MAYUR FF - Five - THE POWER PT 16UPDATED PG NO. 28 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
Hi Annu
u updated after long time
happy to c ur update.
it was lovely part dear.
so now syank believed that they have special power but they r confused.
guruji told them to find out the 5th power.
loved myur nok-jhok.
awesome part.
keep updating



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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
wow, awesome ,brilliant update. too good. loved it.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
great updte dear.!!
i enjoyed it..!!
do updte soon..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
Thank God u updated
Loved it
Mayur toh GG ke samne bhi ladne lag gaye😆😆
Ab ek hi ghar mein rahega pata nahi kya hoga yaar😆😆😆😆
Loved it
Waise whose 5th shakti any hint😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
Heyyyy anu
Really nice update
Wondering who can be the fifth power
Plzzzzz continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
awesome update anu
loved nups dialouge muh mein dahii zama le hein kya
lovely update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
part 9

(mayur aur sajan pr )
S : mayank mujhe to kuch samjh me hi nhi aa rha... aisa lag rha hai k jaise main koi spna dekh rha hu
(mayank samrat ko pich karta hai)
S : Ouch ye kya kar rhe ho
M : ye btane ki aur samjhane ki koshish k ye sab sach hai.. koi spna nhi hai.. hum log aur hamare pass kaise super natural powers ho skti hai
N to sayank : ho gya tum dono ka.. kitna over react karte ho.. uff pta nhi tum logo ko hi kyun super natural powers mile.. jihne khud pr bhi yakin nhi hai
M to N : main to ye soch rha hu.. kisi ko mile na mile pr tumhe super natural powers nhi milni chahiye thi.. aur upper se tumhe hamesha se sab kuch pehle se hi pta tha.. over react hum nhi kar rhe.. ye to sirf reaction hai.. over hona to abhi baki hai(interrupted by gunjan)
G to Mayur : bas karo.. ye ladai jhagda.. kya kar rhe ho.. hume uss fifth power ko dhudna bhi hai..
G to sayank : aur tum log ye mat bhulo.. guruji ne bola hai k ab se tum log hamare sath rahoge.. to ye sab natak karne se achcha hai.. k tum apna samaan jald se jald shift kar lo.. aur ye over reaction time to time karte rehna
sayanK : 😲 😲 😲
S : chismish tumhe kya hua itna gussa kyun kar rhi ho..
G : kya karu.. hum log aapas me hi behas karte rehte hai..
S to G: sorry chismish.. ab se aisa nhi hoga.. hum log jald se jald apna samaan shift kar lenge.. aur tum tension mat lo.. aage se no over reacting...
(mayank surprised hai k samrat kisi ladki se itne innocently baat kar rha hai. wo bhi bina kisi matlab k. aur iss baat se to shocked hai k usne ye promise kiya hai k iss baat ko lekar wo ab over react nhi karega.. jabki thodi derr pehle sabse zyada over reacting wo hi kar rha tha.. )
M (murmuring) : isse kya hua... abhi to itna over react kar rha tha.. aur ab ye promise..
(nupur ye baat sun leti hai)
N to M : isse samjhdari kehte hai, tumhari tarah nhi.. bas behas karni hai..
M : achcha kiya bta dia.. mujhe to pta hi nhi tha k samrat bhi samjhdar hai..
N : tumhe adat nhi hai naa apne alwa kisi ki tariff sun na(interrupted by samrat)
S : bahut ho gya.. ab hum log yahaan shift ho jayenge jald se jald.. aur haan tum dono pls jhagda mat karna
M : mujhe kabhi jhagda karte huye dekha hai kya.. main to girls se baat karna bhi psnd nhi karta
N : haan jaise main aayi thi tumhare pass
M : kya pta.. pta nhi kyun har baar mujh se hi takrati ho.. koi aur milta nhi hai naa tumhe
N : itni badi galt fehmi
M : main galt fehmi nhi palta
G to mayur : stop it.. agar tum dono ne ek baar aur jhagda kiya to main kya karungi mujhe khud nhi pta
N to G : so sorry dear... main puri koshish karungi..
M to G : waise iski koshish hi bahut hai kyunki jhagda to ye hi karti hai
G : bas ab aur nhi
G to sayank : tumhe dhakke mar kar nikalana padega kya??? jao aur apna samaan shifting ki taiyari karo..
S : hey chismish keh dia.. to keh dia.. ab tum tension mat lo.. hum abhi ja rhe hai
(mayank aur samrat apne purane ghar se samaan shift karne k liye uss ghar me jaate hai.. wahaan ghar pr)
M : kya baat hai.. tu bada interest dikha rha hai.. gunjan me
S : NHi aisi koi baat nhi hai. aur waise bhi samrat ko har ladki me interest rehta hai.. pr tujhe nhi lagta k tu nupur se kuch zyada hi jhagda karta hai
M : jhagda???? main kuch nhi karta.. wo to pta nhi kyun apne aap hi ho jata hai. usse jwab dene me bada mazaa aata hai.. wo itna bolti hai jab uske saamne koi bolta hai to uske chehre ka rang dekhne layak hote hai.. wo naa to gusse me hoti hai.. aur naa hi kuch kehne layak.. jaise wo behas hi uske life k liye most important ho.. pr achchi baat ye hai k wo fight agle hi pal bhul jati hai.. fight jaisi cheez ko wo zyada derr yaad nhi rakhna chahti..(interrupted by samrat)
S : ahem ahem.. nupur ki tariff.. tum se.. tabiyat to thik hai naa???
M : nhi.. itna sab kuch hua hai to dimag thikane pr nhi hai syad 😆 😆 😆
S : haan.. aur guru ji.. wo powers.. aur ab to hum logo ko unke sath bhi rehna bhi hai.. chismish ko pehli baar itne gusse me dekha.. wo bhi tum logo ki wajah se
M : 😲 😲 mana k wo hamari wajah se gusse me hi.. pr tum ho naa uska gussa shant karne k liye.. waise kya baat hai.. tum gunjan k bare me kuch zyada hi sochte ho.. kuch hai to bta do.. main help karunga
S : tum aur meri help??? aur wo bhi iss mamle me.. main apni help khud kar lu..
M : matlab kuch hai
S : kuch to hai.... pr kya hai wo pta karna hai
M : ab to wahi rehna hai pta kar lena... kya problem hai..
S : to fir chalo pta karne hi sahi...
(dono apne samaan lekar pahuchte hai.. aur gunur unhe darwaje pr milti hai)
gunur : welcome....
sayank : thanx....
N : ghar ka right hand side me tum dono rahoge aur left hand side me main aur gunjan
M : haan waise bhi boys hamesha right hote hai isliye right hand side me rahenge..
N : achcha.. boys aur right.. ye do alag alag baatein hai.. pr abhi kya hai naa hamre pass koi aur option nhi tha.. isliye tum log ghar k right hand side wale portion me rahoge.
S : ok girls.. jaisa tum chaho...
(sayank apna saaman set karte hai)

TO BE CONT...
PART 10 - PG 17


Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
finally you updated
mazza aa gaya
rocking update tha
hope to see more of mayur soon as this is a mayur ff
update soon
luv
mahima
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Posted: 15 years ago
That was wonderful part

And A BIG THANK GOD THAT U UPDATED ATLEAST

Really, your update was mindblowing
Bas ab kuch 5th power ke bare mein bhi pata chal jaye

Thanx for pm

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