ArTi / Mayur OS Gallery - updates on pg48,50,52 - Page 20

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Divzzzzzzzzz,
You won't believe it, i had written such a hugeeeeee comment for you but it got deleted like not exactly but i clicked on the back button by mistake and whoosh everything was just gone, all gone.
I felt like kicking myself hard. I am soo constrainted for time right now, literally i have been packing and unpacking divzzzzzz, can't even tell you how much i am hating these unexpected and uncalled for trips i must say, they are making me hate something which i loveeee so much and that is travelling, packing was always a thrill but these trips make me feel otherwise totally man.
Coming to the OS, i loveeeeeeeeeeeeedddd it, you should write more and more and more on MN divzzzzzz and i remember now that you have to wake up your FF from deep slumber.
So sowie i am back to the OS for sure now, i loveee the title to begin with. I loved how you started and showed the MN relationship in such a realistic way, the characters both of them were sooo clearly redefined in here, i could instantly relate to it. Though this is not a part of the show and not at least the current track and i can only dream on if i think something so wonderfully written could be thought of, written or used by the makers of the show.
Well its still very different so can't be used as MN meet on a professional level in here rather than the college but still you wrote so impactfully that i felt in love with it and MN all over again.
I loved how you showed the intial reaction esp of N and hayeeee his dimples, i know i loveeeee people's dimples, they are so adorable. I loved the intial bit of progression, like of friendship than the deadlock over the phone not only perplexed N but even me, bigggggg time.
Then the meeting after two weeks was amazinggggggggly put and i loved how nups heart melted after looking at his smile. I would have reacted just like nups, be hurt and wanted to run away, far far away. I am also called a drama queen at times hehe.
But i loveddddddddddddd the patch up bit the most, i lovedddd the unusual mayank back to the usual mayank. I lovedd how he was all shy then all confident knowing that nups loves him too and i lovedd lovedd N's i love you, you idiot was sooooooooo cute.
excellent divzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz, too good.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Divya....I just want to do this....👏

It's awesome yaar...I loved it....

It was a beautiful story...simple...yet very beautiful...I can totally imagine their endless phone convos and hours they spent talking... without even realizing first...they both fell for each other... and then the hardest part for both... cutting each other out of their lives... it was hard for MN.... and when they finally met... the misunderstanding and N leaving abruptly...OMG... it was very touching...

Loved the last part the most... M admitting that he has feelings for her but was not sure about her feelings...awwww... that reminded me of the same phase M had in MJHT before the terrace scene... he knew about his feelings, but was avoiding her since he thought N just takes him as friend... those unspoken feelings must be hurting him so much... and that conversation in the last part says it all..

You wrote the entire part so amazingly beautiful... it's beyond words... you stayed true to the original nature of the characters.... loved it...!!!
Edited by -Jess- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

amzing divzzzz yaar

totally luved it

u describe the feeling so well

i cna't even tell u!!!!!!

👏

the last part my fav when Mayu admitted his feeling for her so cute!!!!!!!!!!

i can't wait to read more!

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG divz.. u left me speechless. Such a perfect OS! 👏 I wish I could see ArTi enacting this LOL. You're a gr8 writer. Do write more :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
Divya di... i love it seriously awesome..if this was the current track of Mayur..i could go crazy..but oh well..but seriously it was mindblowing!! loved every bit of it!!!
-Navi
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice os
do write more
thanks for pm
topsyturvy23 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey mind blowing one shot

Really enjoyed it

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyy divya
that was an amazing super duper os
really loved
thanx for the pm
adi_gupta thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
divya yaar
you always stole my word to write
lovley os
i think its name will be struggle of thoughts
lovley os yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey divya....
i loved all ur os..........v nice....
plz cotinue soon.......n pm me..


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