ArTi / Mayur OS Gallery - updates on pg48,50,52 - Page 18

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Posted: 15 years ago
di i need help i've had this stupid grin glued to my face since i started reading the os, n i can't stop grinning! moreover im speechless, but i think thats not going to b an issue
i completely positively totally absolutely loved the os to bits!
i cud just see mayur in this os, i picture things as i read or hear them, n while reading the os, the picture came so effortlessly! i didn't have to work hard, it was just there!
it was soo sweet, simple, cute n well realistic
i can so imagine this happening to my friends or any person for that matter
dd ur a fabulous, awesome, mind-blowing, rocking, wonderful, amazing writer n im not exaggerating one bit
once again loved the os!!

P.S - not so speechless now, am i? lol
P.P.S - im still grinning

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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG Divya di...
I just have to say one thing...:))
It was soo HOT!
LOL..I dont know..I think i am getting obssesed with that word..and the nowadays funky language!!!
Forgive my mischievous attitude....:))
Adding on...I loved the OS...as usual..It was mindblowing!!
Moving on i think IK am getting obssesed reading your OS .....:))
Thanks for the PM
Love
Aranya
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awwwwwwww Divya,
what an awesome shot yaar.
it was tooooooo gooooood.
u express mayur in wonderful way.
the email ,ph conversation and then their feelings everything was awesome.
And their confession-it was too good.
loved it so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Do write more.



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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing.......

superb!!!!!!!!!!

wow!

divya 🤗

loved it yaar..........

do continue soon........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow great OS Divya di . It was awesume . Do keep posting such Os . Thanks for the pm .
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Posted: 15 years ago
It was amazing man!
Loved it bits!
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Posted: 15 years ago
divya that was too good huni!!!

i lovedddd it!!!!!! it was sooooo sweettt......

xxxx

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Posted: 15 years ago
it was so supercute LOL..i could just imagine it going on in front of my eyes..!
marvellous divya di..!
i love ur OSs..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey divya di..awesome one-shots..i read most of them now..
Her thoughts, his thoughts
They both were in love, but then they did'nt tell each other..aww..
The other ArTI one-shots
He actually kissed her during a rehearsal!..wow..n all their fights seem to get resolved on their own..without any talking!
n then he wanted to kiss her just bcuz it was her!..aww so cute..n they finally confessed also..sweet!
MaYur OS
They met, and hit off instantly. They became really good friends n suddenly he stopped talking to her!..wow..
she finally confronted n him..n he gave a lame excuse that it was bcuz of his boss..she got angry n did'nt talk to him after that..
she wished him on his b'day n he was calling her by all sweet names..wow..she mst hv been really surprised!
n finally she did go meet him..she could'nt resist..n he was damn happy!..he confessed to her also...thats nice..n she too said she loves him..yay..
do write more
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow,wonderful update.U wrote this os beautifully.I loved it.
Write more os.
thanks for the pm dear.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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