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Posted: 15 years ago
hey love all ur parts. Thank you so much for pming me, this awsome FF. Plus this will be my first FF not by Lina lol. Do continue soon. And add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: _Komal_

hey love all ur parts. Thank you so much for pming me, this awsome FF. Plus this will be my first FF not by Lina lol. Do continue soon. And add me in ur pm list

hey komal thanks 4 comment dear
well its honour 4 me than as its ur 1stff else than lina
i m so happy that u like it
i'll surelly add u in pm list
thanks 4 ur comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
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mayur was awwwwwwwwesome
update next prt soooooooooon plezzzzzz
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Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

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mayur was awwwwwwwwesome
update next prt soooooooooon plezzzzzz
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm

thanks dear.......ur commentt means a lot
i m soo happy that u like this update😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys thank u all 4 ur comments...........i ave replied to each n everyones comment....do see them.........i m really happy that u all liked the previous part n also mayank
only Mahak didn't like this mayu........but relax dear he will be responsible when he will madly fall in love with nupur n will understand the meanings of responsbility.........till than wait
as u all know i have already told u that this ff will not be that long...........i'll end up it soon
some were saying story is so slow....so im speeding up it now
so here u go


PART 4
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Now their servent Ramo kaka has returned 4rm his village n is doing their all chores.....
there was a small get to gether in gunjan home........nupur n mayank were also there.......it was decided that samrat n gunjan's engangement will be after an week.........everyone was very happy with this especially samrat n gunjan......


ONE DAY LATER


Samrat n benji both were hell shocked at wat had they heard....they firstly didn't believe thier ears n finally samrat asked mayank
S: mayank tum hosh main to ho...............ye kia bol rahe ho
B: arry kahan yaar agaar hosh main hota to ye bolta kya
M: kyon main ne aisa kya keh dia jo tum dono itna hiraan ho rahe ho
S: acha to tum jo keh rahe ho.....tmhe kya lagta hai hum aur kaise react karien
M: arry aisa kya keh dia hai main ne............bas yehi to kaha hai k mujy pyar ho gya hai
B: dekho dude mujy lagta hai tumhari neend pori nahi hoi issliye aisi behki bahki batien kr rahe ho.......
S: mujy bi aisa hi lagta hai.........definietly tmhari neend pori nahi hoi
M: neend pori kya.........main to pori raat hi nahi soo paya..........bas sochta raha k mujhy aaakhir hoa kia hai......finally mujy realize hoa k mujhy pyar ho gya hai
B: dekha main ne kaha tha na iss ki neend pori nahi hoi
M: shut up benji.........meri neend ka mere pyar se kya relation
S: chalo tmhari nend se nahi to tum se to hai na
M: han wo to hai...( smilingly he said dreaming abt his love)
B: (looking at this smiling mayank) sammy main behosh hone laga hon
M: tu behosh ho k dikha yahin khirki se bahar phaink don ga
S: (almost controlling his giggle)......relax guys
M: main sanjida(serious) hon guys
B: (placing his hand on his heart) aur main ranjida(sad)
M: (ignoring his nautanki) guys mujy sach main pyar ho gya hai
S: impossible......(he said as he was anoncing this)........tmhe bukhar ho sakta hai, zukham ho sakta hai,malaria,thphoid, cholera etc kuch bi ho sakta hai but pyar........no way( finally he finished his speech)
M: ( irritated now) kyon nahi ho sakta mujy pyar...........
B: (confused now) lekin ye pyar........
M: ho gya hai na.........ab main kya karon(said innocently making a puppy face)
S: (coming near mayank)..........waise wo kon bad kismat........(at mayank's glare) i mean wo kon khuskismat hai jiss se THE MAYANK SHARMA ko pyar ho gya hai
M: nahi wo main nahi bataon ga
B: kyon nahi batao gay?
M: agar main ne bataya to tum log phir se apni nautanki shuru kr lo gay
S: promise nahi karien gay........tum batao na......aakhir wo hai kaun
M: bata don
B: han bta do.......(their curosity increased)
M: sach main bata don
S: ok fine na batao
M: arry bata raha hon na
S: to jaldi batao na phir
M: wo na.....actually woo........wo.....
B: us ka naam woo hai
M: shut up benji.....
B: khudi to lage hove thy wo wo
S: benji muhn band........ok.........chalo tum bolo mayu
M: closing his eyes...........i love nupur............
after than he heard a whatttttttttt.....................then after hearing nothing more he finally opened his eyes n there was just samrat........benji was nowhere seen

M: ye benji kahan baag gya........(asking samrat).........nupur ko batane to nahi chala gya(becomming worried)
S: (finally spoke).........itni door ki na socho........tum ne jo bomb phora(blast) hai wo bechara kahan jaye ga
M: (totally confused)kia matlab?
S: (pointing towards ground) matlab yeh...........(benji was laying on ground)
M: (still confused) arry pyar to mujy hoa hai.......iss k kyon hosh urr gaye


B: (still in disbelieve) mayank tmhe nupur se pyar hoa hai
M: (sweetly smiling n shyingly said) haan
S: mayank tmhe pori dunya main koi aur larki nahi mili pyar krne k liye
M: kyon nupur main kya burai hai
B: nupur main koi burai nahi beta...........lekin tum shayad bhol gaye ho k pata nahi kitni dafa tm uss se apni izzat karwa chuky ho
M: arry wo sab bhol jao...........(he said comfortably laying on his bed)
S: dekho mayu hamien koi problem nahi lekin nupur ye kabi nahi bhole gi
benji was laughing at this......... n finally stopped laughing at mayank's glare

S: waise ye accident hoa kab?
M: kyaaaa??????????
S: i mean tmhe nupur se pyar kab hoa
M: kal raat ko party mein 9:20 se 9:25 k darmyaan
B: tm ne aaj tak to koi kaam time deh k nahi kia to phir ye kaise?
S: waise uss waqt ham kahan thy
M: tm apni gunjan k pass thy aur benji udhy ki girl friend pe line maar rah tha
S: yani ye sab hamari presence main hoa.........(amaized)
B: itna bara accedent hamari aankhon k samne hoa aur ham kuch nahi kr sake(as regretting on this)
S: nupur bi to wahin thi na
B: aur nahi to kya wahan bi to mayank ne uss se kitni tareef karwaai thi jab iss ne glass ki tray nichy girai thi................bhol gaye kya
S: of course yaad hai ( said with proud as if he has remembered something very impotant)
M: (hell angry) tum log mera mazak urra rahe ho
S: arry nahi mayu hamari itni himat..........
S: waise ye achanak kaise ho gya........hamare samne aur hame pata bi nahi chala
M: tmhare samne kahan hoa.............wo to udhy k samne hoa
B: udhy ka iss se kya relation
M: wo kya hai na udhay nupur ki tareef kr raha tha k nupur kitni achi hai, sab ka kitna khyal akhti hai, n she is really beautiful, jab wo hasti hai to her eyes look so beautiful n they sparkle n her sooo long n beautiful hair( guys remember na arjun likes long n beautiful hairs of girls) aur jab wooo
S: tu to aise keh raha hai jaise tu ne uss din pehli baar usse dekha tha
B: (curiously) acha to phir kya hoa
M: phir kya pehle to main aaram se sunta raha phir mujy jalan hone lagi k wo iss tarha mere samne nupur ki tareef kr raha hai.........i mean how he could aur nupur bi uss se kaise hans hans k batien kr rahi thi..........issliye main party se jaldi wapiss aa gya tha
B: ohhhhhhhh to tu pary se iss liye jaldi aa gya tha
M: innocently) haan
S: ohhhh my poor mayu

M: guys ab main kya karon? he asked them sweetly
B: iss building ki top se kood kr suicide kr loo nupur ko tmhare pyaar pe yakeen aa jaye ga
M: (being hell worried) kyaa???
S: benji usse koi decent mushwara do
B: mere pass to iss k liye aur koi idea nahi
M: samrat tum ne bi to gunjan ko purpose kiya tha na tum hi kuch batao
S: (being confused) wo kya hai na mera experience kafi dangerous hai (u will become to know abt it later) to aik kaam krte hai gunjan se pochte hain..........shayad wo kuch help kare
M: (liking the idea) han ye thiek hai...........usse phone karo
S: ok

tring tring............tring tring
M: kya kaha
S: bata thora sabr karo.........abi bell ja rahi hai
G: (yawning) hellooooo
S: hello chashmish..........
G: samrat tum.......
S: wo mujy tm se pochna tha k agar kisi larki ko purpose krna ho to kaise karien jab k larki aap se sakht nafrat krti ho
G: (becoming angry) tmhe kisse pupose krna hai...........aur ye raat k do baje tum poch kya rahe ho mujh se
S: kya 2 bajh chuke hain.......(looking at watch) (completely embarassed) ................wo sorry chashmish good night n he disconected the phone

M: kya kaha uss ne( asking with curiousity)
S: mayank tu na...........time dekha hai ..........2 bajh chuke hain.........tu lagta hia mera aur gunjan ka sagai aur shadi se pehle hi divorce karwaye ga
M: but uss ne kaha kya
S: tu abi ja k soo ja aur nupur k sapne dekh...........
B: (interrupting)........arry ittne darawne sapne!!!!!!!!!!!!
mayank glared at benji n benji
B: yawning i think mujhy sona chahiye.........good night
M: lekin samrat
S: ab jo krna hai subah ok........not now
samrat left 4 his room n mayank lay down on his bed n started dreaming abt nupur..........his nupur he thought n went to sleep saying i love you nupur

NEXT DAY

Udhay n gunjan came in sammy's apartment........mayank n sammy were in kitchen making coffee......
U: (spoke loudly) yeh kya kia tum ne mayank
hearing his that much loud voice cup fell 4rm mayank's hand n samrat's painful shriek shook the whole building n he starding dancing at one foot holding his other foot in his hand.........
M: (bending down to hold cup n after carefully inspecting it) thank god..........
S: (stopped his dance n hell shocked said to mayank)...... thank god tmhara cup bach gya aur mere pair ka kya hai aur aa jaye ga........hai na?
G: oh god samrat kitni zoor se chekhe thy tum .......mera dil abi bi itni zoor se darak raha hai ( putting her hand at her heart)
S: (irritated) yani mere pair ki kisi ko fikar hi nahi
B: arry gunjan ji aayi hain...........welcome gunjan ji
samrat cast an angry glare on benji..........noticing his glare he changed the topic
B: waise lounge main tu main betha tha tm log kahan se aaye
M: benji tumhare samne se hathi bi guzar jaye to tmhe nazar nahi aaye ga...... ye to phir insaan hain
B: waise tm log dinner k time yahan...............koi khas kaam tha(becoming worried as their cook was again on leave of the day)
U: han wo ham ne socha aaj ham dinner yahan se karien gay
S, B n M: kyaaaaaaaaa??????
U: dont worry main dinner main sirf roti, chiken roast, biryani,salaad, aur kheer khaon ga........zyada takaluf ki koi zarorat nahi.........aaj mujy zyada bhook nahi hai na
M: agar gunjan yahan na hoti na main tmhe tmhare keeme k samoose bi khlata sath
G: offo udhay bhaiya aap bi na..........wo to ham Mayank ko dekhne aaye thy
M: kyon mujy kya hoa hai????? (confused at this)
U: arry haan.........main to dinner k naam se yeh bhol hi gya tha..........mayank ye kya kr dia tum ne??????
M: (becoming worried saw everyone) kyon main ne kya kr diya
B: (also said) aur nahi to kya um ne uss wadi-e- khar pe kadam rakha hai.......aye nadaan larke tum jante nahi ho iss raste main kitne kante hon gay..........agar chub gaye to
M: (becoming irritated) oofoo kya keh rahe ho
U: kya tm sach main apni life se mayoos(disappointed) ho chuke ho
M: (said straightining up) arry kyon main kyon hone laga
B: tu phir kya lohee ke heart, stomach, lever kharid liye hain
M: na....nahi to
U: (added more) to bas phir tmhara bachna mushkil hai
M: mujhy kuch samaj nahi aa raha tum kya keh rahe ho (becoming restless)
S: (he also joined) iss main sab se pehle samajh hi to khatam hoti hai
U: (patting him on his shoulder) buhat dangerous disease hai..........iss to acha hai tum aik sath buhat si sleeping pills kha lo...........
B: ya nehar main chalang laga do (revolving around mayank)
U: ya phir gale main rassi daal k fan se latak jao (also revolving around him)
B: agar latakna mushkil lage to samne switch board main ja k hath de do
U: lamha ba lamha marne se behtar hai yeh

M: (wiping away the sweat 4rm his forehead that was appearing in december) looking towards sammy 4 help............samrat yaar mujy kya hoa hai
S: tu pagal ho gya hai aur kya.........aaj tak tujhy kabi zukhaam bi hoa hai kya.........ye mazak kr rahe hain bewkooof.......he said almost laughing

G: oofoo yeh kya bole jaa rahe ho tum log..........mayank kya tum sach main nupur se pyar krte ho( guys here gunjan is not as delecate as in mjht)
U: han..........sach main krte ho kyaaaaaa
M: aik minute........sammy tu ne udhay ko kyon bataya..........tujh se koi baat control nahi hoti( now approaching 4 his neck)..........ab yeh siddhaa ja k nupur ko bataye ga
S: (moving back) arry main ne sirf gunjan ko bataya tha
B: udhay ko main ne bataya(said proudly)
M: kyaaaaaaaaaaa
B: han iss ne pocha mayank aaj kal kya kr raha hai..........tu main n bata diya k muhabbat kr raha hai
M: main tmhe choru ga nahi
U: (confused) yeh mayank itna excited kyon ho raha hai k mujhy pata hai
S: kuch nahi beta tu itna mat soch.........tujhy suit nahi krta

G:ofoo guys choro yeh sab..........mayank tum sach main nupur se pyar krte ho
M: (murmuring to himself) yeh ab sidha ja k nupur ko bataye gi aur meri love story shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho jaye gi
G: nahi krte kya?????? (asked suspicoiusly)
M: of course krta hon..........true love krta hon(he said sweetly showing his dimples)
S: waise tum to nupur ki friend ho tum batao kya nupur mayank ko pasand krti hai
G: (hesitating a bit) like??????????? mayank to nupur ko aik aankh nahi bata........i can say that she hates mayank
listining this mayank fell on the couch that was behind him
while samrat n benji almost controlled their giggle

M: (disapponted) ab kya ho ga???????
S: hona kya hai tujy kiss ne kaha tha k nupur se pyar kr

N: nupur se kya karoooooo???????
nupur was at the door............n everyone was hell worried.........wat if nupur had heard everything

S: (to mayank).........tu to gya......
mayank was completely shocked


PRECAP
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mayank went to nupur's apartment to purpose her offocially

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thats it guys............ sorry 4 all this rubbish...........i was just trying to make it funny.......bt i think it was boring
sorry 4 no mayur in this part..........bt in next there will a lot of mayur part

maybe you all are thinking that yeh kya rubbish hai.........pyar aisa hota hai kya??????//
bt as u know that how much careless is mayank..............he himself dont know that how much he love nupur...bt he will realise the extent of his love 4 nupur soon..........so wait till than

do tell me how was this part..........ur comments mean a lot.........so plzzzzzzzzzzzzz do comment
criticism is more than wellcom...............as i know i m going to get it 4 my this update😭




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Posted: 15 years ago
rose it's lovely yaar. akher mayank ko pyaar ho hi gaya. i think story ab shuru hogi. i just love sayank and benji convo. their so sweet. Maynak going to propose nups. omg. pls cont soon yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg!
this part is so funny
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
update soon!!!!
can't wait 4 next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Rabi,
Awesome update.
it was funny as usual.
OMG humara mayank ko itna jaldi pyar hogaya.
veryyyyyyyyy Gooooooooooood.
great update.
keep it up.
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved it
But Mayank fell in love so fast?
Ok...
It was so funny
ROFL when reading this
my favorite part was when Benji was on the floor and Mayank said that he loved Nupur
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
lol....this part ws vry much funny......sab kitna mazaak uda rahe the mere pyaare mayu ka...nywz continue soon...

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