It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: arluver15
Hey di

how u been??

today ur FF saved my life...

after i got the pm i was bussy on doing my hw so i coppied it and was gona print it from the library so i told my brother to take me to the library so we were bit late and that lateness saved us from a big accident if we had been on time i wud have been in the hospital with my brother right now....

so thanks ton................

the part was just gr8 loved it very much...

but u know i also was so close to getting in to trouble with my prof i cant help but to read this part in my class so i set in the middle raw so my prof cant see me and i can read the part about when i read about armaan doing that stupid thing and his father confronting him i was a about to cry my eyes were moist....

and the part of armaan n ridhima in the subway was so helarious that i cant stop my self from smilling and one point i actuly had to put my hand on my mouth to stop my slef from laughing out loud.....😆😆

the whole part about drug n stuf and then armaan doing that stupid thing made me want slap him tight....

i think i know something about ridhim that no one knows it is that she loves armaan or is attracted to him.....😉

thanks a lot for the pm di

the part was just fantastic

cont soon

will be waiting

lods of luve

nruti

Hi Nruti...I am so happy that in an indirect way,this ff saved ur life! Wow!Thatw as close...i am glad u and ur brother are well😊 Armaan is a risk taker and in that process sometimes does silly things...even in DMG he was like that😃
yeah, ur guess is probably right😉

[quote=kweekrockstar]wow Bheegi di

i dont know where to start

the part was like a firecracker

first armaan's painful time,

next his most brilliant time, i'm sure,

loved the skating part

so beautiful

armaan really is a jerk,

riddhima has already dropped so many hints of liking him,(i'm thinking so)

n he still doesnt get it

try getting a confession from her dude,

it'll be easier than poking her around like this,

anyways,

the part seriously rocked,

especially the length,

thanks for the pm

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Thanks dear.Armaan is a guy....a little thick headed and slow on the uptake as ridz said😆 Iam glad u liked this part...loved ur comments😊

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maanu

@maanu

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#612

heya,,,,,

its difficult to tell which has been ur best part til now..........

u have always outshown urself..............

amazing work......... the skate ride was too joous..........

do continue soon.......

thanks for the pm

bye

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@ammy-ridz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#613

hi bheegi di.............

I want to talk about the part here..but first I want my curiousity to be satisfied. Plzzz tell me if you Plan all of this or it comes to u in a flow???

I think I have always expressed how much I love your fics(each and every) But, It is always the most appealing thing to me that you by all means in any and every situation in your each fic take the efforts to bring the right values and righteousness to Light.

Simply LOVE U 4 this. It's almost makes me think of panchatantra and other tales where values are indirectly transferred to childrens at the pretext of reciting tales for fun. This is exactly what I think u do.

Coming to the part…Do I have to spell it??? OK!...Brilliant!!...Loved it… The whole stress and addiction issue was dealt very nicely. The coming out of age –the exact point where you might have a great chance of slip , if your gurdains are not cautious abut you. I think this is the stage where a child thinks he can handle everything on his own and ward off parents…. Which is exactly the antithesis of what he actually Needs…………. I may sound baised here but to be frank, it's always the guys who have more chances to slip than girls, and from what I have seen in life the simple reason is that not all but most parents/guardians always have the mentality to keep a tab on the girls or teaching them right morals and act ignorant when it comes to guys(for reasons I don't think I will need to spell out ) I loved the way you portrayed the whole act di. It is now I get what you had meant in one of your comment about Armaan being more vulnerable than Riddhima ……… and for once here, I m tempted to use the filmi line by Abhishek in Hum-Tum where he says Ladkiya humsey yaha kamzoor zaroor hoti hai(pointing shoulders) par yaha(Heart) par who humsey kai zyada takatwar hoti hai.(I think this completely fits the situation in this part)

Enjoyed AR's encounters and Riddhima's sassy remarks, Armaan's weird sense of humor during the ride, their young blossoming Romance skating round the tree with Armaan singing that Jay Sean no. Apt lyrics for the situation…. And finally, Glad to see realization dawn upon Armaan atlast.

You know I always drooled at Armaan in Dmg for his crazy whims and ideas. He makes me do the same here too.

My fav parts which I couldn't resist to point.

Have I told you, how much I love your mom? *Same pinch Armaan*

Muskaan was a chirpy seventh grader now, complete opposite of the shy and sensitive Rahul. I loved to see them together. I felt like a desi auntie when I thought of them as a couple in the making- match making runs in our desi blood I think. 😆😛

if ice creams were relationships, I am sure the guy who eventually gets you one day will be one heck of a lucky guy as you would be faithful to him all your life.(cho chweet and true! Amazing comparision)

I should have stopped lying long time ago and had I been truthful to you and myself, maybe life would have been very different today.

I had no idea that restless feeling, that rumbling in my chest was a sign that I needed you….even today, that dull echoing, almost a choking sensation in my heart is a sign how much I have missed you these past few years.(You r scaring me here)

Sorry to make it too long but i just can't help it sometimes......Plz continue soon di. You are tempting us more and more with each part better than the former.

Thanx and Love

Sai.

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priya..

@priya..

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#614

Hi Bheegs!

Just caught on all the 3 parts together!!! I must say..everytime I think this story cannot get any better..guess what?? It does!!!! and how??? I am blown away by the last part...Loved it a lot!

Looks like Miss Ridz already knows she loves or atleast is infactuated to Armaan..but Armaan really is slow and I guess will continue to be until he is 28?

So next part is prom or straight to college life - Different schools may be? Any new guy in Ridzi's life?

I may not have concentrated enough..I know it is a flashback..but is someone reading Armaan's dairy? or is he reading it himself? All in all an awesome part!!! Update soon!!!

-Priya

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Kshma Kheskani

@AR-lover

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Posted: 15 years ago

#615

EY BHEEGI............I JUST WENT THROUGH UR FF..................AND I JUST LOVED IT..............ITS LIKE ELABORATED CHICKEN SOUP FOR THR TEENAGE SOUL STORY ..........I M SURE 2 WHICH WILL BE A HAPPY ENDING..........I JUST LOVED THE THNG........THOUGH I DID NOT DO THNG LIKE AMMY AND NOT EVEN WORSE ..............THOSE FEELING OF FEELING HATRED AND UNWANTED HAD OCCURED 2 ME ..............AND IT REMINED ME OF MY CHILDHOOD AND TEENAGE FULL OF TEARS AND SADNESS WITH SMILES FROM SOME FRIENDS................

I JUST LOVED IT

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTD. SOON

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ ADD ME IN UR PM LIST

LOVE
KSHMA

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: miiroxxsweet
AWESOME UPDATE DI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I cannot believe armaan could do something so harmfull to himself!!!!

I was soo scared for him!!!!!!!!!!😲

Ridhimaa is truly a great friend, she did absolutely the right thing for Armaan!!!

Armaans dad is one of the most understanding dads ever. 😃

He handeled armaans situation perfectly and also by not telling armaans mom he did the right thing because I always felt that armaans mom didn't understand armaan as well as his dad!

Comming back to Armaan, atleast he realised his mistake about both the things (almost killing himself and yelling at ridhimaa)😲

When ridhimaa asked him to come along with the gang to ice skate that was sweet!!!!

Shashank still isn't in my good books, nor is abhimanyu!!!

It's so much like Armaan to do something so romantic to ridhimaa, i was like Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww in the whole scene!!!!!!😳😊😉

And it's also so much like armaan to be so confused😕😆

I think ridhimaa is also falling for armaan, because of how she was crying when the whole thing about "armaan choking himself came out infront of his dad and how she was blushing after their Ice skating / dance + armaan singing

Thanku for such an fantastic update and for the pm!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mira😉

Thanks Mira! Yes,armaan's dad and Ridz's mom understand their kids better than their counterparts.Armaan's dad knew that if armaan's deeds were exposed to the school or public, that could jeopardize his son's whole career...it's good that Ridz also kept that secret. Hope armaan realizes that😊 Armaan's mom would def have a fit if she found out. Shanky is shanky for sure...now after the current DMG fiasco, he has further fallen in my good books too😆
UR probably right about Ridz😉😳

[quote=karanshraddha4]awesomeee partt diii:)

and thnxx for making itt longg! reallyy needed it after a tough school day!

arriitee bck to the ff...armaan is a sweetheart, and omgg drugs ting =\...dayumm! bad friendss get yu nowhere..but its gud too see from care from riddhimas side as well..cuz it seemed like only armaan was giving into ridz..but guess nott..andd well he got better..dats gud:) and especially becuz he wanted to please himself and ridz..soo adorableee!!!!!!!!!!!!

and denn the skatingg..SO ROMANTIC..hehee "ride it" whilee skatingg..i love jay seann too:D..yu shuld listen to war by him.itss soo peacefull and good:D....

and hmm abhi and niks..dats gudd..cuz abhi was the kabab mein haddi between AR..so shoooiing him off was good:D..

and denn rahul muskii..cuteee..bubbly and sensitive match:)

and AR..well wuh can i sayy..dey both keep surprising mee more and moree..der personality are nicee described..and armaan teasing ridz about datingg..LOL..cute! and i wonder wuh happens in the future wen hes 28...sumtin bad? do dey get seperated or sumtin?...or is ridz getting married?..and den armaan realizes?...mann SOO MUCH SUSPENSE..updateeee soooon:D:D!!!!

lovedd it once agen...take care!

andd im telling yu agen...yu MUST write a book..yur writing jus takes me outta this stressful world..LOL..away from hmwk atleast:P..LOL

dee:)[/quote]

Hey, thanks a bunch dee! All the readers wonderful comments work as stressbusters for me too....it's always a pleasure to know that u all liked a part which even i enjoyed writing. Yes, teenagers like armaan are risk takers and like to experiment...some bounce back thanks to good friends and supportive parents, some don't😕
Well, u will have to read the whole story to find the mystery behind this number- 28 years!
Thanks again for the compliment....it keeps me going for sure😊

Edited by bheegi - 15 years ago

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#617

Thanks...

@Tahmina...yeah, they are beginning to understand and get closer to each other for sure

@MONA...yeah,looks like Jay Sean is really popular on this forum. Teenagers like to take risks and esp kids like armaan....thanks God for a friend like Ridz!

@sadiqsai...thanks for reading dear

@abhinikiluver...ofcourse u can call me di! Yeah,ur AN are getting closer too. Looks like I will have to use more Jay Sean songs here...he seems as popular as armaan here

@mittal....yeah, armaan is showing all signs of being in love, he is just too thick to realize it lolz. Shanky is Shanky...ab kya karein uska?

@DMG fan...ur right,even though the DMG Cvs have shattered our inspiration, but the spirit has to stay alive, even if it is in the form of FFs,VMs, OS etc etc....thanks for being there when all AR fans need to stick together

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#618

omg this is toooooo cute
i cant beleive armaan fell into the hanging drug! those are like suicide! u write so amazingly well!!!
great going di, cant wait for the rest post it already!!!!!!!!

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: bary
reserved how did i missed i woke up till 12 in hope getting update
any way do u know di how u make ur readers impatient and make them bug for another update even though they have gotten a fresh and big update😆
well yes i am asking for u to continue soon
28 year!!!!!! i wonder what he did till then with out confessing,well but happy that it indicate of long update and long ff too😉😆
preferring in only vanilla ice cream and being loyal to it is compared to the lucky guy who would be loved by riddhima,wah kya comparision hain,ek dum mast
where should i start,this is some thing i dont i mean i know about the drugs but games like this,some thing new i learnt and should be care ful of,thank god riddhima absorbed him so keenly that she can notice the change in his behavior and ler his father know,really caring friend
she is allowed to date,well after this i am eager n would love to read their first official date n do remember this sentence to be repeated if it ever happen
In train good riddance of abhi,thank god he didn't interfere here in riddhima's matter lie he did in his child hood,RM playing their puzzle,the thought is really cute
what a convo,i thought armaan knows more about riddhima,but he didnt
really funny and cute convo,read three times already,i like jay sean but bon jovi,its my life rocks and ultimately i like him too...lol
love the scate and the most romantic thing in armaan's 17 years😍
ride it is like one of my favs and l really enjoy listening it as i didnt get time to hear from long time
i really had goose bumps imagining armaan sing it
time to leave it make like shout NOOO
love u di a lot
n ya i am perfectly normal😆
swetha

Thanks swetha! Good to know, ur perfectly 'normal'😆
It's always a pleasure to read ur comments and ur impatience def drivesme back to my laptop
No, this ff is not going to be long as it is primarily an AR story and their journey through childhood to adulthood...no real twists and turns like my other ffs😆
Yes, ridz is a good friend and despite armaan's goof ups, she keeps coming back to him😳
looks like jay sean is really popular here...now he is going to get an integral part in this ff for all his fans here😊

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 15 years ago

#620

woah di its really awesome and sweet di is their any game omg so stupid why they do all this and Armaan is doing this but Ridhima is so caring toward him and also find what's his problem and tell only to his dad and AR skate dance so romantic 1 time i m think woh when KASH goes to school college how may girls-boy r crazy for them I wish mein unka saath padti haiiii what a wish never fulfilled plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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From Ridhima "Chahe mujhse Anjaan hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Pehchan hai woh,
Chahe mera Pass nahi hai woh,
Fir bhi mera Saath hai woh,
Chahe main uski khwahish nahi ,
Fir bhi mera Jeena ki Aas hai woh.....

Chahe mujhse Anjaan hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Pehchan hai woh,
Chahe mujhse Door hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Rooh hai woh,
Chahai meri dhakhan nahi hai woh ,
Fir bhi mera jeevan hai woh,
chahe mera humsafar nahin hai woh,
phir be har lamha saath hai woh....

Chahe mujhse Anjaan hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Pehchan hai woh,
Bas mera dil ka ek Armaan hai woh,
Bas meri Jaan hai woh....." To Armaan

From Ridhima "Dil ki chahat ban gaya hai woh,
Rooh mein bas gaya hai woh,
Meri ibadat ban gaya hai woh,
Dil ki sakoon ban gaya hai woh,
Mera Raab ban gaya hai woh,
Dil ka Armaan ban gaya hai woh,
Meri Jaan ban gaya hai woh......" To Armaan

From Armaan "Sapno mein roaz aati hai woh,
Jane fir kahan chup jati hai woh,
Is Jism ki rooh hai woh,
Jane fir door hai kyun,
Is dil ko dhakhati hai woh,
Jane kyu sharmati hai woh,
Mujhe itna chahati hai woh,
Jane fir kyo chupati hai woh........" To Ridhima

Edited by nidha1983 - 15 years ago