Saarrthi Fan Fic by sumn

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi guyzzzzz......

iam new in this forums,🤬iam so confused......but i want to write fan fic....ok lets start........   ; (IN HERETAGE HOUSE)..........

Arjun:-ohhhh no ayssa nahi ho sukta surej aur mera bhai...nahi ayssa nhai ho sukta...yeh kaysay ho sukta hay aur abb who mera sattaya bhuya ki jugha lay lii....

bhuvrii:- tum sumjhnay ki koshish karoo arjun who tumharay buray bhai hay...aur who mansvii bhabi ko bohut khush rukhay gay

Arjun:-maray janay kay bad itna kuch ho gaya aur kissi any mujhay kuch batay tuk nahi aur tum bhuvriiii....tum to mery patniii thi na ....mujhay tum say yeh umeed nahi thi😡

B:-main tumhay batanay hi walli thi lykin......😭mujahy baisa nay mana ker diya main kya kerty arjun main majboor thi....dekho arjun unn ki shadii ho chukiii hay abb tum kuch nahi ker suktay...

A:-isssi bat ka to dukh hay mujhay kay bohut derr ho gai main nay aanay main derr ker diiii...abb main iss gher main anhi reh sukta

b:-Arjun tum yeh kya keh rahay ho plz ayssa mut kahoooooo yeh theek nahi hay

A:-to kya who theek tha jo maray sath hoa...munsviii bhabi say mujhay yeh umeed nahi thi bhuvriii main unhay maan saman sumjhta tha lykin .....😕 bussss abb main nay feslla ker liya hay hum yahan nahi ruhay gay ,,,aur ager tumhay maray asth culna hay to chulooo werna main tumhay force nahi kerta

B:-arjun.....😭

A:- kya bhuvriii tum mera sath do giii bataooo do gi an mear sath..

B:-han arjun main humesha tumharay asth hon😊

and they both are hug to each other

TO BE CONTINUDE.............

GUYZZZZZ hope kay app ko yeh fan fic achi lugay aur ager achi nahi lugty to plz mujhay bata do ;;;;;;;;i'll stop this..........

OK LUVZ U ALLL

BYEEEEEEEEEEE

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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
👏 👏 👏
great intro
please continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
next scene
arjun bhoomi kay sath nicah aata hay aur sub ko aik jugha akhta kerta hay aur phir baisa say kehta hay...
Arjun:-baisa maray sath jo hoa aur jo appp logo nay kiya acha nahin tha...shayud app sub log yeh bat bhool gay kay mujhay farad kay cause main phusanay main suraj ka bohut bura hath tha
(Bisa to kuch nahin bolty lykin arjun ki mom shukuntla boltin hain)
shakuntala:-Arjun zaban shumbal kay bat kero shayud tum yeh bhool rahay ho kay surej tumhara bura bhai hay..tumharii tameez ko kya hota ja raah hay
A:-Arjun scream and says....anhin nahin hay yeh mera bhai .....bhai ayssay nahin hotay iss nay mera future berbad kernay ki koshish ki hay aur main issay choron ga nahin aur to aur sattaya bhuya kii mowt main isssi suraj kiran ka hath tha.
sh:-nahin yeh galat hay arjun han main mantin hon kay tumhay farad kay cause main phusana main kahin na kahin surej ka bhi hath tha lykin tub who yeh nahin janta tha kay tum uss kay chotay bhai hooo lykin jahan tuk sataya ki moawt ka sawal hay to iss main surej ka hath nahin sumjhay tum ...aur jub sub gher waloo nay surej ko apna liya hay to tumhay kya problum hay..
A:-momm sara gher issay accept ker sukta hay lykin main nahin...mujhay pata tha yeh sub honay wala hay issi liy main nay fesla kiya hay kay main aur bhuvriii iss gher main nahin rahay gay hum yeh gher humesha kay liy chor ker ja rahay hain..
Sh:-hmmmmmm mujhay to phelay say pata tha kay yeh nokraniii zaroor apna rung dikhay giiilykin main tumhay iss kay behkaway main nahin aanay don giii.....
A:-bussssss 😡 app shayud bhool rahin hay kay surej ki suchai chupanay main kissi aur nay nahin bulkay bhuvriii hi nay app ka sath diya hay aur pp bhuvriii per hi ilzamm luga rahin hain....aur aik aur bat yeh faisla bhuvriii ak nahin mera hay sumjh gay appp sub log
he said n leave .....
NEXT SCENE
bhommica packing ker rahi hoty hay aur sath sath rooo bhi rahi hoty hay 😭 arjun bhomii ko dekhta hay aur kehta hay......
ARJUN:-bhuvriii abb kyub roo rahi ho tum ...main tumhay force nahin karon ga ager tum maray sath nahin jana chty to bayshuk mut jaooo iss bat say mujhay khushi to nahin ho giii lykin dukh bhi nahin ho ga..
BHUMICA:-arhjun 😭 ham mujhay pata hay mujh say door reh ker tumhay koi dukh ya perishanii nahin ho giii lykin arjum main nay tum say piyar kiya hay aur main humesha tumharay sath rahon giii bayshuk tum yeh chahooo ya ha chahooooo
arjun look at the bhoomi face and after that he close to bhommi and says sorry bhuvriii main bohut ziada upset hon 😕 n kiss on her forhead and hug 🤗 ..,,, and while huging arjun think ...shayud main bhoomi kay sath kuch ziada hi rood ho gaya tha...but at the momment shefalii appeared like devel 😈 n says..
Shef:-uuuppppsssss lugta hay main galat time per aa gai mujhay knonk ker lyna chahy tha(bhuvrii think ager yehi bat app kuch deer phelay soch lytii to app ka kya jata 😆 )
A:-nahin nahin shefali ayssii bat nahin bataooo koi kam tha..
shef:-yeh main kya sun rahin hon arjun kay tum yeh gher chor ker ja rahay hooo sun loo tum ayssa kuch nahin karoo gay
A:- shefalii main nay tum say koi advice nahin mangiii main fesla ker chuka hon aur acha ho ga kay tum iss wekt yahan say chully jaoo 😡
Shef:- lykin arjun.....
A:- i said leave us alone..
Guyz app logo ko nahin lugta kay arjun nay 1st time koi acha kam kiya hya 😉 uuupppsss sorry 1st time nahin 2nd time 1st acha kam uss nay bhuvriii say shadii ker kay kiya tha 😊
to be con........
previw:-in the new house romence hi romence 😉
ager appp bhummi kay expretion miss nahin kerna chatay to plz plz read out this story....
ok buyyy guyzzz luv u allz
FROME SUMN
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4

yeh little sis great job what a nice part but it was emotional and sad 😭 😭 😭
i cannot wait to see the romance between arjun and bhoomi because it is so sad that they have separated in the show

sumn you should make bhoomi where sari.

please write soon yaar

Edited by ziddi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
thats great 👏 . Keep it up. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6

NEXT SCENE
all are very sad n bhomii as well as....they both are leave haritage house n bhommi weaps n arjun is also lil bit sad................
in next scene in the car
Arjun:-buvrii plz dont cry wahan na to maerii koi ahmeat hay aur na tumharii hum apnay aleg gher main rahay gay aur main wada kerta hon tumhain humesha kush rakhon ga plzzzz dont cry..
Bhomi:-arjun main to nahin ro rahi lykin tum 😆 😉
A:- bhuvrii tum bhi na buchi hi rehna kubhi burii na hona .....
B:- arjun ....... 😕
they both are reched in new house meanz bhuvriii house 😉 ...........
they both are enter in new house n arjun says 2 bhuvrii
A:- bhuvriii sorry yahan per tumhara swaget kernay kay liy koi nahin hay lykin main hon na 😉 .....lykin tumhara moon kyun lutka hoa hay kiya aysay enter ho gi new house main.....
guyz i 'll continue it soon
ok byeeee
luvz u all
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
thanks for the update!
please continue sooN!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
Bhomica:- arjun kiya main awkay hi buchi hon???
Arjun:- tum say kis nay kaha?? 😉
b:- tum hi nay to kaha
A:- ooohoooo bhuvriii tum bhi na awkay hi buchi ho yeh koi mowqa hay aysii batain kernay ka pugliii chaloo abb yeh chawel giraoo aur grehy perwaish karooo..
n bhomii enter the house wid arjun...
bhomica:- arjun itna bura gher hum dono kay liy kiya yahan koi aur bhi rahay ga 😕
A:- ahn na ayhan kaka ashib rahay gay yuvraj bhi rahay ga aur .......
B:- suchiiii 😊 😃 😛
A:- main kaha tha na kay tum buchi ho abhi puglii yaha sirf hum dono raahin gay....chulooo abb main tumhain bed room dikhata hon ok......now smile 😊
arjun n bhomi enters in the bed room
B:-wawoooooooooooooooooooow arjun itna piyara room God yeh kis ka hay ......
A:- humraiii mead ka ,,,,,,, pagel yeh humara room main bhuvriii n arjun's room kaisa hay aur dekho main nay tumharii aur apniii kitnii sariii photos lugaii hoi hain ,,,,,,,,
B:- hmmm bohut acha hay arjun tum nay room kay bahir kyun itniii buriii photo lugaiii hay hum dono kiii.....
A:-kyun kay ana janay wallo kooo yeh lugay kay arjun bhuvrii kay piyar main pagel hay 😉
B:- 😳 arjun tum bhi na ......
in night (a-b"s room )
bhuvriii bath room sy shower lay ker bahir aatii hay n she wears towel goan (b/c its time 2 change her self)
n arjun bed per layta koi file read out ker raha hota hay.....bhuvrii ko dekh ker arjun is shoked kay koi itna khoobsurat bhi hota hay aur who apnii pulkay jhupkna bhool jata hay aur uth ker bhoomi kay pass jata hay ..... he stand her back n bhoomi ko west say pukrta hay
A:- bhommi u looking gorgous ..
B:- 😳 arjun choro na
A:- y?abhi abhi to pukra hay itnni juldii kaysay chor don
B:- plz arjun choro na plz mujhay sherm aa rahi hay
A:- ok chor dayta hon...n leave her
B:- chor diya 😕
A:- kiya 😊 kahoo to dubara paker lon mera kiya jay ga n they both are hug wid each other...
and arjun start kiss on her nick n at the momment arjun's mobile ring .....
B:- arjun tumhara mobile buj raha hay.
A:- bujnay dooo..
B:- arjun dekho to sahiii .
A:- ohhh god pata nahin kon hay .....ohhh keshuve ka phone hay ...
to be continuse
byee luvz u all
FROM sumn
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwww sumn little sis that was romantic😳
kab yeh kabh mein hadi kase ahgaya 😡
please write soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#10
👏 👏 👏 aww plz cnt ssoon

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