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Soph

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

hey kiran

sorry for the late comment

the part was awesome

i simply loved it

so cool and so intense part

amazing

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

hey sorry 4 the late reply great part ! x

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bombaydesi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

I read both the parts and they were great, quite different from your other two but never the less the story is ver interesting and I know that this ff is going to be great. Just confused about a few things if damini and armaan are married an also if ridhima is married or was previously married? Can't wait to read more!!

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bombaydesi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

Both the parts were great, can't wait to read more!!

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kshanikaa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

With the good number of secrets that this story contains, i think you have well planned in advance about its further structure and shape. The part was scattered but i liked it. And your writing style differs here from your previous works. Its too early to speculate anything so am just sitting here and waiting to read the next parts.

p.s- am not a new reader, lol. I had commented in both of your ffs.