hey guys
Main little bit irritrate ho gyi hu only love stories likh kar... so iss story me puri gang ko ek kaam milega.nature ki taraf se.. aur kuch super natural powers bhi..Pr apni powers ki bare me sabko nhi pta hai.. aur jinko pta hai wo iska wrong use nhi kar sakte.. I am trying to make them Super heros... Iss FF ko magical banane ki koshish karungi...
Main story ka naam change karke kitni hasrat hai se Five The power kar rhi hu.....
Hope k idea sabko psnd aayega..
Part 2
(class k baad gunjan aur nupur class se nikalte hai.. gunjan ko library me kuch kaam hota hai, dono library jaane lagte hai, pr bich me hi basket ball team ki practice dekhne ruk jate hai)
N : Pta nhi ye team kaise number one hai, Kaise practice karte hai???
G : kyun, kya burai hai practice me...
N : agar yeh iss tarah se naa khel kar meri soch k hisab se khele to zyada behtar khel sakte hai..
(tabhi samrat aur mayank piche se aate hai aur nupur ki baat sun lete hai)
S : to tumhari soch kya hai nupur???
N : tum kya karoge meri soch jaan kar???
S : main team ka captain hu... aur mujhe bhi to pta hona chahiye k meri team ki burai kis khushi me ki jaa rhi hai.....
N : burai nhi kar rhi hu.. bas mujhe lga k agar jaisa main sochti hu waisa khele to behtar ho sakte hai.
M : to tumhare kehne ka matlab hai k team achcha nhi khel rhi hai..
N : mera ye matlab nhi tha
M : to kya matlab tha tumhe syad pta nhi hai excel apna har match jit ta aaya hai.. aur tum uss team me kami nikal rhi ho.
N : Agar kisi ko suggestion dena galat hai.. to syad main galat hu..pr mujhe jo lga maine kaha..
S : oh to tumhe lagta hai k tumhe basket ball ki knowledge hai.. to kyun naa tum khelo
N : main ?? aur basket ball???
S : haan abhi tumne hi to kaha k tumhare tarike se khelne se team zyada achcha khel payegi..
N : haan maine apna view rakha tha
S : ab to tumhe khelna padega.. daro mat.. main nhi khelunga tumhare sath.. Tumhare sath mayank khelega..
M :😲 Main?? maine aaj tak basket ball k match dekhe hai kabhi khela nhi hai
S : koi baat nhi dude. Hume bhi to pta chale k nupur ko basket ball ki kitni knowledge hai.. to abhi issi whqt..tum dono one on one basket ball khelne wale ho..
G to S : samrat agar mayank mana kar rha hai to rehne do..
S : pr ab wo nhi karega.. main abhi basket ball court khali karwata hu
(samrat basket ball court khali karwata hai.. Nupur aur mayank basket ball khelna shuru karte hai)
G to S : bechara mayank??
S : bechara kyun??
G : kyunki nupur bachpan se basket ball khelti aayi hai, aur mayank ne aaj tak basket ball ko hath bhi nhi lagaya hai.. kuch nhi to college me uski reputation ka to tum khayal kar lete..
S : ye maine kya kar dia.. ?? tumne mujhe pehle kyun nhi btaya
G : tum kisi ki sun hi kaha rhe the... bas tumne jaakar annouce kar dia..
S : pta nhi .. aaj to mayank ka kya hoga..
commentary by chako :nupur aur mayank ki game start ho chuki hai.. aur nupur lagatar kai baar basket pe basket kiye jaa rhi hai.. aur mayank kuch nhi kar paa rha hai.. pr yeh kya yeh mayank ne pehla basket kiya... again nupur k pass ball aa gyi hai.. nupur ne basket kia pr wo miss ho gyi.. Aisa lag rha hai jaise mayank k ander ek nyi jaan aa gyi hai aur wo ab nupur k barabar se match khel rhe hai.. aur mayank ne bhi basket me ball daal di hai.. again mayank.. nupur aur mayank equally khel rhe hai.. aisa lag rha hai jaise mayank ko excel ki team me hona chahiye... aur nupur bhi bahut achchi game khel rhi hai.. agar excel ki team me girls ki jagah hoti to wo nupur hi leti.. ya fir excel ko girls team banane k bare me sochna chahiye......aur mayank ne ek aur basket kiya....
(tabhi wahaan principal aa jate hai..wo pehle to kuch derr nupur aur mayank ka match dekhte hai then he clapped👏👏👏)
P :👏👏weldone.. mayank.. tumne btaya nhi k tum bhi itni achchi basket ball khel lete ho
M : thanx sir. Pr mujhe bhi aaj hi pta chala hai. Iss se pehle maine kabhi basket ball ko hath tak nhi lagya hai..
P : weldone..Nupur.. ek ladki ko itna achcha basketball khelte huye pehli baar dekha ha
N : thanx sir..
P to M : mayank tum chaho to excel ki basket ball team ko join kar sakte ho
P to N : aur nupur main chahta hu k tum excel me basket ball ki girls team banao aur usse manage karo.. excel pehla aisa college hoga jahaan basket ball ki girls team bhi hogi..
(aur principal wahaan se chale jate hai)
S & M :😆😆😆 hahahahahaha.. excel ki girls team...😆 😆 wow nupur tum to yeh match jeet kar bhi haar gyi
N : haan 😭 mujhe bhi aisa hi lag rha hai.. arre yahan ki ladkiya Miss India competition k liye hai, basket ball k liye nhi
G to N : chalo canteen chalte hai.. wahi kuch sochte hai
M : hum log bhi aate hai..
Canteen me
N : mayank tumne aisa kyun kaha k tum pehli bar basket ball khel rhe ho. pr tumhare khelne se to lag rha tha k tum kafi achcha khel lete ho
S : haan mayank mujhe bhi aisa hi laga
M : pta nhi guys yeh kaise hua... Mujhe bas itna pta hai k jab starting me nupur basket pr basket kar rhi thi to mujhe aisa lga k mujhe ye match harna nhi hai.. bas pta nhi uske bad apne aap mujh se basket hone lge...
G : you means yeh to tumari ichcha shakti matlab willpower ka natiza hai..?????????
M : I am not sure.. pr syad kuch aisa hi tha.. ye baat maine kai baar note ki hai.. jab mujhe lagta hai k main nhi kar paunga aur wo kaam mujhe karna hi hai...to pta nhi wo kaam achanak se mujh se kaise ho jata hai..
S : yeh baat mayank ne sahi kahi.. Main aur mayank sath me rehte hai, ab tum mano ya na mano.. pr aisa hi hai..sirf mayank k sath hi nhi mere sath bhi.. waise Nupur tumhari girl's team .................& then samrat & mayank start laughing....
N : dekho guys.. tum mera mazak banana band karo. Warna tumhe bahut bhari padega..
M : kya karogi..princi ko shikayat lagaogi.. Main tumhe princi ka room bta du...milwa bhi skta hu principal se..syad wo tumhe bhul gye ho..😆 again mayank & samrat start laughing
N : ok fine.. mayank..5 min baad tum mujh pr hasne layak nhi rahoge..
G : NO Nupur. Tum aisa kuch mat karna
N : main aisa hi karungi..
(nupur wahaan se chali jati hai.Gunjan ko samrat rok leta hai)
S : tum nupur ko kya karne se rok rhi thi..usne to kuch bola hi nhi
G : wo main nupur ki aur nupur mere mann ki baat aaram se jaan lete hai.. isliye agar usne aisa kuch kaha hai to mayank tum taiyar rehna.. sirf 5 min ki baat hai
M : Main ready hu gunjan.. pr mujhe ab bhi samjh me nhi aaya k tumhe nupur pr itna yakeen kaise hai...
G : kyunki main usse achche se janti hu...isliye bas 5 min bhi pure hone wale hai tum dekhte jao
(peon aake mayank ko principal ne bulaya hai yeh msg deta hai....)
TO BE CONT.......................
pls make comment.. I am ready for negetive comments.. pls do the comments.......
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Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 15 years ago
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