U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131 - Page 18

Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl

I must say everytyme i read ur updte m lyke burst out laughing all the time.........u hve shown true boys kinda attitude.............love ur ff.............m nt regular in commenting plz dun mind that bt i laways do read ur ff......................keep up the good work and thora speed up karo pl...........

Originally posted by: dolly18

heyi really really enjoyed it jaan

thanks so much 4 the pm

pls continue soon n lov ya bye

Originally posted by: mayur_fan

hey dear....
awesome upd8.... thanks a lot
it was verryyy funny.....
nups was standing on mayu's hand...LOL...😆😆
seriously amazing.... hmm thanks dear..........i m happy u like it
i am not used to mayu being sooo careless, but this is what ff's are all about...u add a bit of ur personality to the characters, twist and turn their behaviours...by this u imprint ur own personality on them, most of the time u dont come to know about this....but think....are the traits in ur charecter, the same as they are in u?? does ur character have the same likes and dislikes as u?? does ur story portray a part of ur thinking??? then, yes...u have shared quite a lot more than just a story with us.... you r absloutely right
so i dont mind this mayank, it's entertaining to see him soo careless for once...ya i also want to see mayank like this.....bt i like mayank of mjht more........actually i dont like him bt i love him
hope u dint get bored by my loonnnnggg comment...of course not.........infact i m very happy with such a long comment of urs
it feels nice reading long comments............btw thanks 4 commenting n understanding this ff

thnxxx 4 the pm....
loads of love,
jigi...

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hey Rabi,

Again an awesome update. thanks dear

i enjoyed a lotttttttt .......well i m happy that purpose of this update n ff is fulfilled😉

The most funniest moment was when samrat n benji had put mayank outside the apartment with his clothes 4 office. After reading it I couldn't but lough.

And Mayanks sweet words for sam-benji . hehehe I can easily imagine these word.

Very very nice update.

just loved itthanks jaan

Ur hard work shown in ur update dear

Oh I forgot 1 thing- dear obviously I loved that mayank i m glad like this mayank.....😳

Pls keep it up.

thanx a lotttttttttttttttttttt f0r ur wonderful update. no dear thanks a lot to u 4 such a lovely comment😊

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

loved this mayu

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Hey dear

I really like ur FF

do continue soon plz

thanx for the pm

We all love saduakdu Mayank so its no problem

luv

Nidzy

Originally posted by: ch0c0lates

Good one!

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

hey i loved the update! thanks mahak
mere bhi current mayur track par based "mayur forever" story ke kaafi parts cvs ne chura liye the.......
r cvs reading our ffs????? 😆well...........may be😆
well it was a brilliant part..........
and well written.........thanks a lot
thanks for the update........
and i dont like this mayank oh so u dont like this mayank...........well i too like our real mayank...bt mahak kabi kabi kuch change bi try krna chahiye........isn't it?
bt dont worry mayank will become responsible when he will madly fall in love with nupur n will understand the true meanings of love n responsbility
.........

Originally posted by: fanofmjht

fabulous part

the best part was that nupur was having keys

well

tha answer to the question is that this mayank is really good

Originally posted by: kool_21

its was a really fun filled update