Saarrathi Fan Fic by pakhi joshi - Page 18

wow pakhi.....that was really gud.........keep it up girl.....👏

thats really gr8 pakhi 👏
your ff is mindblowing .
Now what I say .......... 👏 👏
write soon 😊 👍🏼

luv
MONA

zabardast pakhi 👏 keep it up dost 🤗

Very sweet part 😳 pls pls Pakhi in next part include some romance.

welcome here greatgirl n sapna n thanks 4 ur sweet response-------------and thanks to my all frnds 4 their lovely-dovely comments-------- 😆
diya i write more romantic scenes but plz wait 4 the coming episodes. 😳

scene

all the family members of goenka family gathered in the hall;

bd: aaj maine aapko yahaan isiliye bulaaya hai kyonkii hum sab jaante hain ki sidhaarth ke pariwaar ko yahaan aaye kal 1 saal poora ho jaayega.aur aaj hemraaj ne apni will mein kuch change kiya hai, wo main aapko batana chahta hoon.

maansen(getting so angry): sidhaarth ke pariwaar ko ek saal tak saha hai maine, ab aap kya change karana chahte hain. 😡 😕

bd: will ke mutaabik sidhaarth aur tumhaara pariwaar hamesha isi ghar mein ek saath rahenge ,nahin to hemraaj apni saari property trust ko donate kar denge,
aur tum dono bhayion ke hisse ke baare mein baad mein baataaya jaayega.

maansen(shouts): main ek pal bhi sidharth ke saath is ghar mein nahin rahoonga, ye ghar sirf mera hai,maansen goenka ka ,suna aap logon ne. 😡
😡 ---------aur kis hisse kii baatkar rahein hain taauji aap ,babuji kii 100% property meri hai sirf meri. 😡

bd: maansen agar tumhein sidhaarth ke saath rahane se aitraaj to yaad rakhna sirf tumhaara hissa trust ko donate kar diya jaayega,sidhharth ka hissa use milega--------aur abhi maine tumhaara hissa batya kahaan hai ho sakta hai kii sidhhrth se jyaada tumhein mile.

maansen: agar aap sidhaarth ko 20% hissa bhi denge tab bhi main ye bilkul sahan nahin karoonga, mujhe to 100% property hi chahiye.

lk: tum bhi wahi kar rahe ho maansen, jo kaurovon ne mahabhaarat mein kiya tha.tab bhi paandvon ne sirf 5 gaavon(village) maange the jo kourvon ne unhein nahin diye--------aur shuruaat hui ek mahasangraam kii---mahabharat kii.

aaj bhi agar tum kuch property sidhaarth ko dene ke liye maan jaao to ye mahabhaarat ruk sakta hai, -per main jaanta hoon aisa kabhi nahin hoga-------kyonkii yahi vidhi ka vidhaan hai.aur ise to main bhi nahin badal sakta.


sorry frnds may be dis part is not intresting but u know if i go on same track den all of u guys bored and also story is not going forward ,so 4 the story i write all dis.but u find very sweet parts in coming episodes, hope u undestands. 😳 😳


precap:manasvi shouts on khushi, yuv comments on bhoomi.

whooppie!! u know i just read all the episodes in one go...took me about2hrs but totally great..really dissapointed that it ended so soon...ur too good.and i'm waiting for future episodes

can't wait 4more of ur fanfic! 🤗

This part was good 👏 👏 .Pls post soon the next part.

arrey yaar u r truly gr8... 👍🏼 tumhaare story mein tho sab kuch hain jaise har story mein hona chahiye...and ur really doing a great job by mixing and matching all the ingredients well...now i can imagine what a great cook u r...

welcome here tunna n thanks 4 ur lovely response-----yeaps----don't worry, my ff will not end so soon 😉 -------and thanks a bunch 2 my all dear frnds.----- 😛

sapana u imagine dat how gr8 cook i m from my ff ----------woooow 😳

scene

khushi: mummy kal hamaare school mein annnual function hai, aur teacher ne kaha hai kii-----sab apne mummy-papa ko lekar aana.

manasvi: ok beta kal mein aapke saath chaloongi.

k: lekin mummy teacher ne to papa ko bhi saath laane ko kaha hai. 😕

m: beta aapki mummy chalegi na aapke saarh.

k: nahin mein to papa ke bina nahin jaaongi -------mere sab frnds apne papa ko saath laayeinge---bataao na mummy mere papa kahaan hai. 😕

m: dekho khushi zid mat karo------aur kal to aapko apna song bhi perform karana hai jo suraj uncle ne aapko sikhaaya hai,aap nahin jaaoge to kaise chalega?

k: (in loud voice)nahin main, nahin jaaongi -nahin jaaongi -papa ke bina bilkul bhi nahin jaaongi. 😭 😭

m(getting so angry n raise her hand 4 slap her)-------but suraj comes there n caught her hand.bhoomi n shaku also come there but they stand at the door.

s: ye kya kar rahi ho manasvi bachhi per haath utha rahi ho.

m(cries loudly) main kya karoon suraj- 😭 😭 ---main kya karoon 😭 😭 --------kaise samjhaaon khushi ko. 😭

s: kya baat hai khushi????????

k: uncle dekhiye na kal mujhe anuual funtion mein papa ke saath jaan hai ,lekin mummy nahin batati kii papa kahaan hai? 😕 😕

s(after thinking); khushi aapke papa bahut achhe the -isiliye bhagwaanji ne unhein apne paas bula liya------bhagwaan ji ke paas bhi to achhe logon kii bahut kami hai na----- 😛

k: to kya mere papa ab kabhi waapas nahin aayeinge???

s: nahin beta wo ab bhagwaanji ke ghar mein hi raheinge.

k: to uncle aap chalo na mere saath annual function mein -----main sabko boloongi kii aap hi mere papa ho. 😛

m:(shocked); ye tum kya kah rahi ho khushi --ye tumhaare uncle hain -----papa nahin.

k: lekin mamma mujhe to ye papa jaise hi lagte hain- 😛 -------ye mujhe kitta pyaar karate hain 😊 ----kitti saari choclates laaker dete hain. 😛 uncle aap chaloge na mere saath. 😛

suraj remain quite; 😕 😕

shaku comes: haan beta aapke suraj uncle jaayeinge aapke saath ,ab aap jaao baahar khelo. 😊

m: ye kya kiya maanji aapne khushi to bachhi hai per aap to-------

shaku: yahi to main tumse kaha rahin hoon manasvi kii khushi bachhi hai-------use bhi apne papa kii jaroorat mahasoos hoti hogi.

bhoomi: haan bhabhi maaji bilkul theek kaha rahin hain--------aur fir ek function attend karne kii hi to baat hai. 😊

then all of them leaves n manasvi thinks about it. 😕

bhoomi stands in hall yuvraaj come there.

yuv: to ab tum log hamesha ke liye iss ghar mein rahoge, per ek baat yaad rakhana,tum sirf yahaan raha sakte ho---per dadaji kii saari property sirf dad kii hi rahegi.

bhoomi: hamein dadaji kii property chahiye bhi nahin-------hum to sirf unke pyaar ki wajah se yahaan hain.

y: oho!!!!! to tum jaisi naukraani bhi aisi baatein karne lagi.

b: yuvraaj aap bhi wahi bhaasha (language) bol rahe jo kakasaheb bolte hain-------aur bologe kyon nahin aap bhi to unke hi bete ho----------jaise wo hain waise hi aap bhi hain. 😆

y: tumhaari ye himmat kii mere dad ke baare main aisi baat karo---------- 😡 😡

lk: ye tum kya kar rahi ho bhoomi -----tum bhi wahi kar ho jo mahabhaarat mein draupadi ne duryodhan ke saath kiya tha-----tab draupadi ne bhi duryodhan ko kaha tha kii-----------"andhe ka beta to andha hi hota hai(son of a blind man is also blind)" 😆

tab bhi ye mahabhaarat ke kaarnon(reasons) mein se ek kaaran tha-------aur aaj bhi tum fir se ek kaaran ban rahi ho mahabhaarat ka-------- lagta hai fir se ek mahabhaarat kii shuruaat hoker hi rahegi.