weekend with rahul-muskaan 38!!

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428279

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

amazing parts Imane and Apoorva!!

loved them, both were really great continuations!!

I loveee the way the story's going!!

~Sabz

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APPY

@IshqDewaani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

M- Actuaaly late ho gaya jai..soo maa thoda tension me thi....huj naye hai na Delhi me...aur Ahmedabad me toh itni late ..u know..its bit conservative.....

R- Main ghar drop kar du???

M- Nahi its ok..main chali jaungi....

Ar- NAhi...Muskaan..delhi is also not so safe for girls....Plzz Rahul will drop u home....

M- Ok....

RM went.......Bt ridzi frowned....

Armaan looks at Ridzi....

Ar- Hey jaan..kya hua???

Ri- Armaaan woh gujrati hai....

Ar- Toh???

Ri- Armaan toh>??? WOh meri bhabhi kaise ban sakti hai????

Ar- OMG!!!! Ridhimaa tum bhi itna conservative soch sakti ho maine kabhi nahi socha tha??? Hum 21st century me rehte hai & u beleive in all this rubbish?????

Rdzi looked at Armaan her eyes filled with tears....

Ri- Ar.mmaann main toh sirf....

Armaan looks at her & sighs.....

Ar- jaan....i am sorry..mera irada tumhe hurt karne ka nahi tha...sachi.....

Ri- PAr tum..

Ar(keeps his finger on her lips)- Shsss...Ridzi..baby aaj humari sagai hai..ok..plzz baaki sab bhul jao....Aur tumse kisne keh diya ki RAhul Muskaan ki shaadi hone wali hai ??? Woh dono ek dusre se kitne alaag hai...& opposites dont attract in real life..ok..u know that....

Ri- RAhul ne pehli baar koi ladki notice ki hai...

Ar- I know..bt it will just turn out be an attraction..kyunki jab difference of opnion hoga tab tum dekhna....

Ri- Matlab>>>???

Ar(smiles remebering the morning incident)- Muskaan apne dil se sochti hai & u knw Rahul he think Heart doesnt have the capacity to think....it shud just do its job of pumping blood....

Ridzi laughs....He could imagine Rahul saying this dialouge..it was sooo RAhul....

RM:

Rahul went & sat in his car.....Muskaan was expecting him to open the door for her Bt our Rahul wasnt so much of that...it is not that he wasnt gentlman types...bt he belived that women shud be given equal respect....& when u want equal respect then why this chivilary????

Muskaan saw him...she was the one who believed in fairy tales...more realistic bt MEN shud be chivilarious was the mosyt important quality of her prince cahrming....

R- Kya hua???

M- Nahi..kuch nahi...

R- Baitho na...tumhe late ho raha hai na???

M- Ya....

RM in car:

silence for few minutes.....RAhul wasnt greta in starting informal conversation that too with aGIRL....???....

R- Toh kahan rehti ho tum???

M(smiles)- RAhul aapne mujhe subhe bhi toh mere ghar chodda tha na????

R- O ya ofcousre...main jaanta hu na....

M- Rahul....ek baat kahu....

R- Yess plzz...

M- U have got a wonderful family....

R- U like them???

M- Ofcourse i do...main kabhi bade parivaar me rahi nahi hu....It was always me n my mom...kyunki pappa toh hamesha buisness tours ke wajahse bahar rehte the....

R- Actually ia m very close to my mom...n ridzi also....

M- Hm...if u dont mind...kya main window open kar sakti hu...AC me mujhe ghutansi hoti hai.....

R- Really???? Ok..i dont ,ind...

Muskaan opened the window...& breeze flowed alll over her face making her hair flow ....Rahul looked at her...& simply kept staring......u aware of all the otrher things......

Muskan loked at RAhul....she felt uncomfortable by his strong gaze on her..bt somewhere she liked it..

RM were lost in looking at each other....& rahul bumped the car into the tree & BUMP>>>>>>>>>>>>>>#########$^^^***********^%$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$#@@@@@@@@@@

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428279

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

lovely part, Apoorva!! i loved how you made Rids so shocked and her reaction went great with the theme!! and the opposite traits you portrayed of RM were done really well!! loved the whole car convo scene, and the eyelock..awww!! omg, the ending of your part!! whoa!!

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428279

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Saba your continuing!!! yesss!! =)

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sweety

@sweetsugar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

RM were lost in looking at each other....& rahul bumped the car into the tree & BUMP

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Rahul :oh god? muskaan tum theek toh ho na? kahi laga toh nahi?

Muskaan : no no i m fine

Rahul :ok good ! tum yahi baitho main dekhta hu kya hua hai

muskaan :nods

Rahul (after examining the car) : muskaan ....i think yaha se ab humey agey chal kar jana padega..gadi yaha phas gayi hai

Muskaan (making her way out of the car) :ok...lets go

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~RM walking~

Muskaan :toh kaisa lag raha hai rahul ?...i mean aisey khuley aasman ke neechey walk n all ....aapko toh aadat nahi hongi na

Rahul:u r right.....aisey adhi raat ko ek ladki saath its my first time .....ek secret ki baat batao *thoda nervous hu*

Muskaan (smiles) :haha ,yeh main kya sun rahi ....MR Garewal ...nervous? why exactly?

Rahul:umm ...shayad tum saath ho isliye

Muskaan (sortof blushing) : aisa kyu?

Rahul :aab...umm .bas..a..chodo na ...tum yeh batao ki tum ho toh gujrat se phir yaha, Delhi mein kaise?

Muskaan :independent baney , all these years gujrat mein rahi hu ...apni life ko naya direction dena chahti thi... intially toh mein mom ke saath mumbai janey wali thi par kismat yah laker aagayi....and here we are ...mera ghar bhi aagaya

Rahul: ghar nahi aagaya..hum aagaye ...ghar toh wohi par tha...hai na?

Muskaan (smiles):hmm...goodnite

Rahul :goodnite....muskaan!

Muskaan (turning): haan

Rahul : kal tyaar rehna ..mein tumhey pickup karney aaoga ?

Muskaan :rahul par ek problem hai .....aapko mom se permission leni paregi

Rahul: kya? main aur permission? nahi baba ...merey se nahi honga i m really bad at this.

Muskaan :kya rahul? appney promise kiya tha na ki mujhey delhi ghumayegey ...ab khud hi promise tod rahey ho

Rahul:par muskaan ...mujehy permission lena nahi ata ...kya bolu tumhari mama ko ? tum khud kyu nahi baat karti

Muskaan : theek hai fine ...kal ka plan cancel

Rahul:arey aisey mat karo yaar muskaan ...dekho main bol raha hu ki tum baat karke dekho ...agar woh nahi mani phir main baat karuga thik hai...mujhey phone karke baata dene ke mom ney kya kaha theek hai ...ab jao bahut late hogaya hai

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Jia

@Jiannax143

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

aww they are so cute!

hahah sab..."put up with you for the rest of my life" ----sounds familiar lolll

great parts everyone :)

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428279

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

awesome part, Saba!! thank god their ok!!

and aww, she's like you have to get permission to take her out!!

lolz, it was sweet. her conservative and the big culture clash is starting to happen as well as their realationship which is at its cutee beginning!!

Jia- haha, yeahh!! lolz

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pari

@pari_smile

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Hey guys all those parts were awesome
luved them allllll
awwwwwwww i hope ridz doesnt mind muski being guju in future and supports them
but right now loving RM they r so cuteeeeeeee
bichara rahul ab usse muski ke maa se permission leni padegi
wonder uski maa kya kahegi

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Imane

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Recap:

I'll continue… (i don't know GUJRATI at all so this is all in hindi, i hope it doesn't look bad...)

Muskaan: (a bit hesitant) Um…voh..

Rahul: Muskaan come on…hum Delhi mein he hongay…kahein durr nahi jayegay…

Muskaan: Okay..I..I'll let you know…subah phone kar kay app ko bata doon ge… (she smiled and gave in)

Rahul: (Smiles) Great…! abb main chalta hoon…Okay, Goodnight…! (Rahul turned back around to leave as Muskaan stood on her front porch watching him go. She knew guys were hesitant about formalities and all but Rahul had really disappointed her by not even trying. She stood there for a little while longer hoping he'd turn to wave or something but as she watched him disappear around the corner of the street she shrugged her shoulders and went inside as well.)

~Muskaan makes her way inside the house quietly and finds her mom waiting for her inside~

Muskaan's Mom: Muski? Agaye tum…

Muskaan: Jee Maa…app abhi Tak jag rahay ho…? (she goes over to her and hugs her lovingly)

Muskaan's Mom: Khud ghar se bahir raho aur main araam se soo jao…Muski maa hoon teri…roommate nahi…(she caressed her daughter's hair lovingly and smiled)

Muskaan: Mama I LOOOOVEE you…! Muaah! (she gave her mom a quick peck on the cheek )

Muskaan Mom: Party kaisi thi? Boss ki behn ki sagai…?

Muskaan: (thinking back to the part and the moments with Rahul)

Muskaan's Mom: Kya hua?

Muskaan: (snaps out of her thought) Nahi kuch nahi maama…achi party thi…baray logon ko bari party…

Muskaan's Mom: Acha raat bahut hogaye hain…jaa kay araam kar…kal phir office jana hain…

Muskaan: Voh actually Mama…main sooch rahi thi kay…

Muskaan's Mom: Su che Muski? Koi baat hain jo chuparahi hain?

Muskaan: Nahi Mama…Kal main office nahi Delhi ghoomnay jarahi hoon…aik dost kay saath…

Muskaan's Mom: Dost?

Muskaan: Umm…meray Boss kay saath…Aggar app permission de do toh…please…maama

Muskaan's Mom: Muskaan! Boss kay saath…aisay kaisay behj do…? Nahi…

Muskaan: Maama aggar Bos skhud baat karnay aaye toh?

Muskaan's Mom: Muskaan, jub aik baar manah kar diya toh bus kar diya…

Muskaan: Per mama voh app se mill kar, permission lay kar mujhay lay kay jaaye toh?

Muskaan's Mom: (thinks a bit but then agrees) Hmm ziddi hain tu bahut…chal dekhtay hain yeh chukro kuan hain…aggar acha laga toh jaanay doon ge…per ussay khud mujh se baat karni paray ge…bol manzoor hain?

Muskaan: Haan! Pakka manzoor hain! You are the best (she smiled hugging her mom and then ran off to her room to change and rest up for the night)