Love can never die(Mayur FF)-part 2- page 28

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Hey my friends here is one shot on mayur. Actually it was not an 1 shot. After writing we found it become a larger one. So u can called it as mega shot. Since it become larger I divided it into two part.

And we (me and tapoor) want to dedicate this mega shot to our januable, sweet , best friend b.day girl Aditi. Adi its 4 u.







Mayank: hey adi kya kar rahi hai tu.

Aditi: kuch nehi Mayank.

Mayank: Agar kuch nehi hai to tu itna pereshan kyun hai.

Aditi: nehi Mayank mein perashan nehi hoon.

Mayank: Accha agar aisa koi baat nehi hai to koi apni b.day ki din apni muh fula kar betha rehta hai kya?

Aditi: kyun b.day sirf meri hai, tera nehi hai kya. Tera mood bhi to kuch accha nehi hai.

Mayank: aisi koi bat nehi hai.

Aditi: Aissi hai. Actually u miss a lot Nupur. Right?????

Mayank: Adi meine kaha na aisa kuch bhi nehi. Mein usse kyun miss karunga?

Wo mera lagti kya hai. Mayank fuming with anger.

Aditi: lekin Mayank

Mayank: baas adi mein or kuch sunna nehi chati hoon.

After saying this he left the room quickly.

Aditi: mein janti hoon Mayank mujh jaisi tu bhi usse bahut miss karti hai.

Lekin kya nupur humko itna miss karti hai. Aj hamara b.day hai lekin wo abhi bhi ek phn tak nehi kya. Kya abroad jakar log itna badal jata hai. Mujhe nehi kamse kam Mayank ko to wish kar leti. Kya wo apna promise vul gaya?

At this time Adis ph ringing. She received the call.

A: hello kaun hai?

N: mein bhoot hoon, ha ha ha!!!!!!

A: nupsi!! Nupsi tu(She was very happy) Kaisi hai tu? U know im just waiting 4 ur call!!!!!

N: kyon koi khas baat hai kya?

A: (Little bit sad after hearing it). Nehi koi khas baat nehi. Aisi hi.

Tu baata kaise hai tu. Tera India aneka kya hua? Kaab aa rahi hai tu

N: nehi yaar mein aa nehi pawongi. Actually ek study tour k liye mujhe bahar jana par rahi hai. or mein aab raste main hi hoon. meine socha ki tujhe baata du.

A: to tu India nehi aa rahi hai or tu sirf ye bata ne k liya mujhe ph kya?

N: ha, kyun. Mujhe koi or baat batani hain. Tujhe aj ho kya gayi hai.

A: nehi muje kuch nehi hua. I m fine.

N: accha bata Mayank kaisi hai?

Aditi: wo thik hai. Mein usse ph du.

N: nehi nehi aab meri pass baat karne ki time nehi hai. Mein baad main baat kar lungi. Aab rakhti hu. Bye.

A: ok bye.

Aditi thinking herself 'nupur tu itna badal gayaki aab humare liye teri pas baat karneke liye time bhi nehi hai or wish karma to dur ki baat.

She had tears in her eyes.

She just recalling their sweet memory that they spent in Excel college.

(Flashback)

[This part written by tapoor -my sweet fr]

In the picnic

Mayank , Nupur , Aditi, gunjaan, samrat, diya, uday, Cj, adhiraaj, suhani, Benji, RV.all r going to picnic in Adhiraj's firm house.

S : sab baithe baiteh bore horahe hai. Chalona koi game khelte hai.

G : ha. Thik hai per hum konsa game khelenge?

U : Main batau? Mujhe ek bohot hi interested game yaad aya hai.

S : konsa interested game?

U : jara kha ke dekha.

ALL : keyaaaaa??????????

U : ha ek show haina jara nachke dikeha. Ussika version hai ye. Issme jo jayda kha sakta hai wo winer hoga.

M : Uday, phir to tumse ye trophy koi nehi chin sakta.

D : shut up dodo. Apne idea apne pass rakho. Hum kuch excited khelenge.

U : Khana bhi to kitna excited haina deets?

S : who tere liye hai dude. Chodo ye sab. Chalo hum sab truth and dare khelte hai.

ALL : yes.

Phir sab round hokar baithte hai. Or game start karte hai. Pehle phass ti hai diya.

N : so diya? Truth ya dare?

D : Dare.

ALL : wow.

B : so diya. Tum hume ek item song pe dance karke dikhao. U know na item song??????

D : keyaaaaaa???????????????

B : keya tum itna nehi karsakti? Tumne hi to dare chuna hai. Ab to karna hi padega.

D : ok. Guys.

Phir diya dance karti hai ( le le le lele maza le song from wanted).

Sab ladke palke jhapkana bhi bhool jata hai. Gunjaan samrat ki or suhaani adhiraaj ki akhoper hath daal ke cover kardeti hai. Diya ka dance khatam hone ki baad phir se game start hoti hai. Iss baar phaasi Aditi.

S : so aditi truth ya dare?

A : dare.

ALL : wow. Ye huyi na baat.

G : so aditi, tu keya karegi?

N : main batau? Aditi bohot accha gana gati hai. Pls aditi suna na.

A : gana or main?

ALL : ha pls yaar. Suna dena.

Aditi mayank ke taraf dekhti hai. Mayank nodded.

A : thik hai. She started.

Do dil milrahe hai , magar chupke chupke

Sab ko ho rahi hai, khabar chupke chupke

ALL : wow. It's 2222 gud aditi. U r a great singer.

Aditi sharmaker thanks bolti hai. Phir se game start hoti hai. Iss bar phaasti hai nupur.

Aditi : so npus? Keya karna hai? Truth ya dare?

N : mmmmmmmmmmm. Truth?

B : are nups or truth? Kahi mere kaan to nehi bajrahe hai?

N : benji!!!!!!!!! (angrily)

M : Chodo na. main qus karta hu. Nupur keya tum kisi ko I mean kisi ladke ko like karti ho? ( interested tone)

N : (blushing). Mmmmmmm. Oh. Ye, aaaaa. Accha yes.

M : konsa ladka? ( excited hokar nupur ke samne ajata hai)

N : Mayank ye dusra qus hai. Srif ek hi qus puchna hai.(smiling)

Mayank or kuch nehi kehta. But wo bohot nirash hota hai. Or Aditi apne bhai ki face dekhakar hasti hai.

A : (herself) Do dil milrahe hai , magar chupke chupke

Sab ko ho rahi hai, khabar chupke chupke.


Sorry dear we have written it within a short period of time just for Aditi.

So I couldn't check it properly. So I beg ur pardon for any grammatical mistake.

Thanx a lot 4 reading it.

Love uuuu all.

Faria(fariaa70)

Tumpa(tapoor)


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(In Mayanks room)

Mayank took the photo from his wallet. It was nups photo which was snapped on Ahmedabad tour. It was one of best tour in his life.

(Flashback- Ahmadabad tour)

[This portion was written by my dushman tapoor]

Nupur or mayank dono Mayank ki kamre me baithe hai. dono hi bohot khush hai kiyu ki wo academic meat jeet gaye hai.

N : Mayank maine kaha na hum dono best jodi hai or hume koi nehi harasakta.ab dekha?

M : kuch nehi kehraha hai bus usse dekhraha hai or smile karraha hai

N : ab hum jab wapas jayenge to hamare welcome ke liye principal sir khud phool ki bouqet leke khada hoga. or hamare liye red curpet bichaya jayega or pure excel college ki student hamare naam ki banner leke khada hoga or
M : bus, bus , bus apne dream per jara control karo. aisa kuch nehi hoga.

N : haye. kiyu?

M : Main haar saal ye compititon jeet te aya hu. mujhe experince hai.

N : accha? to phir itne mehnat ka keya faida? (dissapointed tone)

M : kiyu kitna kuch shikha tumne or dekho hamare dosti bhi hogai.

N : ha ye baat to hai. btw mayank tumhare haath me keya hai?

M : ye? ye invitation card hai.

N : kiski invitation?

M : party ka. haar saal hota hai.

N : wow. phir to bohot accha hai.hum jaroor jayenge.

M : per nupur party ka dress coad western hai.or tum???????

N : western????? koi baat nehi. actually packing karte waqt galti se mere bag me diya ka ek dress ayagaya hai. chalo aaj wo bhi kaam ajayega.
M : per nupur?????????

N : koi per war nehi mayank. cahlo ab tayaar ho jate hai.

In the evening

Mayank was standing on the corridor . he was wearing a blue jeans and black T-shirt. He looks soooooooo dashing.

At this time Nupur came by wearing a western dress(The dress that sanaya wearing in ITA award function). She looks so hot or cute.

Myank just staring at her.

N : mayank keya main acchi nehi lagrahi hu?

M ; nehi nehi tum acchi lagrahi ho.

N : thik hai ab chalo.

At party

Mayank or nupur party hall me khada hai. sab se baat karraha hai. mayank ko ye saab accha nehi lagta. wo chup cahp khada hai. tabhi ussne notice kiya ke do ladke nupur ki taraf ugly look de rahe hai. or tease karrahe hai.mayank bohot gussa ho jata hai.

M : Nupur chalo yeha se.

N : kiyu? abhi to aye hai.

M ; maine kaha na bus chalo yeha se.

Tabhi wo do ladke kuch comment karte hai.

b 1 : keya mast ladki hai.

b2 : keya lagrahi hai yaar.isski tange to dekh.

Mayank ki gusse ka para bohot high ho jata hai.

M : bus bohot hogaya. ab chalo

N : nupur tum itne gusse kiyu horahe ho?

then the boy said

b 1 : are ye kon agaya bech me?

b 2 : shayad akele hi................. ha ha ha

M : keya kaha? phir se kaho.

b 1 : kiyu?

M : maine kaha phir se kaho

N : mayank keya karrahe ho? jaane do na

M : nehi main sunna chahta hu. keya kaha tumlogone.

B 2 : are ja ja. jayada noutanki maat kar

Mayank gusse se pagal hojata hai or samne jo bhi milta hai lekar b 1 ko hit karta hai.

N : mayank stop it. pls chalo.

phir nupur mayank ko khichkar woha se leati hai.

N : mayank tumhe ye sab karne ki keya jaroorat thi?

M : or tumhe aisi kapde pehen ne ki keya jaroorat thi? (Angrily)

N : keya? mayank tum mujhse aise kiyu baat karrahi ho?

M : maine tumhe maana kiya tha na? per tum kisiki sunte kaha ho?

N : bus mayank bohot hogaya hai. mera jo maan kare main wohi pehoongi.

M : ha tum pehente jao or main marta jaoonga.

N : mayank how dare u? tum apne aap ko samajhte keya ho? mujhe tumse koi baat nehi karni

M : mujhe bhi tumse koi baat nehi karni hai.

Nupur at room

nupur apne kamre baithke ro rahi hai.tab bhi Aditi ka phn ata hai

N : hello adi?

A : tum ro kiyu rahi ho nupur?

nupur aditi ko sab kuch batati hai.

A : Nupur tum Mayank se naraz maat hona. tum jaanti ho na wo tumhe kitna pasand karta hai?

N : keya???????????

A : mere matlab as a frnd. issiley wo tumhe lekar possisive hai. or ye baat to sahi hai ke agar tum waisi kapde pehne huye the issiliye uss ladko ne waisa comment kiya.
N : Aditi?

A : ye maat samajhna ke main apne bhai ke side le rahi hu.per ye such hai na ke haar ladhki ko kuch decent to hona chahiye na?
N : per ab main keya karoo? Mayank mujhse bohot gussa hai. wo to mujhse baat bhi nehi karraha hai

A : main apna bhai ka gussa janti hu. wo jayada derr tak gussa nehi reh sakta. tum jao or usse baat karo.

Mayank terrace per baitha huya hai. nupur usske paas jati hai. nupur ne ek white churidaar pehni hai. wo bohot khubsoorat lagrahi hai.

N : i m sorry mayank

M : mujhe kiyu sorry keh rahi ho?

N : actually tum sahi the. mujhe waisi kapde nehi pehen ne chahiye thi. sorry. ab dekho na main phir se wohi sidhi sadhi gao ki gori baangayi hu. jaise tumhe pasand ho. ab to maaf kardo.
M : nupur tum bohot khubsoorat ho. pr isse nakli sazawat se kharab maat karo. kiyuki khubsoorti sadhgi me hi hai.

N : yes mr. mayank sharma. jaisa aap kahe ( her nautinky style). to maaf kiya?

M: ha (smiling)

N : to phir frnds (aapne haath ko age karte huye)

M : forever ( phir dono hi haath milata hai)

(Flashback End)

He smiled after recalling the memory. It was the starting of their new journey. Journey of their frship-only frship? For him it was also the journey of love. But for nups- may b it was just a normal frship .

Mayank sighed again. Now he remembered the play scene in Excel college

(Flashback play scene)

After finishing the rehearsal all were busy with unnecessary gossiping.

S : chalo na yaar kuch khelte hai.

B : per keya khelenge?

D : chalo aakho akhoome khelte hai

U : ye accha idea hai

Mayank was reading a book just little bit far away from them.

A : Mayank chalo na tum bhi khelo

M : mujhe nehi khelni ye baccho ka khel

N : By god mayank tum to bachpan me hi buddhe hogaye ho. chalo hum sab hi khelte hai

They started with RV-Dia . Here Dia won. Then samrat -gunjaan and this time Samrat won.

B : chalo nupur ab hum dono khelte hai

N : ha chalo

Nupur apne aakhe bandh karti hai lekin jab wo akhe khulti hai to samne benji nehi mayank baita huya hai.nupur bohot surprise ho jati hai per kuch kehti nehi. game shuru hoti hai.
koi ek dusre se aake nehi hata raha hai.or paalke bhi nehi jhukaraha hai.then suddenly mayank winked at nupur. or nupur apnek paalke jhukaleti hai

ALL : Mayank jeet gaya. mayank jeet gaya.

N : nehi. nehi issne cheating kiya.

M : keya? keya kiya maine (make puppy face)

N ; tumne cheating kiya.

M : batao na maine keya kiya?

N ; wo tumne

M : ha maine?

N : tumne , tumne , kuch nehi.

Then Nupur ran away from there.

At corridoar

N : cheating karke jeet ta hai. cheater kahika. then she bumps into mayank

M : kaha jarahi ho?

N : tumse matlab?

M : matlab se hi to aya hu.

N : keya?

phir dono sath sath baith te hai

M : tumne kaha nehi ke maine keya cheating ki.

N : tumne , tumne aakh kiyu mari? it's a bad habit. agle baar kisi or ladki ko marne se pehle 100 bar sochlena

M : kisi or ladki ke bare me soch ne ka forsaat kise hai. tumse, srif tumhi se hi to hum ye gustakhi karsakte hai

N : kiyu? main tumhari lagti kon hu?

M ; bata du?

N : batao na.

mayank slowy closer to her

M : bata du ( he look at her so lovingly)

N : ha batao na.

Myank came more close to Nupur and hold her hand.

M : nupur wo , wo

Then suddenly nupur winked at mayank. mayank surprised by her sudden actions and he left nupurs hand .

Then Nupur ran away from there by showing her thumbs. Mayank just stood still and just lovingly looked at nupr.

By this time Aditi came here who watched everything from other side of the corridor
A : hmmmmmmmmm. aag dono taraf bara bar lagi hai per koi ye maane ko tyaar nehi hai.

(Flashback end)


(This worst part written by me but tapoor help me a lottt. Thanx sweety)

Mayank try to ignore his feelings. But he cant.

He just thinking and thinking about Nupur.

Mayank: mein kyun Nupur ko nehi bhul sakta.

Oh GOD plz help me.

Kya Nupur sach much mujhe yaad nehi karta????

Kya wo itna badal gayi hai???

He had try to control his emotions, but couldn't.

A lone tear escape from his eyes.

Mayank, Aditi call him from the door side.

Mayank quickly wiped his tears.

Mayank: ha Adi bol.

A: Mayank sab log hall room main hamara intezar kar rahi hai. Jaldi chal

M: tu ja Adi,mujhe kuch accha nehi lag raha hai. Mein baad main ata hoon

A: Par Mayank''.

M: plz Adi u go. I'll come later.

Kyun cake nehi katna hai kya? Dekho jaldi se chalo mujhe bahut bhook lagui hai. Itni der se kuch nehi khaya.

Both adi and Mayank r frozen after hearing the voice. It was none other then nupur.

She stood near the door wearing a pink dress with her beautiful open hair. She just looks like an angel.

Nupur: kya hua tum dono mujhe aise kyun dekhrahi ho. By God mera makeup thik hai na? ya meri galo mein koi pimple uth gaya. She looked really worried about it.

Aditi and Mayank burst out into laugh with their teary eyes.

Aditi: hugged Nupur. Nupsi tu kiasi hai. Pata hai mein kitna khus hu tujhe dekh kar.

Nupur: ha ha pata hai mujhe. Mein hu hi aise. Pyara sa, cute sa ,morena ki Rajkumari Nupur bhushan. To sab log mujhe dekh kar khush to jaruru honge.

Lekin mujhe lagta hai koi ek ko sodkar sab khush hua.

A: tu kiski bat kar rahi hai.

N: Or kaun teri wo akdu,sadu, bhai ki.

A: r a wo tujhe sab se jaida miss karti thi.

N: ha wo to mein dekh rahi hoon. meine kab se bakbak kiye ja rahi hoon, lekin ye to kuch nehi keh raha hai.

M: tum kisiko kuch bolnne ki mauka doge, tab to koi bolega na.

Nups give angry look to Mayank.

N: ha ha bolo kaun tumse mana kar rahi hai. Sadu kahika!!!!

A: pher tum dono shuru hogayi.

Aab cake katna hai ya nehi??? Nehi to b.day gujar jayega or tum dono aise hi jhagarte rahogi. Mein hall room main chalti hoon. tum dono aa jao. She winked at Mayank.

N : Mayank kuch kahoge nehi?

M : kiyu ayi ho? hamdardi dekhaneke liye? mujhe tumhari humdardi ki koi jaroorat nehi hai

N : mayank mein to.

M : bus nupur bus . ab or nehi.

N : mein to ayi thi tumse kuch kehne ke liye or kuch sunnke liye bhi . Then Nupur

Started crying and threw a card to him which she wanted to give him on his B.day

Mayank just took the card from the floor and started reading-

Mayank meine bohot socha ke tumhe keya gift du. pr kuch pasand hi nehi aya. phir maine socha ke iss se jayada khubsoorat gift keya hosakta hai. " The rest of my life" . aaj main tumhe apne puri zindegi derahi hu. I love u mayank.

M : oh shit. ye maine keya kardiya.

He running towards Nupur.

M : nupur pls stop.

N : nehi mayank bohot bolliya tumne or maine bhi bohot sunliya ab or nehi.

M : nupur sorry

N : nehi mayank. jaante ho woha abroad main maine tumhe kitna miss kiya. hurpaal tumhare bareme hi soch ti thi. kab tumse miloong, kab tumse baate karoonga.

M :

N : ya sab acche hai. sab mujhse bohot pyaar karte hai. aditi, gunjaan, samrat, diya, uday, benji sab acche hai. per tum bohot bure ho. bohot bure. main ja rahi hu.

M : jakar usska hath pakadh ta hai. jab sab itne acche hai to jaana jaroori hai keya?

N :

M : I love u nupur

N : itni si baat kehne me itna waqt lagadiya?

M : keya karoo aisa hi hoo mein

N : ab khade khade mera muh keya dekhrahe ho. chalo mujhe apne bahome lelo.

Then they hug each other

A : ab tumhari reunion khatam hogai ho to cake katle?

Then they cut the cake,

A : Thnk God. tum Mayank ko usska pyaar or mujhe mere dost wapas kardiya. thank u God 4 ur special bday gift.

It is really one of the best day in my life, a memorable Birth Day.


Hey adi I wish ur each and every b.day become a memorable b.day.

And wishing u a very very happy and enjoyable lifr\e dear.

And all the best

Thanx a lot 4 reading it.

Love uuuu all.

Faria(fariaa70)

Tumpa(tapoor)


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Hello guys I read a story from magazine and just loved it.

So i immediately converted it to mayur one shot.

But my dearest friends I have no credit on this story. Becoz I didn't write anything not a single word. Just change the name of character. All the credit goes to the writer shahnoor wahid.

So guys here it is. hope u will enjoy .

Nupur 's Little World

Nupur was finishing some household chores while having a second cup of tea at around 11am. Mayank left home for office sharp at 8 am on his motorbike. Though he smiled sweetly and kissed her cheek before going, for the last two weeks she had been having this wifely instinct that he looked a little tense and unmindful. She enquired about his health a number of times but he always laughed and told her that he was as fit as that iron bolt on the door.


Nupur prayed in her mind for his well being as she ironed his shirt. Memories of her marriage with Mayank two years back started to come back in flights. He was so loving, understanding and caring. Before she could realise it, she found her eyes filling with tears. She quickly wiped off the tears. She sat down to make a shopping list for the forthcoming New Year. Only 10 days left, she did a mental calculation. She wanted to buy that punjabi-pajama set for Mayank this time. He would look so good in it, she thought. The phone rang. She almost tripped running to pick up the receiver.

'Hello?' she answered.
'Madam, is that you? I am Madhab, Mayank sir's office peon.'
'Oh, yes, yes Madhab, how are you?'
'I am fine, madam. How are you? How is Mayank sir?'

'I am fine. And your Mayank sir is fine too. He must be nearby in the office, why don't you ask him?'
'In the office? Why'.I mean'..madam'..but he is not here any more!'
'Not here anymore? What do you mean by that? Where is he? Didn't he reach office in the morning?'
'Reach office in the morning? Madam, he has not been coming to office since the first of this month. Don't you know anything? He resigned last month!'
'What nonsense are you talking about, Madhab? This is too much. I thought you were a nice guy! Why are you telling me all these over telephone? Tell me exactly what happened.'
'I am sorry, madam, if I have offended you in any way. I shall never forget what Mayank sir and you have done for me. In fact I called to tell you that I wanted to come to your house to return the money I borrowed from you three months back thinking that you must be in need of money since Mayank sir does not have a job.'

'I do not understand anything, Madhab. Can you please come to my house right now? I'll pay for the scooter fare. Say something to your boss and come. I must know what happened with Mayank. Please come.'

'OK, madam, don't worry. I am coming within one hour.' He hung up.
Premonition of something bad happening to Mayank made Nupur feel sick in the stomach. She tried to vomit but nothing would come out as she had been fasting. She walked up and down the room. Where had Mayank gone? If Madhab was telling the truth then why didn't Mayank tell her everything? Was this the reason why he had been looking worried and tense for the last couple of weeks? If he did not have a job then where was he going every morning exactly at 8 am? In the first place, why did he leave the job?


Within one hour Madhab reached the house. After paying the scooter fare, Nupur gave him a chair to sit on and requested him to tell her the whole story. But first, Madhab handed over the money he owed her and then told her everything that had happened in the office last month. It was like this. The chairman of the company Mr, Sinhania was a very nice person and he liked Mayank a lot for his personal honesty and his sincerity towards the welfare of the company.


Only within two years Mayank had been promoted to the post of chief General Manager , superceding two other lazy officers in the same department. But, last month Mr, Sinhania fell sick and was taken to London for treatment and he had to be there for many months since he had a serious heart ailment. His two daughters lived in London.

His only son Adhiraj became the new boss from the first of last month and it was since then that trouble began. Right from day one Adhiraj started to draw large amounts of money for his personal expenditure and when Mayank told him at the end of the week that he had already drawn a lot of money without signing any voucher against it, Adhiraj abused him in front of all the staff. He told him it was his father's company and he had the right to do whatever he wanted to do with it.

Towards the end of last month, Mayank again told him that the sale and collection position was not good and there was no money in the company account. They would face difficulty in paying the salaries of the staff. Could Adhiraj return some of the money he took from the cash?

Mayank asked him politely. That made Adhiraj extremely mad and he fired Mayank right on the spot with immediate effect. He told Mayank that he would arrange the salaries of all the others except that of Mayank since there was no money in the account. He gave Mayank half an hour's time to hand over all the files and keys to his subordinate and leave the office for ever.

Mayank did exactly what he was told to do and walked out of the office saying goodbye to all his colleagues. Everyone, except the two lazy accounts officers and Adhiraj, wept openly. In the first week of the current month all those who loved Mayank raised some money after getting their salary and offered it to him.

But Mayank refused to take it, saying they needed the money more than he did since New Year was approaching. He thanked them profusely and told them that he had some money saved somewhere so he would be able to pull through. Madhab stopped. He wiped his eyes and looked out through the window. He remembered how Mayank and Nupur had helped him with money during his daughter's wedding and how Mayank had pleaded with the chairman of the company, Mr, Sinhania, to raise his salary.

He turned and said, 'But madam, I have come to know from one of our staff that Mayank sir is trying to sell his motorbike to meet New Year expenses. He has to send money to his parents as well. He requested everyone in the office not to tell you anything. He said he would explain it to you himself. I am surprised that he did not tell you anything yet.'

Nupur did not know what to say. She wiped the tears off her face and got up. She brought some sweets for Madhab. After Madhab left, she began to think about the mental agony Mayank must be going through since losing his job. He could not tell her about it because that would have hurt her and at the same time he had to go on acting as if nothing was wrong.

He was a proud man. He did not want to come to his dear little wife with the tale of losing his job. In the university, he had been given hints by the head of the department of becoming first class first in the M.A. final exams - but with a condition attached. He would have to help him in realising his political ambition. He wanted to be the Vice Chancellor. But Mayank refused. He had no sympathy for the fundamentalists. He got a second class.



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All these thoughts made Nupur sick again. She felt light in the head. She did not know how to face Mayank now that she knew. Would she tell him? Would she reprimand him? The more she thought about it, the more confused she got. Finally, she decided not to ask him anything about his job. She must give him space. Let him select the right time to tell her everything. She felt better now. In the evening the doorbell rang. Nupur quickly fixed her hair with her fingers as she ran towards the door. Mayank was holding some food packets in his hand. Instead of taking the packets, Nupur wrapped her hands around his waist.


At night, after supper, Mayank said, 'Nupur , I want to tell you something. The motorbike is giving trouble, so I am thinking of selling it before it falls apart, and then buy a new one after New Year. What do you think?'
Nupur 's heart sank. Madhab was right! Mayank wanted to sell his bike as he needed the money before New Year! But, the bike was almost new, and he loved this particular model so much! She did not know what to say to Mayank.
After a while she said, 'Mayank, you are an intelligent person. You are a good man too. I have full trust in your judgement. So, do whatever you think is best.'
Mayank felt relieved.


Next morning Mayank left home at 9am with his bike. Before leaving home, he washed it with water and soap and then wiped the water off with a clean piece of cloth. Nupur could not hold back her tears as she watched him from inside the room. She could see the sad look on Mayank's face as he caressed the bike. All sorts of thoughts crowded her mind.
At around ten she made some phone calls and went out to do some shopping. She came back at around two and went for a shower. After her shower she felt much better though the sad face of Mayank kept haunting her. To get the depressing thought out of her mind, she began to hum a popular tune and began to prepare iftar.
At 5 pm Mayank came. He did not have the motorbike with him. He came near Nupur and told her very quietly, 'Nupur , I have sold the bike off. I got a call on my mobile at around 1 pm and found a ready customer. I got the price I asked for. I think it was a good decision as it would have broken down any day. What do you think?'
Nupur smiled and said, 'Darling, you matter to me most, not the bike. You have done what you needed to do. Don't feel guilty about it. Now go and take a shower. And just relax. I m going to make coffee 4 u

At the evening Mayank and Nupur sat down to enjoy a programme on the TV. A motorbike stopped outside. The doorbell rang. Mayank went to the door and opened it. Mayank's classmate and best friend Samrat came in. He had the key of a bike in his hand. He gave it to Nupur and said, 'Bhabi, here is your bike. Do you want to ride it now?'
'Oh, thank you so much, Samrat Bhai. I knew you would not fail me.' Nupur looked ecstatic.
Mayank looked at Nupur and Samrat, quite bewildered by their conversation. Nupur pulled him towards the door. Outside, Mayank's old motorbike, the one he had sold in the morning to an unknown customer, was parked.


Nupur planted a big kiss on Mayank's cheek and said, 'Mr. Mayank, here is your New Year gift from Nupur , your one and only wife. If you genuinely love her then you will not ask her any question but take her on a ride right now. She might answer questions at night.'
She called out to Samrat and told him to stay back for dinner.
Still dazed, Mayank took Nupur on a ride around town.
At night, after Samrat left, he asked her the inevitable question, 'What happened? Where did you get the money? Why did you do this?'


Nupur looked straight into Mayank's eyes and said, 'Darling, I know you do not have a job. I know you have to send money to your parents in the home town before New Year. I know you would want to by a dress for me before New Year. I know you are tense about it. I know it might take months before you get a suitable job. And I also know that the motorbike is something you loved next to me. So, I found some useless metals in my wardrobe, metals you call gold, that were lying there under some clothes, and some more were in the bank locker. There were some prize bonds I received as wedding gift two years back. I never cared to look at the numbers.

Those gold ornaments are out of fashion too. So, I called up Samrat Bhai and Madhab and cooked up this little conspiracy against you. Madhab talked to you over your mobile about a customer as he knew that you wanted to sell your bike. The customer was his son-in-law. Samrat Bhaia and I gave him the money. Madhab's son-in-law took it to Samrat Bhaia's house in the afternoon. See, the deal worked out perfectly. Now you have the money and I have the bike. If you want, I might even allow you to ride it occasionally.'
Mayank smiled like an adolescent boy caught at doing something forbidden. He pulled her closer to him and switched off the light.


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yayy.... commented first.....😃

loved all the aboves one shots... faria and tapoor... congrats and gr8 going!😃
do write more....😊
love ya both...
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reserve for killing u guys for not telling me even abt it
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Mayank Sharma................................................. The Superstar


Today is 22nd December. U all know na ke aaj meri payaari si dost oops sorry meri pyaarisi dushman Faria ki birthday hai. Main usse bohot bohot bohot naraz hu. Phir bhi Many many happy returns of the day faru begum (Faria).

Aaj faria ke zindegi me bohot badi din hai. Faria journalist hai. Or aaj usse sabse badi assignment mila hai. Superstar maayank sharma ki interview leni hai usse. Or ye kaam thik se hogaya na to usse promotion melegi. Faria Mayank sharma ke bangle ke samne khadi hai.

F : "oh God. Pls mera help karna. Ke main apni kaam thik tarah se karsaku. Or aaj mera janamdin bhi to hai. Agar mera kaam thik se huya to main samjhoongi ke ye tumhari taraf se meri bday gift hai. "

Mayank Sharma the superstar of Bollywood. He is a amazing actor. Usski koi bhi movie kabhi bhi flop nehi hota. Duniya var me har jagah usski fan hai. Khass karke ladkiya. India ke sare ladki usski diwani hai. Per ye superstar mayank sharma personal life me bohot hi sidha sadha hai. Shooting ke ilawaba jayada se jayada waqt wo apne family ke sath hi spend karta hai. Usske family me srif wo or usski maa. Or koi nehi. Shilpa sharma mayank ki maa mayank ko lekar bohot hi pareshan hai. O mayank ki shaadi karna chati hai. Haar din mayank ko lekar news paper me gossip jo capti hai. Mayank or priyanka chopra ki affair , mayank sharma Katrina kaif ke sath date karraha hai ya phir mayank or sonom kapoor ki shaadi. Ye sab news sunkar shilpa bohot hi disturb ho jate hai. Unhe pata hai ke ye sab rumor hai. Unhe apni bete per pura varosa hai. Phir bhi unhe accha nehi lagta.

Aaj mayank ki koi shooting nehi hai. Wo der tak soraha hai. Shipa usske kamre me aata hai.

S : Mayu uth na.

M : maa sone do na. aaj to shooting ne hai. Phir ? itne subah subah kiyu utha rahi ho?

S : shooting nehi hai to isska matlab ye nehi ke tu der tak sota rahe. Maine to socha tha ke aaj ka din tu mere satha spend karega. Hum dono bohot baate karenge. Tere sath baat karne ka to mouka hi nehi milta. Mujhe to lagta hai ke age jakar tujhe baat karne ke liye mujhe teri secretary se appointment leni padhegi. (sad voice)

M : Maa. keya baat hai. Aisi kiyu baat karrahi ho. Tum janti ho na tumse important mere liey or kuch bhi nehi hai. I love u soooooo much maa.

S : I love u 2 mayu (smiling). Ab jakar fresh hokar aa.

M : thik hai. Maa aaj lunch tum banaogi na. tumhare haath ka khaana khane ka bohot maan karraha hai.

At lunch time

M : ummmmmmmm. Maa tumhare haath me to jaado hai. Itne aacche palak paneer tum keise bana leti ho?

S : kuch din baad meri haath ka khana or accha nehi lagega.

M : or wo kiyu? (Curiously)

S : koi or ajayagi na khana banana ke liye.

M : maa tum phir shuru hogai? Tumhari o purani bimaari. Tumhe bahu chahiye.

S : kiyu? Bahu chahne ki umar nehi huyi hai meri? (angrily)

M : maa ye kisne keh diya ke jo chahoge wo mil hi jata hai?

S : Mayu?????????????

Tabhi Mayank ka phn bajne lagta hai. It's samrat.

M : hi sam? Keisa hai dude?

S : are mayank tu superstar keya bana. Dosto ko to bhool hi gaya? Aise change ho jata hai keya koi?

M : nehi yaar. Aisi koi baat nehi hai. Agr tu 1din meri jagah akar dekhega na to ye tana marna bhoojayega. Phir to tu mujhpar hi taras khayega. Itna kaam rehta hai ke keya bolu.

S : hum sab tujhe bohot miss karte hai.

M : Sam aaj main free hu. Chalna aaj koi plan banate hai. Sab dost milke ghumenge or masti karenge.

S : ye to acchi baat hai. Thik hai main arrange karta hu.

At evening

Mayank, samrat, uday, benji, adhiraaj, Rv , sameer, Roshan sare frnd milkar theater ate hai movie dekhne ke liey.

U : yaar ye sab log hume ghur ghur ke kiyu dekhrahe hai?

B : yaar ye sab hume nehi Mayank sharma the superstar ko dekhrahe hai.

S : ha uday. Tu bhool kiyu jata hai ke ab hum o purane collg frnd nehi. Hamare sath ek superstar bhi hai. To sab log to humne notice karenge hi na.

M : chodona tum sab. Chalo andar chalte hai.

Tabhi kuch ladkiyo ki chikne ki awaaz sunai deti hai.

OMG. Mayank sharma. I cant blv.

Sab turn karte hai or dekhte hai ke 5 ladkiyo ki ek group mayank ko dekhrahe hai. Ussme se 4 ladki mayank ke taraf run krke aate hai.

G 1: omg mayank aap? I cant blv it. Main to aapki bohot badi fan hu.

Mayank didn't say anything just smiling.

G 2 : yah. Main to aapki har movie 4/5 time dekhti hu.

G 3: autograph pls.

G 4 : pls take a photo with us.

Tabhi maaynk ne notice kiya ke 5 ladki me se 1 ladki durr hi khadi hai nahi ussne koi baat ki or nahi wo samne ayi. Wo durr kadhi huyi edhar dekhrahi hai. Usski chere pe ek pyaara sa smile hai. Wo white color ki churidaar pehna hai. Mayank itne sare sundor sundor heroine ke sath kaam karta hai. Phir bhi ussko aisa laga ke iss ladki me jo baat hai or kisime nehi. Wo sabse alag hai. Usski smile, usski chera.usski aakhe. Keya kuch likha hai usski akho me? So simple, so innocent.

G 1 : Mayank mai hu Isha.

M : hi. Per usski nazar uss ladki pe hi hai.

G 2 : mera naam hai sara. Or ye hai archana or mehek. (pointing G 3 or G 4)

Per mayank ko to white dresswali ladki ki naam janna hai.

M : wo , wo jo durr, mera matlab wo

I : mayank mere pass apka numbr hai maine aapko phn bhi kiya tha pr aapne pick nehi kiya.

M : actually main unknown no rcv nehi karta.

mayank phir se uss ladki ki naam janne ki kousish karta hai. Pr movie start ho jate hai or sam usse kichkar theater ki andar le jate hai. Per mayank movie pe concentrate nehi karpata. Usske aakho me to bus uss white dresswali ladki ki tassvir jhalak raha tha.

At Night

Maynk apne kamre me hai. Per usse neend nehi ahara hai. Ek ajeeb se bechaine ho raha hai. Tabhi usske cell pe phn ata hai.

M : Hello.

I : Hello mayank? Me isha.

M : hi isha.

I : aap keise hai?

M : I m fine. How r u?

I : fine. To aap keya karahe hai. Konsi film ki shooting chalraha hai?

M : isha keya main tumse ek baat pucho?

I : ha puchiye na . keya baat hai?

M: actually tumhare sath jo ladki thi. Mera matlab jo durr khadi thi shayad usse actor pasand nehi hai. Hai na?

I : durr khadi thi? Kon?

M : wo jo white dress me thi?

I : wo ? wo to nupur hai. Meri cousine. Actually yes. Usse film, actor, actress ye sab bilkul pansand nehi hai. Wo kehti hai ke ye sab banawati cheej me use koi interest nehi hai.

M : ohhhhhhhh (disappointed tone)

I : keya huya?

M : kuch nehi. Keya tum mujeh usski numbr de sakti ho?

I : sure. Kiyu nehi.

Isha mayank ko nupur ka number deti hai. Phir mayannk usse bye bolke phn rakhdeta hai. Kiyuki usse nupur se baat karna hai. Mayank nupur ko phn karta hai.

N : hello

M : omg. Usski voice kitni acchi hai. Per main baat keya karu?

N : hello kon bolraha hai?

M : hello . nupur?

N : ha bolrahi hu. Pr aap kon?

M : wo main ? main ? main mayank bolraha hu.

N : Mayank???????????????????????????

M : yah.

N : per aapko mera numbr kaha se mila.

M : Isha ne diya.

N : ji kahiye? ( not a interesting tone)

M : keya?? Keya kahu?

N : nehi aapne mujhe phn kiya to jaroor koi baat hogi na.

M : nehi, ha , nehi mera matlab isha ne mujhe bataya ke aap actor like nehi karti.

N : yes. Srif actor hi kiyu main film bhi nehi dekhti. Wo to aaj frnds ne force kiya issilye unke sath gayi thi.

M : per kiyu?

N : actually mujhe fake cheejo me koi interest nehi hai.

M : ha main janta hu ke ye sab fake hai pr hum sab bohot mehnat karte hai isske liey. Or agr viewers ko pasand hi na aye to iss mehnaat kiss kaam ka.

N : kon kehta hai ke pasand nehi hai. Sab to pasand karte hai na. meri pasand na pasand se kisi ko keya franq padta hai.

Issi tarah donoki baat shuru hoti hai. Or phir dosti bhi hoti hai. Actually maaynk hi jayada aggressive hai dosti ke liye. Nupur ke taraf se jayada interest nehi hai.ye baat mayank ko bohot ajeeb lagta hai. Jaha India ke sare ladki usspe fida hai waha nupur usse vhao thak nehi deti. Per maaynk ko hamesha srif nupur ki hi yaad ata hai. Nupur ke bare me soch na accha lagta hai. Usse baat karna accha lagta hai. Keya ye pyaar hai? Mayank confused hai. Ekdin shooting ke bech me mayank nupur ko phn karta hai. Pr nupur ka phn switched off hai.

M : ye nupur ka phn switched off kiyu hai. Aisa to kabhi nehi huya.

Mayank 1 hour baad phir se try karta hai. Nupur ka phn phir se switched off ata hai. Mayank bohot tensed ho jata hai. Keya huya hoga. Nupur thik to hogi na. wo Isha ko phn karta hai.

I : hello maaynk? Omg aap?

M : ha Isha. Wo nupur ka phn switched off hai. Keya tumhe pata hai wo kaha hai?

I : aako nehi pata? Aaj to nupur ko dekhne ladke wale aye hai. Issiley wo busy hogi.

M : keya ??????????????????????????????

Mayank bohot shocked hota hai.

M : Nupur shaadi karrahi hai. Ye keise ho sakta hai. Per kiyu nehi. Wo teri gf thodi na hai. Phir bhi mujhe kuch bataya bhi nehi.

Mayank bohot upset hai. Raat ko wo nupur ko phn karta hai.

M : nupur tum shaadi karrahi ho?

N : ha kiyu?

M : tum . tumne mujhe kuch bataya bhi nehi.

N : issme batane ki keya baat hai? Meri mom dad ne fixed kiya hai.

M : mom dad ne? keya tum usse nehi janti?

N : mere mom dad jante hai na usse.

M : nupur keya tum pagal hogai ho? Tum ek aisi insaan se shaadi karne jarahi ho. Jisse tum janti tak nehi.

N : Mayank. Ye aapki film nehi hai. Asli zindegi me to asia he hota hai. Jisse humare parents humare liey select karte hai hum ussise shadi karte hai. (rudely)

M : phir bhi?

N : pls mayank mujhe iss bare me koi baat nehi karni hai. Phir nupur line cut kardeti hai.

M : per mujhe tumse baat karni hai. Har haal me.

Next day. Nupur collg ke gate me khadi hai. Achanak ek bada sa car ata hai usske samne. Driving seat pe mayank baitha hai.

M : nupur baitho.

N : per mayank?

M : nupur time waste maat karo. Log ekattha hojayenge.

Nupur car pe baithti hai.

N : hum kaha jarahe hai?

M : chup chap baithi raho.

Car beach pe aakar rukhti hai. Dono hi bahar nikal te hai.

N : hum yaha kiyu aye?

M : ab bolo? Hum filmstar bohot bure hai na? pr tum to humse bhi age ho. Ek aisi insaan se shaadi karne jarahi ho jisse tum janti bhi nehi.

N : mujeh iss bareme koi baat nehi karna hai. Maine kaha na.

M : mujhe to karni hai.

N : I m not interested.

Nupur jaane lagti hai. Per mayank piche se usske hath pakadh leta hai. Aisie me nupur ke haath se usska bag girjata hai. Or sari cheej sand me bikhar jata hai. Bikhra huya sari cheeje dekhkar mayank ki aakhe khuli ki khuli rehjati hai. Kiyuki ye sab cheej or kuch nehi mayank ki photo, usski bareme chapa article ki paper cutting, magazine ki pages. Har cheej me srif mayank hi mayank hai.

M : nupur???????? (surprisingly)

Nupur sand me baithjati hai. Or apne hathose apne muh ko cover karke rone lagti hai.

M : nupur ye keya hai?

N : keya sunna chahte hai aap? Keya janna chahte hai? Ha main aapse pyaar karti hu. Bohot pyaar karti hu. Aajse nehi jiss din tv pe apko pehli baar dekha tabse. Jiss din aapke bare me news padha tabse. Jiss din pehli baar aapka interview dekha tabse. Ab to khud bhi bhool chuki hu main ke kabse aapse pyaar kiya. Bus aapse aap hi se pyaar kiya. Per main? Main kon hu? Nupur bhushan.ek sadharon ladki. Meri keya oukat hai ke main mayank sharma the superstar se pyaar karu? Aapki life me to bohot sari ladki hai. Deepika, sonam, priyaanka, Katrina, unke samne main keya hu? Kuch bhi nehi. Phir kiyu jab main unlogo ke sath aapko dekhti hu to mera dil rone lagta hai? Kiyu? Aap to mujhse pyaar nehi karte na? aap log apne filmo me jhoote kahaniya banake hume sapne dekhate hai or hum jaise bewkoof ussi sapne ko such mankar usski piche bhagne lagte hai. Some where some one is made 4 u. per asli zindegi me to aisa nehi hota na? main chahu bhi to mayank sharma ko to nehi pa sakti. Pr kiyu dekhate hai hume ye sapna? Kiyu bante hai hamare sapno ka raajkumar? (she is crying badly)

M : nupur pls.

N : maine aapko ignore karne ki bohot kousish ki. Per nehi. Jiss ke bare me din raat sohc ti hu usse ignore karna assan nehi hai. Phir main socha ke sab bhool jaoongi. Sapna or haqiqat me bohot faraq hota hai. Ye to film nehi

Mayank usske paas jakar usske hoto pr apni ungli rakhke usse chup kara deta hai.

M : shhhhhhhhhhhhh. Kitna boti ho tum. meri baat suno. Jab se tum meri zindegi me aayi ho meri zindegi ulat phulat hogayi hai. Or I love this ulti phulti duniya. Keya iss ulti phulti zindegi me tum meri humsafar banogi?(whispering)

N : Mayank????????????????????

M : I love u nupur.

Phri wo nupur ko apne bahome leleta hai. Nupur bhi usse hug karti hai.

N : I love u 2.

Flashback end

M : faria? To ye hai meri kahani.

F : Mayank sharma the superstar ki kahani. (smilingly)

N : hamare bacchose milo. Dono twins hai. Arav or arnava.

F : hmmmmmm. Pr aapko dekhkar lagta hai ke?

N : yes. I m expecting again. (blushing)

M : wo keya hai na faria. Mujhe apna ek cricket team banana hai. Jiska main captain banu or nupur vice captain.

N : Mayank !!!!!!!!!!!!

F : bohot accha laga aap logo se baat karke. Sab Mayank sharma the superstar ko jaante hai. Per inke piche jo sadharan mayank sharma hai usse koi nehi janta. I wish ke aap log hamesha aisi hi khush rahe.

Faria in auto.

F : Thank u so much Allah. Apne mujhe itni acchi bday gift di hai.

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Hey guys I m writing another os. It is divided it to 3/4 parts. It is a real life story. Ye mayur se jayda nupur ki story hai. Ek aisi ladki ki kahani jo apne sapno ko such mankar sapno me hi jee ti thi. Pr keya usska sapna pura huya? Ye nupur ki kahani hai. Usski sapno ki or sapne tootne ki kahani. Usski pyaar ki or pyaar me vishwas ghat ki kahani.

Adi(Adi-gupta), mahi(maheklovesmayur) & nidzy(mayurarti)

This os is specially 4 u guys


Beete lamhe hume jab bhi yaad aate hai

It is 2010 1st January. 12 am. Nupur is at the terrace. She looked at the sky blankly. She didn't feel anything. No sorrow not pain, no laugh not tears. She looked the sky just like a dumb. Suddenly she felt tears rolled down on her cheek.

N : ek or naya saal agaya. Sab kuch to chalraha hai. Phir meri zindegi kiyu ruki huyi hai. Kiyu main abhi taak 2005 me hi jee rahi hu? Kiyu agae nehi jaa parahi hu? Kiyu me apne past se nikal nehi parahi hu? Kiyu? (She is crying badly)

Flashback

Nupur is a very bubbly girl. She has her father, mother and a little bro in her family. Her father loves her very much. She is her father's world. Her father called her Tintina. Nupur also loved her father so much. Nupur does everything what her father says. And her mom is her best frnd. Nupur doesn't hide anything from her mother.

When nupur was 16 years old one day she dreamt a boy and she thought that is the boy who was made 4 her and she has to wait 4 him. As the day passes she started to blv the dream madly. She made a goal 4 her life that she has to wait 4 him. But she knows her father doesn't like love and affair in life. When she was 18 once her father called her and told that

NP: beta main tumse bohot pyaar karti hu. Tum srif meri beti hi nehi ho meri frnd bhi ho. Tumhari har galti main maaf karsakta hu pr agar tumne kuch aisa viasa kiya to main tumhe kabhi maaf nehi karoongi.

N: waisa vaisa ka keya matlab huya papa?

NM: are tere papa ka ishara pyaar ki taraf hai.

NP: ha beta. Tum ab badi hogai ho. Issiley tumse kehraha hu. Agar kisidin tumne mujhese ye kaha ke tum kisi ladke se pyaar karti ho to main seh nehi paoonga.

NM: per agar ladka accha huya to pyaar karne me keya burai hai?

NP: nehi (shouted) accha ladka apne beti ke liye main khudh dhoond sakta hu. Usse pyaar karne ki keya jaroorat hai.

N: papa????????????

NP: ha beta. Tum mujhse wada karo ke tum aisa kuch nehi karoogi. Main tumhare liye raj kumar dhoond ke laoonga. Pls beta wada karo.

N: thik hai papa. Main wada karti hu. Jaisa aap chahte hai main waisa hi karoongi.

Than she ran to her room and started crying.

N: maine apne zindegi me srif ek hi sapna dekha jo sapna mere liey meri zindegi se bhi badhkar hai. Keya wo sapna khabhi pura nehi hoga? Nehi main papa ko dukh nehi pocha sakti. She is crying badly.

Then she wiped her tears and thinking.

N: main aisa kiyu sochrahi hu. Aisa bhi to ho sakta hai na ke papa mere liye jise choonenge wohi mere sapno ka rajkumar ho. Mujhe apne papa pe pura varosa hai. Wo jo bhi karenge mere liye accha hi hoga.

Time goes frequently and nupur keeps her dreams away from her. Now she is 21. She is completed her final graduation exam and waiting 4 result.

It is 20th june 2005. nupur watches tv lying on her bed. Then her cell rings. It was shila. Nupur's best frnd.

S: nups . keya karrahi hai.

N: kuch nehi. Tu keisi hai?

S: thik hu pr ek good news hai.

N: good news? Keya?

S: monika ki shaadi hai 27th june ko.

N: keya??????? Succhi me?

S: ha. Tu pls jaldi ajana . or mujhe kaam me help karna.

N: Thik hai.

Monika is shila's aunty by relation. As they are same in age they share their all personal life with one another like frnds.

It is 27th june 2005. Today is Monika's wedding. Nupur wearing a red saree. She looks so beautiful. Nupur reached the wedding place by 12 pm. When she was just to get off from the car she saw a boy standing next to the car. He is wearing a check shirt. He looks so cute. They both looked at each other. They don't know why but they both felt for each other. They shared an eye lock. Then shila came and introduced the boy to nupur.

S: nupur idahar aa. Met my frnd adhiraj.

N: Hi (hesitatingly)

A: hello. How r u?

N: fine and u?

A: nice.

Then shila's husband arif came and take her to wedding reception. Now nupur and adhiraj got some time 4 one another as they are alone. Though at the first time they hesitated but now they are talking freely. Everyone was busy 4 the wedding other then nupur and adhiraj and they were busy with them only. Both of them were enjoying their company and they were unaware of time. When it is evening the marriage was over. Now it is time to go home. Nupur and adhiraj said goodbye to each other but it seems by their expression that they lost some precious thing. No it was not love at first at sight but they felt something which is not usual. Even they didn't take each other cell number nor expressed any wish to meet later.

It is 2005 28th june.1 am. Nupur is at her bed. She is wondering off adhiraj. Suddenly nupur reminds the promise that she has given to her father. She thought.

N: nehi main adhiraj ki bare me nehi sochoongi. Mujhe apni life me koi problem nehi chaihiye. Or adhiraj koun hai? Ek hi baar to mila hu main usse. Wo to shayad ab tak mujhe bhool bhi gaya hai. To main kiyu sochu usske bare me? Mujhe kuhc nehi sochna.

It is 29th june 2005. nupur's cell rings. It was shila.

N: hi

S: nups. Jaldi mere ghar aa ja. Koi tujhe bohot miss karraha hai.

N: keya ? koun?

S: it's a surprise dear. Jaldi aana. Then she cut the phn.

N: (thinking) koun hai? Shila kis ke bare me baat karraha tha? Kahi adhiraj to nehi. Nehi adhiraj keise ho sakta hai. Shyad Arif (shila's husband) hoga. Wo hi mujhe miss karraha hai. Akher unki saali jo hu.

When nupur reached the shila's home, she was shocked to see adhiraj sitting at their drawing room. Adhiraj smiled watching nupur.

N: aap????????????

S: wo keya hai na. raj tujhe miss karraha tha.

N: mujheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (shoked)

S: I m kidding. Actually main or adhiraj ek sath university se aye hai. Adhiraj ne mujhe ghar drop kiya. To maine usse andar ane ke liye kaha to ussne kaha ke wo ek shart pe andar ayega agar main tujhe phn krake ane ke liye kahu to. Issiley maine tujhe phn kiya.

A: keisi ho nupur?

N: thik hu. Aap keise hai?

A: main bhi thik hu.

That day they took their cell number.

At night

Nupur was lying on her bed. Suddenly her phn rang. It was an unknown number. She picked it up.

N: hello?

A: hello? Nupur?

N: ha bolrahi hu. Koun?

A: main adhiraj.

N: Adhiraj (shocked). Her heart beating first.

A: Maine tumhe disturb to nehi kiya?

N: nehi aisi koi baat nehi.

A: ek baat pucho nupur? Keya tumhara koi boyfrnd hai?

N: nehi or aap ka?

A: nehi. I don't blv in love.

N: oh.

Then they talk whole night. Or shuru huya baato ka silsila. All day and all night dono srif ek dussre se hi baat karta rehta hai. After one month they become good frnds or something more than that. But they didn't confess the matter to each.

29th August 2005. 8.30 pm. They met at shila's place. When they were coming out of the house nupur slipped at the stair steps. Adhiraj holds her by her waist and they were in an eye lock situation for timeless moment. Adhiraj looked into her eyes passionately. They felt shiver passing down their spine. Adhiraj slowly moves his lips closer to nupur. Now a few inches gap between their lips. Suddenly they comeback in to their sense.

N: ye mujhe keya horaha hai? Keya hai ye? Kahi mujhe adiraaj se pyaar''''''.? Nehi ye keise ho sakta hai. Mere life me pyaar ki koi jagah nehi hai. Maine papa se promise kiya hai. Or adhiraj to mujhse pyaar nehi karta na. wo to pyaar me vishwas hi nehi karta. Mujhe apne aap ko samahlna hoga. Apne fellings par control karna hoga. Main aaj se adhiraj se baat nehi karoongi. Uss se nehi miloongi. Mujhe apni life me koi complication nehi chahiye. Ha ye thik hoga. Main adhiraj se dur rahoongi. Suddenly her phn rings. It's adhiraj.

N: hello?

A: nupur??????????

N: hmmmmmm.

A: wo nupur? Wo keya hai. Wo . mera matlab hai jo kuch bhi huya usske liey I m sorry.

N: hmmm. nehi. Wo Aap kiyu.

A: nupur ek baat kahu?

N: jiiiiiiiiiiiiii?

A: mujhe lagta hai hum dono ko apni ye frndship todh deni chahiye. Tum samajh rahi ho na main keya kehna charahi hu?

N: ha. (Trying to avoid crying)

A: hum dono hi acchi tarah se jante hai apne felling ke bare me. Jante hai ke hum ek dussre ke bare me keya mehsoos karte hai. To mujhe lagta hai iss feeling ko yehi rok deni chaihiye. Tum samajh gayi na?

N: ha aap thik kehrahe hai.

A: to thik hai nahi hum aaj se ek dusre se baat karenge or nahi ek dusre se milne ki koushish karenge.

N: thik hai. (Crying)

A: nupur tum bohot acchi ho. Jaisi ho hamesha aisi hi rehna. Kabhi badal na maat.

N: she can't say anything just crying.

After that day they didn't talk to each other for a week. But they missed each other like hell. Nupur felt her life was stopped.

It is 6th September 2005. 2.27 am. Nupur lying on her bed but she is not sleeping. She is thinking about raaj. Then her cell rings. Its adhiraj. She rcvs the phn with a beating heart.

N: hello?

A: keya karrahi ho nupur?

N: bus kuch nehi.

A: soyi nehi abhi tak.

N: abhi jo jaoongi.

A: thik hai so jao. Gud night

N: rajjjjjjjjjjjjjjj. Keya baat hai ? apne phn kiyu kiya?

A: kuch nehi. Tum so jao.

N: raj aap to mujhse ye kehte the ke baat khatam nehi karpati. Per ab to app bhi????????

A: nupur maine apni life ke bare me kabhi aisa socha nehi hai.

N: keya nehi socha? Keya huya hai raj?

A: nupur'''.. I '''..I''' I LOVE U

N: ''''''''''''

A: Maine kabhi nehi socha ye sab pyaar vayaar ke bare me. Mujhe to pyaar me vishwas hi nehi tha. Pata nehi kab tum meri zindegi me ayi or main badal gaya. Pata nehi kab main tumse pyaar karne laga. Maine apne iss felling ko chupane ki bohot koushish ki. Per ego se jayada strong mera pyaar hai. Or apne pyaar ke age main hargaya.

N: ''''''''''. Jut crying.

A: kuch kahoogi nehi nupur?

N: 1 min. bus 1 min.

Nupur got up from the bed and switched on all the lights of her room and her balcony. She felt crazy and her joy knows no bound.

N: hello raj? Aap hai na?

A: Tum kaha gayi thi nupur?

N: aaj main itni khush hu. Itni khush hu. Ke meri zindegi khushiyo se roushan hogayi. Issilye maine apne kamre ki sari lights on kardi. Aaj kahi bhi andhera nehi hona chahiye. Har jagah srif roshni hi roshni hogi. Meri zindegi ki tarah.

A: Nupur???????

N: I love u 22222222 Raj. I love u

They both hold on their mobile for an hour but in the time they didn't say a single word. One hour later.

A: ab so jao nupur bye.

N: Bye.

After finishing their conversation nupur got on her bed. She was rolling on her bed and could not sleep. When it was 5 am she rcved a message in her cell. Its from Adhiraaj.

I Love U Shona.

Nupur understood that Adhiraj's condition is same as her. He also could not sleep. Nupur sends back a sms to him.

I Love u 2 Raj.


That's all 4 2day. This story is very close to my heart. pls guys do read and comment on it. ur comment is very precious to me



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Beete lamhe hume jab bhi yaad aate hai (part - 2)


here the 2nd part of beete lamhe. pls do read and comment on it. ur comment means a lot to me.

adi, mahi and nidz here the 2nd part.



6th September 2005. 5 pm.

Nupur was talking to her mother. Then her cell rang it was shila.

N: hello?

S: nups raj ko keya huya hai?

N: kiyu? Shocked

S: wo bohot ajeeb sa behave karraha hai.

N: mujhe, mujhe pata nehi.

S: thik hai. Tu sham ko ghar aaja. Milke baat karenge. Main abhi university me hu.

N: ok

It's 7 o clocks. Nupur and adhiraj seating on shila's drawing room. Both are felt awkward and didn't say a single word. Then nupur broke the silence.

N: ek baat kahu raj?

A: hmmmmmmmmm

N: kaal raat ko apne jo kuch bhi kaha. Waisa to nehi hai ke apne josh me aakar wo keh dia. Agar aisa hai to aap mujhe kahiye.main sab kuch bhoolne ke liye tyaar hu. (Nehi main aapko nehi bhool sakti)

A: Tumhe keya lagta hai? Looked straight into her eyes. They both looked at each other.

N: spread her hand to him. To phir mera ek hath chuyo!!!!

Adhiraj hold her hand. Tears come down from her eyes. Then shila entered.

S: ohoooooo. To tum dono ke bech romantic scene chalraha hai.

A: dekho shila ab nupur ko tease maat karo. Now she is my girlfrnd.

N: nupur looked at adhiraj. Couldn't say anything but blushing.

N: (herself). I love u raj. I love u.

Nupur started to love raj madly as day r passing. It was 23rd January 2006.-2 Am. They got rude with one another over phn. Nupur switched off her phn for the whole day. It is 8 am. Nupur lying on her bed. Then the door bell rings. She opened the door. It was shila. Shila was so angry.

S: nups tu samajhti keya hai apne aap ko? Sara din tune apne phn switched off karke rakkha hai. Pata hai raj per keya guzar rahi hai. Bechara sara din tension me tha. Tere ghar to wo nehi aasakta tha. Issiley mere gahr aya or mujhe yaha lekar aya.

N: raj tujhe lekar aya? Wo kaha hai?

S: wo bahar hai. Ghar keise ayega wo. Aunty uncle hai na.

N: main abhi ayi.

Then nupur told her mother and came out with shila.

At shila's place

Adhiraj was standing at the door and he was so angry

A: nupur aaj ke baad tumhare sath mera koi rishta nehi hai. Tumne aaj jo kiya na. tumne ek baar bhi ye nehi socha ke mujhpar keya betegi. Tumhe pata hai sara din main kitni tension me tha. Tumhara phn switched off tha. Ghar per try kiya to phn uncle uthate hai. Main to pagal hogaya tha ye sochkar ke tum thik to ho na. bus nupur bus ab aisa kuch nehi hoga. Aaj ke baad tum mera shakal tak nehi dekhogi.

Nupur didn't say anything but staring at adhiraj. Adhiraj was angry and he was say anything. Then nupur came ahead to adhiraj and hugged him tightly. She wanted to stay like this forever. .

N: I m sorry raj. I m sorry. Main aisa phir kabhi nehi karoongi. Per tum meri zindegi ho raj. Mujhse dur jane ki baat kabhi maat karna. Main jee nehi paoongi.

A: To tum samajhti kiyu nehi ho? Tum bhi to meri zindegi ho.tumhe pata hai aaj mera keya haal hogaya tha? He hugged her back.

N: I m sorry raaj. I love u.

A: I love u 2 shona.

Then adhiraj cupped her face in his tender hands. Adhiraj slowly moves his lips closer to nupur and placed his lips on nupur's. They kissed sweetly and tenderly for full 5 minutes before they separated. It was their first kiss.

Suddenly shila enters the room.

S: aheem, aheeem. Tum dono ka pyaar sayaar khatam hogaya hai to keya main andar aasakta hu?

Quickly they left each other.

N: aaaaaaaaa . aaaaana shila. (Hesitantly)

A: haa. Andar aao shila. Ye tumhara hi ghar hai.

S: thanks. Mujhe to pata hi nehi tha ke ye mera ghar hai. Ab ye sab chodo age ka keya socha hai ye batao?

A: age ka keya soch na?????????

S: shadi ke bare me nehi sochna keya?

A: wo to jab hamare study complete hojayegi or main jab job karne lagoonga tab.

S: problem nahi study hai or nahi tumhari job. Problem kuch or hai raj.

A: kuch or? Keya?

S: Tumhe uncle ke bare me nehi pata keya? Agar uncle ko ye pata chalgaya ke nups kisise pyaar karti hai to cyclone ajayega.

N: mujhe bhi issi baat ka darr lagarehta hai.

A: pls darro mat love. Uncle ko main mana loonga.

N: Raj tum mere papa ko nehi jaante. Wo kabhi nehi manenge agar unhe ye pata chala ke hum ek dussre se pyaar karte hai.

S: mere paas ek idea hai.

A & N : keya ?

S: jab tumlogo ki study complete hojayegi tab hum uncle ko ye kahenge ke raj meri dost hai or ussne mere ghar pe nups ko dekha or pasand kiya. Phir ussne mere pass shadi ka proposal leke aya. Main kahoongi ke iss baat ke bare me nups ko bilkul pata nehi. Iss love marriage ko arrange marriage look dena hoga. Mujhe match maker banna hoga or keya.

N: ha ye accha idea hai. Per phir bhi papa na mane to?

A: (holding her hand). Love hume koi alag nehi karsakta. Koi nehi. Pls cheer up. Or agar tumhe itna hi darr lagraha hai to chalo hum abhi shaadi karlete hai.

N: abhi?? ( shoked)

A: ha abhi. (Smilingly)

S: yeha. Not a bad idea. Dono apna Apna hath do.

Shila moves her hand ahead. Raj and nupur keeps their hand on shila's hand.

S: ab kaho. Main adhiraj bakhshi ALLAH ka naam lekar 5 lack 1 rupee mohrana per Nupur Rehmaan ko apna jeevan sathi manta hu. Keya tumhe kabool hai? Bolo?

A: maine kabool kiya.

S: nups ab tu bol. Keya tujhe kabool hai

N: shut her eyes. Maine kabool kiya.

A: wow. Bangaye hum pati patni. Nups aaj se tum mrs. Nupur adhiraj bakhsi ho.

N: ek baat kahu raj. Main tumse bohot pyaar karti hu. Tum meri zindegi ho lekin Main tumse jitna pyaar karti hu uss se kahi jayada vishwas karti hu tumpar. Pls mera ye vishwas kabhi maat todna warna main bhi tut jaoongi.

A: or main tumhe kabhi tootne nehi doonga. Hi hugged her tightly.

S: are bandh karo apna ye romance yeha main bhi hu.

Then adhiraj leaved nupur and started talking to shila. But nups staring at him.

N: (herself). ALLAH tumne mujhe itne sare khushia di ke main soch bhi nehi parahi hu ke tumhara shukriya keise ada karu. Ab pls mujse ye khushiya kabhi chin maat lena warna main kabhi jee nehi paoongi. She was staring at adhiraj. And background music starts.

Tu hi to jannat meri, tu hi mera junoon

Tu hi to mannat meri, tu hi ruh ka sukoon

Tu hi aakhiyon ki thandak, tu hi dil ki hai dastak

Aur kuch na janu main, bus itna hi jaanu

Tujh me rab dekhta hai, yaara main keya kaaru

Sajde saar jhukta hai, yaara main keya kaaru

Tujh me rab dekhta hai, yaara main keya kaaru

23rd August 2006. 6.30 am.

Raj has an interview as a co-ordination officer at slandered chartered Bank so nupur is fasting today for the wellbeing of raj. Bcoz their future depend on this job as well as this interview. It already evening and time to break her fast but still she didn't break her fasting as she didn't rcv any news of raj. And she is eagerly waiting 4 it. Then raj called her.

N: raj !!! keya baat hai? Keya huya?

A: wo nupur. Wo ( disappointed)

N: keya baat hai raj? Tumhari interview to thik tha na? (Scared). Pls raj mujhe batao.

A: wo . mujhe job milgayi love.

N: suchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. She felt that she is on cloud 9.

A: yes. Shona ab hamare tension ke din khatam hogay. Or mujhe pata hai ke tumne fast rakkha hai or abhi tak tumne kuch khaya nehi. Jao abhi jao or khana khao. Phir mujhe phn karke ensure karo ke tumne khana khaya.

N: raj'''' I love u.

A: I love u 2 shona.

1st September. 2006. 2 am.

It's raining cats and dogs. Nupur is at her room. Then adhiraj called her.

N: hello raj.

A: love jaldi se apne balcony pe ajao.

N: keya ? per kiyu?

A: kuch maat pucho. bus ajao.

Then nupur went to her balcony and saw raj is standing outside of her house in that heavy rain. Nupur was shocked

N: raj tum yaha?

A: ha wo tumhe barish me bhighna bohot pasand hai na to maine kaha ke chalo aaj sath sath bhigte hai.

N: sath sath?

A: or nehi to keya. Sath sath to shaadi se pehle bhigh nehi sakte. Ghar me Aunty uncle hai. Issiley tum apne balcony pe hogi or main raste me. Atleast tumhe dekh to paoonga.

N: raaj tum bhi na.

A: nupur mujhe ye sab rain wagaira bilkul pasand nehi tha. Per ab pasand hai. Kiyuki tumhe jo barish itni pasand hai. Or jo cheej tumhe pasand hai wo mujhe bhi pasand hai.

N: (herself) ALLAH tumne mujhe sari zindegi ki khushiya in 1 saalo me de di. Ab main maar bhi jao to koi gaam nehi. Main complete hu. Raj ne mujhe or mere zindegi ko complete kiya. Tumse hazaro shukriya. Raj ko meri zindegi me vejne ke liye.

6th September 2006. 12 am.

Adhiraj called nupur.

N: hello

A: happy anniversary shona.

N: Tumhe yaad hai????????

A: to tumhe keya laga? Main hamara pehla anniversary bhool jaoonga?

N: lekin tum to apna bday bhi bhool jate ho. Phir tumhe ye keise yaad hai?

A: tumse joori haar baat mujhe yaad rehta hai love.

N: per tum ek baat bhoolgayi ke tumne mujhe raat ko 2.27 min pe propose kiya tha. Or abhi to 12 baaje hai.

A: thik hai. Pr mujhe bohot neend araha hai or kaal office bhi jana hai issiley maine socha ke tumhe abhi wish karlu.

N: I m just kidding. Happy anniversary to u.

A: I love u. good night then her cut the phn.

Nupur is at her bed but she couldn't sleep. At 2.27 am her phn rang out. It was adhiraj. Nupur was shocked.

N: raj? Tum to sogaye the na?

A: ha.

N: to phir itne raat ko phn keise kiya.

A: wo maine alarm de ke rakkha tha.

N: kiyu?

A: wo main tumhe 2.27 baaje phir se propose karna chata tha.

Nupur was sooooooooo happy.

A: I love u shona. But agle saal se aisa nehi hoga. Mera matlab agle saal se tumhe phn pe wish nehi karoongi.

N: kiyu?

A: kiyuki agle saal tum meri bedroom me meri bed pr ooops sorry tum hamare bedroom me hamare bed per meri sath hogi. Or main tumhe raat ko 2.27 baaje jagakar tumhe kiss karke tumhe wish karoonga.

N: nupur felt shy and couldn't say anything.

A: love tumhe ladki bohot pasand hai na?

N: ha mujhe to ladki hi chahiye. Maine to naam bhi soch liya hai. Hamari beti ka naam hoga kutum.

A: kutum? Ye keisa naam hai?

N: dekho raj. Meri beti ki naam ko lekar kuch aisa vaisa maat kehna.

A: are wo meri bhi to beti hai na. thik hai hamari beti hi hogi or usska naam hum kutum rakhenge.

N: srif ek beti?

A: ooooooooooooooooooooh. Achaaaaaaaaaaa. Tumhe or bhi baache chahiye keya?

N: nehi to keya? Ek beta bhi chahiye na.

A: are tum chinta maat karo. Main hoo na. Agar tum chaho to main tumhe football team banake doonga.

N: raj tum bhi na. (Blushing)

A: I love u shona.

N: I love u 2.

Ye hai 2006 ki September ki baat. Wo dono 2007 ki may tak bohot khush the. Phir keya huya wo hum janeng agle part me.


Part 3 --------- pg 6
Edited by Tapoor - 15 years ago

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