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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: ratika89
nice..!!👍🏼

thanks!!

Originally posted by: wow123

Its a nice scene but i magine it in reverse as if Nikki's is going to help sid and Abhi scold both of them for that.Becauze if looked at the character sketch mostly nikki involved in this kind of stuff and always work in barrier.Don't take it otherwise.I loved AN a lot.So It what i observe in last year AN scenes.

thanks lol and I know I reversed their personalities...sorry about that! lol I wanted to show Abhi as the confused one (lol i always wanted him to see him like that :P)

Originally posted by: Starry_night
That was really funny....planning to kidnap Tamz and trying to convince Nikki to help them out by making Abhi confess his love...what a hatke love confession...😉
in their previous attempt they kidnapped Naina instead of Tamz...Yuvi ne toh kachumber bana diya hoga Sid, JP aur Jiggy ka....😆
all in all a nice one-shot

thanks priyanka!! lol i am sure Yuvi had a thing or two to say to the trio :P

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo
😆 😆 agar yeh modi aise hi niki kp patayega na toh phir iski shaadi nadz ke FF tarah hi hogi

n 4r u i am :(((((((((

byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!

aww why are you made at me? what did I do? lol i think it'll be niki who'll propose Abhi this time :P

Originally posted by: ~*~Astargal~*~
Kidnapped again? Sheesh, how many times are they gonna try? Plus, if they kidnapped the wrong person, wouldn't that mean Tamz already engaged? Le, mujhe kya pari hai, it's OS! 😆

Now, who's an idiot? Abhi bhaiya didn't even propose!!! Seriously, the Modi brothers need to get their head checked!! But it was fun to see how Abhi bhaiya's gyaan is only for Sid, lekin jab khud ki bari aati hai, goes all down the drain! 😆

Wonderfully written Sumi!!! 👏

they'll try till they don't take a visit to the jail world :P lol and yes Tammy is already engaged :P....lol i'll check their head for free...promise :P

Edited by princessuma - 15 years ago

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#212

sumiii,... that was amazing.. that was buff!! dont u dare say that it was not nice.. i loved it, and i m smiling like a lunatic .. lol..

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#213

thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 u actually wrote it 4 me???????
I luvvvvvved it!!!!!
sumi- u r da best!!!
me is hungry, me wants mor!!!!!!

*edit*
btw....ya gotta finish it!!! 😃

Edited by AbhiNikiLuver - 15 years ago

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: sri_4
Hey special sumaiya..
great part..

abhi n nikki,,but the end was 😆

bechara abhi..hes still finding out a way how nikki will agree to help him n sid kidnap tamanna..

hmm,,sid definetly needs that earful from nikki..gosh!!

Yeh modi bhais bhi na..wasnt this a OS of sid-abhi rather than abhi-nikki...

hmm..great as always..

sri:-)

lol thanks!! lol...hmm...maybe it was more of Modi brother one-shot....lol shoot didn't see it that way :P

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey special sumaiya..
ayy!!!how come i missed :( this sajan OS

its nice..the argument on their date..lol

"Hm...we are what we are and that's what attracts us to each other, doesn't it?"

"We are not attracted....I love you Chashmish!"

"I love you too, Samrat!"

We are both very different from each other...but there is one thing in common between us...we are both in love with each other!!

great@!!

sri:-)

lol thanks!! and you missed it cus I didn't PM you :P

Originally posted by: armaankideewani
Sumi Di! =D Awesome yaar! I LOVE ur One-Shots! hehe seriously! I still have to read the others..and i will comment on them too! And this comment is just a "small" commment! I have a long one coming haha :P Awesome AN one shot tho! :D Great! :D

lol thanks!! lol you have a lot of reading to do...and I want a really long comment :P

Originally posted by: koolaries4
sumiii,... that was amazing.. that was buff!! dont u dare say that it was not nice.. i loved it, and i m smiling like a lunatic .. lol..

aww MJ that's so sweet!!! lol i was going to call you a lunatic but I won't cus my new years resolution is to be a really nice person :P

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver
thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 u actually wrote it 4 me???????
I luvvvvvved it!!!!!
sumi- u r da best!!!
me is hungry, me wants mor!!!!!!

*edit*
btw....ya gotta finish it!!! 😃

lol you welcome!! and thanks!! you asked for one....lol sorry it was so crappy :P....and I did finish it...that's the end...or is it :P

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#215

Hey peeps!! lol so I don't really have any idea what kind of a story I am going to be writing today..it's about YuNa...lol that's all I know....so hm....let's start then!!! :P

Mystery

I never know what he is thinking...he is like a mystery waiting to be solved...a mystery that I would like to solve...but can I?

She is always interested in what I want to do...it is as if I am a new toy that she can't help but be drawn toward, but do I want her to be drawn toward me?

He is looking at me right now....maybe because I have been staring at him for the past half hour. He has a cute face...if only he smiled more...actually genuinely smiled more.

She has been constantly staring at me for the past how many minutes....I tried not to look at her but that isn't possible. But why am I staring back?

Gosh, they both have been staring at each other for an eternity...okay maybe I am exaggerating but still...how I wish even Tamana would stare at me like that! But for now these two aka Yuvi and Naina need to stop their staring session.

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lol guess I couldn't think of something on top of my head so I give up...but meh i'll post this...I might

continue it...need to actually write something on paper now :P

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lol another song I killed :P

Yuvi neh jo na kaha, Naina woh sunti rahi
Khamaka bewaja khwaab bunthi rahi
Mmmm mmm mmmmmm' mmm mmmm

Yuvi neh jo na kaha, Naina woh sunti rahi
Khamaka bewaja khwaab bunthi rahi
Jaane kiski usse lag gayi thi nazar
Is shehar mein aa keh kho gay thi apni rah
Durr chahat se Yuvi chalta raha
Khamaka bewaja khwaab bunthi rahi

Gar woh pehle se hai zyaada, khud se phir yeh kiya wada
Khamosh nahi rahen na bezuban
Hmmmm'mmm'mmmm'.
Apna phele si baatein hai, bolo tho heart dhadrakta hai
Raaz yeh Yuvi ka, woh na kare bayaan
Ho gaya ke aasar kya Naina pe
Humsafar mein tho hai humsafar hai nayi
Yuvi Durr jatha raha, Naina paas aathi rahi
Khamaka bewaja khwaab bunthi rahi
Hmmm'mmm'mmmmm'

Aayi woh feeling phir aise, la la land mein aaye phir se
Aankho mein chubthi hai Yuvi ka jhoot
Mmmm..mmm'mmm'
Hal Yuvi ka na Naina jaisa hi, uski khushi mein kyun Naina ko gham sa hi
Naina ka ujar gaya hai jahan
Woh la la land dur jisse gaye thi Naina nikal
Phir se na yaadon mein aajaye wohi
Lamha beeta huwa, dil dhukata ha Naina ka
Khamaka bewaja khwaab bunthi rahi

Edited by princessuma - 15 years ago

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#216

its nice start

you just need to add more masla to get it going lol

if i come up with something i will let you know

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#217

awww sumi pls yaar continue thi pleash pleash pleash

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Eloquent

@Eloquent

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#218

Hahaha nice one thatrt 🤣🤣 Loved the ending of the last one!

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: princessuma

Mystery

I never know what he is thinking...he is like a mystery waiting to be solved...a mystery that I would like to solve...but can I?

She is always interested in what I want to do...it is as if I am a new toy that she can't help but be drawn toward, but do I want her to be drawn toward me?

He is looking at me right now....maybe because I have been staring at him for the past half hour. He has a cute face...if only he smiled more...actually genuinely smiled more.

She has been constantly staring at me for the past how many minutes....I tried not to look at her but that isn't possible. But why am I staring back?

Gosh, they both have been staring at each other for an eternity...okay maybe I am exaggerating but still...how I wish even Tamana would stare at me like that! But for now these two aka Yuvi and Naina need to stop their staring session.

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Yuvi neh jo na kaha, Naina woh sunti rahi😊
Khamaka bewaja khwaab bunthi rahi😭
Mmmm mmm mmmmmm' mmm mmmm

Yuvi neh jo na kaha, Naina woh sunti rahi
Khamaka bewaja khwaab bunthi rahi
Jaane kiski usse lag gayi thi nazar
Is shehar mein aa keh kho gay thi apni rah
Durr chahat se Yuvi chalta raha😉
Khamaka bewaja khwaab bunthi rahi🤢

Gar woh pehle se hai zyaada, khud se phir yeh kiya wada
Khamosh nahi rahen na bezuban
Hmmmm'mmm'mmmm'.
Apna phele si baatein hai, bolo tho heart dhadrakta hai😃
Raaz yeh Yuvi ka, woh na kare bayaan😭
Ho gaya ke aasar kya Naina pe😳
Humsafar mein tho hai humsafar hai nayi😊
Yuvi Durr jatha raha, Naina paas aathi rahi😕
Khamaka bewaja khwaab bunthi rahi🤢
Hmmm'mmm'mmmmm'

Aayi woh feeling phir aise, la la land 😆😆mein aaye phir se
Aankho mein chubthi hai Yuvi ka jhoot
Mmmm..mmm'mmm'
Hal Yuvi ka na Naina jaisa hi, uski khushi mein kyun Naina ko gham sa hi😭
Naina ka ujar gaya hai jahan 🤢
Woh la la land dur jisse gaye thi Naina nikal😕
Phir se na yaadon mein aajaye wohi😭
Lamha beeta huwa, dil dhukata ha Naina ka😭
Khamaka bewaja khwaab bunthi rahi🤢

Yuvi neh jo na kaha, Naina woh sunti rahi😊
Khamaka bewaja khwaab bunthi rahi😭
Jaane kiski usse lag gayi thi nazar
Is shehar mein aa keh kho gay thi apni rah😕
Durr chahat se Yuvi chalta raha
Jal gaya Shanky, 🤢🤢Yuvi khush hota raha😕