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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
AAwww this was really cute....
So instead of having her gujrati and him punjabi we'll have it this way...
Rahul is well something but definitely not punjabi while Muski is punjabi...let me know exactly how this will be proceeded but once again Aish did a wonderful job in proceeding the story...it's totally rocking and we need RM supporters to continue so come on in and throw in a part or two....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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congo for the new WWRM
luv the theme, and how the story is progressing
u all have done an amazing job, RM meeting was very gud
I promise to contribute soooon😃!!!!!!!!!!
waititng to read more

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Posted: 15 years ago
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CONTINUING...

~After dropping off Muskaan, Rahul drives back home to get ready for Riddhima's big day. She was older than him but as a brother he had always treated her like the baby of the house. Her pampering, her mood swings, even her stubborness was all taken care of by him. He loved her as a sister and was really happy that God blessed her with a person like Armaan to love and adore in her life. It was indeed a happy day for Rahul's family...
Rahul: Mom?....i am home...kahaan hain...? (he puts down his briefcase and calls out)
Rahul's Mom: (from inside) Haan Rahul...ander ajao...Ridzi kay kamray mein hoon...
Rahul: (smiles as he walks towards her "princess" sister's room) What's going on Mom...App kahaan hain...? (He says as he enters the room but is surprised to see his very own sister was being dressed up by his sweet mom. She looked really beautiful today as Rahul felt a bit emotionl on the thought of giving her away so soon.)
Riddhima: (elated to see her brother who was in the process of thinking) Rahul tum agaye!! Kaisi lag rahi hoon mein...? (She spins around ignoring the fact that her mom was just about set her long duppata on her shoulder but failed to do so)
Rahul's Mom: Riddhi...! abhi duppata bhi set nahi hua tha....pagli...! kahaan bhag rahi hoon..
Rahul: (laughs as he comes forwards and lightly hugs Riddhima) Choday na Mom...appki bayti toh bachpan say he aasi hain... hum ladkoon jaisi...phir ajj yeh dupatta kahaan se...
Riddhima: (breaks from his hug as she realizes he is taunting her) Rahul!!!
Rahul: Arey baap re..! Maa bacaho!! (they both are running around, Rahul comes behind his mom while trying to dodge Riddzi)
Riddhima: Mom...app hatay saamnay say..dekha na aap nay kaisay mujhya larka kaha issnay...choro ge nahi!!
Rahul: I was just kidding...main toh yunhi,,,Mom bolay na...
Rahul's Mom: Array Riddhi jana de na...tujhay tang karay bina iss ka din thori pura hota hain...aur such ajj apni birthday pe tu iss kay liye thori tayaar huyi hain...Mood off karay gee toh Armaan ko acha nahi lagay ga...chal...smile...
Riddihma: Fine...per ajj mera birthday hain sirf issi liye main maaf kar rahi hoon...aur haan apnay "pyaaray" se betay yeh bhi poochlay kay mera gift kaha hain!?
Rahul: (smiles to himself as he knows for sure she'll simply LOVE his gift this year)
Rahul's Mom: (whispers to Rahul) Bata doon?
Rahul: (shakes his head) Nahi maa! abhi nahi...Armaan maar dalay ga!
Rahul's Mom: (Smiles and whispers back while lovingly messing his hair) Theek hain...(turns to Riddzi and pretends the perfect tone as Rahul commends her mother for being an amazing acteress in his head) Choro na beta yeh nikamma kabhi kuch yaad he nahi rakhta...!
Riddzi: Hmmph! dekhna mom main bhi iss ka birthday "BHOOL" jao gee...(she gets back to her dresser and begins to put on her matching bangles with her pink lehnga)
Rahul: Theek hain...i have no problem...mujhay tujhay treat toh nahi deni paray ge atleast! (he quickly runs from there to get ready before Ridzi had t a chance to retort back)

~Rahul quickly gets dressed in his brand new Versace black suit, looking stunning...as he fixes up his hair and tie in the mirror, he thinks about the dress he had chosen for Muskaan to wear to this occasion. It was earlier this morning when he picked up his order form the mall after running in to Muskaan for the first time. He was passing by one of the traditional ware store and the dress on the display just looked perfect for Muskaan and so he bought it instantly without thinking...He wanted to see how well she complimented the dress as he knew she would be the one complimenting it not the other way around...He smiled to himself in the mirror shaking off his imagination about Muskaan and walked out the room, Riddhi and Mom were waiting for him in the hall downstairs...~
Rahul's mom: Ready?

Rahul: Yes mom...

Riddhi: Arrey vaah! Kya baat hain...birthday party meri hain aur tayaari tum nay ki hain...nice suit...

Rahul: Thanks...Occasion he kuch aisa hain...

Riddhi: Really? meri birthday per itni excitement ya phir voh new entry kay liye...

Rahul's Mom: New entry?!

Riddhi: Haan Mom...aik hain office mein "New Entry" Armaan bata raha tha...

Rahul: (blushes but covers up quickly) Mom please... app bhi na kis ki baatoon mein arahai hain...lets go...Main car nikaal ta hoon...(he goes to get the car while Riddhima fills in the details about this "new entry" to her mom)

~In The Car~
Rahul's Mom: Tu beta milwao gay na?

Rahul: Kissay Mom?

Rahul's Mom: Muskaan se...

Rahul: Mom iss mein milwanay waali kya baat hain app khud millay na...vahi ho gi...party mein...

Rahul's Mom: Acha voh Delhi se hain...i mean is she Punjabi like us...?

Rahul: Mom...kya farak parta hain?

Rahul's Mom: Beta baat agay lejani hain toh fark parta hain...Hum Punjabi hain toh meri honay vali bahu bhi toh Punjabi hogi...

Rahul: What?! BAHU??? slow down Mom app kafi aagay nahi pooch gaye?....she works for our company aur aik achi larki hain...mujhay khud nahi pata voh punjabi hain ya...kuch aur..

Riddhi: Rahul babhi toh punjabi he honi chiyay! aik dum mast! halay gullay waali...teri tarah boring nahi!

Rahul: Haan main he puray Punjab ka subse BORING larka hoon...behn jo teray jaisi milli thi, kya karta...bachpan se he itna torture kiya kay punjabi gene ho kar bhi koi fayaada na hua...

Riddhi: Rahul tu kitna BEECHAARA hain! but guess what I DON'T CARE!! (she laughs as they reach Armaan's house which was the birthday avenue as well as the engagement but Riddhima didn't know that yet)

Rahul: Acha abb chalo tumharay ARMAAN ka ghar agaya hain meri honay waali "punjabi patni" ki fikhar baad mein kar lay na...! lets go...

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Rahul's Suit:

What Rahul Picked For Muskaan:







~~~OKAY guys so i continued but changed a few things up as i didn't get any clarification on what Rahul was and what Muskaan was...So Back to Rahul being PUNJABI and Muskaan bein GUJRATI....since the story is suppose to be revolving around them being from different backgrounds i thought it would be best if it was carried out like this...PLEASE...PLEASE...AND PLEASE...continue from here...even if it's just a scene with couple of dialouges...it's perfect...don;t think too much just PLEASE continue...i feel like my parts are ANNOYING OR STUPID as no one continues...Thanks...Lets include some RM scenes as my part was mostly transitioning to the party....~~~




Edited by imane568 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
Imane, all of your parts were fantabulous!!
they were not annoying or stupid at all!
and Aish, your part was awesome too!!
i would so continue but I honestly have no time atm at all.I promise to join in and continue tomoro!! I will deff write!!
and can everyone else join in too, pleaseeee!!!!! (not that im one to talk since i didn't yet, but i will tomoro for sure!)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
WONDERFUL part imane!!

someone do continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
Imane totally luved the part
it was amazing, luv the brother-sis relationship, you
described it very well, wanting to knw what happens next
someone cont

Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Someone SHOULD continue...??
Is ANYONE HERE....
Helllloooo
Guys...
Mayank Lovers...
Drashti Lovers...
What about RM fans....
Where is EVERYBODY...????😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

i just continued with a small part.....

rahul and ridz in the car....

ridz:rahul....waise armaan kuch zyaada hi tareef nahi kar raha tha...new entry i mein muskaan ke baare mein?

rahul(smiled a bit):u jealous???

ridz(sligthly blushing):nahin aisa kuch nahi he...i was just...

rahul:u were just????

ridz:i mean is she pretty?

rahul:kind of....(into the dream world)well she...is good looking....really good looking

ridz:ehm..ehm..

rahul:kya?

ridz(smiling):kuch nahi....mujhe dekhna he iss mss good looking ko...u rarely find someone good looking....and this time its 'really good looking'

rahul:rolls his eyes

hope you like it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Prajna thanx for cont
nice part😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

reserved!

im updating, it'll be up soon!

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