weekend with rahul-muskaan 38!!

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

thanks prajna..lol..

imane - awesome part..Rahul was mesmerized by her laughin..n he told that to her too who just blushed..haaye...then he wanted to take her out..but she did'nt agree..n they had a small arguement..but everything was fine at the end :)..

i'll continue

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lovebapu18

@lovebapu18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

wonderful parts saba, imane, apoorva, aish and shilpz!!😊

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

RECAP:

~They both walk out the tiny shed and go towards their respective vehicles, Muskaan starts her scooty and waves to Rahul who is watching her from a distance. He smiles and waves back as well. As Muskaan drove off Rahul gets into his car and heads back to house…he wonders what his dad has to say about his sudden departure from the office after their meeting...~

NEXT PART -

Rahul reached home, got off his car and headed inside. The 1st thing he got to hear was -

" tumhara beta bilkul nalayak hai..nalayak!..mujhe to laga tha ab kaam main intrest dikhana shuru kar raha hai..lekhin kutte ki dhum hamesha tedhi hi rahegi" Rahul's dad shook his head exasperated.

He saw his mom standing there with a helpless look and when he entered she looked at him meaningfully.

Rahul ignored his dad's gaze and rushed into his room.

" dekha..main kabse chilla raha hoon..lekhin isse to koi parvah hi nahi hai!..meeting khatam ho gayi iska matlab yeh nahi ki kaam bhi khatam hua tha.." he screamed so that Rahul could hear.

Rahul opened his room's door fiercely and came out. He looked at his dad angrily who gave him an ugly stare.

" dad..mujhe zaroora kaam aa gaya tha..aur hamesha aapko bataaake jaana zaroori nahi samjhta.." he said rudely and shut his door.

Rahul's dad was left shocked.

" iska behaviour to dekho!..kaisa apne baap pe chillake chala gaya..main kehta hoon, suma, tumhara beta to gaya kaam se!" he said and retired to his room too.

...

In his room, Rahul was fed up of his dad's behaviour. For how long will he, his sister and mom suffer with that cruel man. The reason Rahul hated his dad, was because of something he had done years ago, which would have hurt his mom really badly if she had known about it.

He wiped his tears, which had appeared since the memories came back to him. He wanted a crying shoulder, he wanted atleast a friend who he can share his sorrow with. Then he wished Muskaan was here!

He got an idea to call her up. He picked up his phone and dialled her number.

" hello" she said happily in the phone.

Rahul decided not to spoil her good mood, so he just spoke casually.

" hello muskaan..kya kar rahi hai..?"

" rahul!..tumne yeh puchne ke liye phone kiya.." she asked him suspicious.

" haan..voh.." he was out of words.

" is everything okay?" she asked concerned.

" yeah totally!.." he said trying to sound happy.

" then how come ur calling me now?..we just met hardly an hour ago.." she said.

" bas maan hua tumse baat karne ka.." he was back to his teasing mode.

" accha accha..lekhin abhi main baat nahi kar sakti..mom ko kitchen main help karna hai.." she said apologetically.

" teek hai..kal phir pakane ke liye call karunga.." he smiled naughtily.

" i dont mind" she teased and kept the phone down.

Rahul did'nt know why but after talking to her, he definately felt better. Her name suits her, he thought, she brings a smile on everyone's face.

...

Next Day, Muskaan woke up really late. She lazily got up the bed, and went to the washroom to brush her teeth. After that, she came out to drink some coffee.

" tum kaun ho?..aur muskaan ko kaise jaanti ho?" she heard her mother's voice say.

She rushed to the hall to find her mom interrogating Rahul at the door itself. She had'nt even bothered to call him in!

" maa..yeh mere boss hai..rahul garewal.." she said trying to convince her.

She made a rude face at Rahul, and ran away leaving them alone.

" wow that was pretty scary.." he admitted.

" kyon?" she asked.

" pata nahi..voh chodo..aa rahi ho na ghumne ke liye?" he asked.

" haan..lekhin yaad hai tumhe maa se permission puchna tha?" she reminded.

" ohh haan.." he said biting his lip.

" to puch liya?" she asked.

" nahi..abhi pooch leta hoon.." he said and got inside the house. He looked around, it was a very simple house. The house smelled of typical Gujrati food, and there were hardly any sofa's or cots. There were mats in the hall though.

" teek hai tum unse puch lena..tab tak main ready hoti hoon.." she smiled and got inside her room.

He smiled at her nervously. He looked around for her mom, and found her in the kitchen making coffee. She was using two cups to filter the coffee. What? They did'nt even have a filter? , he thought weirdly.

He went behind her and tapped on her shoulder. She jumped up, frightened.When she saw him, she got angry.

" kya hai?..kyon dara rahe ho?" she barked.

" aunty..voh aapse kuch puchna tha..!" he said.

" to saaf saaf pucho.." she looked at him curiously.

" voh..kya main muskaan ko aaj bahar le jaa sakta hoon?" he asked though he did'nt know why he was doing it. Muskaan was a legal adult, for god's sake! But she wont agree to come with him otherwise.

" kaha?" she enquired.

" bas delhi dikhaane.." he said.

" aur kyon?" she asked.

" aise hi..apne dost ko aise hi lee jaa sakta hoon na?" he asked sarcastically.

" teek hai jao..lekhin shaam se pehle laut jaana.." she said and turned back to her work.

He grinned happily and waited in the hall, standing, for Muskaan.

Muskaan came out in 5 mins, wearing a gujrati saree and a small red bindi.

( It was'nt so puffed up.)

He was surprised at why she was wearing this.

" muskaan hum sirf ghumne jaa rahe hai..shaadi karne nahi!" he joked.

" pata hai..lekhin maa kehti hai ki mujhe sundays ko hamesha sadi pehanna hai...lekhin baad main change kar lungi.." she said.

" baad main?..abhi change karne main kya hoga?..aur baad main kaha change karogi?" he asked.

" kisi hotel ke washroom main!" he replied.

" but muskaan..its okay..i think ur mom will understand..this is a bit too tacky for now.." he said looking at the saree weirdly.

Muskaan got conscious, and looked down at her saree too but did'nt find any fault in it.

" rahul..isme kharaabi kya hai..?" she asked him.

" bas muskaan..ur changing!" he said.

" no i wont..atleast not now..maa kabhi nahi maanegi.." she said adamant.

" oh yeah?" he asked naughtily.

She held her chin up confidently.

He came near her, caught hold of her shoulders and started pushing her towards her room. She was willingly getting pushed by him at the same time chuckling at him.

Muskaan's mom who was going to get coffee for her, saw Rahul so close to her and pushing her inside the room. He pushed her inside, and went in too. Her mom held her hand upto her mouth in shock.

She followed them to see what he was doing in the room, and before she could the door was shut in her face . She then heard it get locked too.

She put her hand over hand " hai rabba..pata nahi kya kar raha hoga muskaan ke saat andar.." .

...

" muskaan..jaldi change karo varna main tumhe bahar jaane nahi dungi.." he said stubborn.

" fine!..lekhin uske liye tumhe baahar to jaane padega.." she said irritated.

" nahi..i'll look the other way..u just change.." he said and turned.

She quickly changed into her jeans, and was wearing her top. She was trying to pull the back zip, but it was'nt happening.

Just then, they heard loud banging on the door.

" te shu kariyu andar muskaan ke saat?" Rahul's mom screamed from outside.

Rahul forgetting that she's changing turned to her to ask what her mom was screaming about.

She heard her mom scream, but was stuck up with the zip. " maa..aate hai abhi.." she screamed sort of in pain because of the zip.

Muskaan's mom heard her in pain and thought that Rahul was causing her pain. She fainted dramatically on the sofa.

Rahul was stunned, he could see a part of her bare back and saw her struggling with the zip. He advanced towards her to help her.

Muskaan moved back just when Rahul came behind her. This made Rahul fall down on his back and since he held Muskaan's arm she fell on him with her back facing him.

He hurt his back and unknowingly put his hand on her bare back for support to get up. They were sort of in a sitting position now, that Rahul had managed to get up. Muskaan was on his legs, and her back was still facing him, and his hand was still on her back.

She shivered due to his cold touch on her back and closed her eyes. He then realized his mistake and put her zip carefully but it managed to send shivers down her spine.

Rahul wanted to get up, but since she was literally sitting on him, he could'nt.

" Muskaan..get off.." he said.

She opened her eyes, and embarassed she got off him.

They again heard banging, and Muskaan went to open the door. He followed her and they both got out to see Muskaan's mom in a frantic state.

" kya kar rahe the andar?" she asked suspicious.

" maa..kuch nahi..main bas change kar rahi thi.." she said coolly.

" aur yeh tere saat tha?" she asked pointing to Rahul.

" yeah..so what?" Rahul replied back.

She fainted on the sofa again.

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okay that was pretty long now!

hope u like it :)..do let me know through ur comments..

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pari

@pari_smile

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

ok ok i knw that i have said this a lot of times, par main kya karu
u all r such gud writers so all ur parts r awesome!!!!!👏

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428279

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

fabulous parts guys!!

the story is really getting so interesting now and their feelings are starting to develop big time!! loveee it!!

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Jia

@Jiannax143

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

omg the gujju mom LOLLL
awesome parts!

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n0ne91

@n0ne91

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Posted: 15 years ago

#87

Hi. 😊

You All Are Soo Good! loved all the parts Which you all have written. Really Great Work. Waiting to read more its lovely. 😃

-Mari 😊

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Imane

@accountband

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Posted: 15 years ago

#88

Recap:

" yeah..so what?" Rahul replied back.

She fainted on the sofa again.

Now continuing…

Muskaan: Rahul…Maama…!

Rahul: Kya hua inhay?

Muskaan: Voh behoosh hogaye hain… kuch karo…!

Rahul: Um..main…voh…doctor ko…

Muskaan: Nahi Rhaul…jao jaldi se paani lay kay aao…please…

Rahul: Voh khaan millay ga?

Muskaan: Array duffur! Kitchen mein aur kaahan…jao…!

Rahul: Okay…jar aha hoon…what's this duffur? (he gets up to go towards the kitchen mumbling "duffur" to himself as he had no clue what that meant)

Muskaan: Maama..uthho…maama…(muskaan is shaking her mom so she could re-gain her consciousness)

Rahul: (comes back with bottled water) Yeh loo…

Muskaan: Uff Rahul…penay kay liye paani chiyay tha…khair issi se kaam chala layti hoon…. (she opens the water bottle and sprinkles some water on her mom's face)

Rahul: Aunty?...

Muskaan: Maama…?

Muskaan's Mom: (slowly regains her consciousness and opens her eyes) Mus…Muskaan…??

Muskaan: Jee Maama…? Theek ho na…?

Muskaan's mom: voh chukhro abhi bhi yahaan hain? (she said sitting up)

Rahul: (opops out his head in front of Muskaan's mom and smiles) Jee anuty…app theek toh hain na…?

Muskaan's Mom: Yeh abb tak yahaan kyun hain Muskaan?!

Muskaan: Maama please…meray boss hain yeh… aisay toh na karay…

Rahul: (realizing the seriousness of Muskaan's mom anger, he steps forward) Muskaan let me handle this…please…

Muskaan: Fine..you can only try.. (she mumbles and moves aside)

Rahul: Anuty mujhay lagta hain humara introduction he theek se nahi hua…aur main unn sub baatoon kay liye Sorry bolna chahta jo app ko galat lagi…shayad main Muskaan kay saath kuch zaayda he informal hogaya…app ko toh pata hain larkay hotay he aisay hain…I am really sorry…kya hum sub bhool kar phir se aik naya introduction kar saktay hain….? (Muskaan was standing at a distance listening to Rahul, she was completely taken aback by what Rahul has said to convince her Mom. He was sweet and considerate and she found herself smiling at his sweetness.)

Muskaan's Mom: (Pauses for a moment and looks over at Muskaan who was standing there with a pleading face then looks back at Rahul and gives in with her smile) Theek hain…toh kuan ho tum aur meray ghar mein kya kar rahay hoon…?

Rahul; (laughs lightly, then introduces himself) Main Rahul…Rahul Garewal…appki beyti ka boss kum aur dost zaayda…

Muskaan's Mom: Hmmm… (looks over at Muskaan and questions her) Muskaan chukhro such bole che?

Muskaan: Jee maama…

Muskaan's Mom: Aur Sunday ko Muskaan se kya kaam tha?

Rahul: Muskaan ko Delhi ghoomana tha…sher mein nayi hain toh soocha issay acha lagay ga…app chahay toh saath chal sakti hain…

Muskaan's Mom: (Smiles) Nahi…mujhay ghar mein bhaut kaam…Muskaan tumharay saath jaa sakti hain…per sham s epehlay laut ana…theek hain?

Rahul: Thank You! You are the best..!

Muskaan: (quickly hugs her mom) Maama! App world ki best hoon…Thank you!

Muskaan's Mom: Acha abb jao varna late hojao gay…phir annay mein bhi dair lagao gay… (She walks them out to the door and they wave back to her while getting into the car. She smiles and makes her way inside laughing at the childish nature of both Rahul and Muskaan after their car disappears around the street corner)

~Rahul-Muskaan in the car~

Muskaan: Vaisay tumnay Maama ko bahut sweetly manaya…Thanks..

Rahul: Oh…no problem…Hindi movies dekhnay ka yeh aik bahut bara faida hain…you get all these good convincing dialogues that work on pretty much every one…(he laughs and Muskaan looks at him in shock) What?!

Muskana: Rahul tumnay voh sub khud apni amrzi se nahi kaha tha?

Rahul: Ofcourse marzi se kaha tha…

Muskaan: Nahi I meant…kya voh tumnay maama ko such mein mananay kay liye kaha tha ya sub kuch aik "dialogue" tha?

Rahul: Muskaan kya farak parta hain?

Muskaan: Fark parta hain Rhaul…Maama ne tumhay such mein itna trust kiya aur permission bhi sir fuss aik "dialogue" ki vajah s ede…per tumahray liye toh yeh sub… kyun Rahul? Aisa kyun kiya…

Rahul: Muskaan tum koi college ya school mein jaati baachi nahi hoon…phir yeh har chooti chooti se baat per Maama ko bulao..yeh karo voh karo… permission lo…daddy ko….

Muskaan: Bus Rahul! That's enough…meray dad.. (she shakes her head and sighs heavily, looking really hurt by what Rahul had said especially the "Dad" part) Gari ruko!

Rahul: What?! Per Kyun?

Muskaan: Stop the car Mr. Rahul Garewal..please..!

Rahul: (pulls over and as he looks over to Muskaan, he finds her with tears in her eyes) Musk..Kya…kys hua…Muskaan?

Muskaan: Aaj kay baad mein sirf tumhari aik employe hoon jis ka tumharay saath sirf office tak he koi relation hain…please mujhay dobara apna dost samajh kar baat nahi karna… You are my boss and I am you employee…mujhay apni galti ka ehsaas hogaya hain…I am really sorry Sir…(before Rahul could justify or defend himself, she storms out the car crying, Leaving Rahul wonder what got her so hurt and disappointed)

Rahul: (thinking to himself) Abb kya karo…uff…! Pata nahi khaan chali gaye..shayad ghar gaye hoo vaapis…I should go back to her house…sorry kay liye…kuch zaayda he bol diya…(he makes a u-turns and heads back Muskaan's house)

~Ting…tong..ting..~

Muskaan's Mom: Iss waqt kuan aaya hoga…? (she steps out the kitchen and goes to open the door) Rahul tum…?

Rahul: jee anuty…Muskaan aaye kya?

Muskaan's Mom: Tumharay saath he toh gaye thi..Rahul yeh kaisa mazaaq hain…

Rahul: Actually..voh aunty…(he looks down guilty)

Muskaan's Mom: Kya hua Rahul…Muskaan kay saath koi jagrah…?

Rahul: (nods his head in affirmative)

Muskaan's Mom: Aoo ander aoo… Muskaan jub bhi upset hoti hain thodri dair kay liye akela rehna pasand karti hain…jub thora demaag thanda hojata hain khud vaapis ghar ajati hain…

Rahul: Aur uss ka demaag thanday honay mein kitna time lay ta hain…

Muskaan's Mom: (laughs) Chal badmaash…! Acha yeh toh batao kay jagrah kiss baat per hua? (she makes her way to the kitchen and Rahul follows her)

Rahul: Voh main yunhi kuch kehraha that oh mazaaq mwin uss kay da dkay baray mein… kafi hurt hogaye voh…

Muskaan's Mom: (turns to Rahul with a serious face) Coffe peeyo gay?

Rahul: Huh?... (looks at her confused then answers properly) I…Jee..aggar app bana rahai hain toh…

Muskaan's Mom: Iss ka matlab tum Muskaan ko samjah nahi payye abb tak… jo ander se naram hotey hain voh bahir se saqhkt na hoon toh duniya unhay kuchal dayti hain.. (she begins explaining while making him coffee)

Rahul: Kya matlab aunty? (he questions her while leaning against the kitchen door)

Muskaan's Mom: Voh barah (12) saal ki thi… jub uss kay daddy nay doosri shaadi kar li aur humay choor kar chalay gaye…(Rahul remembers Muskaan's reaction at the metion of her dad and feels bad as her mom continues)…tub se voh kissi per bharoosa nahi karti…Na he uss ka koi dost hain…mujhay toh labhi bahut darr lagta hain uss kay akelepan se…

Rahul: (comes forwards and hands her the coffee jar she was looking for on the counter) Aunty yeh lejiyay…

Muskaan's Mom: Oh..! I am so sorry…main bhi pata nahi kitna kuch keh gaye…

Rahul: Na..Nahi..

Muskaan's Mom: Tum jakaay behto na…main tumharay liye coffee aur sandwiches bana kay lati hoon…Kal he T.V mein dekh kar seekhay hain…mujhay kah kay batana kaisay banay hain…itna toh akr saktay hoon na…

Rahul: Of course….health insurance hain meray pass…

Muskaan's Mom: (laughs at his smart comment with him)

Rahul: Oh haan..umm Aunty…tub tak main apni email check kar sakta hoon…office ki koi yrgent update check karnay kay liye…

Muskaan's Mom:Haan…bilqual…Computer Muskaan kay room mein hain… aur uss ka room kahaan hain yeh toh tumhay pata he hain…

Rahul: Jee…thank you Aunty…

~Rahul makes his way inside Muskaan's room and this time he actually looks around all the cutsie and girly things she had decorated her room with. The brightly painted walls and soft white curtains on the windows… even the screen saver on her lap top was a huge flower blooming. Just as he is about to click on her lap top he glances over her book shelf and finds a big diary looking notebook that was title "Muskaan's personal diary", he walks over to it, then looks over his shoulder to check no one is coming. He is hesitant about opening it at first, but opens it eventually and the flips to a page that said "My first meeting with Mr.Right (I so hope so)", it was dated the day she joined his office…the day he actually had his first proper introduction with Muskaan.~