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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
sabz surely i will contribute actually i wld luv to, but prob yeh hai ki i dont get
enough time to complete my part without my parents realizing,
but prob i may write a part on Sunday when my parents wont be home😉

Imane i agree this concept is very gud, I luv it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: imane568

Lovely PART!!!!!!!
Sab....It was just the perfect way to get the party started!!
I am so GLAD you continued...
This concept is AMAZING and we have to carry it out...So once again i APPLAUD you for continuing...!

thanks so much, Imane!!!!
im glad you r glad!! and im so happy you liked it and the concept and everything.
thanks once again!!
hopefully someone will continue!! and we can make this another rocking wwrm!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: pari_smile

sabz surely i will contribute actually i wld luv to, but prob yeh hai ki i dont get
enough time to complete my part without my parents realizing,
but prob i may write a part on Sunday when my parents wont be home😉

Imane i agree this concept is very gud, I luv it

kay, I understand Pari!!
and that sounds good!! please try to write on sunday!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

I'll CONTINUE...if no one minds....LOL...
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Rahul turns around slowly as he heard her call out to him... there was something about her voice that made his heart beat faster than normal...

Muskaan: Rahul...sir...? (she called out but Rahul was checking over his shoulder as if looking for someone standing behind him, Muskaan speaks up a bit confused herself as there was no one behind him) Kya hua...? App kissi ko dhoond rahay hain...?

Rahul: Hmmm..koi Rahul SIR kay naam se hain jinhay app bhi dhoond rahi hain...?

Muskaan: (Smiles) Per main toh app he ko dhoond rahi thi...

Rahul: Lakin mera naam toh sirf Rahul hain...Rahul kay saath "SIR" please na lagai..

Muskaan: Right...main bhool gaye...i am sorry...Rahul...

Rahul: That's more like it Muskaan...! (he smiled back and finally got chance to really see how gorgeous she was looking in the outfit he had picked out for her. Her half straightened hair and very light make up glowed under the dim tea lights on the porch where they were standing. For a moment Rahul was completely lost in her)

Muskaan: (looks away as she felt her cheeks blush upon his intense gaze)

Rahul: (coming out his trance upon the awkward silence and Muskaam's obvious shy and hesitant nature) Ahem...Soo...Party mein sub se milli...? Armaan...Riddhima se...

Muskaan: Hmm...Armaan se milli thi, per abhi tak Riddhima se nahi milli...

Rahul: Really?! come...main apni behn ka intro tumhay khud karvata hoon...aao...

Muskaan: (Smiles) Yeah...chalo...

~Just as Muskaan was stepping down from the porch steps, she looses her balance and trips over her own step. Rahul who was right behind her catches her instantly and er arms naturally find their way around his neck.Their eyes met and the time stopped...everything around them just faded for a while. It was just him and her in that one moment. She wanted to look away, she wanted to get up, but something inside her wanted to stay like this and that urge kept her in his arms a little while longer that she expected. She felt her heart flutter for the first time...His Polo cologne was absorbing deep in her senses along with the warmth of his breath she felt on her neckline. His hand was gently supporting her waist, he knew if he moved even for a moment he would break this beautiful trance. He was once again drowning in her twinkling brown eyes There was obvious attraction...chemistry...sparks...it was there and somewhere deep down they both felt it.~

Rahul: (whispers) Muskaan?

Muskaan: (Lost in his eyes she barely manages to speak up) Hmmm...?

Rahul: Theek ho na?

Muskaan: (simply nods her head as her answer)

Rahul: Can i pull you up...?

Muskaan: Huh?

Rahul: (Smiles knowing how lost she must be, he slowly brings her her up and she finally comes back down to earth) You okay?

Muskaan
: (blushing hard she tries to look away while tucking a lock of her hair behind her ear, she was unable to make any eye contact with rahul at this point)

Rahul
: Muskaan...? It's okay...kahein laga toh nahi...u okay...

Muskaan
: (answers while nervously looking around) Yeah... umm ...main voh...Ridd...Riddhima ko...

Rahul
: I know...Riddhima se milnay chaly...iss baar koi steps nahi hongay dis balance karnay kay liye...i promise...(he laughs lightly trying to ligten up her mood)

Muskaan:
Hmmm...chalo...(she carefully proceeds forward with Rahul who has a cute smile playing on his lips as her runs his hand through his thick hair knowing his heart and mind are still on cloud 9 after what just happened between them.)

Rahul: (upon approaching Ridzi and Armaan) Hey Guys!

Armaan: Rahul...! kya baat hain ajj Ridzi se zaayada excited lag raha hain?

Rahul: Um...na...Nahi aiisi toh koi baat nahi hain...

Ridzi: (Whispers while eyeing Muskaan) Aisi hi baat hain Armaan...saath meim "Ms.Really Good Looking" jo khari hain...

ARmaan: Ooo I see..!

Rahul: (glares at both of them and moves out the way so that Muskaan is now standing in their circle as well) Ah..Ahem...Guys tumn dono Mus...Muskaan se millay?

Armaan: Yeah...Ofcourse..! Hey again Muskaan..!

Muskaan: (smiles) CONGRATULATIONS! again Armaan...!

Riddhima: Thanks Muskaan...! main Riddhima hoon...pata nahi Rahul ne tumhay meray baray mein bataya bhi ya nahi...per tumharay baray mein kafi kuch bataya hain iss ne...Bahut achi lag rahi hoon...!

Muskaan: Thanks...(she lightly hugs Ridzi then looks over to Rahul confused) meray baray mein kys Rahul...?

Rahul: Uhh! Nahi...Kuch nahi...Riddhima ki addat hain zaayada bolnay ki...bus yunhi Armaan ne bataya tha tumhray office mein job kay baray mein... Right Armaan?(he covers up quickly while AR are simply enjoying Rahul Garewal's leg pulling in front of a confused Muskaan)

Armaan: Haan kuch aisa he kaha tha...i think...(he laughs) But Muskaan tum Delhi mein enjoy toh kar rahi hoon na...i hope office work doesn't keep you so busy...? Humara seher Delhii kaisa laga tumhay...

Muskaan: Hmmm kafi interesting jagah hain..yahaan per loog zayada tar jaldi mein rehtay hain...subah theek 7 bajay suraj nikalta hain aur sham per apnay time se vapis doobta hain...Phol, darakhqt, hawa, aur parinday sub kafi routine mein rehtay hain…kya hain na app ki office kay fourth floor se Delhi kafi acha lagta hain…kabhi time millay toh zaroor ayega main bhi app ko Delhi dekhao ge….

Armaan: Oooo…Aisi baat hain?

Ridzi: Muskaan ne Delhi abhi dekha he nahi hain! Aur tum dono ne ussay office ekay kaam mein itna busy kar diya?! (she protested as both Rahul and Armaan exchanged guilty looks)

Armaan: yeah voh..actually…Rahul…Rahul ki fault hain! Yeah all his fault…

Rahul: Meri? Per…

Muskaan: It's oaky guys…main toh yunhi…

Armaan: No Muskaan…I get it…Rahul is the boss tum kehna nahi charahi…?

Ridzi: It's decided… Abb Rahul he tumhay Delhi dikhaye ga! Okay!

Rahul: (looks over at Muskaan who glanced up as well but she looked more confused than excited) Muskaan?... Kya idea pasand nahi aya?

Muskaan: Na..Nahi…voh aap ka kaam..I mean office mein..

Ridzi: Come on Mr.Garewal app aik din ki chutti nahi akr saktay…?

Armaan: Yaar tunay itnay saloon mein kabhi chutti nahi ki… abb kar lay na..! please…hum humarai shaadi weekend per rakh day gay promise..tu bus aik chutti kar lay…

Rahul: (smiles) Guys I am okay with it…aggar Muskaan chahay toh…? (they all look over at Muskaan who was still processing all this)


SOMEONE PLEASE CONTINUE...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG GUYS........u all rock...sachii....i waas slightly busy....wasnt so active...u have turned the story sooooo exciting...i loved it....to core............Imane...Thanks so much....u have written maximum parts here lovely...Saba, Prnja aish....u alll rock................Sorry agar kisiiko bhul gayti toh...i am soooo ecited...haii rabba kinni spelling mistakes kar rahi hu..........
Ok i will continue if u dont mind.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ridzi: Come on Mr.Garewal app aik din ki chutti nahi akr saktay…?

Armaan: Yaar tunay itnay saloon mein kabhi chutti nahi ki… abb kar lay na..! please…hum humarai shaadi weekend per rakh day gay promise..tu bus aik chutti kar lay…

Rahul: (smiles) Guys I am okay with it…aggar Muskaan chahay toh…? (they all look over at Muskaan who was still processing all this)


Muskaan wanted to say Yess..there was no harm in going siteseeing with ur boss..is it??? SHe wasnt conservative..bt well..her maa was.....

R- Muskaan kya hua??? Its ok..agar tum mere saath delhi nahi dekhna chahati toh....its just fun....u dont have to be thinking ssoo myuch...
M- no...aisi koi baat nahi hai...i mean..mujhe koi-----(her cell rang)
M(looked at the cell & then at her watch...)Thakkurjii ....raat ke 11.30 baje hai????? Main gayi kaam se....Heloo..??? Maa???
M.M- Kahan che???
M- Maa...maine kahido ne mhare Sir ki behen no sagai che..iss liye...
M.M- Mukssann time suu che????
M- Maa...maa aap chinta na karo..aaun aao chu...thodi der maate....
M.M- Muskaan tu har gaadi aisi hi-----
M- Maa...main pucca aadhaa ghanta ma aau chuu....JAi shri krishna maa....
Ridzi & Armaan looked at each other.......
MUSKAAN WAS GUJJU?????
Ri- Muskaan kya hua?? Koi prob???
M- Actuaaly late ho gaya jai..soo maa thoda tension me thi....huj naye hai na Delhi me...aur Ahmedabad me toh itni late ..u know..its bit conservative.....
R- Main ghar drop kar du???
M- Nahi its ok..main chali jaungi....
Ar- NAhi...Muskaan..delhi is also not so safe for girls....Plzz Rahul will drop u home....
M- Ok....
RM went.......Bt ridzi frowned....
Sorry if it was dumb......Actuaally i know my Gujrati was TORTURE..i dont know it...jhust trying......I thought if Muskaan is Gujju the she must be from Ahmeda bad......if bad pllzzzz ignore.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
awesome parts sab, imane and apoorva!!


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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

nice parts saba,imane&apoorva....

@imane:RM scene was cute...muskaans and rahuls rxns after tht where too gud...loved Rahul Garewal's leg pulling in front of a confused Muskaan
someone cont soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
wow guys this like going lovely ...imane , prajna , sab , appy .loved all your the parts!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Lovely Part Apoorva!!!
Especially the Gujrati....
I love it...
The story needed the gujrati touch and you gave it so perfectly!
Ridzi is shocked as EXPECTED...lol...
"Punjabi bhabi" not happening??
LOL...this WWRM is so amazing...
Someone should continue...

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