Mirage: (AR)-*NOTE PAGE 26* - Page 7

hey kiran.. loved the part.. cont soon.. :D

*reserved :)

Oi Laptop Buddy!! Remember Me 😆

I am so glad you started another FF. Congratulations 🥳

I have 80 other PMs to get through and reply 😆

So up until then RESERVED!!!

But seriously made me very happy to see your new FF

Hannah Sophia 😊

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Hello There 😃

Well ermmm one word and word word only (x3 of the same word) WOW WOW WOW!!! The writing is in a completely different style... matured in ways more than one👏.

This is going to be interesting to read an intense FF by you contrary to the 5 years on (which till date I am a HUGE fan) You have said so much, yet barely revealed any secrets so far.... Riddhima

My favourite quote from both pieces would have to be the following:

A meeting could be the start of something new, or the revival of something forgotten... -Loved it.Sounded like a piece of Literature. One of the quotes which you will never forget. It was succinct yet had so much depth. Revealing that there is a lot more up in store for us. Cannot wait!!!

Niki pregnant- cannot wait to read further in how you handle AN relationship and on relationships, I am very excited to see how you shape up Armaan and Riddhimas relationship... The VM (which I loved) conveying problems within their relationship. And I find the character of Damini more intriguing than the AR. I wonder whats between ArDa and why their relationship is the way it is? Rohan little confused on his part in this story- Brother sister don't get along... hmm wonder why I guess only time will tell (well theoretically time won't tell anything an update will 😛😆)

Well its been wonderful to read a piece from you. It really has.

Do continue to PM!!! Or else.... (well there is nothing I can actually do, but still do send me a PM when you do update)

Love Ya Doll

Soph😊

okkkkkkkkkaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyy.......
kiran....let me clear dis up:
so
Ridz and Niks show up on Armi Abhi's doorstep
Ridz says Niks is preggy
Niks throws up
Abhi comes out and goes to Niks
and both Armi and Abhi are left with fainted girls in their arms?????????? 😕

ok did i get that right?????
cuz i'm not entirely sure wat happened @ the end!
update!!!!!
XOXOXO,
Sheena!!
ps-- did i say UPDATE already??????

BAAAAAAAACKK! with sookie's not quite polite REMINDER *glares* um here...yes yes! :D

REPLIES TO PART 1

@ Suni: hahahaha...you know suni, what i love the most abt ur comments? you basically cover the WHOLE part with your added comments, and so, if i have ever forgotten what i did write, i remember it again after reading ur comments :D anyways, as long as um getting them, i wont be complaining...who does for long ones, huh? :P but yeah...Damini was a shocker for most, though i think I would have guessed myself if i was the reader...hmm..and yeah, theres smg abt old friends...they just tend to KNOW theres smg wrong when there is...and it is a trait, I think, that only and solely belongs to people who have known us for a long time....yes it does! anyways...thanks a ton for the comment..I just read your comment on the new part and u have got me grinning :D thanks again! :)

@ spri: tera baad main to ana nee hai...main tere baqwas comment se hi khush hu!! itna kasht kese ker leti hain ap do lines likhne ka bhi? :P

@ Mira: Heyy! Im really glad u liked it...and nothing makes me happier than to get new readers :D i hope you stick to it! thanks a ton!

@ Sookie: And here comes the late lateef :D im letting you off just cuz :D poor thing just got back to work! haha...byt yeah...um glad you liked the part, more so cuz you were specific in pointing out things you liked...thats always a winner for me! Yeah, Damini, in my head, is someone I would really like...i know that...and shes got me intrigued too, so pretty much I have thought of, what to do with her :D And Abhi-Nikki...hmmm, classic pair they are...not any from my own life but cud be! hmmm...and well, i always treat you nicely, but you are officially off the hook FOR NOW! Comment on the next one :P

kshanika: Wow! That was such a sweet, precise and to the point comment..one that made me grin wide! The vm was just crude enough...:D with the scenes i had, but people liked it so kind of.,..mission accomplished! i hope you stick by till the end...new readers, like i said, always get me grinning wide...thanks for your comment!

@ Tahmina: :) first of all, thanks a ton for your comments! And no, I guess I will stcik to your real name...i like it! :) And yeah, im glad u liked whatever i wrote...thanks for ur comments!

Kiran

heylo kiran........

@Kiran: i'm glad u like reading my comments.. dont worry, u'll have them coming for every part and if the update ever crosses the one-month deadline, i'll be there to pester u for an update ;) ;) loved reading ur reply :)

btw ,kiran-- was my analysis right????

haha dats cool i dnt mind wat u cal me its jus dat Tarm is shorter so u knw easier and quicker to type lol im a lazy sod.