To nazer chhura key guzer gaya

Wo utar gaya meyi ankh sey
Meyrey dil mai keu na utar saka

Wo challa ye sheher chhod key
Wo waha sey phir na palat saka

Wo sambhal gaya tha mager
Mein bikhar key phir na simat saka

mai ye padh kar yahi likh sakti
ye meri composition nahi hai
i thought these will suit as a compliment to ur update