U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 15 years ago

#211

sorry i took so long to edit....but i got extremly busy with work...i thought the week wont be busy but i misjudged it....oh well.

ok let me tell you i suck at commenting..but i still try when the updates are really good...

i love this mayank...realising and accpting his love soon and wanting to do a quick action!!

i have to say i loved benji here too...espc when he fell on the floor!!! ahahahaha

ok now u have to update soon....i wanne see nupur reaction when(if) mayu confess his feelings...

mwah

Edited by parisbynight - 15 years ago

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ZumSrK.

@ZumSrK.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#212

very nice update..
loved it very much while reading..
continue soon.

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#213

Oh i am so excited for the proposal, i am sure mayank will pull it off well, excellent work, keep it up!

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Dhruv

@Hot-Stud

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Posted: 15 years ago

#214

WOnderful..

great job

love all ur updatez

hope ur liking my Phir Milenge ff too..

plzz continue soon..ur awesome writer

Dhruv

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#215

: (looking at this smiling mayank) sammy main behosh hone laga hon
M: tu behosh ho k dikha yahin khirki se bahar phaink don ga
S: (almost controlling his giggle)......relax guys
M: main sanjida(serious) hon guys
B: (placing his hand on his heart) aur main ranjida(sad)
hi rabi
this part is totally funny
mein iski ek ek line per comment karna chati hoon per vo bahut long ho jayga
per awesoem update mera stomach mein pain ho rha hein
laughing

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Sushmitha

@sushu96

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Posted: 15 years ago

#216

awesumm...gr8 wurk dear....continue soon n pm me...👏😃...nd i hope nups agrees to mayu's luv
😃

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Navi

@Navi_44

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Posted: 15 years ago

#217

hahah such a funny part!!

Love it ..u should keep adding more funny parts of the story!!!!

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#218

ROFL ROFL ROFL

Mayu love Nupur?????????????

ROFL

And the whole time I was reading this

I was laughing so hard too good.

And my favorite part were

when Benji was on the floor

and sammy is like
"Tumne jo bomb phora hai woh behchara kaha gaya?"

ROFL

and also the way Mayu says

"9:20 se 9:25 k darmyaan Nupur se pyar hua"

and the whole thingy

and you know I am like dieing to read the next part

Wanto know if Nupur haerd them talking about Mayu's love or not.

And sorry4 the late comment

couldn't sit on the laptop yesterday

but as soon as I saw this FF updated I like ran here.

LOL

Awsome Rabi

plez continue soon.

Love ya

-Lina-

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surbhi tyagi

@EtherealRati

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Posted: 15 years ago

#219

oh this part was really funny . sab mayu ka majak udha rahe the .great work 😃😃

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Rabi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: Tapoor
rose it's lovely yaar. akher mayank ko pyaar ho hi gaya. i think story ab shuru hogi. i just love sayank and benji convo. their so sweet. Maynak going to propose nups. omg. pls cont soon yaar

hey tapoor thanks dear.......
ya mayank ko pyar ho hi gya......😉
n now he going to purpose his nupur..........so lets see wat will happen
i'll cont soon
thanks 4 comment😊