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Posted: 15 years ago
it was really sad. I am feeling very bad for both of them. anyways, it was an awesome os. I simply loved it.
BTW, happy new year!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
tragedy ho gayi baapu!!!!!

tissue hai kya tere paas?? seriously sumi kabhi bohot hasati hai kabhi bohot rulati hai not fair yaar you seriously dunno how sad I was reading this....


tragic shot really!!!!
Ps : I still don't know where u inherited this talent from!!!! (writing!!!!) & yeah I amcute killing cute!!!!!

LEKHA
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Posted: 15 years ago
That reflects your depression....lol
It was really tragic but still was great. Hope nothing like that happens in the show.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sunny ! Sunny ! Sunny !

LOVE that piece you wrote ! It was so beautifully written !!

And aww....you dedicate it to me ? Thank You ! *hugs*



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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey special sumaiya..
great story it was..
though a very tragic end!!!
Naina ...hmm..felt very sad!!!
and yuvi -he is just numb now!!!

i loved the last line..
"He walked out of the room without turning back...but if he had turned back...he would have seen a girl wrapped in bandages...crying for him!"
great !!!

Happy new year 2010!!!
Wish u all happiness in the year ahead!!!
Making u more special n giving us u r wonderful(though tragic :P)one shots!!!

sri:-)
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sumo..the latest one was totally heart-breaking!
Yuvi burnt the dispensary..but he was'nt too happy or sad with it..n Naina saw Shashank in there..n jumped there too!
Shashank was collecting some pics..n she tried to find him..n finally did..but she fainted!..omg..
Yuvi asked Ridz to call the fire police..n she did..
they took her to the hospital..but she was burnt so mch..omg..thats so sad!..Yuvi must be feeling damn bad!..aww..
Naina said she was free from everything..but she could'nt be from his love atleast ;)..
n she was crying for him..aww..
do write more
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: koolaries4

aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww!!! sumi.. *hugs*i totally loved this.. i dont know how you write so beautiful pieces!! I am awed by this one,as you said it was sad, but i think it did justice to todays episode!!

girl you rock!! do give me some tips as well, ok?!! i really do need them!! heheh... 😆
that was beautiful !! 👏👏 and i m waiting for the next one too !! :)



aww thanks MJ!! *hug*.....i don't know either...lol it was just my frustration i guess :P....lol I love your writing so you don't any tips :P

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh

tooo sadddd but still good

damn you really want to break up dont you lol
but i cant blame you, not after today's epi



lol I don't want to break them...I just....lol I wanna whack Yuvi...maybe :P thanks!

Originally posted by: Eloquent

LOL. From where do you bring in all the tragedy sumo?? From ekta??? :P

Haha loved it. It was great!! 👏👏



lol yes I have taken special lessons from ekta maiyya :P...thanks!!

Originally posted by: anjananazir

sumi i had tears in my eyes after reading your one-shot..i loved the last part when naina was saying thank you to yuvi..you have written it very beautilfully👏..



awww that's the best comment!! lol I never thought I could bring tears into someone's eyes :P....and thanks!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Pocahontas

It is too sad and depressing, Suma. Whatever Yuvi and Naina are , they don't deserve this, definitely not Naina. Even if Yuvi walks away or is thrown out of her life , she should forever stay the princess that she is.

Tragic.



I know that it will never happen but I was just depressed :P....lol tragic agreed

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

eh dukhi aatma dats enough 4r 2day k its gud ur depression is getting out but i luvd it as usual :) *hugs*



lol i am not a dukhi aatma...lol :P *hugs* thanks

Originally posted by: anut

Sad indeed.......Poor Naina..



i know poor Naina!!

Originally posted by: miss_precious

such a drama queen!!! lolz only joking......... it was so sad........but i kinda predicted something like is gona happen on the 1st of Jan....but maybe its too tragic and something similar would happen.........

do continue i want to know how yuvi is going to deal with the whole situation



lol I know I am a drama queen and I am proud of it :P....thanks!! and I might continue it :P

Originally posted by: *payal_15*

I hope thats no where near to whats gonna happen😭😭

Great job yaar! :D



i know i hope it never happens!! thanks!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Nishithini

it was really sad. I am feeling very bad for both of them. anyways, it was an awesome os. I simply loved it.

BTW, happy new year!!!!



thanks!! happy new year!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i already feel bad for them :P

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

tragedy ho gayi baapu!!!!!

tissue hai kya tere paas?? seriously sumi kabhi bohot hasati hai kabhi bohot rulati hai not fair yaar you seriously dunno how sad I was reading this....


tragic shot really!!!!
Ps : I still don't know where u inherited this talent from!!!! (writing!!!!) & yeah I amcute killing cute!!!!!

LEKHA



lol tragedy rocks!!! :P....aww thank you!!! lol glad you needed the tissue :P....lol I don't know where I inherited it from...lol do you really think I have a talent :P...and aww you are cute :P

Originally posted by: Starry_night

That reflects your depression....lol
It was really tragic but still was great. Hope nothing like that happens in the show.



lol I was really depressed :P....thanks! and I hope nothing happens either :P

Originally posted by: 0o.Leah.o0

Sunny ! Sunny ! Sunny !

LOVE that piece you wrote ! It was so beautifully written !!

And aww....you dedicate it to me ? Thank You ! *hugs*





thanks!!! and lol it was for you cus you gave me the idea *hug*

Originally posted by: sri_4

Hey special sumaiya..
great story it was..
though a very tragic end!!!
Naina ...hmm..felt very sad!!!
and yuvi -he is just numb now!!!

i loved the last line..
"He walked out of the room without turning back...but if he had turned back...he would have seen a girl wrapped in bandages...crying for him!"
great !!!

Happy new year 2010!!!
Wish u all happiness in the year ahead!!!
Making u more special n giving us u r wonderful(though tragic :P)one shots!!!

sri:-)



thanks!!! Happy new year!!!....lol I'll keep on writing :P...and hopefully no more tragic ones

Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey sumo..the latest one was totally heart-breaking!

Yuvi burnt the dispensary..but he was'nt too happy or sad with it..n Naina saw Shashank in there..n jumped there too!
Shashank was collecting some pics..n she tried to find him..n finally did..but she fainted!..omg..
Yuvi asked Ridz to call the fire police..n she did..
they took her to the hospital..but she was burnt so mch..omg..thats so sad!..Yuvi must be feeling damn bad!..aww..
Naina said she was free from everything..but she could'nt be from his love atleast ;)..
n she was crying for him..aww..
do write more
-aish



thanks!! lol and I'll write more :P
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update, tragic though! Felt really sad for Naina and what she told Yuvi "Do you even realize what all of this has done for me? I am free now! Free from my naiveness...my innocence...my proudness for my beauty! And you know what's the best part? I am never going to get married! I never have to worry about getting hitched to a dufford. Thanks Yuvi! I owe you one!" <<< Heartbreaking, but very well written.
Waiting for more shots, perhaps a Sidaina one?
Anjali

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