weekend with rahul-muskaan 38!!

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pari

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Yay!!!!!!! sabz waiting for it😃

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Originally posted by: pari_smile
Yay!!!!!!! sabz waiting for it😃

I'm glad your excited, Pari! lol it'll be up in like 5 minutes! im almost done!

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ridz(smiling):kuch nahi....mujhe dekhna he iss mss good looking ko...u rarely find someone good looking....and this time its 'really good looking'

rahul:rolls his eyes.

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continuing:

They pull up at Armaan's house and and get out of the car.

Following their plan, Rahul and his mom start to walk with Riddhima towards the house, and then Rahul goes Riddhima, i left my cell in the car, do you mind getting it?

Riddhima: kyun? am i your servant or something Rahul, go get it yourself!

Rahul:*thinking*- ughh, why is she so annoying sometimes.

Riddhima, my favorite sister, please can you get my phone, i um

uhh..please will you!!

Riddhima: ohh, favorite, huh? Rahul, I knew I was always the bright one, but I'm your only sister, you dufford!! And I know your lazy, finee I'll get it.

Rahul: thinks of a quick resort, but since its her b'day and he wants the plan to work out and her to be happy he lets that go. besides he thought, I could always get her back later!! lol. So he says, thanks Ridz, see you inside!

Rahul and his mom go inside, where Armaan along with his family and all of Riddhima and Armaan's friends, and everyone from Rahul and Armaan's workplace, including a certain, miss really good looking!!

Everyone quickly takes position and hides. Riddhima got Rahul's cell from the car and makes her way into the house. Seeing all the lights off and feeling confused, she walks further in and sees a path of rose petals and lit candles with a wondeful aroma, everywhere. At the end of the path she sees Armaan on his knees, with a little jewlery box in his hand. She walks up to him, and he takes her hand in his, and goes Riddhima, I love you more than anything on this earth, you mean more than anything, we've had the best of times and been through some difficult times as well. But I know there is no one else, I'd rather spend my life with. &I'm willing to put up with you for the rest of my life. He opens the box which reveals a gorgeous diamond studded ring. Will you marry me?

Riddhima, already broken in silent tears of joy, was able to murmer yes and hugged Armaan immedietly. And then she went..willing to put up with me?! and hit him on his chest, while he chuckled and they embraced again.

Then the lights went on and everyone came out.

After congratulating the newly engaged couple, the party had just begun and everyone was dancing, eating, drinking and just having fun in general.

Meanstwhile, Rahul was feeling very impatient and though his mind kept denying it, his heart knew the reason behind it. His eyes had been searching for Muskaan ever since he came in Armaan's house. He was dieing to see her in the suit he gifted her, to talk to her about anything, to just get a chance to be with her.

Walking around, with a drink in his hand casually just trying to look like a good host at his sister and friend's engagement party, he was being a good host nonetheless, but he kept looking for Muskaan every second.

As he walked outside, opening the sliding door that opened to the large deck outside, he heard a voice call his name, not just any voice, it was her..Muskaan!!

he turned around, feeling really happy and not fully understanding why...

First, I just wanna apologize for not continuing yesterday when I said I would. And I wanna say thanks to my friend/sister Jia (shopah0lic_xo) for giving me an idea as to how to start this part off because I was majorly stuck, lol. And I just took it from there, I hope everyone likes this part and if you dont you can just skip it and continue from the previous part. Please read and comment!! I'm open for any feedback! But someone please continue, and join in. If you dont have time or cant write a lot, then please write a short part atleast, but lets try and keep this active and make a good RM story together, guys!!

~Sabreena

Edited by Sab93 - 15 years ago

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pari

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Posted: 15 years ago

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yayyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dancing* such a long update
reading it right now sabz😃

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Originally posted by: pari_smile
yayyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dancing* such a long update
reading it right now sabz😃

Pari!! yay, im so glad your excited and I hope you like it. It has quite some AR in it but being their engagement it had to, and this is the first time I wrote on AR and I hope its good! im nervous bout this part, actually. but i ahd time so i just wrote it and i didnt go over it either.

kay, read it!! and tell me what you think please, lol =)

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pari

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Sabz that was an awesome part,
luved the little convo between rahul and ridz
and awwwwwwwwwwww ao sweet how ammy proposed her
whats this rahul bohut betaab horaha hai muski se milne ko😉
finally muski is here, wonder what happens next
but luved the part

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pari

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sab93

Pari!! yay, im so glad your excited and I hope you like it. It has quite some AR in it but being their engagement it had to, and this is the first time I wrote on AR and I hope its good! im nervous bout this part, actually. but i ahd time so i just wrote it and i didnt go over it either.

kay, read it!! and tell me what you think please, lol =)

sabz nervous kyun yaar u did a great job, luved the AR part,
luved the line where he said "willing to put up with you" that was funny
cld really imagine ridz face how she wld react😆

Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: pari_smile
Sabz that was an awesome part,
luved the little convo between rahul and ridz
and awwwwwwwwwwww ao sweet how ammy proposed her
whats this rahul bohut betaab horaha hai muski se milne ko😉
finally muski is here, wonder what happens next
but luved the part

thanks so much Pari!!

it means a lot!!

I really hope that came out ok. I've never written a scene like that before, lol.

of coursee 😉

yeah! thats up to the next writer!! hopefully someone will continue soon!!

do you mind joining in, Pari? if not now, then sometime soon for sure? pleaseee!! no one's writing 😭

and thanks so much!!

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Imane

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Lovely PART!!!!!!!
Sab....It was just the perfect way to get the party started!!
I am so GLAD you continued...
This concept is AMAZING and we have to carry it out...So once again i APPLAUD you for continuing...!

Edited by imane568 - 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: pari_smile

sabz nervous kyun yaar u did a great job, luved the AR part,
luved the line where he said "willing to put up with you" that was funny
cld really imagine ridz face how she wld react😆

thanks!! im glad you did!

lolz, i gotta give props to my friend, who shared her proposal with me and that line came to me. but it wasn't really original, i got i from her. and thanks friendie, im gonna keep her name anonymous for now.

lol, yeahh it would have been something, huh!😆

sometimes i wish we al could be the creatives heads, we'd see some awesome scenes. and im not talking bout my mediocre parts. i mean everyone else's!! =)

Edited by Sab93 - 15 years ago

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