It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10 - Page 64

Originally posted by: -Nina-

Hey sweetyy, wooow awesome updateeee hun love yaaa 🤗

I just loooved it hun, it was a brilliant udpate ^^

WTH was he doinngg, has he LOST itt OMG i soo wanted to slap him at that moment for playing that stupid game with those stopid friend of him 😡

It could be EXTREMLY dangerous omg, but hun i loved the way you describe everything of it really, it was very well written and you have put all the emotions sooooooo brilliantly hun, woow hats of to youuuu Bheegi, you are AN awesome writter hun, love ya mwaaaaaahhhh😳

Thank GOD Riddz was theer and i love theway she was just caring and beeing worried for him i loved it 👏

He was first angry and then understood where the whole situation was going so he cryied 👏 i liked that part cause he was starting beeing himself again, and not A PSYCHO 😡

Lol i loved the small convo between him and riddz , lol the one where he got a verbal slap again, lol and he reallyyy deservs it, and the second one lol where he was just like flirting/teasing her i loved it, lol "are you just asking me for a DATE"😆😆😍 i wish lol 😍

And then the "date" lol was jsut AWESOME omg i can see that Shanky doesnt really like Armi 😕😭 but dont worry Armi Sasurji ko patalega 😆😉😳

OMG that small close scene between AR was superb the way he was caring here and everything, and then he SANG RIDE IT 😲😲 you wont belieev but i was just listenning to this song before reading your udpate 🤣 lol, it was superb i loved that part aswell, and the small discussion in the train was GREAT also 👏

just a little ques hun, you knwo always at the end of his thought he speaks back in present and somewhere he said something like if he would have listen then he wouldnt be there todaye 😕 what did he exactly meant theer , im scared lol, i really wish nothing wrong will happen hun 😃😳

Oups thora ziada lamba hogaya sooorrryy, lol😆😛

cant wait for the next part ^^

Love, Nina ^^

Originally posted by: kshanikaa

Hey Bheegi di 😃
It was a long update....????????? I didnt feel....may be i was too lost...😆

Do you really challenge yourself to be better and different every time....i mean every ff of yours is different.....May be You are too hard to be pleased by yourself!!! 😉 😆

ur sweet kshanikaa...i get bored watching, reading and writing similar stuff. that's why I try to experiment with different stories...some work and some don't😉

I too feel that riddhima's character is yet to be revealed fully....we also dont know many things about her....Here armaan looks like an average normal guy who does mistakes even after listening a warning at the back of his head.....and riddhima is depicted as a quite mature girl....too big to be flattered by such uncool things.

well, ridz has a weak side too, or rather human side also...u will see that after a few parts

I believe, getting someone great as your lover is such a big support that it encourages and motivates you at all the week moments....Armaan in an indirect way was being protected by all the harmful things through his unconfessed feelings towards the girl....😊....a feeling to become a good human beings arises automatically out of love...so where in previous times, parents were too afraid of such a thing called love for their kids...today the trend is definitely facing a change even in traditional families....

yes, ur absolutely right. That's what happened to armaan in real DMG show too😳

Again after reading these lines, i can say you are back to your bheegi mode even in dialogues now. 😃
if ice creams were relationships, I am sure the guy who eventually gets you one day will be one heck of a lucky guy as you would be faithful to him all your life. Thoughtful!!!
he he...again sometimes these analogies work, sometimes they don't😆
Why dont you open a school to train boys for speaking different lines to their lovers??? 😆
ur funny...i should start with my son😆

match making runs in our desi blood I think. 😆 YAAAAAA

"Hmm? Are you adopted?" well that was out of the blue.😛

Extremely managed update...well done!! 👏
Thanks for d pm. 😊

thanks for ur lovely comments as always

Originally posted by: krina_17

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! for the LONG LONG update.

OMG update was full of reality. Much difficult to explain it di that how wonderfully and precisely written. HATS OFF TO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks krina...how's college?


Armaan's stupidest act of going out to late night parties; yet his habits, daily routine, school friends very much true and so obvious for young teenager. You portrayed very well. At one point he was responsible too with drugs and knew very well of consequences. Nevertheless, he did make an impulsive decision or out of curiousness he hang out with wrong friends. Which was very unlike him?
His whole transition of teenager is said so well that it each sentence/every scene were happening right in front of me.

armaan can be gullible at times esp when he is trying to be 'cool' or 'risk taking'

Even when Riddima followed, presence of his dad there was virtuous. He was definitely a very responsible parent. The best was when he gave Armaan the gun and told him to shoot himself right now. The way he told him "I'd rather have my son kill himself with one shot than die a slow death hanging himself everyday with his moronic friends!"
My heartbeat was rising with every bit of tension. It is the bitter truth of most teenager today.

yes, ur so right. For a parent, that's the saddest thing to see their kids ruin their lives in front of their eyes😭

As a writer you know very well how to surprise them and engage them into the read. After that fiasco I kept wondering about what wud be next and how will they be together?
thanks krina...i figure if it interests me,it will interest u guys

Armaan's recovery and talk with riddima was definitely worth it.

Riddima being upset was more effective than anyone else. Her saying jerk to him was very hurtful. Yet she was her medicine. He realized that and he did changed himself.

yes, she is his biggest medicine!

on a happy note I admired their conversation on subway. I think this wud be the first time when they both came to know each other more personally.

yeah,they are finally beginning to open up😊


I can say Shashank was very protective parent. lol. Rockefeller center trip was wonderful. I've been there so it was nice refreshing memories. It's beautiful and really amazing.

yes, it is a lovely place. shanky is shanky😕

Jay Sean - good thought he sings for girls. lol...


Freshness- skating, Armaan holding Riddima, and singing for her as well. Good start for Ridzi and Armaan. It was romantic n loveable.

yeah, armaan at his romantic best but he is still new at this game😉
if it wasn't the curfew of 10.30, I bet AR would go on and on. LOL.
** Curfew - actually the deadline remainded me of curfew. when i go out with friends I m the first one to be home earlier than my other friends, so they always tease me what time your curfew is? LOL
ur a good girl😊

Please Please update Soon I miss AR.

Thanks for mentioning of cutie childhood friends-cum-lovers stories of Rahul-Muskaan, Abhi-Nikki...

I better shut up now. otherwise your eyes will get tired of reading my LONG critics. LOL

loved the long comment...very thoughtful and insightful

Take Care

HAPPY HOLI TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY. :) Happy Holi to u too..belated now

Originally posted by: khahani

Hi Di

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this part although I am a little late in commenting as usual. This part was embedded with laughter, sadness, a meaningful message to the young generation and had a hint of invisible romance! I may be wrong but Riddhima's one line about "NO YOU DON'T'IN FACT NO ONE DOES!" kind of gave me the impression she always had some sort of romantic feeling for our hero.

hi Nahida....all i'llsay is...good observation😉 wish armaan was that quick too😆 Thanks 4 liking this part

if I read between the lines she has indirectly confess her feelings as no one would never know that she felt something for him due the nature of their love / hate friendship/relationship. This is why I said invisible romance! She also had slip of tough when she asked him their ice-cream date.😳

UR absolutely right there...i like the term invisible romance😃

This part has also addressed a very sensitive issue of drugs and other ecstasy related activity which majority parent and teenager living in the west have to face! I must say you handled it very well from both the children's perspective and the parents' perspective!

thanksagain...it looks from reader's comments, this game is also taking off in india😕

"Each time, I saw you, I was sure you were either ridiculing me or assessing me on a jerk-scale- I was sure I scored in the negatives in those days." ' now that they have confessed their feeling after 28 years I hope Riddhima gets see all of this and puts poor Armaan out of his miseries. I would love to see her reaction to his detailed monologue about their budding relationship!

u will have to wait on that

Btw did I mention I loved they subway conversation ' it felt like this is what the real Armaan Riddhima are about: sometime arrogant, sometime argumentative, sometime annoying but overall adorable!

now we can only see the real AR in our ffs...alas

Armaan is obviously trying to redeem himself but knowing Armaan I wonder how long this will last.

good point

Di seriously I feel like I'm writing an essay with all these quotations!

love it ...this helps me write my next part

Finally thank you for the extra long part ' I am glad that all the pestering worked, I shall do it more often!😉 he he...unlike DMG Cvs, I do listen to u guys😆

Love you loads

PS: I love the Jay Sean song! yeah,i just found out that it was a #1 song in Europe in 2008!

ofcourse, she does

hanks...i can only imagine armaan skating like that with a girl in his arms