MayUr & SaJan FF Hybridisation/Part 2 Pg 10 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Hey,
continue soon!
Loving the story line,

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Edited by Ravie101 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62

hey awesome chapter

Felt really good while reading it

Thanks a million

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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
hey Sindhya
plz add me to ur pm list
i loved the story
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
plzzzzzzzzz update this ff
nd that one 'In The Rain' too
i love both these story lines
nd i wanna read more
plzzzzzzzzzz update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nice story
very different
pls update soon and pm me
i want this to end happily
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
LOVED IT Cindy!!!!! You write very well!!! I love the way you have grafted and captured the sister's emotions!
Please continue and add me to your PM list!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nupurs POV-

For the first time in 5 years, something scared me, something made me feel unwanted, fruitless, something in mayanks eyes made me feel loathed, but then i wondered what that was, as mayank slowly approached me.

'you just called me?', a strange constraint hung up hovering in his voice.

'urgh ya mayank', i replied, as i noticed the whole college watching us.

'how do you know my name?', he asked as he flashed a quizzical smile at me, and thats when i realised, he doesn't remember me.

'ummm im nupur? Nupur bhushan? Remember me?', i tried, as everyone started to whisper.

As he heard me out, his head nodded a yes, a no, and a midway tilt, after which he replied, 'are you sure you know me ms nupur?'

'mayank? Don't you remember me? From colony?'

'urghh hmmm', he replied, suddenly a smile plastered on his face as he replied, 'you don't really need to make excuses! If you want to become my friend, you could've just said it!'

And as he said that, my head started to spin. Everyone started to talk. A few cheerleaders giggled at me, and the others shared their own little private talks.

And as they did so, mayank gave me a last look, before he left with a smirk on his face.

And as soon as he left i felt my legs started to shake, i couldn't stand still, i ran to the washroom, and locked it behind me as my eyes started to water.

I slowly unzipped my bagpack and took out the last few pills that were left, and gulped one down.

It was important that i had these at a proper interval of time, of minimum 3 hours, and maximum 6 hours.

It helped reduce the painful nightmares of headaches i had, which were the worst in the morning.

But what was i to do? Did i have an option, apart from the growing tumour due to the pituitary gland in my brain?

And what scared me the most, was that i was all alone in this, no one knew about it, apart from me and dad. And that was the sole reason i hated getting attached to someone. It would increase my pain, when ill be on the edge.

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Gunjans POV-

I dint understand my eyes, as i noticed the little fight going on between nupur and a guy. People were whispering things, about how nupur di was finally showing her true colors.

'A choco is all you need to spill your beans, there you see.', i heard a girl gossiping.

And as more as i tried to shut my ears to them, the more i heard them.

'she looks so desperate! Fridging snitch!'

'i would love to be her friend.'

'theres no point. Nupur just likes getting herself insulted.', i heard, as i closed my eyes, trying to block them out, when i felt a hand on my shoulder.

I knew who it was before i turned, yet when i turned around to samrat shergill there was something different in his aura, there was no harsh portrayal for my ways, instead a calm, comforting sigh, which felt alot like MY samrat.

'relax gunjan! Let them talk!', he frayed.

'i don't understand sam! Who the hell was that guy?'

'that was mayank!'

'whos that?'

'this guy who used to live with us in the old colony. Had something huge for nupur i guess, so when she dint respond back, he became love sick and left to live with his sis.'

'aw gawsh! Don't tell me, hes taking his revenge!'

'i don't know jans! I don't know!', there was a strange denial in his tone, as gunjan hugged him tight, a feeling of pacification spreading through her chest.

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There this part is done

Fullyyy filled with grammatical mistakes guys!

Forgive me all!

And hope u guys like it

Hope things cleared out for you

Love

sindhya

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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
RITNA CHOTA!!!
CHAL KOI BAAT NAI ME GIVES YOU MAAFI!
ANYWAY'S AWESOME UPDATE!!
WHY IS MAYU ACTING SO SADU?
I FEEL LIKE BLASTING HIM?
IS HE HAVING SHORT TERM MEMORY LOSS?
OR REALLY REVENGE?
DOUBTS DOUBTS IN MY MIND...
CLEAR THEM SOON...
LUBBS YA...
BTW, FIRST TO COMMENT!! YIPPEE! WOO HOO! 🥳 [:D/]
Edited by SaJanmayUrKaSh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Niceeeeeeeeeee party Cindy!!!!
Love your update!!! But its so short!!! Write longer next time, PLEASE!!!
Nidz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Awesome!!!
Awesoem Awesome!!!
Arrey ladki..*calls Sinds*
BY GOD!!!
I am soo shocked..itna acha???
Lovely Sindhs!!
Me looved it!

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