YOU INSIDE ME(AR) 34 or last pt updated

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This FF is written bymy friend kay Yin She is Chinese finished this FF so now i thought to post it and she write for winglin website her charchter and my charcter are different but same story so it is not being copied

LOVE The name of the FF IS YOU INSIDE ME (AR) And another one i am writing is Lamhe(AR) Time For Intro CAST ARMAAN MALIK RIDDHIMA GUPTA Some years ago, there were a couple that were separated by a terrible fate'
And they made a vow to be together again when they met again'
Their promise was sealed with a pair of rings'
The time passed by'two people are destined to meet each others'
And they felt the presence of love inside them'with some old memories that doesn't seems to belong to them'
Does love really belong to them???
Is it true that true love will never be endless??? DO COMMENT PLEASE Index
PART 1 - PAGE 1
PART 2 - PAGE 2
PART 3 - PAGE 3
PART 4 - PAGE 5
PART 5 - PAGE 8
PART 6 - PAGE 9
PART 7 - PAGE 12
PART 8 - PAGE 13
PART 9 - PAGE 18
PART 10 - PAGE 18
PART 11 - PAGE 18
PART 12 - PAGE 22
PART 13 - PAGE 22
PART 14 - PAGE 22
PART 15 - PAGE 26
PART 16 - PAGE 30
PART 17 - PAGE 34
PART 18 - PAGE 38
PART 19 - PAGE 42
PART 20 - PAGE 42
PART 21 - PAGE 43
PART 22 - PAGE 47
PART 23 - PAGE 49
PART 24 - PAGE 51
PART 25 - PAGE 52
PART 26 - PAGE 54
PART 27 - PAGE 55
PART 28 - PAGE 55
PART 29 - PAGE 58
PART 30 - PAGE 62
PART 31 - PAGE 66
PART 32 - PAGE 68
PART 33 - PAGE 68
PART 34 OR LAST PART - PAGE 71
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dear when u r going to update this?????

i like this concept.u already mentioned about parts 1-2 .

i can't see them???

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Part 1

It was raining outside'inside a small house deep in the forest, a young girl laid on a bed'her face was pale'her body seems to be shivering'but not out of cold'this was one summer night'the weather is hot, and the house was lit with many lanterns and candles'but the girl continue to shiver'the girl was actually dying'she seems no longer able to restrain her life from her sickness'a young man came inside the room, holding a cup full of hot liquid'it is a medicine for the girl'

"Baby, you should drink this'it times already for you to have your medicine'" said the man'the girl just shook her head'she pushed away the cup when the man tried to make her drink it'

"I don't want to'I'm dying'what is the use of taking it if it doesn't help me at all," the girl said'she tried to sit on the bed, but gave up when her body no longer able to support her weight'even though she had became so thin, losing weight because of her sickness'her energy no longer able to push her thin body to sit up on the bed'the man sighed'he put the cup on the bedside table'then, he held the girl in his arms'

"I don't like it when you said like that'you shouldn't give up yet'I told you before, I won't let you die'we will be together'until your parents agreed to let us marry," the man said slowly, playing with the girl hair'

"You know that won't ever come true'they hated you'just because you are a carpenter boy'they wanted me to marry that kohli's boy who is a son of a big plantation company'" the girl replied, looking disappointed'she move her body closer to the boy'wanting to just melt into him'his body heat warm her a bit'the man kissed her on top of her head'

"I know'but we shouldn't give up right??? Just like you shouldn't with your sickness," he said back to her'he tried to make her stronger'if she died, he will died too'she is his soul, his life, his everything'losing her will kill him'

"Em'lets make a deal then'if I drink that medicine, will you marry me??? Not a real ceremony you know, I know you still want my parents approval in it'just'well'I wants to wear a ring'a ring that proves to everyone in this world that I once belong to you'I once had your love'I once a special person to you," the girl said, she looked at him, her eyes pleading at him'he bit his lip'then, he nodded'

"You know that you always belong to me and my love always been yours and you will always be the only special person to me'so why did you need a ring to prove it???" he asked her'she is the only girl that will ever be inside his heart'and she knew it well of course'

"Because'if I died one day'I wanted you to remember me that way'that you had once put a ring on my finger'oh, please just do it for me'" she answered him'she had now wrapped her arms around his neck, looking at him straight into his eyes'he fell silent'he was willing to do anything as long as she drink her medicine and happy'and he love her so much'a ring would do no harm at all'he will marry her officially soon enough'at last, he sighed'then he smiled at the girl'

"Okay'I will get the ring now'you be good and drink that medicine okay???" he said'the girl shouted out loud and she hugged him tightly'then, she kissed him on the lips'

"Thank you'I love you Pinocchio," she said after she had finished kissing him'he laughed'she always called him like that when she is happy'Pinocchio was a nickname given to him the moment they met'she called him that way because he like everything that has connection with woods and Pinocchio was made from woods'he would always replied back to her'

"Yeah, call me again that way'you know that is why every villagers thought you are a nut girl'in love with a wood man'and kissing a wood doll'that is me'" then he stuck out his tongue at her'she would laughed happily and answered him simply'

"I'm willing to'no doubt there," then she would kissed him, making him felt that he was the most happiest man ever alive in this world'the man got up from the bed and walked to his closet'he opened the door and took out a box that look so old and ancient'the girl watched him with excitement'she always wondered what is the thing that were hidden inside that small ancient old box'remembering that she had promised to drink her medicine, she quickly grabbed the cup and poured down it liquid down her throat'urgh, a bitter taste'she then looked up at the man again'he had sat on her bed next to her'

"This pair of rings were once belong to my parents'before my mother died, she had told me to have this ring as my wedding ring'she hope that her daughter in law will put it on her ring and then live a happy life with her son'I hope you don't mind'it is quite old'" the man said, somehow looked trouble at the idea'the girl eyes grew wider'her mother in law'how sweet'she is really part of the family'part of him from the very start of his life'she held out her hand'he stared at it for a moments'then, he slipped the ring through her finger'smiling, the girl held out her hand upward, admiring her wedding ring'

"I love it!!! I love you!!! Thank you!!!" she said suddenly'she hugged her man, kissing him all over his face'the man laughed'how silly, only an old ring could make her so happy like this'they simply hugged each other for a long time'wishing that tomorrow they will be able to stay in each other arms again'wishing that God won't separate their ways'but sometime wishes fool us all'and happiness, love and life seems meaningless the moment we lost someone that we really loved'

The next day, the young girl died'she only able to wake up her man, crying in pain as she felt her whole body paralyzed'before she died, she said 'thank you' and 'sorry' to her love life'then, as her tears continued to flow down her cheeks, she smiled and drew her last breath'the man didn't cried at all'when everyone asked him why he didn't shed his tears over his love life, his answered only this'

"Her tears were still warm'but that was her last smile for me'I don't cry because I need to stop my heart from forgetting that very last smile'I try to capture her every moments with me in my heart, thoughts and life forever'"'.

Everyone in the village knew that the couple had once made a promise before the girl fell ill'that was'

"If we had to go separate ways or the fate didn't bring us together, then we will be together again someday, some times, some years where no one can longer set us apart'even dead will never makes us part,"'and their vows was sealed with a pair of rings that they hide somewhere deep in the forest'no one know what happen to the rings'nor did to the man'

STAY TUNED FOR NEXT PART
Edited by daring66 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey congrat n other ff
this one souds really cool
so pls continue soon
i dont forget me in ur pm list
LOVE sanam
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awesome and differeny from other ff do pm the next part
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her darin66(sorry don know ur name) nice concept .............seems interesting...............cont soon n thnx 4 d pm
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THANKU FOR LOVELY COMMENTS AND I WILL BE POSITING SOON LOVE HEAVEN😃😃😃
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Originally posted by: swamii92

her darin66(sorry don know ur name) nice concept .............seems interesting...............cont soon n thnx 4 d pm

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PART 2

KRRRIIIIIIINNGGGGGGG!!!!!"

The alarm clock on Armaan's bedside table rang loudly…Armaan jerked awake at once…then, he blinked, trying to adjust his eyes with the sunlight coming through his window, and at that time he felt a tear dropped down to his cheek…Armaan touched his cheek…wet…tears…it can't be…Armaan moved out of bed towards the long mirror pasted on his bedroom wall…he looked into it and saw his own reflection…the reflection there showed a young man, with black hair, sharp ocean blue eyes, pointed nose, ruby red lips that seems to suit the tall, slender body that carried it all…the man inside the mirror was so handsome, beautiful…Armaan blinked again…he had no idea how ages really change him…his looks, his behavior and everything started to change too the moment he turned 20 years old…he seems to be more good looking than ever but…

Armaan sighed…he had been dreaming about the same dream again…the dream about a couple that were separated by a terrible fate…the rings hidden in a chest near the small cottage…the girl with long black hair…the man who looked exactly like him…what was all that about huh???

Armaan Malik???" he heard someone knocking on his door…he turned around and walked to his bedroom door…he swung it opened…there, stood his fellow bandmate, rahul grewal…he smiled at him…

"Wake up you sleepyhead…what was this??? Are you crying again last night???" rahul asked, looking concern…Armaan nodded his head…he went inside his bedroom again and lay back on his bed…

"I dreamed about that girl again…" he said slowly…

"That dying girl???" asked rahul…he lay down next to Armaan…clearly deep in thought…armaan nodded again…all of his fellow bandmates, knew about his dream…he never kept a secret from them all…his Arashi group, are all his really close friends…

"It must means something you know…I mean, you can't dream about something repeatedly without no reason at all," rahul spoke after a moment of silent…Armaan sighed…the question is he had no idea at all what does it mean…

"Rahul!!! I thought you came here to wake him…not to join him sleeping," a voice said from the door…Armaan and Rahul looked at the voice's owner and saw Atul joshi standing there with Ohno Satoshi and Aiba Masaki…they walked inside and started to sit on Armaan's bed…Armaan sat up and stared at rahul, sending him a silent message to tell them his misery about the dream…

"He had been dreaming again," rahul said…he sat up and leaned against Aiba's shoulder…all three pairs of eyes that belong to atul, Ohno and Aiba stared at armaan…armaan ignored it…no point in explaining…useless and disappointing…

"That dream about that dying girl???" asked Aiba…

"Rings and a small cottage???" continued Atul…

"And the man that look like you???" added Ohno…

Rahul suddenly laughed out loud…Armaan smiled a bit too…the other three looked at rahul with a confused expression…

"Of course it was, you idiot triple head!!!! What would you expect??? armaan dressed up ???" rahul asked after he had finished laughing…Armaan threw a pillow at him…he caught it and they all burst out laughing loudly… …

"Seriously, guys!!! Can't you all think of something else??? Why this stupid dream been haunting my nights???" Armaan asked impatiently…he hated this dream…he had no time at all for a sleepless night…he needed his energy for his works…being an idol, is really not an easy work…

"Hmm, lets's see…its probably telling you that you needed to find that black hair girl," said rahul…Ohno nodded…then, he added…

"She might be the clue to all of this mystery,"…all of his friends stared at him…since when did Ohno became the smart person in the crowd???

"Erm, leader might be right…sometimes a dream tell us the future you know," said Aiba…

"Or, the past…maybe you owed her money," said atul…Jun sighed…then, he smiled…atul always had 'money' word inside his head…everything seems to be all about money…

"Look, Armaan…why don't we try looking for her??? Who know she really able to stop all this nightmares…she can be a doctor," said rahul, looking thoughtful…his fingers rubbing his chin…

"The question is how???" Armaan said, looking from one of his friends to another…they fall in silent again…yes, that is the major problem, right??? Armaan got up and walked to the window…he stared outside and sighed again…he always felt that the dream he had been dreaming was somehow connected to him…he always felt that the dream was some kind of a lost memories that he had been looking for…to complete his life…to complete his soul…but it can't be…he had never been living in a small cottage…nor did he ever meet that girl with black long hair…he remembered everything about her…her beautiful eyes…that eyes can talk…pleading him to understand her…that inviting lips…asking him to taste it…her small body…warming up his body…her smile, her smell…everything…even it was only inside his dream…

"How about this??? Armaan, you draw the picture…then, we can try to find her through the internet…who knew maybe some people knew her," said rahul suddenly…Armaan turned quickly to look at him…that is quite a good idea…but Armaan is not good in drawing…

"Ohno can help you of course," said Aiba, sensing Armaan's thought…Ohno nodded and smiling encouragingly…Armaan smiled too…then, he took a pencil and a piece of paper from his study table…they began working on it

PLEASE STAY TUNED FOR NEXT PART

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hey heaven nice update ................cont soon..............thnx 4 d pm

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