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~*~Astargal~*~

@~*~Astargal~*~

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#181

Plz Sumi! We get bored of you? Never!!!

That was sooo beautifully portrayed! Absolutely loved it!! 👏

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#182

sumaya!!! whenever u write SG OS's

Lemme knowok...

im waiting.....

IQ-

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: miss_precious
omg.......itni khushi ...... 2 one shots in one day *faints*

i love you for writing up another one.....and hate u for how u ended it......... how am i going to sleep now........ what is yuvi gona do next............i love how u added mac in the story just for the sake of it.......lolz

oh sumi dear.........u have got me addicyed to your writing and now im just gona be waiting impatiently to find out what happens next.........

great work *patting you on the back* and also *hugs* 😛

lol do you want me to whack you to revive you :P....lol actually I didn't add Mac for the sake of it *winks* :P....lol thank you!! and nothing happens next cus it's a one-shot and I love os :P

Originally posted by: anut
Oh oh...[Yuvi style]...A jealous Naina and a repentant Yuvi......👏

lol glad you liked it :P

Originally posted by: Eloquent
I ain't gonna reply coz am just too lajee to and ofcourse you're wearing that horrendous third sig of yours.

and here I was ready to dedicate you a one-shot... :P

Originally posted by: Nishithini
nice one. you described yuvi's mental dillema wonderfully. I just loved it.

aww thank you!!!

Originally posted by: Pocahontas
Yippie! That means Yuvi and Naina will fight again? 🥳

lol I don't know if they will fight again or not...but our Princess is going to whack your Chief :P

Originally posted by: Starry_night
That was wonderful.....!!!!!!!!
It was a happy one with a sad ending.....though not exactly sad but not even those happily ever after ones.
You have portrayed Yuvi's feelings just amazingly.

thanks Priyanka!!! lol ya it was sorta sad...maybe it will be :P

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: aanchal_c
wow...........lets see what yuvi has instore for naina and dr shashank.

thanks!! and lol let's see!!

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life
I'm not going to complain because that was SO BEAUTIFUL!

Dude... overdose is GOOD... well.... depending on what it is. Speaking from a the viewpoint of a med student.... yeah not so good. lol. speaking from a YuviNa lover's perspective.... BRING IT ON SISTER!

loved it as always!

mwah!

komz

aww I didn't love you this time *sad face*.... :P....lol thank you for not complaining :P....lol damn it and here I thought I'll overdose you all :P

Originally posted by: koolaries4
summmmiiiiiiiiiii.... *hugs* ...

i just caught up on all your oneshots.. they are amazing and Buff... love all of them.. especially the one on SidRaaj - that was totally unexpected!! hehe..

love all of them.. its a pleasure to read them darling.. do continue soon..

MJ!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hug* lol thank you!! and I knew you would like the SidRaaj one :P....lol shock of your life wasn't it :P

Originally posted by: -Destiny-
sumi dear Awesome shots!!! I loved it yaar

aww thank you!!!

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

ab yeh dafur kya karega 1 sayin suits him "come buffalow hit me"

gud 1 u keep writing i like dis drug😛

gosh now I'm a drug provider lol :P thanks!

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey special sumaiya..
its great OS...

"Life throws unexpected challenges our way...it does everything in its ability to stop us from reaching our goal. My goal in life was to get justice for my brother, and life threw the challenge of love toward me to distract me. And it won! I was distracted....

But just for the time being....

Do I regret falling in love? I am not sure!.."

hope hes not!!

sri:-)

lol I love it when you call me special sumaiya :P....I really hope he is not either

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: aish_punk
Hey suma..nice one shot..

Yuvi was so disturbed about falling in love..he's not sure if he regrets it himself..

their confession was sweet n simple...

but he forgot about his main motive now..well its good in a way..bcuz m sure Shashank did'nt do anything purposely..

n Naina is majorly distracting him..aww!

do write more

-aish

thanks aish!!! I am sure too that Shanky is not fully responsible because surgeries do go wrong sometimes

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver
yuvi............pyaar main bohot sare sacrifices karne padte hain, bachhu!!!!! agli baar ke liye sikhlena!! 😆
great job.....ab mera AN wala kab aayega???

lol exactly he doesn't know that pyar mein bahut sacrifices hoten hain :P....lol I'm almost done your AN one...lol I have all in my brain :P

Originally posted by: ~*~Astargal~*~
Plz Sumi! We get bored of you? Never!!!

That was sooo beautifully portrayed! Absolutely loved it!! 👏

lol thanks!!! ughh I want you all to be bored of me :P

Originally posted by: blushpink13
sumaya!!! whenever u write SG OS's
Lemme knowok...

im waiting.....

IQ-

lol like I said to Sheena almost done....the SG one too...it's all in my brain just need to write it down now :P...will be uploaded by tom. the latest!!!

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Anjana

@anjananazir

Trailblazer

Posted: 15 years ago

#186

I loved sumi you have write it very beautifully👏

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: anjananazir
I loved sumi you have write it very beautifully👏

thanks anjana!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#188

no no you cant let him go back to dark side

i will whack you for this lol

but still nice one

and you included mac lmao

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#189

kk lol this is for IQ...she requested a Sajan one-shot (btw i don't watch MJHT regularly so I may not be totally in sync with the characters)....lol hopefully you all like it :P

p.s. lol if you hate it...please tell me!!

Opposite Opinions

"Why can't she date him?"

"Because I don't want her to?"

"But Samrat, it's her life!"

"Chashmish, it is her life but I am her brother!"

"How would you like it if Nupur was to tell me not to date you?"

"I am not Adiraaj!"

"What is wrong with him?"

"What isn't wrong with him?"

"Samrat, you don't make any sense!"

"Chasmish, why are we fighting about this?"

"Because Suhani is like my sister too and I can't see her sad!"

"Well she IS my sister and I can't see her sad too!"

"Well...then let her and Adiraaj to be together!"

"But...but...I don't like him! Have you even noticed his attitude?"

"Samrat, not everyone can be like you! Not everyone can be...can be sweet like you!...but even I thought you weren't a nice person before...but that was because I didn't know you properly!"

"Yeh...what if he hurts her chasmish?"

"Trust him!"

"I can't trust him!"

"Then trust me!"

"Chasmish I already trust you! But..."

"Please Samrat!!"

"I'll think about it! But why are we talking about them? I mean we are here on a date, remember!"

"Okay fine....Samrat I can't believe you brought me here! I didn't know you were fond of this place!"

"I am not...but you are! And if my chashmish wants to spend her time with me at an orphange...then so be it!

"Thanks, Samrat! But I know that you didn't come here for me but for the kids! You love kids don't you?"

"I love kids...true!! But I love these kids more! They are just like me...their parents don't care about them either!"

"Samrat don't say that! Parents always care! They just have different ways of showing it!"

"That's what you think because your parents were there for you when you wanted them! Our's weren't!"

"I am sorry Samrat! I should understand!"

"You can't chasmish....just like how I can't understand everything that you like or say"

"Hm...we are what we are and that's what attracts us to each other, doesn't it?"

"We are not attracted....I love you Chashmish!"

"I love you too, Samrat!"

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Imagine walking into a new college...a restuarant maybe...or even the park and meeting someone who is anything but like you. What do you do? Mostly we make small talks and never talk again...but what if you talk again.

I talked again...with the one that was what I didn't like people to be! He thought life was full of masti...actually he still thinks that! That's the good thing about our relationship....we are still the same...neither of us have changed the other.

Actually...even if we have changed...it was only for the better!! So that's really not changing but growing up...you might say!

We are both very different from each other...but there is one thing in common between us...we are both in love with each other!!

Today is first annivesary...no no not wedding anniversary but it's been a whole year since we started dating! Weird how time flies! Well it was nice sharing a conversation with you...Samrat is here!

Edited by princessuma - 15 years ago

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh
no no you cant let him go back to dark side
i will whack you for this lol

but still nice one

and you included mac lmao

lol you can't whack me!! I am the Queen remember :P

and lol thank you!! and I needed to add Mac....lol love him soo much!!