YOU INSIDE ME(AR) 34 or last pt updated - Page 16

Originally posted by: agrima2009

hey all the three parts r just amazing.....................

very beautifully written............................


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Originally posted by: maggie131984

amazing parts!! Loved each of them. I liked how Arman is so possesive for Ridhima even when he is trying not to fall for her. I just hope that the band members stay united and Arman doesnt fight with his members bcoz they took ridhima home and blamed her.

Please update more parts as soon as you can😊

heaven all parts r too cool .My eyes were glued on screen refuse to blink .

now u can imagine the intensity of reading all parts in fraction of seconds.

plz update soon.

I dream about us
every day,
simple things really,
like strolling
the beach hand in hand,
taking in the sunset
together,
holding you in my arms
on a quiet evening,
or the way it would
feel to wake up
beside you every morning,
and how wonderful
it would be to kiss you
goodnight every night
and sleep wrapped in
the warmth of your love.
I know that these
are simple things,
but to me they are
the most wonderful
things in life,
the very dreams that
get me through the day,
and keep me hopeful
about tomorrow.

thanks for pm.

love

ritu

Hi Heaven...

I started reading the story and I was glued. First part itself was very gripping as well as touching. I loved the way the man expressed his feelings after he lost his love. Second part brought what I was looking for... Armaan's intro of course. So he is a singer, and Rahul, Atul, Ohno and Aiba are his bandmates. WHAT? Riddhima liked Atul, instead of Armaan? That was a shocker for me.

But I enjoyed the part where AR finally met. I got a little confused actually. You have mentioned another name 'Jun' and 'Mao' many times. Who is that?

Whoa, Atul was right, 'panda-eyes-Armaan'... LOL, that was really hilarious. Oh god, no, this cant happen, Riddhima already has a boyfriend... Its sad that they have to adhere to such a stupid contract that restricts all the Bandmates to not to fall in love with anyone... I mean even if they fall in love how can it be treated as a betrayal towards their fans? How insane... People who make such rules are truly heartless-money-making creatures. Grandpa was a great help. Good that AR doesn't need to wander too much to reach their past. Armaan has definitely fallen for Riddhima and Riddhima for Amaan, but pity that they cant admit it to each other. Armaan has a wonderful lot of friends in his support. I loved the way Rahul fought for him.

Thanks for the PM.

Well, last night too told her that the encounter of her and Armaan was indeed a very wrong thing to be done too…if she didn't met Armaan, probably Armaan wouldn't have to feel the need to leave his works for her…to investigate their stupid dreams…who cares about that dreams??? That dreams were just dreams, illusions…that's it!!! There is no such thing as related to them…no…not at all…so, Ridhima decided not to go looking for an answer anymore on it…if she had to be dreaming about them for all of her lifetime then she will…as for Arashi, they are very caring on Armaan…protective of him and his career…their career…so Ridhima will leave them alone after this…Armaan and his fellow bandmates…even though Ridhima likes them all and Ridhiima knew they treated her as a friend rather than as fans but, she can't control her feelings towards Armaan now…so, it will be a burden to Armaan…so his group will be affected too…

As a conclusion, Ridhima decided to leave everything…she will go back to her hometown…she will stay a long distance from Armaan and Arashi…and she will say goodbye to Shaan…that's it!!!

"Ridhima, where have you been??? Did you stay at Shaan's house???" asked Muski when she had woke up and saw Ridhima sitting on the coach, still fully dress with her last night outfit…Ridhima looked at Muskaan…she decided to come clean with her…after all, Muski is her best friend…

"Muski…I'm going to tell you everything…if after that you want to yell at me…or…or…throw me with a...frying pan or anything…you can…I promise…" Ridhima said seriously…Muski quickly sat down on the coach next to Ridhima…she looked at her with a concern expression and waited for Ridhima to speak…

"Now, I have decided to break up with Shaan…and…I will quit my job and…go back to stay with my parents," Ridhima said in a small voice, clearly letting the words out from her mouth as thought it reminded her of what she had to do now…Muski stared with wide eyes at Ridhima…has she started to lose her marble???

"Em…I'm sorry…even though I really want to hit you with a frying pan right now…for wanting to leave me alone here…but…let's make it clear for me of something…does this…well, completely out of mind decision of yours got anything to do with my handsome boy Armaan Malik???" asked Muski…Ridhima nodded…she stared at Muski…Muski got up from the coach and walked to the kitchen…then, she went back holding a glass of water with her…Ridhima gulped…didn't she planned to hit her with a frying pan just now??? Why the hell was she holding a glass???

"Drink this first…you must be tired…and I bet you throat are too sore now, for trying to arrange the right words to tell me what is on your mind at last…" said Muski, rolling her eyes and shoving the glass into Ridhima's hands…Ridhima looked at her…Muski smiled down at her then she sat next to Ridhima, hugging her she said…

"I know…it is not your fault…people can be foolish sometimes when it comes to be dealing with all this love stuffs…look at me…I know that Rahul Grewal will never be mine still, I put him in the first place in my heart…I'm an idiot eh???"….Muski let out a nervous laugh…Ridhima hugged Muski back…this was why she loved Muski so much…she always understood Ridhima…she never judged her nor did blame her for anything she had done…

"You can cry if you want to…I swear I will not tease you after you had finish flooding up our living room," Muski said, rubbing Ridhima's back…Ridhima's tears came flowing down her tears as soon as Muskaan stopped talking…she cried her heart out…at the thought of Armaan, she felt really hurt inside her heart…like thousand of knives cutting through her, slashing her into thousand pieces of meat…urgh, how could Muski able to make a joke at this time huh???

Ridhima laughed a bit while still crying in Muski's arms…Muski smiled and said…

"One of the sign of becoming a nut girl…careful now…I might send you straight to see a psychologist…"…Ridhima hit Muski, and they both laughed…Ridhima then hugged Muski again and she hugged her back more tightly…

"Will you forgive me for deciding to abandon you alone here??? I am a very selfish girl right???" Ridhima said in a small voice…her tears came flowing down her cheeks…while playing with her hair, Muski nodded…

"I will…anyway, I know I will never win when it comes to compete with Armaan Malik…huh, loving someone is really a selfish thing from the very start of it," Muski said, laughing a bit…Ridhima nodded…then, Muski let go of her and stared at her…

"So…what is the first thing you want to do today???" Shaan, work, Jun???" asked Muski…Ridhima thought about it…then she sighed…

"I guess…work will come first…then Shaan…as for Armaan, I don't want to see him again…I will just leave…" she replied Muski…then, she drink the water Muski had handed her before…Muski rubbed her chin…

"Are you telling me you are leaving without telling Armaan about it??? Then how about you two dreams???" she asked, closely watching Ridhima's every reaction…Ridhima gulped…

"Yes, I'm leaving without telling him…I need to…as for our dreams, well…it was just a dream…I guess, I don't really have to waste my time investigating something that probably had nothing to do at all with me…" Ridhima answered her…she sighed again…Armaan…will she really able to forget him??? When he is everywhere…on the television, radio, poster, newspaper and magazine…and most important is…when he had became part of her…be in her heart, mind and soul…

"Yosh!!! Let get going then…" Muski said suddenly when she saw Ridhima's expressions turning into a sorrow expression…she does not want Ridhima to feel sad…so, she tried to distract her by reminding her to move on…Muskaan Got up from the coach and she pulled Ridhima to stand with her…Ridhima smiled…then, she nodded and walked into her room…Muski watched her go…she saw Ridhima's cellphone on the table…she picked up, searching for a number she hope will be able to cheer Ridhima up…

As Ridhima entered her bedroom, she closed the door behind her…being alone again, without Muskaan by her side, with so many emotions within her, was making Ridhima weak…sliding down into the floor, leaning against her bedroom, Ridhima sat there as tears came again…this time flowing furiously, ruining her cheeks, dropping into her lap…Ridhima cried with all of her heart but she close her mouth in case it will attracted Muski to come and check on her…she does not want to burden her…she is a good friend…but this choice Ridhima chose, was a journey she had to walk alone…and being alone was a sad thing…outside her door, Muski cried too…poor Ridhima…

wait another 15 min to get part 13 as i will only PM for 1 man PM i damn hard work but after i get cool comments i really appriciate

PART 13

Oye, sleepy head!!! Get up!!!" shouted Atul on top of his voice as he entered Armaan's room

"Oye!!! Stop pretending!!! Get up now!!! We need to talk…" said Atul, his tone was so serious… Armaan slowly sat up on his bed…then he looked at Atul…

"Did Ridhima was here last night???" Armaan asked…Atul rolled his eyes and he tired to smack Armaan's head with a pillow but missed it… Armaan caught the pillow instead…at that time, Armaan caught the headline on the…………. newspaper…his eyes grew wider as he read it…he quickly snatched the paper and Atul walked lazily out of his room, muttering…

"Meet us downstairs when you have get dress and all,"… Armaan nodded…still reading the newspaper…the headline said…ARMAAN MALIK OF ARASHI ABANDON HIS FANS DURING HIS GROUP GIVING OUT AUTOGRAPH ACTIVITY'….the story after that described him as a bad idol…as he completely ignored his fans feeling towards him when he decided to abandon them all and leave without a word…even the others members cannot tell where did he go and why…he was said to be irresponsible and… Armaan threw the paper away…he clapped a hand on his forehead…what had he done…then, he got up preparing to go downstairs…

"Yo!!!" Armaan said as he get into the living room…

"Armaan, can you please tell me what is happening???" asked Mr Hira as soon as Armaan took his seat… Armaan looked at him…somehow he looked bored…does this matter really a big mess???

"Don't give me that look!!! You are a very responsible person before…when suddenly you abandon your fans like that and ignoring your works, I'm starting to feel uneasy…is there is something bothering you??? A girl maybe???" asked Mr Hira again, his temper rising up…unfortunately, Armaan too was getting hot headed when Mr Hira questioned him about girls…does he really thought Armaan would ruined his career???

"I don't think I need to answer you Mr Hira…I was quite unwell last night so I decided to come home early, that's it…sorry, I don't tell anyone about it…ask them all…I was home last night, right???" Armaan said, his voice was cold as ice but his eyes pleading at his other members to back him up…

"Yeah….when we came back, he had already sleeping upstairs," said Rahul…receiving Armaan's silent message…Mr Hira sighed…they were really good in covering up for one another…

"All right… Armaan, you need to attend a press conference later this afternoon, apologizing to your fans…explain to them why you leave last night…do you understand it???" said Mr Hira, choosing to drop the matter…as a matter of fact, Armaan really look a bit unwell this morning…

Armaan nodded…as Mr Hira got up to leave, Armaan gave Rahul a small smile…Rahul grinned back at him…then…

"Armaan …remember something will you??? As an idol, you should learn and know how to control your feeling…especially when it comes to girl…I want anything that matter to a girl named Ridhima Gupta to be immediately stop at once okay???" said Mr Hira…before Armaan get to answer him, he left… Armaan sighed…how did he find out about her???

"Errr, Armaan...I think I owe you an apologize..."said Rahul, exchanging look with Aiba...Aiba nodded... Armaan just looked at them, waiting for them to say something...

"Last night, when we came back we found Ridhima in your bedroom...of course you were sleeping at that time...so, we had a litte talk with Ridhima and I...I think..."Rahul said stammered when he can't find words to describe why he had scolded Ridhima last night... Armaan raised his eyebrows...before he could ask, Ohno told him everything...

"So that is huh??? Rahul and Aiba scolded Ridhima as a favour of me...thanks!!!" said Armaan, grinning widely...Rahul and Aiba exchanged looks while Atul had a horror expressions on his face...

"Don't you be mad with them for scolding her???" asked Ohno... Armaan shook his head...

"Actually, I had been dying to scold her too...how dare she...messing up my feeling and all...then, after that dating with another guy...even when I felt angry towards her, I just can't bring myself to yell at her...so, Rahul and Aiba had done for me...cool..." Armaan explained...he seems to be at ease...probably now Ridhima will realize...don't mess up with Arashi...

Suddenly, Armaan 's phone rang...he took out the phone from his pocket...a message shown there...he opened it...read it and... Armaan ran outside the house, heading to his car...leaving behind his phone, forgotten on the floor...Rahul shouted out for him, while Atul picking up the phone...then...

"She had decided to leave..." said Atul in a small voice...he sounded shocked...Aiba took the phone from him and read out the message Armaan 's had received...

ARMAAN??? I'M MUSKI, RIDHIMA'S HOUSEMATE...I DON'T EXACTLY KNOW WHAT IS HAPPENING BETWEEN YOU TWO BUT RIDHIMA DECIDED TO LEAVE THE TOWN...HER WORK...SHAAN...AND YOU...WILL YOU STOP HER??? EVEN IF YOU DON'T WANT TO, CAN YOU PLEASE AT LEAST MEET HER FOR A LAST TIME???"

Ohno clapped a hand over his mouth, Rahul sat on the sofa, covering his face with his hands, Aiba walked to the wall and leaned their, sighing...Atul walked to the door...

"It is none of our business now...the decision now lies on Armaan...whether he want Ridhima to stay or letting her go," said Atul, turning around to them all...

"But...it will effect his job...our job...he is an idol...we know better than to let him fall for her," said Ohno...

"Yeah...but he is human too...we all are...so if this is what Armaan longing for...if this will make our Malik happy, don't you think we ought to support him??? asked Atul...

Aiba nodded...Rahul too...Ohno smiled...

"He had been working hard for all this time...if Ridhima is what he want, then let him have her...of course, we could help in covering them..." said Rahul, grinning...the others nodded...

"Good luck, Armaan.." said Atul

done the part 13 too

well let me put the part 14 as i can't hide my excitiment and it wil be my birthday treat for u guys

hey!!!

both the part were too cool..

poor ridz really liked the way muskan support ridz,....

and the way aarashi handle the matter,,,and decide to support armaan..

cant wait for next update i want this treat soon dear..